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~weh! bang! bang! bang! Guns fired aimed at me Bullets pass through my body Argh! argh! argh! Wounds all over my body covers me Blood spilled in my clothes and i .. meets with death again.. ding! dong! ding! clocks ticks at twelve.. i walk through my old room the smell of myself is still there yet i cant dwell i cant even rest click! click! click! cameras cant stop snapping at me what is this? i can see my eyes staring back at me yet..those eyes have no glitter and i turned bitter.. coz i know.. now i know.. yet i still dont wanna know.. that im already.. dead.. and it hurts..yet it burns..lost in my sorrows..and digs on my bones..  |
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Edited version of the original poem, inspired by Dark. x3 Humpty Dumpty sat on a wall Humpty Dumpty had a great fall I just know you pushed him off from the start Cause I, too, was playing one of the part Wee~~~ <3 |
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The sound of your heart beating faster and Faster Sweat dripping down your face, hands covered with the life of another, the smell of blood is now one with the air. You can't control the way you feel when you take another's life. Knowing that you can control whether or not they live or die. This feeling of power consumes your soul. But its not just that, its the thrill that excites you. Knowing you could get easily caught by the cops or some higher authority if you are not careful, seems to get you off. Just knowing that the possibility of that happening is slim to none, also seems to turn you on. You leave no trace of yourself behind, you work clean, but messy. You've tried to stop yourself, but you can't, you crave the feeling of warm-blood falling through your fingers and the painful cries of your victims as you take their life away. Funny how you like to control the lives of others, when you can't even control your own. Its seems that you can control the will of your body, but not the will of your mind. You've become a puppet, a puppet of death, and theirs no turning back  |
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on 2006-11-29 14:38:15 (edited 2006-11-29 15:16:25)
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To my ex-girlfriend When I die I hope your'e here next to me When i'm alive i'll wonder why you left When i'm with you now I hope I'm the only one of your loved men (sorry to be so sad)
RISE UP AGAINST THE ANGEL OF DARKNESS!
FIGHT UNTIL THE END!
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i look at your eyes and stare on it blankly.. but theres nothing in it..not even a spark.. i looked at how you dance with the mellow music.. but it lacks something i couldnt figure.. i played with you for a while.. but i cannot feel you playing with me.. i talked to you a thousand times on the same topic.. but you always have the same answer.. die..die..you said to me.. and so.. i did.. |
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What lies ahead, When I look in your eyes? What becomes of me, When you love my other self? What will happen, When I give up my love again? I'll tell you what happens... I'll live on...inside you.  |
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Guess I'll post one I just dug out, not very well done and it's got the whole everything has to rhyme thing going on. Anyway. ~Rejectionp[Yeah the title is plain and boring, don't feel like coming up with a new one.]~ As I fall back into the hole Another knife stuck through my soul I start to wonder why it all went wrong Why I was happy, but not for long Pulled out from my dark cell out from the pit that was once my hell I hold out my hand, waiting for my salvation only to be pushed back into eternal damnation Now I wait for a new way out but after that torture I have my doubts Will I survive with this new wound or is this the end, my impending doom.    |
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by starflamer
on 2006-12-01 07:18:03
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Untitled (I have no idea what to call this) I have seen people They come and they go No one will stay for very long People and people they pass me by Years and months and days long gone. Ashes to ashes and dust to dust Gravestones are all that are left of them Names and memories will wither and die But I'll still be here. Waiting. Waiting for the things that flutter me by Things that will always catch my eye Memories unseeing, love so blind And I will be here. Waiting. -- Be Me Emptiness All abound Silence in me without a sound Pull me close Hold me tight Never let me out of your sight I feel the distance I feel the shame The eyes of the people Empty and dead Tears unbidden Memories untold Touch of the light you think will make them whole I live, a mystery Unbreakable Know me and feel me Don't leave me alone Even the strongest of man Will fall Who says it won't Be me. Don't tell me it won't Be. Me. |
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wanted with my life i see to it..that my every breath and everything that i do will only be for you.. i will continue to do that.. until the day i die and until i reach heaven or hell.. i will see to it.. that you will be cared and loved by someone better than me.. and i carved everything i foresee on my skin.. the blood slowly spills on the pavement.. yet im really happy.. coz i know..when i die..i will see you.. i will see you staring at me.. crying.. begging.. for forgiveness.. yet.. even before you do that.. i already forgave you on wat you did.,. i wanted to live more.. i wanted to be with you more.. i wanted everything about us to be more perfect.. i wanted your life to be happy.. i wanted to share your everything to me.. your sadness.. your happiness.. your pain.. i wanted it all.. i wish many times for that to happen..yet.. it didnt.. goodbye my precious maria.. its time for me to move on.. PS.. i made this poem a long long time ago..it seems that ive already surpass the torments and the loneliness that a certain girl gave to me.. and one more thing.. the loneliness maybe gone..but the love is still there..waiting for her.. belattt! |
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what lies behind that door ? what kind of world waiting for me there ? only one way to know.... open the door and see by my own eyes.   |
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by zparticus27
on 2006-12-02 22:10:14
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uh here's one i wrote back in high school YOU You roll all the stones in my life You gave me courage to face every pain and strife You gave me love that i've been longing for that gave me strength to get going in my life your a special person who encourages me to move on forward thank you for being my inspiration |
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Living in a life full of lies, We walk on mindlessly. Don't you understand? We are merely pawns in this complex game We call 'life'. The truth fades in the bleak background. And we are stringed along, believing in Something that doesn't exist. What an ironic thing. Something that we value most is a total lie. Don't you understand? We are never happy. We are not meant to be happy. So let me stay in my bleak cocoon. Just leave me alone.  Everything we do is stupid, let them laugh |
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-IF- The BIG "IF", Everyone knows & talks about. Unlimited possibilities, Endless talks. Still, it's still "IF"... When will it ever end? Ever wonder? The day you decide to step out.. That will be the end. STEP OUT! Nothing is ever certain. One thing for sure, Success is NOT "IF"! Success comes when you do it. Walk the walk & stop the talk. "IF" is just a possibility. Reality is making the possiblity come true. - allrights.reserved K i D mMm, seems a little awkward... poem? doesn't seems like. guess i have loads more to try....... wahah!
- It's NOT.thecolorofyour s k i n.|BUT|.thec o n t e n t sofyourHEART.that reallymatters -
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Christmas Eve is very near Christmas eve is nearly here. Christmas eve is once per year Chirstmas Eve is nearly here. Christmas Eve is a joyous day Christmas Eve is happy and gay. ((Happy wise)) Christmas Eve will forever be Christmas Eve for you and me. |
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by prototype 00
on 2007-02-11 06:24:21 (edited 2007-02-11 06:24:57)
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it's a poem made by a friend and it's really nice... GRAVITATIONAL FORCE OF ATTRACTION Mass Space Time are extremely obscure concepts which compel you to remain inert You resist motion and defy haste You rest unrelenting remorseless Newton requires force to displace your movement Sadly, I'm fragile, feeble, and frail Distance be the denominator I still cannot be the constant to our proportionality for I am dependent of the material you are made of a universal gravitational force Hence, let me fall... It's a love poem! Please let me know what you think of it... 
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Dos't thou have to shy in the presence of me Though thou hold'st the key? My heart is locked, Forever in shackles and always blocked Until you unlock it with thou'st key The Key to my Heart. I will wait patiently, for your arrival on top of the stone steps of Matrimony. I'll wait for thee, thy holy presence, till the end of time. |
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on 2007-02-14 13:56:57 (edited 2007-02-14 14:06:39)
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A MELONBREAD POEM! hahaha jk jk. this is something i came up in a sec may woven thoughts be caught in this web when lines must be written, during times most wanted before that band may hands run like streaming rivers, run like April's wind, releasing all that's in mind. may that sheet of white be filled with black prints. leave no emptiness take no blocks and keep running... i know......it sucks >___<  |
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@ Rabbit Imoto-Chan: Keep working on it, it'll come to you in time. XD Water is Gentle the Ground is as calming as the wind. I see the Ocean's Wave, Towards the ground it does shave, The Essence of the Eternal Wind. I watch the sand The Sand of Time Go by as quick as water. Time goes quick, As I predict The end of all Life's Chimes. |
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@onichan: lol, i bet no one here understands this poem^^ In general its about writing, the word "band" is a term used in my school for period....i know...weird........there's a lot of thing u probably wont get unless ur in my school ^______^ |
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by meiri-chan
on 2007-02-19 14:21:54
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Your Sweet Kiss By Me As i saw you for the first time, my heart started to beat fast, Whenever you walk by me, i can never breathe, Whenever you speak to me, i am speechless, Whenever you touch me, i feel faint, I am falling for you, but i know you will never luv me the way i luv you, My heart's telling me that i got to stay strong and someday you will show your luv to me, And that someday was now, When you first kissed me, i felt like i was in heaven, Your kiss was so sweet, i could taste it forever, even in my dreams, We started holding hands, going on walks together, and going to amusement parks, As we got older, you had to go to war and leave me behind, I had never felt so torned in my life, Before you left, you gave me your last kiss, Your last kiss in which i will remember for years to come, I knew that you weren't ever going to come back, that we'll never get to be married or have kids, My tears started to fall down my sad face as i see you leave, I said my last goodbyes, And you were gone from my eyes for eternity…
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