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on 2008-03-26 04:42:32
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actually I did ask this person to personally find a good interesting RP Novel for us xP |
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on 2008-03-26 06:11:11
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@all Okay...so key(hearms) said that he want to turn my last drawing into a wallpaper. I've sent the PSD image to him....but it still open to one more CG-WS...PM me if you interested. @ich CG novel.....wooo...... Actually me and kyoshiro have tried to create a visual novel but....the project stopped because each of us are busy.... Btw....creating a visual novel might turn out to be a good idea....ehehe Also, if you need some characters /storyline, i might able to help you...i have some story concepts that might fit to be a VN... |
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on 2008-03-26 06:29:02 (edited 2008-03-26 06:42:07)
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sure but this time I will make it possible but for the meantime we need the story. Why not post your story RED? and EON will post his story too xP then lets decide. UPDATES: NEW CG?! by Darky and Lockey |
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on 2008-03-26 06:42:17 (edited 2008-03-26 07:50:47)
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...... CG by darky look around.... run (dunno what to say).... edited: it's shurelia from ar tonelico -> is this right draky??? |
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on 2008-03-26 07:05:01
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@ICH Okay...but where should i post it ? Here or i just PM you ? @key That's funny....Is that an easter bunny ? >.< |
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on 2008-03-26 08:06:36
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@red ^ above that shurelia ^^ anyway your wally is ready, i already PM you, and i've fix your sig |
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on 2008-03-26 08:19:49
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@ich: it's not an OC but it's fanart of Shurelia from Ar Tonelico (I forgot to state it when i posted the cg sorry ^^;) can't wait what story would end up to be done by us XD @Key: hehehe~ I like how you show she was hoping XD (but I don't really like the drop shadows X9) @Eon: cg status at halt sorry.. don't have time XO |
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on 2008-03-26 08:37:03
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@darky sorry >.< well ich can take it off and others can try to make it it is fine with me ^^ i just like to try it |
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on 2008-03-26 08:43:45
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@Key: i didn't say anything of the sort... your wall is well done stop with the negative stuff =9 |
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on 2008-03-26 09:04:43
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@darky nah nothing of the sort, it's just that i know how crappy i was at first, right know i now i made improvement though still trying to figure how to make good one, and i kept stumbling over the text part T.T the reason i said that was so i can see how others made it, since every people have different style and preference, like ich haruhi there, i tried to make it and then saw what ich had done, then i know what is the different. it's just matter of learning ^^ *** from martial art manga and others manga that i know, losing make you improve a lot better than winning ^^ *** |
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on 2008-03-26 15:57:03 (edited 2008-03-27 06:18:26)
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lol dont argue here xP and btw we need the story now, so that we can move ahead xP so for the meantime after getting the story, ill divide the works to the CG-S while CG-WS will prepare for the BG's xP @RED just post it here so all of us can read then afterwards will judge whether it will be taken or not... EDITED: UPDATES: Correction for the NEW CG?! |
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on 2008-03-27 04:48:39
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@Key Yup, i've see the wallpaper and sent you the reply. @ICH Okay....but it will take time since it's not in english. Btw, me and Kyoshiro once working together to write a concept for RP in gendou city, the title is Spell War (now it's already dead). If it's okay with you i'll contact kyoshiro and ask permission to post the story here. I think if both of us made some modification and simplified the concept it can be a goo story for a VN. |
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on 2008-03-27 05:08:54
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@Red Actually im looking for a very simple story that can be easily visualized since this will be our first project, I think we must settle first for the project that we can hold first. Then after we succeeded then the real thing will start ^^ |
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on 2008-03-27 05:41:02
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@ICH here the story..but this story isn't good enough..I was thought it and make the story base last night... (The Background of the Main character) The story is about 19 years old boy..who was fallen into deep trauma and sadness after his girlfriend's death..( i will expand it later about his girlfriend's background) his girlfriend was suffered by leukemia since she was young.. After he can stood up for life..another creepy events made him more deeper into sadness.. His parents were dead because an traffic accident( i will expand). The boy was full of sorrow..he lost all of his family and loves.. No one of his friends could made him freed from the sorrow.. The boy was going to kill himself by dropped himself to the river.. Fortunately..he was saved by a unknown person,and the person treated the boy to a hospital.. He was alone at all and now he didn't have a place to stay because his house was burnt when he was stayed at hospital.. And then..a mysterious woman took that hopeless boy to her house at a small town and adopt him as her own son.( i wil expand it) The boy was still lost his force to life.. Now he was lived with the woman and the woman's purpose was to make this boy become to "life" (the Plot and the main story of the Novel) After several weeks he was lived with the woman and got all loves from her..The boy was curious about the town and he wanted to meet any people..The woman was happy and she was planned something with her adopted son when the time is correct As long as this story will go,the boy will meet 5 different girls and another character and he will spend all of his day with these girls one by one(it depends on the player of the VN,which girl their will concentrate)..however the girls doesn't know each other and after a long period (when the story goes) they will know each other and they will compete to win this boy's heart After several time, one of the girl(depends of the player's choice before) will take this boy into a temple,where a sacred great tree that was known as "the tree of lost dreams"..a sacred tree that rumored it will recover someone's lost dreams and hopes(i will expand the tree explanation and history) and the boy will be affected by the tree's rumors and the relation with these girls( i will expand it later) ..however..the boy will regain his force of life after he knows all of the girls and get close with one of them. after the boy will find a girl to become his soulmate..the facts will be revealed..the sacred tree will give the answer and the fact of one of the girl (not always the girl the player was chosen with) is his girlfriend's soul..who was trapped because his boyfriend was lost all of his life after the girlfriend's death and it caused her soul couldn't went to paradise to the last resting place. however..the girlfriend's soul will let the boy to live with the girl he was chose but the girl will want the boy to promise her..(i think it was a secret) then the boy will promise to the girl's soul..and the soul will go to paradise with full of tears.. And the boy hold one of these girls (depends on player choice) and the two will promise to love each other forever..after that..the woman who adopted the boy will pass away and gives all of her wealthiness to his son.. The ending with the chosen girl will be never a same,it depends on who's the girl the character will choose.. Yeah..that's it~Pheww~ I think this is a shallow story.. Thanks to read this raw story,Ich.. |
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on 2008-03-27 06:28:08
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@Eon hmmmm if im going to judge, this one will do good but im not just sure with the unlucky fortune that the boy meets and the fact that he will meet 5 girls. Somewhat its really a common plot but we can remodify some part. Lets just wait till the other say their own opinion. |
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on 2008-03-27 06:36:40 (edited 2008-03-27 06:38:17)
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Yeah..It just a raw story...however I'll try to make a complexity for these girls's background and the complexity of the plot...and I didn't mean that this is a HAREM story that contains easy love story! It is NOT! It orientates about the boy's recovering for a new life XP XDD I just can't make a fantasy Visual Novel,because I think some fantasy Visual Novel not always interests some people who loves simplicity of real world..that's only my opinion XP I think I have another story idea... Thanks Ich.. |
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on 2008-03-27 06:38:55
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@ich ??? um did you asked about something like we make picture that represent ourself??? 100px x 100px i want to ask about it but didn't saw your post... here did you null it? @eon!!!! love story!!!!! thats rare!!!! ^^ don't get me wrong ^^ kyo and red and me probably goes for (aka making) fantasy action + romance (red + kyo = spell war) but you goes to romance right away ^^ just like jap romance simulation type ^^ love to see what happen with the boy ^^ |
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on 2008-03-27 06:51:21 (edited 2008-03-27 06:52:24)
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@Eon im not into fantasy love story too..im into more realistic one since novels are more interesting if it is based on reality. Repost the story once you modify some part, Im willing to wait coz we're really going to make this one even if the others wont cooperate. Ill finish this one no matter what happens /--dont want to fail again..past is past..dont mind me--/ @Key yup ideleted that one. I did make a new CG Club card with the position on it. here's the sample: I will change all the member's info to this one xP |
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@Eon Ah.. That was a nice story ^^ Though kinda reminded me of some visual novels =/ And.. Ahh,, Don't you think it's kinda like... Errr.. Too much misfortune? And Yeah.. I have to agree with Ich for this one.. I Prefer realistic atmosphere and not too much coincidence XDD Hahaha... maybe something a bit more ordinary? ^^ Though it's just a suggestion.. @Ich That's cool!! *Drool* Can't wait to see mine ^^ And,, Oh yeah.. About making the novel,, Don't worry.. I'll help in any way that I Can ^^ |
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@ich: nice club cards XD don't worry this one will push through.. btw are we making this into an actual VN? if yes then what game engine should we use? (eg. Flash, Blade, NScripter) @Eon: I like the start of the story (dead girl friend, depressed person..) but not really feeling it after the boy gets saved killing himself XD |