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@Doomlight-Can I please join in as well? I have started my story some time ago.  |
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Sure. Sorry i missed you those. For some reason I was thinking that I had you on the members list already. Added. ~Doomlight 
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Oh that's ok. I started my story before I ask to join in. I should have join in before starting the story. Sorry about that Doomlight. 'Ahem' Continue the story. 5 minutes outside London Heathrow airport, Yuka is in the airport and checked in. However, she didn't know that her flight was late in the evening due to a big delay. After she checked in, she had a look around outside the immigration. Although she had something for lunch, she decided to buy some sweets on her way during her flight. In the security centre, she was so surprised that there's hardly anyone in that place. Normally, there's lots of people waiting. After getting out the centre, she couldn't believe what she saw. There's lots of people waiting for their flight. Yuka was very confused what happened. So she asked one of the airport staff. 'Excuse me. Can you please me what happened'? She asked. The male staff replied, 'Some planes caught fire. Because of this, all flights are delayed'. Yuka gasped, 'Oh no! I'm supposed to arrive Fukuoka early in the evening! But now my flight is delayed, what should I do?' She stopped and think for a few minutes. 'Is there a internet cafe nearby?' She asked. 'There's one next to Boots shop. But you have to pay 50p for 30 minutes. Some of them have to play £1 for half an hour' the staff respond. 'Thank you' she said. |
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Anime19: Awesome work! ^^ Lacus: Welcome Lacus!!!  |
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Great so far anime19 :D Keep up the good work ~Doomlight
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I made something for you guys. ^^ for youz with love, Tifa -->   |
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on 2010-05-28 08:27:20 (edited 2010-05-28 08:31:24)
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Is that.... Kyoya-senpai???? (Then again lots of characters might be similar..) Anyways... TAKEN!! :3 Thanks Tifa (is that right?) !!! |
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lol Yup it is him. I just wanted to find a really good picture for this guild cuz i lovez youz guys so much. ^^ and yesh dis ish Tifa! ^_^ (if he was taken gomenasai i didn't mean to steal him i just wanted to use him the icon cuz he's always seen writing something down. who know maybe he'll post something on here.) |
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Ehhh ^^; I didn't mean taken as in claimed, I just meant that I've taken him to use on my siggy... XD :3 Anyways, thanks again! Will you be posting up some of your work soon? I don't recall seeing any from you yet oO or that could just be my mistake... Hai hai lool he is always writing things down- ooh which reminds me i should probably get some work done ^^; gomene.... |
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Well i would love to join but i just have been so busy lately cuz i'm graduating in June and well i gotta get ready for college in the fall. But I'm glad you like it. So i'll add him as my siggy too. i wanna join. ^^ But question though does the writing have to be like a fan fiction or can it be anything? |
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It can be about anything :D. ~Doomlight P.S. Adding you to the members list when i get home
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Alright. ^^ let me dig back into my flash drive i need to dust off some of my writing. |
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Oh my, I still haven't posted here.. anyways. :D Here is my story.. well, the main idea of my story. :D Hoshino Yana is just a typical high school student with a very simple life. But, even if her life is simple, there is always Morimoto Keisuke to make it a little better. Yana and Keisuke have been best friends for more than five years, and they treasure each other very much. Yana and Keisuke have also made a promise with each other to always be together, however what will happen if Yana takes the promise too seriously? Will she pursue her feelings for Keisuke as her beloved, or would she just step back and continue on being his best friend? I have posted my story in two sites: Tumblr and Wordpress. :) I decided to post it there because if I posted it here, my post would be SUPER LONG. :) anyway.. here is my story. just Melody (Wordpress) just Melody (Tumblr) Enjoy~ and oh, I would like some feedback as well. :D i would really appreciate them :)  |
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OK. Continue where I left off. Sorry for taking long. Been busy for some reason. I'm gonna be busy next week. 'Ah! I should have brought my phone with me!' regretted Yuka in a disappointed voice. But luckily, she has some money for emergencies such as calling her mum, food, drinks and to buy small presents. What Yuka doesn't know, the check-in gave some coupons (about 3) for food and drinks only due to delay. Each coupon is £5 pounds discount. Anything she wants to buy, she doesn't have to pay for it. She put them in her bag with her ticket. Early evening, she calls her mum for letting her know about her flight. After 2 minutes, Yuka went to the closest internet cafe and emailed her dad. It will be easier for her to call him on the phone if she took it with her! After half an hour in the internet cafe, her stomach is empty. Although she has something small for lunch, she wanted to have something to fill her up. She looked around the restaurants and shops, but they looked a little expensive for her. She bought £30 & her credit card with her. She thought to herself, 'these food looks delicious, but expensive. What should I do?' She found a small sandwich shop near her a few minutes later. She looked at all the flavours of sandwiches, but about half of them are pork or beef. She doesn't eat pork & beef at all, so that's not good. 30 seconds later, she has decided what she wants. She wants tuna and sweetcorn roll, a packet of Walkers Prawn Cocktail and a bottle of water (about 500ml). This costs her exactly £5. As soon as she took her purse out, one of the food coupons fell off her bag. 'Oh my gosh! I never knew I have this coupon!' Yuka surprised. Now she has it, she gave it to the counter. After paying for her food, she's looking for a place to sit, but they're all full up. However, outside the sandwich shop is a little cafe to sit down. Yuka sat down and started eating. |
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Alright people here is something of mine it's a first chapter. My heart beat in my chest racing telling me to run yet I was frozen in place by his haunting beauty. Cold eyes like onyx with a hint of silver in them. His beauty was so entrancing that I couldn’t tear my gaze away from him. I felt a hand tug at my sleeve as my friend since first grade brought me back to reality. Tearing my gaze away from the haunting male I looked into her piercing blue eyes. Her blond hair styled in a model like fashion while my own ashen blonde hair was cut short in a punk fashion since I had gotten a thing for bands like Fall Out Boy, My Chemical Romance, Good Charlotte, Rise Against, and among others. Sighing I turned aware of the new male’s eyes following me. “Nadia why did ya have to go and ruin a good moment?†I groaned rolling my eyes. “This is the first guy I’ve actually shown a keen interest in.†“I’m sorry Kit.†Nadia murmured using the nickname from childhood when she learned that my middle name was Kitsune. “It’s just that the new guy kinda gives me the creeps more than Syen.†Watching her shiver at the very mention of the name Syen I knew who she was talking about. Syen Drake was the slacker of Crimson High with a bully attitude and a smile to die for. He practically had the girls in the school falling head over heels whenever he flashed those pearly whites of his. Meanwhile he had the geeks, nerds, and the nobodies of the school practically peeing their pants waiting for the daily routine of being shoved in their lockers. When Syen wasn’t busy pushing those lower than himself into lockers he occupied his time with making the ladies swoon. At 6’1†tall with raven hair and gray eyes he was the bad boy on campus that every girl—correction—almost every girl wants to see what a bad boy he really was. Nadia and I were the only two who didn’t have that much of an interest in Syen Drake. We basically occupied our time with studying and listening to music. When we got bored with those things I hit the slope in the winter time with one of my guy friends Kristopher who was teaching me how to snowboard during the wintry months. With blood red hair and enchanting emerald eyes he was a bit on the shy side unless he was around me. When he’s around me he usually tended to be a lot more talkative. Sighing I opened my locker to find it stuck yet again. “Stupid effing locker getting stuck.†I growled banging on it three time before it swung out fast nearly hitting me in the face if I hadn’t so skillfully dodge it after two years of having the same locker in a row. Grabbing my book bag I stuffed my books into it, zipping it up and slinging it over one of my shoulders. Slamming the locker shut I startled the girl next to me. “Eep!†She squeaked jumping slightly. “Sorry Reiko.†I sighed realizing the bookworm of my grade at her locker near mine. “It’s okay Shimo.†Reiko whispered looking down at the floor. “I’m just a little jumpy today that’s all.†Shrugging I walked off towards the front doors of Crimson High when Kristopher stopped me in me in my tracks. Turning my sapphire gaze to meet his jewel tone one I couldn’t help but laugh. His hair was completely drenched from the snow fight earlier that day. His cheeks still held that touch of wind burn on them. “Shimo what do you think about another lesson for snowboarding?†Kristopher asked breathlessly. His eyes hopeful. “Sorry Kris, I can’t today I’ve got to work at the club.†I lied with a genuine smile that fooled him. “Oh okay then.†He said sounding a bit sad before smiling and giving me a hug. “Be careful Shimo.†“I will don’t worry.†I said smiling as I walked out into the crisp winter air of Crimson City. Sapphire eyes, ashen blonde hair a face so eerily familiar to him. But who was she and did she know who he was. Sighing he played the scene with her locker over in his mind again watching her move out of the way with ease and not getting hit in the face. Slinging his bag over his shoulder he headed home. His black jacket kept him warm while he moved along the cold streets. He paused at the local Starbucks shop and decided to get a little caffeine boost to snap him awake. A soon as he stepped inside he noticed her in the back booth with a menu in her hands. “Well here goes nothing.†He sighed walking over to her. Sliding into the chair he flashed her a dazzling smile. “Mind if I join you?†I looked up startled from the menu I held in my hands. The male from school sat across from me flashing a pearly white smile. Blushing, I set the menu down on the table and shook my head. “No I don’t mind.†I whispered giving a shy smile. Aiden notice the blush that graced her cheeks when he smiled. She may be one of those easy to swoon ones. He thought looking at the menu. Picking it up he scanned the contents. Deciding on a mocha latte he smiled and waved the waitress over. “I’ll have a mocha latte, Mew.†He said casually turning his gaze to Shimo. “Okay Ai.†The waitress smiled before turning to Shimo. “And for you?†“I’ll have the same except easy on the whipped cream okay.†Shimo said casually. “Okay I’ll be back with your order in a five minutes.†Mew said smiling before heading to get their order. I looked at him with my sapphire gaze taking in his lithe muscular build. Something about the new male seemed familiar to me yet I couldn’t remember why. I noticed his onyx hair was pulled into a low ponytail that fell to mid-back length while his bangs remained loose dangling on either side of his face. Tearing my gaze away from him I looked out the window at the passing people. It had begun to snow lightly letting the ground have another white layer blanket it. Sighing I looked down at my hands that were silky soft and smooth from the care I took to keep them looking their best. Despite snowboarding with Kristopher they seemed to stay that way. Looking up at the male across from me I smiled. “So who are you anyway?†I asked as the waitress set our drinks in front of us. Aiden smiled raising the cup to his lips taking a sip of the warm latte. He set the cup down and sighed leaning back to look at her carefully. Taking in her face and body trying to find out who she reminded him of. Smiling he shrugged. “I’m Aiden Tanek.†He said. “Who are you?†“Shimo Kitsune Yoko.†I said looking down at my drink. Well at least I wasn’t really lying too him. It was who I was now. I have no recollection of my life before first grade and I could usually remember things from the past really well. Taking a sip of my latte I looked up at him through my long lashes, my sapphire gaze catching him off-guard. “So Aiden what brings a guy like you to a town like Crimson?†“My parents needed a break from the big city and thought that the stress of the city life was leading me down the wrong path. So why are you here in this small town?†Aiden asked. I looked down at my almost empty glass before downing the rest of it and standing up. Setting the money on the table I looked down with troubled eyes. “I’m just here because I am here.†I said before leaving him alone to head home to get ready for work. Sank chu for reading hope to get the next chapter up soon. ^_^ |
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Lacus: does Yana like Keisuke then? I think it sounds good- will have to read it later ^^ Anime19 + Tifa: will read yours later too ==' I just passed by because i'm checking something| |
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|Page 25| @ Schaz- Nice start to the story, I want to read more to see what will happen! @ Darky- Nice story! I really like it! It's very vague and mysterious, and it leaves you on a major cliffhanger, but I like it. @ anime19- Good continuation! But you are right about the story being all over the place... Maybe when it's done you can compile it into one big post? @ Lacus- Welcome! |Page 26| @ anime19- Another good continuation. @ Tifa- Welcome! @ Lacus- That is a long story. But I'll try to read it as soon as possible. @ anime19- And another good continuation. @ Tifa- Nice story! You introduced a lot of characters in the first part, but it's always nice to have a large cast to work with (I read Under the Dome by Stephen King not too long ago and that had more that 60 characters in it. Of course the majority of them died by the end of the novel but still 60 characters is a lot). @ All- Hello! I haven't been around here in awhile, mostly due to finals and that I haven't had the time to write more stories. But now it's summer! So I'll be able to get some stories up. I do plan on continuing that one story I started (The Silent One), but I'm having a writers block with it because I forgot where I was planning to go with it. So I'll have to pick that up once I have a plan for it.  |
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@Toyumi Thanks Toyumi-chan ^////^ i'm glad you liked it. I'll get the second chapter up as soon as i can. ^^ Okay next installment to my story. sorry it tooks so long ________________________________________________________________________________ The club music pounded in my ears as I pushed past the dancing people in the room bringing drinks to people at the back of the room. They seemed to be very mysterious people but at least they gave me a great tip. Flashing the men a dazzling smile I set the drinks down in front of them. “Here are your drinks gentlemen. Please enjoy.†I said holding the tray to my chest. “Can I get you anything else?†“No thanks.†The male with his blonde hair spiked at weird angles said flashing me a dazzling smile to die for. “Please let me know if I can do anything more for you.†I said before I left them alone. Moving through the crowd I got knocked by someone shoving another person into me. The tray went clattering to the floor as I hit the hard floor. I heard a crack before feeling warm liquid dripping down the side of my face. Sitting up I felt dizzy and the flashing lights weren’t helping much. My world was beginning to get hazy as I fell back to the ground. The last thing I saw was a pair onyx eyes with a hint of silver in them. Shimo… Aiden looked down at her lying in the hospital bed with her forehead bandaged up. He brushed her ashen blonde bangs out of her eyes. He sat down in the chair by the bed looking at her while she slept. The IV bag was running low. Paging the nurse a soft voice came over the speaker. “This is Nurse Abigail what is it that you need?†The voice asked. “This is Aiden Tanek. The patient in room number 264 needs another IV bag since hers is running low.†“I send a nurse right away sir.†“Thank you.†Hearing the click he settled back in the chair. A few minutes later he watched the nurse change the bags before leaving them alone once more. Leaning back in the chair he looked over at her. Seeing her lying like that brought back a memory that he thought was lost long ago. -15 years ago- “Hurry quickly.†The nurse’s frantic voice said as he was wheeled on the stretcher into the emergency room. The mask was put on his face before he became unconscious. A few hours later he awoke in a room next to a girl with ashen blonde hair. Her forehead was wrapped with bandages. On her face was an oxygen mask. Her sleeping form seemed peaceful and comforting. He heard the door open so he made it appear he was sleeping. Through almost closed eyes he watched a couple moved over to the girl’s right side while the doctor stood on the left side. The woman bent down placing a kiss on the girl’s forehead. “How is she doctor?†The man asked. “Her condition seems stable. It’s a miracle she survived the accident without anything more than a bump on the forehead that made a nasty head wound.†The doctor said with a sad smile. “Except she will have no recollection of what happened or who you two are. I’m so sorry that this happened.†“No.†The woman cried sinking to the floor placing her head on the edge of the bed sobbing, her hand holding the little girl’s hand. “Kismet sweet heart wake up and say mommy for me please say you remember me.†The little girl’s eyes fluttered open revealing a sapphire gaze that looked at the woman blankly. “W-who are you and where’s my mommy?†The girl asked the woman. “No Kismet it’s me mommy.†The woman said sobbing before she was led away from the little girl. The man looked at the little girl one final time before leaving with the doctor. Opening his eyes he looked over at her to find her staring at him with familiar sapphire eyes. -End- I opened my eyes to find a white ceiling above me. Looking over I found Aiden asleep in the chair. His long bangs falling into his face. Shifting in the bed I realized it was a hospital gurney. Mighty uncomfortable to lay on but, hey, I don’t deal with the investment of this place. Sighing I looked back over at Aiden as his eyes fluttered open. He smiled sitting up and moving to my side. “Why are you here?†I asked sitting up and swinging my legs over the side to sit on the edge of the gurney fully aware of the IV in my hand. “I don’t think you should be doing that after what happen a couple hours ago.†Aiden said trying to lay me back down. “Get your hands off me.†I snarled hitting his hands away. “I’m okay now. Besides I don’t need anymore help.†“I see you’re up and swinging again Shimo.†A familiar voice said from the doorway. Turning my eyes to the doorway I grinned at the man standing there in the doctor’s uniform. My father, Shinji Yoko, was a good doctor as well as a loving parent. He walked over to me and checked the machines making notes on his clipboard sheet. He nodded patting my head being mindful of my injury. “Hey dad.†I grinned wider. “Do you think I can be discharged soon.†“Everything seems to be going well. So you’ll be discharged today. I’ll have this young gentleman take you home.†He said nodding in Aiden’s direction. Rolling my eyes as he kissed my cheek I sighed. My dad smiled before nodding to Aiden and then to the nurse who had followed him in. She got busy unhooking me from the IV putting a gauze pad over where the IV needle went in before making sure the machines were put away properly before leaving me and Aiden alone together again. Standing up I stretched before moving over to the door. Looking back at Aiden I rolled my eyes. “You coming or not bonehead?†I asked making him snap out of his shocked state before he moved over to follow me out to the nurses’ station where I was getting my discharge papers filled out. Once I got them I followed Aiden out to his black mustang. “The doors are unlocked so you can hop in.†Aiden said before sliding in with ease. Sliding into the car I hooked my seatbelt up and stared out the window as we began the smooth drive to my house. I looked over at Aiden whose eyes were straight ahead. His jaw was clenched I noticed smirking a little. “What’s wrong with you?†I asked fiddling with the fox pendant on my necklace. “I’m okay. You don’t have to get all worried over it.†“It’s not that.†Aiden said looking at me for a moment before shifting his gaze back to the road. “It’s just that you remind me of someone I met long ago. Well I didn’t know her that well we only met by a passing glance.†“I see.†I murmured turning my eyes to the road ahead. “I’m sorry to be a bother to you.†“You’re not a bother.†“I’m not?†“No.†“Well that is something new.†I said sighing as I leaned my head back. Closing my eyes I tried to clear my cloudy vision. “Aiden?†“Hm?†“Thanks for helping.†I said before we stopped at my house. Getting out I moved up to the front door. With a small wave goodbye I disappeared inside and move up the stairs to my room before changing out of my clothes and collapsing in my bed exhausted. ________________________________________________________________________________ Chapter 3 coming soon. ^^ Thanks for reading. ^^ |
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Greetings earthlings :D I got a few plots of story but I can't make the story. I sort of lost my magic sense of writing xD But the plots just suddenly pops up. I'm weak on writing the first chapter, so bear some time for me to contribute something here. Time for me to disappear for awhile xD Got to many serious studies this year! Be back next year with my new stories!
I claimed someone that I can't remember because photobucket is ended.
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Hello there. I have been following this thread for some time let me say: YOU GUYS ROCKS! And i mean it. Maybe i'll write something and post it here. Maybe now. heh. Keep it up guys. Nice writings.  |