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by
 
on 2007-10-02 19:14:52 (edited 2007-10-02 19:16:12)
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I said that this thread should live! ^^ For this poem, the inspiration for it came from this picture. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Sorry, my Friends..." Sorry my friends, My family, My love, I have failed… Traveled so far for you, Only to get this far to fall, If only there was a second chance To change it all and try again… Change it I can not, Yet strength to continue Does not come to me, Lead me onward again. If only I could see you now, Say sorry to you in face, To say my goodbyes, And receive one final embrace. 
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on 2007-10-02 19:37:21 |
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......... i thought this is bad, but here goes nothing Free * bird fly in the sky freely flying through the sky but what is free is it that we can do anything is it that we can say anything bird fly in the sky freely flying through the sky are you happy to be free but then again what is free coz you bound by your rule bird fly in the sky freely flying through the sky are you free Mr.bird flying trough the sky go to every place you can bird fly in the sky freely flying through the sky what is free is it dead or is it live bird fly in the sky freely flying through the sky i want to fly not that it was free but it was close to it bird fly in the sky freely flying through the sky so what is free ? 
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on 2007-10-03 09:49:16 |
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I made this spontaneously when Jin-san said he's leaving the chat for a long period. Amature, but yeah, it's a token of gratitude from me :D We might be unfamilliar, and still with no bonds, But I know Jin, with his bright yellow fonts, I saw him sometimes, once or twice, I know he's a writer, and i think he is wise, Time is cruel, i can't be stopped. NOthing more i can do, not to nag not to sob, The time has come, where you shall depart. But your memories, will stay in our heart.  |
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by megafreak01
on 2007-11-03 21:44:39 (edited 2007-11-04 19:21:45)
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first post, here is one of mine, hope you all like it, its to all of my friends: I stand alone in the dark days of night, Aganist both light and darkness with all my might, From the last of my breath I say from the bottom of my heart, I love you all without a doubt. ...sorry if it is too short might modify it later. |
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by
 
on 2007-11-14 04:24:30 |
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Yay! Poems! :3 I wrote this 2 months ago. Simply tells that I did not get used to something I used to like back in the days, but put an effort to see, with no one watching me, what has been happening after what had happened to me in months back. === I can't tell where my home is, Since the pieces of me is in every place, This sad feeling makes no bliss, I have to see the old faces. ...Somehow I feel regret That I have to step out of the lane, I don't live on this plane Anymore. They are more stronger than I am, How can they get over the doubts? I keep on running away But I had to sneak my way... ... in this place again. They show no care When they saw my footsteps, I am the walking ghost Wandering on the memory lane. === Hope you enjoy reading my poem. Lols, Gendou's poem XDDD |
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on 2007-11-20 12:42:07 |
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Please tell me if ya like it..=D The Ocean’s Dream Ending Sailing the ocean’s dream, silence crawling all over making it sad, having nightmares making it black, it cry’s sucking the sadness out of me making it sadder than it is. Sailing the ocean’s dream, saw the darkness in its heart, its pain trying to help the sad heart’s that flow over the ocean’s dream’s. Sailing the ocean’s dream, the hatred in you, hating for everyone that have sailed over your dream’s, giving you more bad nightmares taking your dream’s away and now your killing making them hate the ocean’s dream’s. Killing your friend’s, making you angry so no one shall sail your ocean dream’s again. And that’s the Ocean’s Dream Ending. THE END please comment..=D |
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on 2007-11-20 14:56:18 (edited 2007-11-20 14:56:36)
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Hehe, I'll post up my poetry, but just for fun xD I wrote it for English class xD and yes it's long, but read it if you want xDD Morning beauty From the east, a golden yellow sun rises. Across the mountains, the morning star peeks upon the world This star takes the position the moon once held From darkness to the golden and warm colors, the sun transforms our world Sierra de la Silla is no more under the stars It is now the frame to the sight of morning beauty Nights in Monterrey are dark, glorious, and still buzzing with excitement, no matter the hour Mornings, however, are welcoming to the day, warm, friendly, moist, and irreplaceable The golden sun peeks over the bright green mountains The tree’s leaves are fluttered with the moist air The blues that the skies once had turn circus and magenta The stars fade Morning birds call out Yellow stomached, green feathers and a brown beak He stops by the window and gives a little morning cheer This bird sings like the angels, and wakes up the residence of this golden and mountainous heaven Orange and reds fade and smear across the blue skies Yellow-bellied birds sing and fly across the land The moist air fills the city with a warm and cool temperature A sight to behold it really is The morning beauty of Monterrey, Nuevo Leon No sight like this is seen anywhere else in the world It only takes a minute to realize that what you are seeing is a blessing A warm and friendly morning setting A miracle of nature perhaps Take a breath. Look at the orange-smeared skies Smell the moist fragrance And take this picture with you forever When it ends keep this image in your mind forever Keep it, don’t let go And wait once again for tomorrow’s sunrise |
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on 2007-11-20 20:55:54 |
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@everybody: you've made wonderful masterpieces..i like your poems.. I can't post a poem right now..eheheh! maybe later.?  |
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haiku. Blunder Watch it! Prevent it! It's rolling, falling, spreading... I just spilled some milk. That's all! :) |
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on 2007-11-22 09:43:07 |
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It’s a Killer Teddy-Bear A little teddy-bear on a little brown shelf And a little scared girl unsure of herself Teamed up and to tell you the truth, I swear This little girl made that toy a killer teddy-bear She opened it’s mouth and took a look inside And was disappointed at her boring find A toy body all full of fluff She got a bit angry and pulled out that stuff She gave it a heart She gave it a mind She gave it something that wasn’t hard to find In that small world; that’s hatred Not a single word of love was stated To that teddy-bear who once was sane Until she gave it a horrible name That little teddy-bear would scratched and bite With anyone he would pick a fight And that little girl smiled to see She had gotten her revenge finally And so there was no use for that teddy-bear Yet anyone in his path he would not spare She yelled to stop, decease and desist But there must have been something that little teddy-bear missed And he grabbed her up and with one fold That little teddy-bear had swallowed her whole That was the end of that sorry little girl Who didn’t know how to love the world And let go of her problems, but now She was gone from her little town So let this be a lesson, kids To never get up higher than your bids And always remember, if you have hatred in you That little killer teddy-bear will come and eat you :D  |
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on 2007-11-22 13:40:45 |
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Eeep! Killer Teddy Bear! XD This is one quick poem of mine: I wait for the moon to rise Every fornight or so, I emphasise Its mystery--- moonlit orb of the night, Who tunes the howling of the wolves of the west And the behaviours of the Japanese foxes, Then empowers a human's soul. One-eyed Night, I called it. There is a god or not for it, it's an eye Watching over us who are feared of the dark. That moonlit eye lighten my shadowy figure, Eerie, this eye looks upon me, The constellations, joined up by my imagination, A sparkling smile in pitch black. One-eyed Night, see what in me? Your moonlit aura seeps in me, Fascinates me to see you, All bright, every phase, At the full phase, madness tuned into harmony. |
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you know, when you touched me like this i didn't know why my bones were fractured with a gentle blow of the wind i would have broken into million pieces you know, when you looked at me like this i didn't know why my skin slowly invinsible with a dim ligh passed through without refracting back the feeling you had laid in my palm is no longer the strong spirit but a life; a new life you and me had created i could have leave you here and walk this road towards the destination i had planned i wouldn't have let you cast the spell on me but i did,-i had choosen this way i had entered the life we used to create and now all i could see are patches of fractured relationships of ours all i could see are tears crystalised beneath the cold feet of mine i saw the life we had slowly vanished without a trace, without dusts the only reason i stayed because i had no other place to go.. a poem i had written for quite awhile. just like to share it with you guys |
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on 2007-11-28 12:47:05 |
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great poems everyone. i havent been here for awhile. gotta post sum of my poems i've written. =] keep it up guys ^^ 
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by yuakara_99
on 2008-01-30 23:55:07
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Here's mine: Cant take it You left When will i see you again? And you will find me... I hope its not too EMO!! |
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on 2008-02-03 15:26:06 |
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Here's my poem. I realized this after getting my heart hurt by a guy I kind of liked: The Goodbye My head aches from the night before Even when I’m with you, I can’t really be sure If I’m myself or fading away To another place But what am I doing that for? I bit my tongue to not say a word My eyes closed to the things that were so absurd The world was shot My dreams forgot With one flight of the bird I walked my path and when I stumbled, caught along the dirty trail, I never fell to the ground, my heart never failed But why did I fall the hardest with you by my side? You watch me fall and all you said was good bye. Hope you Enjoyed. And so I cried, cause it hurt, but the only thing that must have been worst, I sighed, this is the good bye. I skipped and tried to catch that star Even when I knew it was far Off the way But to this day I still carry my scar Even when all I did was look to you I always smiled when you looked back too And though those days are gone We just move on And let it fly too, fly to the moon I walk my road and when I tripped, caught along the narrow side, I never once gave up for me, not once have I looked to the sky But why was it so hard to see with you here? I thought that everything would be better if I just had you near And so I thought and I knew, that from all the things I do, I sighed This is the goodbye Even when I looked around, not an escape to be found, I went to you and you came too, only to make me fall…and that was all I walked my path and when I stumbled, caught along the dirty trail, I never once fell to the ground, my heart never failed But why don’t I cry when you’re gone away? Even when I know that together, we just can’t stay. So now I look to the sky, only to see a clear blue And I smiled this time. This is my goodbye |
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first try,~~ ^^ Friend or Foe Is that you? The one who I always met inside my dreams? Covered with blood and sacrifice? Are you the one in the million, Knight in the shining armor, that was just for me, dearly You? Something tells me, that's something's going to happen, which is that you? My worse enemy, that is painful to know.. Are you the companion for me? A guardian that can protect anything? It's impossible, since there's not even a chance, for me to.. Think.. For you, dearly You.. Because, we didn't know, who is the real friend... or foe.. Thank you... ^^   |
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on 2008-02-17 10:01:27 (edited 2008-02-27 14:30:17)
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My first poem to post here!! XD Sowwy if its a little long ^^; Care No More Sittin in silence, alone and confused, tired, uninspired and emotionally abused... - I recall the sad day that you led me astray, I was like a small child just wanting to play. - But playing with fire, I surely got burned, heartbroken and sickened by the lesson I'd learned. - The love in my heart froze into disdain, it spread like an virus of hatred and pain. - You just left me here to cringe and to die, and I did for awhile, I would break down and cry. - But the hatred is melting and the love has returned, my soul is refreshed and I'm no longer burned. - I guess I'll forgive you, But I'll never tell. For in your own misery you'll have to dwell.. - Until you realise the harm you did to me, Your soul shall be chained, while mine now flies free. - But I don't have time to care what you do. You mean naught to me, as I once felt for you. - I'm fine by myself and I haven't a care. I'll remain here, while you wander elsewhere... - So I'll just sit here and smoke, maybe sicken a lung, one that holds breath of my sorrows unsung. |
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That was really good! I think I'm the same way, I just don't care anymore. Anyway, I have too many poems to choose from and no time to any right now, so here's a link to my writing.com portfolio! http://Writing.Com/authors/yaminokokoro 
"...It's because love is painful.
It's because broken hears bleed on this day...
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on 2008-02-23 10:17:24 |
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hmmm . . . this poem is dedicated to all high school students who will graduate this school year. this is actually a project in school, and i cannot think of any appropriate title for it as of now. oh my gosh . . . this is making me think of my own graduation next month! Four years ago or so We stood up on this stage Wondering about high school The difficulties we will face We had great time in elementary But high school is another thing Everything seemed so different With the fun that we are awaiting Four years that were so wonderful The memories unforgettable All of those reminiscence Put smile on our faces Now this song I am singing Mixed emotions I am feeling This isn’t the end, this isn’t goodbye Because we’ll see each other again sometime With excitement for every experience The days passed quickly, one by one Everything was such an enjoyable bliss And now this chapter is done In the future, we will look back in the past Just sigh to ourselves after every recollection Crying and laughing, bygones happened so fast The stories we will share to the next generation |
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on 2008-02-29 13:07:20 |
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I really like that, Clairvoyance ^_^ It really captures what I'm feeling right about now about leaving this place. Mines in a few months as well... W00t for teh CLASS of 2008! |