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on 2007-03-19 14:11:18 (edited 2007-03-19 16:26:15)
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Note: Just for the record, this is NOT Full Metal Alchemist related. I have no experience with the way the Gendou RPG, only the carryed on experience from Gaia Online and Fanfiction, so please correct me if I do this wrong.... To avoid anymore confusion, the RP is to go to the will of all of those who RP ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The Story.... Why should I, a person so undeserving of what I have, survive in this world? Why should ANYONE of this filthy world be worthy of grace, redemption of their sins? We, who represent the way of this world, will not inherit this world, but will be the show of this world. We are the proof of the world’s existence; We ARE sin in itself. In a more domestic form we are sin…. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Plot: In a human form, thoses who choose will pick one Sin [[no repeats of the same sin, please]] to repersent any sort of sin of humans. From there, you are to explain sometime in your RP what made them the way they are. If any two or more is to ever meet or know each other, the RPers are to decide. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Name: Amaya Harada Age: 15 Sin: Wrath _________________________________________________________________ I was walking home from the store. Book bag and plastic bag filled with magazine and pocky at hand, I sighed, almost too tired to go home. I sat on the side of the street and sighed. ‘Damn... already 4:46... Mom is coming home soon. Mom WOULD be coming home soon.’ I bit my lip and held it in. I didn't want to cry, especially right now…. I took off my socks and shoes; my feet ached. I shoved them into my book bag, and looked at the sky. It was coming close to the edge of the earth, its light shining over to make colors of purple orange and red. I looked down in my lap, assorted red blotches mixed with the blue and white plaid. I released my hold of my lip to wipe the blood away. ‘Shit!’ I thought and sighed. I got up and brushed off the dirt on my skirt, picked up my bags, and started walking again. I looked up once more at the sun, it’s slowly dying brightness pierced my eyes. I looked back at the road in front of me, without looking back.  No one can see inside of your T i r e l e s s M i n d . |
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on 2007-03-19 15:02:44 (edited 2007-03-19 15:03:06)
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A few questions....well actually, a lot. The story isn't really a story. It doesn't outline much. It seems more like a prologue. So what is the actual story here? Does the story have any direction? Plot, antagonists, protagonists, etc? How is it supposed to work? Sorry for all of this. I was thinking I would give this kind of RP (posting style) a try. but there isn't a whole lot of detail on what this is supposed to be.    |
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on 2007-03-19 15:51:44 (edited 2007-03-19 15:54:58)
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But there should be a base plot. You can't really build a story from nothing. People won't know what's going on. What is the time period, the setting, the state of the world, fantasy, supernatural, normal. There's a mess of info needed. Side Note: Your Sig is way too big. If you don't fix it to 100px then it'll be removed by a mod. |
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Maybe it's another "make up your own path" type RP? 
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Basic RP rules are mostly the same for every RP created. No godding, don't control other member's characters during RPing, etc.
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on 2007-03-19 16:08:47 |
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Yes, rules are pretty much essential for RP's. Of course your allowed. Their the best way to make sure people aren't doing things you didn't intend. Without rules there would be no order.^^ |
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on 2007-03-19 16:10:23 |
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Don't worry about it. Just let us know when everything is updated. Like I said, I might be interested. I've never done this kind before. |