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on 2007-05-19 02:49:36 |
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wOw!! suggoi!! Stranger Who are you? What's your name? What are you like? Do you feel the same? Hair falls down The eyes cannot see Hands tied behind The feet cannot feel Do you see where you're going? Do you know where you are? Set your gaze up in the sky Look closely As they pass you by You are just like the sky Passing life with the blink of an eye... huiy...you guys are doing great with your poems^^... I just made this up right now... not sure where it's heading.... *got lost in the illusion 
Don't walk in front of me, I may not follow Just walk beside me and be my friend :A::C: |
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on 2007-06-21 22:46:03 |
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everyone has really nice poems. =] here are some of mine. I Couldnt See You Anymore i2.i8.o6 i saw you the other day. i spent my time with you. you walked infront, while i lingered in the back tryin to catch up. i thought "wait for me... wont you walk at my side?" but you kept on. you didnt even look behind to see if i was near. all the time i just saw your back. i looked to my side. and i saw him instead. why is that one person always at my side? when i want it to be you. why do you keep pushing me to him? it's time for me to go now... i said goodbye. we gave each other a hug. i wanted you to still hold on. but you let go. i turned slowly and left, hoping you'd suggest walking by me. but you didnt. while i walked away i looked back twice... three times. but i couldnt see you any more. Forever, I’m Missing You o6.o8.o7 I lie on the floor all day. The sound of music echoes in the background. Thoughts of you linger in my mind… I feel the pain in my heart… I’m missing you. You could make it go away with your warm, loving smile. All I want is for you to be here, holding me in your arms. My heart flutters every time you gaze at me. I close my eyes and see the dreams of you with me. Though the visions float and drift away as I open them again, I reach out to grasp it, but they just slip away. So I lie on the floor all day. The sound of music echoes in the background. And thoughts of you linger in my mind… Forever, I’m missing you. 
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on 2007-06-22 14:15:15 |
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I made a sort of trilogy, and am currently working on the last one. I used the first one in one of my English classes, and my teacher recommended me to a poetry competition. Is it any good?! The first one is called, "Cursed". --- The rain falls gently, As the end draws near. Never stopping, Always running. My past is my present, And my future is insignificant. Never waiting, Always watching. As Fate plays the cruel Goddess, My painful memories consume me. Never wanted, Always with me. A soft wind caresses my face, Creating the perfect image of sorrow. My eyes sting as I remember, The last time I saw you. Can you feel my regret of living? Can you tell me why I'm still suffering? Help me now while I'm still fighting. Hold me now as the rain falls gently. And I wonder whose voice is screaming. Is it mine or is it just wishful thinking? Can you tell me why this hurts so much? And why I've been cursed with this life? --- The second is called, "Black Rose". --- The petals of a black rose dance in the wind, As I walk down a trodden, winding path I recall my past with every step I take My love, who got the last laugh? Years ago, I soothed you Years ago, I promised Years ago, I held you Years ago, I loved you Years ago, I watched in anguish as you sighed your last breath I held you in my arms as you lay there, cold and dead A nightmare that became reality, something I hoped would never come to pass Because it filled my very veins with a spreading dread, cold and steadfast Years ago, I fought in a raging, unspeakable war Watching people I had known forever get slaughtered struck me to the core The casualties piled up, and I now pass their graves, seemingly expressionless When all I want to do is break down, and weep in wretchedness I'll never be the same as I once was But you already know that, don't you? As you look down at my unworthy form My silhouette, gaunt and worn It affects me more than you'd ever think But you'll never see that, will you? Because you can't look into my very soul anymore Broken as it may be, my fate still looms I'm kneeling in front of your gravestone A single rose clutched in my hand Its petals black, and wilting A reminder of what I once had I set it down tenderly And I whisper of my love for you Over and over, without end My voice, gentle and smooth Years ago, I held you close Years ago, I prayed Years ago, you were dear to me And I'll still love you, come what may I sit there a while more in silence My eyes bloodshot, and wistful A bittersweet smile on my lips, I stand up and walk away I still love you, come what may --- Are any of you interested in a third? I was a person back then. I could smile and laugh and... feel. All the colors... all the hurt... all the laughing... it all went away. All of them. They used words like brain damage... and cerebral trauma. But even then I understood. I was safe... safe from the bad thing. |
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Silly poem: ANTS Oh noes! O M G! I was on Gendou too long! School bus is coming There's no fresh panties I don't want to wear a thong! :O No more time; I have to go Eating my breakfast Studying what I don't know Thank GAWD! Caught the bus! Walking like I'm in a trance. Wait, are they laughing? O M F*KING G... I think I for got my p-- XC DEAD. |
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on 2007-07-06 23:12:00 |
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Here's a short one for Malays and Indonesians, or whatever people that speak Malay: Anak punai, anak merbak Hinggap turun di dahan jati Hati-hati di atas pokok Nanti jatuh patah kaki. I'd be amazed if most of you could understand this.  |
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on 2007-07-07 04:15:57 (edited 2007-07-07 04:16:43)
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I have more than one poems, but I put it. Loveless this wind brings me back to you this cold nite, I need your warm and your love... come to me and hug me before the death come to me, care my hair and kiss my lips... I just want to be with you... my prince... would you accompany me only this night ? please... only you in my eyes, my heart and my soul bellows my breath start to ends, your fragrance, your care, your warm, your touch, your lips and your love I can not feel it again my tears begin to dry I’m so far from your side does my death peace your heart and her heart ? ... this is the end of the three angel love, I'm so happy you are with her although this heart is bunched by a thousand of thorns … by Ryvan ^_- |