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Fallen Star written by me It was only a while back When I saw the window boy Gazing at the sky. Filled with hopes and dreams, he lied to his past To create a future His parents were against. He headed towards the light He wanted the fame and glory To keep it he had to fight. When he reached the top He left his life behind When he left the girl of his dreams He realized his life had seemed Like nothing but a fallen star A dream |
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~Deadly SIns~ My veins are aching wit desire, they instinctively thrive to grasp, to choke, to …………. Kill. This pounding sensation in my brain Is full of tumult Jus the very sound of your nerve recking voice Is enough to consume my thoughts with sinful things. Even as they say, god hates the sin but loves a sinner. Or whatever they say in the bible Let me bask in my own sin For it gives me enough delight to relish in my thoughts Of choking you, stabbing you, poisoning you. Even as I type these words down. They give me a guilty conscience Yet I feel…at peace. Kitty's note: What d'you think? This is not mine. For those who have not read my previous post I said that I'll post one of my lil sis should I ever get my hands on one. The words she wrote here were based on her feelings she had on our paraents - not that she doesn't love them or anything - it's just that they may get to the point where she gets frustrated with them. Don't take the words too litterally. She's not a killer. Honest! ^^  |
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by inactive oldie
on 2006-09-08 04:50:56
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OMG~! O.O you're poems are shocking! they are really great! g-r-e-a-t! wai~... but I'm a bit troubled... are you all.. depressed?! or do you have problems?! OMG~! NOOOO~! T_T ~*~*~*~*~ Kiss is a Gamble Sex is a Game Boys do the action Girls get the blame wai~ ... |
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Chyrin cross was created from my negative side hate anger injustice and all negative aura of the world and in my observations here is my light sided poem hope you loved it Second Chance By: Karuzo Kaze Fujimiya I thought no one can accept me Because of my horrible and nightmare attitudes, My swords are stained with blood My armor is damaged by swords, spears and arrows My eyes witnessed the mercy cries and suffering of people And my heart is dark as chaotic darkness I thought my life will be this way Until you came Your face is full of joy Your eyes is full of mercy And your heart is full of love You came close to me But I evade, knowing that you will kill me But I was wrong You touched my sword and saw the events that I kept for a long time My heart was beating very fast My body is weakening I tried to run but I fell You held my hand and cried I felt the warmth of being loved And I forgot those events and started a new life But I know that I will return to my terrible past And be a part of chaos But you prevented it by loving me And risked your life to redeem my soul Now both of us are now one And we will never be separated FOREVER.  --> |
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@ Maia: Everyone writes depressing poems because depressing poems are the easiest ones to write. This poem, for example, took about 4 minutes of my time. Pain I lied restless one muggy summer night, Trying to answer troublesome questions. What is Pain? Is pain physical? Is it the feeling of nerve damage? Then why don’t I cry when I bleed? I don’t hate it, I don’t like it, Bleeding feels natural. Is pain mental? Is it the discomfort of a dramatic event? My aunt is dying, Yet and I do not cry. I love my aunt, But her death seems natural. If everything is natural to me, Then I feel no pain. What kind of person feels no pain !?! I shot myself one muggy summer night. -Sir Nicholas
Wise Man says: "Take a dog off its leash and it will wander."
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by inactive oldie
on 2006-09-08 17:30:00
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| @engineer: yes...it may be the 'easiest' to write, but poems/stories reflect what you're thinking and what your personality is... even hidden desire =.= that's what I learned from someone/something [not telling]... =.= that's why I'm troubled... are you all depressed/problematic... ? >.< |
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Water Light spills on the table through glass surprised to find itself focused by water water cleans, heals, quenches raises life from dust February - already, prim snowflakes meld into murmuring water smelling of spring the season of kisses Dark denial outweighed by hatchling down - swept away on a passionate raindrop. |
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@ Maia: Since the poem I posted was my little sis I'd like to speak on her behalf. To answer your question Maia, she's not depressed or problematic. I dunno, but her inspiration totally comes from feelings of stress due caused by something in her life. I guess anything dark or depressing is what keeps her creative juices flowing ^^; Yes I have to say I am sometimes troubled by the things she writes, but its how she is. To everyone, another one from my sis. Title: PIERCING LOVE Seemingly i am an innocent face but secretly i am longing to kill you Patiently i am waiting for the night nightly i wait for your soundly sleeping Quietly i take out a knife my anxious face is reflecting on the mirror blade Suddenly you awaken confused, distraught and disapointed You paint your feelings on your face so beautifully seeing ur expression i take the plunge I thrust the blade deep into you skin, where it pierces your heart so deeply that it touches your soul Your emotions play again the eyes reflect upset toward i But i dont understand my wrongdoings mesmerized in the eyes that wont close anymore Haunted by the silence that was once filled with two beating hearts you are no more... as so will i... Togetherness is all i can offer ur blood intertwines with my blood as i pierce my heart where urs used to be Blackness surrounds us do not worry my love together again we'll be one i love you so much and so much more -End- Kitty's note: Sis was reading a passage from Wuthering Heights that inspired to write this. Another dark poem, but that's not gonna stop her ^^; |
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"You are my Love" Simply Adoring you is what I'll do.Only to find that you'll just leave me to.For you I'll do anything if you want me to.I love you.All I have to say for my love is true.Keeping this feeling for you in my heart.Remembering that we will soon be apart.Insisting myself that is not true.Seeing you always is what I wish to do.Till the day comes that you will leave me.I'll be taking care of you for everyone to see.Never will I give up my love for you.And maybe you are aasking this is all true?More and More loving you for who you are.Evey single second,minute,and every single hour.No day passes by when you are not in my mind.Dreaming that you will be with me all the time.Only we can see this love between you and me.Zipping in front of me everytime you said "I Love you".ANd Just to find out you are gone without me by your side.Being with you is what I have wanted all this time.Indulging in your presence is what I do.No one can keep me away from you.Always thinking what to do without you.Remembering the things that happened between me and you.Always thinking who my one true love is?Only to realize that my one true love is you. Sorry...its kinda long..hehehe..what do you guys think?  |
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here's a poem i wrote... i was quite sad that time, and i MEAN sad. it takes a lot of emotion for me to write poems, let alone draw. it's in my native language... so bear with me for a minute.
the translations are there already! i'm sorry if it's kinda sad... >_< please tell me how you find it... -michiyo- 
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Remember to forget me when you leave. Drip It's raining outside You are calling But I can't hear your voice You're locked in the vaults of my past Numb I stare out through the window It's still pouring You are wilting A brown rose in the water Tick The clock keeps on ticking An intermittent sound Amplified by the quiet surroundings I see you dancing in my mind's eye Sigh Gentle breathing Your perfume drifts into my room Your thoughts, your memories Are never to be awakened, ever You are dead to me. Tell me why When I dream I dream about you.
Peering into the eyes of Tomorrow,
Haunted by the child of Yesterday,
Living in perpetual winter,
In silence his soul now waits.
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A kiss of no more One will never see How meaningful it was for me You arms guarding me Your words soothing me You now left me as nothing more than a fool I decided to do the shortest poem you'd probably see. Most horrid also(on the spot) Or I can do Action are loudest than words You consolded me Understood the horrid mess I was My arms reach out for you In the memories we had, I'm sadden to say goodbye  |
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@ Maia: How about this? Dance of the Full Moon I hold you close. I feel your heart beating with mine. Your soft breath on my neck, Your warm touch. These are welcome feelings, As my love for you rages. Our feet glide across the grass, We sway to and fro. The stars are our orchestra, Playing the music of the skies. With the moon as our spotlight, We can dance the night away. The End That isn't depressing, is it?
Wise Man says: "Take a dog off its leash and it will wander."
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Rain Keeps Coming Down Pt. 1 Man I been thinking lately About the way the world just be changing Is it a sin to be chasing paper I can't count the people dying lately It's the grave or incarceration I know you hurt but you can't replace them You go and dig a hole then erase them You just created a smaller nation A jail cell is all that's waiting Look at all the progress you're making I really hope you're kinda patient You facing 25 no probation 2 for 1 is multiplication You're freedom is all their takin Is it best to be dead or pacing All cuz you couldn't take it  |
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Each step I take, Rings heavy throughout the Earth. My slow and pounding tread, Brings pain and sorrow. Ice falls through my veins, As my heart no longer beats. My frigid soul, Lays frost upon my words. Heaven would strike me down, Were I not already dead. Hell would take me in, Would its fires not freeze by my touch. Left to wander the Earth, Full of endless gall and hatred. A frozen soul, In the shell of a man. Geez... I'm not in too good of a mood right now, am I?
Wise Man says: "Take a dog off its leash and it will wander."
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My first try.....^^; Eyes of deep azure Watching me everywhere I go Whenever I'm lonely He'll always come and set my soul free Pure as unblemished snow It held an innocence Never to be tainted by sorrow He watches me constantly, Unwaveringly. Always there when I need somebody that I could believe Who would accept that I, am me. Soooooooo.......how was it?  Everything we do is stupid, let them laugh |
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i prayed for your death and hoped your breath shall end.. and i wake up with one wish on my head that shadows shall take you away.. the roars of agony has piled up leaving me crawling in mud the memories of those fights are burnt in my hand the scars of each wound would take me far away from home my body is on the bed but my thoughts are in your head thus i am no longer rock but a doll made by you controlled me..used me.. youve been my master and god and so i pray as you play with my strings that someday.. someday.. your breath shall end. and ill laugh on that day..  |
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on 2006-11-13 01:36:30
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Well, whaddaya know? A place for us gendoulian subjects to post poetry! How exciting!! ... and since most of the poems I've read here so far have been mildly to suprememly disturbing, how about I post one that's neither. Although I must be honest.. 13 pages of poetry is daunting,so I did not read all of it, but I did read some from the beginning and ending pages. I love metaphors, and it's fun to see what people come up with. Rey! How magnificently morbid, I love it! Ok, now here's my poem: Cast No Shadow The fire is burning bright Help me spirits of the night Sing your song of firelight Show me if my path is right The firelight is flickering Does that mean you’re whispering? Shadows, cease your bickering Tell me, tell me everything In the mountains to the east Sleeps a great and awful beast By the fire in your hand It shall wake at your command In the ocean to the west Hidden power laid to rest By the fire in your soul Call upon the burning coal Warnings written in the smoke Promises are kept and broke In the fire of your mind Answers you are meant to find In a cloudscape up above Hidden is the heart you love With the fire in your eyes Lift your gaze unto the skies The light, it is dimming, The voices cease singing The silence is ringing As air begins sinking Falling and wading, hiding and grazing Laughing and humming and winking. Fin.  |
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Wow I haven't noticed this thread until a while ago! Alright! I love poetry! I've made many poems since 5 years ago, but unfortunately, it's all in Indonesian and I'll have a hard time to translate one into English. Okay, I've translated one, but it looks more to a lyric than a poem... ^^' I made this one when I'm desperate coz my crush fell in love with one of my best friend ^^' NOW I'M ALONE The heartbeat cleaves that black color Levitates, letting go of the real world Aside from my existence here I’m helpless if I’m to be tested In the soft, blind morning The wind whispers warmly Now I know that I’m all alone Trying to be silent, waiting for the blueness that destroys The little sky slowly, Flowing to search for dreams The sound of the bell wakes me up from death Opens wide without consciousness Those eyes with the glittering gold color that I like Once again, please, shine for me Creating time within this empty heart To crush those obstacles that closed my heart from the light There is no such thing as world, its existence is replaced by you Throw away confusion and violence Even if this brain have to explode That faraway heaven waiting anxiously but full of hope Softly hugging the ocean that lies far, far away I’ve always waited and dreamt of this moment Building visible dreams with the awakening of love Feels awfully good but that’s the past I can’t be like this All alone just eating my soul I need you
Gendou City Crossover RP! ~Coming soon~
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