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Re: Gendou - Visual Novel Project
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@Ugo: Yes, the char codes. >_< Sorry, I forgot what terminology I gave them before. >_< 
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Re: Gendou - Visual Novel Project
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on 2009-10-16 17:38:43 |
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I wanted to aplogize from the bottom of my heart on lack of work. I planned to do so much to help the team, but in the end I got so busy with work and trying to get my college stuff sorted out that I didn't even have time to get on my computer; let alone Gendou at all. So, please forgive me, and if there is ANYTHING that I can do on the site or something on the project, I will make up for my failures at helping. Again, I'm really sorry ;_; ... |
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Re: Gendou - Visual Novel Project
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on 2009-10-16 20:31:51 (edited 2009-10-16 20:33:37)
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@Terror- it was accutally the Ren'py code n= Reikou [my character] e= Aya I posted it because as experimented it it the selection did not appear, yes it jumps however I cant go to the other choice.... I am just thinking what went wrong.... @Ugo-thanks for that, I am having a hard time to make the opening so I am busy making the ending... HEHEHEH Sorry for not joning the IM sessions... i have things that needs my attention and my pc is.... getting strange again.... @Shu- same here... but just any help that you can make even it is small it would have a big impact to it @All- maybe with in this day or tomorrow I will post the output of my character development  --> |
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Re: Gendou - Visual Novel Project
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on 2009-10-17 02:56:31 (edited 2009-10-17 02:57:51)
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@ Link: Yup, looke like there's a lot to look over. Well, if no one else beats me to it, I'll scan over the demo as suggested- I'd like to be able to list out some of the cinematic options that writers can consider. @ Shuyin: it's alright! Like I say on infinate repeat "It's better to be able to stick with something over a long period of time than going out after a month of burning passion." Jonathan may or may not want to have some things on the website updated. @ Terror: ALright, got it first page under links. I also listed out the "undefined" new characters awaiting a code. @ Karuzo: Just do what you can, that's all I can really ask from everyone.   |
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on 2009-10-17 10:53:56 |
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Hmm, lets use these, lol. Reihou: rei Cathy: ca Kit: kit (easy no? still need the code though to define her name's color)
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Re: Gendou - Visual Novel Project
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Passing by~ Next week I'll be free for a 2 weeks break. woot! Can anyone give me a summary of what has progressed so far? (if it isn't too much to ask) Thanks :D 
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@All: sorry guys, i cant upload files (again) now... T^T i dont know why, but if i upload files (any files and it have very small size), i DC-ed and i cant on that day. DX so... i'm sorry.... @Darky-san: hello. :D do you have an account in A Reyvateil's Melody? :D |
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Re: Gendou - Visual Novel Project
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on 2009-10-20 19:16:10 |
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@ Shuy and Website Department: Now that I think of it- it loks like the website hasn't be updated yet. I'm not completely sure if all new entries have to go through Jonathan- but if you can It might be a good if we can update it with the new characters (Uh- but for the moment leave km's char out- I think he's still working on it) and pictures (you have the okay for tossing mine up) Also, the story section is still empty- please copy pasta the same story text from the front page. I suppose Jonathan's life is getting a bit busy too- of course, if you cant edit the website or don't have clearance as due to website department procedure, than it's understandable. On the other hand- if it's an okay- please refer to the last page for a majority of the pictures. But please use the character descriptions characters as I've added into the first post (Kit and Cathy) since I proofread those. Also- it seems like the picture section is a bit outdated in terms of the sketches there and what had been posted (Beyond what we've got done in the past 2 weeks or so) Please edit those in to, should I have the respective artists' permission. Err, wait- please dont add any pictures unless I get atheir respective artist's permission first! ^^" @ Art Department: As mentioned above, Website needs your permission to post up your sketches onto the website! Please state which ones you want up-! Also, I should note that on the site if you choose to view a picture- you can write in a comment! I think that'd be a way to put down author's comments if you would like to take advantage of it! @ Terror: Alright! Easy Enough! I've edited those codes for the first page. @ Darky: "Wah He came back! *points at Mokona* Quick grab a chair and rope Mokona!!!" A summary of what's happened. Well- Jejechi's made some forward leaps on designing the computer hacking club members (He's done 3/5) I personally redrew another version with a detail on their faces/eyes (for 2 of the girls). Story-wise we have the same 2 girls' characterizations where decided as per the last meeting. Oh- and Link became head of coding department, as per Basil's permission due to extraordinary feats of qualification. You're fortunate- Ugo's two week vacation ends today. *Sob* Manage to squeeze in any sketching lately? @ Jejechi: An Ar Tonelico fansite...? Well, I'll just wait until you're capable to upload. @ All: Please tell me if there is anything I missed again for a relatively prompt answer~! (I've been slouching a bit due to it being the last couple days before end of break) |
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Re: Gendou - Visual Novel Project
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on 2009-10-22 04:40:03 (edited 2009-10-22 04:42:00)
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Darky, Head of the Art Dept. signing in! It's been quite a long while since I had this much free time! Though I have tons of plans this break, I'm aiming to maximize my productive juices for two weeks! It's been a real long time. I owe you guys so much output! I'll post more designs by the following week! Wait for it :D Okay I'm going to comment on the drafts of the characters Computer Hacking Club Member 1: Cathy Ashlander Designs: Jejechi Ugo From Jejechi's draft: I can see her as a responsible kind of girl. She appears to be neat and orderly xD You should include the character's more of the details next time you design your character. (When I say detail I mean you should write the personality and other stuff related the character, just to give a better understanding of the draft design) From Ugo's draft: I see you went on to refine the character's background. She looks more witty here and I could definitely see her as how you described her. The smaller glasses seems to add maturity to her appearance, I like it. She's a secretary afterall. xD She could also be the club president, but we have to balance the characters. I could definitely want to see some chemistry between her and the club president. She could have tsundere qualities as well. haha. My comment: Her design right now seems to be fine as it is. I might tweak her clothes a bit, well lemme try drawing her first. xD ==================================== Computer Hacking Club Member 2: "Kit" Ashlander Designs: Jejechi Ugo From Jejechi's draft: "Tall and mysterious" That's the vibe I get here. She seems to be the quite type and probably would keep alot from herself. She might be one of those persons who would open up to someone provided they have become close. Nice touch on the braids. haha. From Ugo's draft: I see you made an overhaul here. You made it so she could be Cathy's younger sister.hmm... Though it's not a bad idea, I don't like the fact that there are syblings in the club. (but that is just my opinion, it's still you guys making the story.) She appears to be almost the opposite of her sister, good call there xD But I was expecting a bit of sofistication here. But I guess after reading the details about here, I kind of understand why the design went like this. She is a fun character. A comic relief character also. haha. She's probably a sporty type too. I don't think her clothes match her personality much, maybe the jacket should be unbuttoned or something xD My comments: I actually liked Jejechi's design more, but the way Ugo made her seemed to add a bit more fun in the club. I'd probaly mix them together in the next draft xD. ====================================== Computer Hacking Club Member 3: 'Cool Guy' Design: Jejechi From what I could see is. He's probably the cunningly smart evil genius kind of guy. But of course, he doesn't show it. xD He could probably be the club president. xD I like how he would always have his mp3 player on or something xD ====================================== We need 2 more!! Probably guy characters who might be take the beatings xD ====================================== Reikou Kizuna @KM: The details so far sounds interesting. I might draft a design from what you wrote already xD. ====================================== @Jejechi: you mean the forums? I had one but I never go into posting anything there xD Why do you ask? ------------ @Ugo: Yeah I saw that :D Great work, Jejechi! xD And great work for your added designs. They would definitely be of help! I kind of didn't like Kit and Cathy being siblings at the start of writing this, but I guess it's too early to jusdge. I'm sure you guys have great plans for them :D I have just been practicing anatomy and stuff as usual. I am cging stuff atm to sell at local con next month, I have to finish those as well before being devoted here xD well... gotta go finish that before anything else right now! haha! me draft would look similar to how they did here: here
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Re: Gendou - Visual Novel Project
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on 2009-10-22 06:33:07 |
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@ Darky: Yep, my clothing for normal situations certainly needs work. Much of the time I draw charactersthat would fit in an rpg or the like- so there's always some sort of hint at it (especially in Kit's design). I did my design work to simply convey the characters Jejechi's drawings where hinting at. Though, I did decide to turn Kit around for the reason you spotted. For any sketch I do, I'll happily answer whatever confusing design choices you may have for me! Well unless it's requested, the finalized version for those 2 are up to Darky now. ^^ I'll try making a sketch for the first guy today... I'll keep in mind your thoughts on him. |
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on 2009-10-22 07:14:34 (edited 2009-10-25 04:28:11)
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@DArky- I see... well I would love to see the final output but the profile was still on going... i am having a hard time editing it... especially on how the character was introduced on the story Wait.... maybe i could make the other Hacking club guy as part of my charcter development Computer Hacking Club Member 4: The hacking club member who first felt the painful server protection, but for him it was a system/server purge that NEARLY destroyed three computers, he however that he would defeat the person who is responsible for stopping their operations However... he failed miserably many times and called the "mystery hacker" Thanatos- 404 well that should be for a while... --> |
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on 2009-10-22 07:25:05 (edited 2009-10-22 07:27:04)
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Ugo: Hehh?? What do you mean rope Mokona?? Nice job on updating the first page by the way!! ^^ KMR: Welcome back!! Darky: Hiya!! *waves* long time no see! Will try and complete more of my arc, if possible- got half term next week- but looking forward to an anime expo (finally!!) this weekend. Should i post it to Link to check over, or Terror? P.S: Guyss!! Jejechi has been nice enough to make the little siggy you see on the end of my posts as our logo for the project! I made it link to this thread, and if any one else wants it, feel free to copy from mines, or take it from Jejechi's profile (if you don't mind Jejechi?)!   |
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Just gonna add this.. will reply tomorrow ^^ sketch of each character with design ^ very quick sketch so might be inconsistent here and there xD
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I will change the staff list to include Darky tonight. And I think I'll add that thing from Mokona's post to my sig. But for now, I have a Math midterm to get ready (and fail) for. -_-;    |
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@Darky: ... ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ the last drawing. :3 Hmm, something just hit me: Hacker Club and Haruhi. >_<
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Darky's latest drawing is awesome. That is all.  |
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Re: Gendou - Visual Novel Project
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on 2009-10-23 05:49:09 (edited 2009-10-23 05:50:17)
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I'm in too much of a hurry to properly reply... but I managed to get a sketch on the last person done! Forgive my lack of cleaning up! Computer Hacking Club 3 - Unnamed Cool Guy Notes (Left) Will have to get further details on character decided in another meeting. (Left) Mostly faithful to Jejechi's original design. But changed the shorts to cargo pants for carrying electronics. I kept the glasses from the original design, but of course be careful he wont get mistaken for Lax! (Top Right) "Hnnnnnggggg!!!" (Middle Right) Gets passionate over things he manages to care about. Not the type given to rage. (Bottom Right) Has lots of cool new electronics, is often asked to let other club members to see them. (Which is normally fine.. but in Kit's case-) |
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on 2009-10-23 06:18:10 (edited 2009-10-23 06:19:11)
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@ALL_ there the official profile of my charcter all done!!! Name: Reikou Kizuna -"Living without suffering is useless" Age: 16 Year: Sophomore Description: White haired boy that was known to excels in his studies but tends to slack when bored his slight Feminine appearance gained much attention with his classmates of opposite gender and envied his male classmates has odd types of after school activities: repairman, waiter, gardener and a flower seller Hearing that a Hacking Community is causing trouble to the school's server, secretly he is maintaining the Library's System as a third party that blocks all strange encryption that wants to destroy the integrity of the School's server Strangely enough, no one suspect that a third party exists, the library thinks that they acquired help beyond their consent they called him “Kiel- 0740â€, while the Hacking Club suspect that a new member of the Library joined so they called him “Thanatos- 404â€, but eventually he volunteered to join the library as an auxiliary and reserved member although he does not act one Rumors say that behind that silent and compromising facade lies a fearsome personality that a normal person cannot comprehend.... even the teachers were worried too much --> |
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on 2009-10-23 07:43:22 (edited 2009-10-23 07:46:35)
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Jonathon: *Groan* ==' I've got some maths retakes to revise for too. But yeah! It would be awesome if you could stick that on the end of your siggy ^^ AND anyone else too- *stares at everyone* Ahh I've been neglecting the Art posts for a long while now~ time to take a peek lol. Status: still working on arc :P EDIT: The sketches are really good!!! Loool Ugo what's with his expression (bottom-right)?? Anyways, good job on that!! Has noone drawn Uncle Sam still? Will we have to make him an invisible character?? *dramatic music, Ugo faints* |
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.... just 1 word to say for Darky-san. "AWESOME". @Darky-san: -goshhhh.... i love your pictureeeee TwT it's very awesome..... veryveryvery XDDDDDD and my character turns into a more COOL character. gosh XD btw. the "Unnamed Cool Guy" that i draw, is designed to be the "Hacker Club President" lol XD again, we have the same thought :3 -lol no, i'm just asking XD i have an account there, named Reynaville - jejechi ^^ (jejechi is my -permanent-nickname, so if you saw "jejechi" on websites, that's -maybe- me :DD lol XD) and your account... is it "icy_ciel"? :3 @Ugo-san: nice sketch for the cool guy!! but... so short? :3 but i like the design... XD thanks for the adaptation, Ugo-san! XD @Mokona-san: lol it's ok if you want to "have" the icon for the siggy ^^ just look it at my profile at About Me > Just Putting section ^^ btw ganbatte on the arc, Mokona-san! XD hmm. design for the 4th member of Hacking Club. should i draw it or not? @K.M.Revolution-san: hmm. should i draw Reikou Kizuna too? :3 (you designed it, i'm drawing it if you want X3) ... wait is Darky-san going to draw it? ok then :DDD GOOD NEWS, guys XDDDD i can upload files again (finally.) TwT maybe tomorrow, i'll upload the design of 4th and 5th member of Hacking club. XD that's all. i hope there's a quick reply XD thanks! |