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Hey, devils-angel..... why don't u read the fanfic??? its worth reading, actually.... and showing pictures? yup! that would be great... there isn't much fanfics that has picture in it... Uuuhhhh.... i wish I have her power.... Well, actually, controling any elements will do... isn't it cool if controling elements is a normal thing??? If everyone in the world have the ability to control an element each, what will happen huh? i wonder.... i would like to see it happen, though.... lots of destruction, maybe... lolz  |
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by taku_RazorLemon
on 2006-04-15 00:02:37 (edited 2006-04-15 00:07:58)
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She breaks the ground apart, lifts the pieces of rock into the air, ignite them, and instant meteors... For now, I'm going to take X-voltz description. And yes, when I do finish I'll show you her picture :) I believe it's time for the next character's clothes: Her name's Stream Eguze. Her mother died giving her birth, and her father - a scientist - was killed by a syndicate group. She was still an infant when this happened. She was taken in by her father's friend - a retired army colonel. As she grew up she learned sword techniques from adopted father. She's also Marie's adopted elder sister. She's also a 15-year old. She has long red hair, which she wears in a ponytail every now and then. I picture her looking like Kirisawa Fuuko from Flame of Recca, only with longer hair. She's usually short-tempered and easily angered, but it's a different thing when she's already fighting. And she's a tomboy, BTW   |
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well im looking at it. I clicked the Yahoo! thing at the top right, and showed up capcom site, with japanese words over it. cant understand, but I'll click around. so There's four chapters, but I'll read it 2mrw, or later today cause its saturday and..shish*, its almost 3.15!! gotta get some sleep, well im off Gendou..for now!..see your guys later 
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For Stream: really short jeans.... that kind of rip apart in the edges ( u know, the really short shorts/ jeans that Fuko usually wears while fighting?) and put chains all over her shorts. remember, CHAINS!!! White or black T-Shirt that has funky writings or pictures on it, and goes above her belly. Or a really lose and huge black or white t- shirt, that has some torns in the edges. Ankle length socks, and black/ white tennis shoes. She could also wear hand band on her wrist. A white/ black hat with no cap will also be good. U know what I mean? Notice the way she wears black/ white? It sorta gives the effect of a tomboy character. lol |
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by taku_RazorLemon
on 2006-04-15 00:42:08
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PERFECT!!! I don't know why I wasn't given an imagination regarding clothes, but I'm sure glad that I found someone who was!!! Thank You!!! I'll get back to you guys when I'm going to reveal the other characters :) |
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Lol... I'm glad to help u.... doing this is actually quite fun, really! ^^ I can't wait once u reveal ur other characters..... *twinkling eyes* Lol |
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by taku_RazorLemon
on 2006-04-15 05:35:47 (edited 2006-04-15 07:15:15)
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Complete Libra Chap 5, 6, and 7 are already up. Feel free to tell me your comments - I'd love to hear your feedback :) |
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Its pretty good... and wow, u write really fast! It only took u half a day to add 3 chapters. I wish that lots of other fanfic authors would do the same... It usually take them half a year, or maybe more just to add a chapter!!! Anyway, ur characters have a real strong personality, (not in the middle type of person), which is good, and I like it! =P ... and the story idea is quite original... I haven't read/ heard a lot of that kind of plot... Overall, good job, and keep on writing it!!! |
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by taku_RazorLemon
on 2006-04-26 07:01:15
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I'm need in of your help again, guys n gals w/ amazing imaginations :) Could anyone of you help me picture out an extremely impoverished slum area in a technologically-advanced society? It has to be something worse than FFVII's slums Something happened to me today, and it inspired me to put this in my story Thanx :) |
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