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Re: Poetry Club v2
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@ Carrot - I'm sorry school is being hellish, I'm sooo happy to be on summer break. I have to agree with you though, I had written love poems before I had actually been in love, but they were much more meaningful when the emotion was genuine. @ Orange - Thanks! It's kind of a depressing poem to me. It's a break up poem... soo.... oh well, I'm glad you like it! @ all - the front page should be up to date, PM me if I left anything out!  |
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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on 2010-07-22 00:54:44 (edited 2010-07-22 00:58:49)
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Hi all ~ i came again~ ^^ well, i think you dont have to be in love to write a poem.. bacause a poem can express many thing beside love .... you can express all feelings with poem. ^^ hi Carrot nice to meet you too ^^ oh .. new poem from Anke! i love your poem too Anke!! ^^ keep at it. 
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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on 2010-07-21 18:51:11 |
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Sugar coated truths and the space between the lies is where you found me waiting for you. So if this is goodbye, let me leave you with sugar free and selfish words, "I love you." |
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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on 2010-07-20 04:57:46 |
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I stopped by to answer the discussion topic. :3 I think it is not necessary to be in love in order to make a love-type poem. But it will boost your sense of being a true poet since you can relate to it big time. :D And I also think that, of course, you would want your *ahem* love story to be made into a majestic poem and to be read by your friends. Am I right? :) @Anke >HELLOOO!!! :O School's being hellish now. D: I hardly can't make any poems at the moment.. (So sorry~~~ D:) @Orange >Welcome! :3 My name's Carrot. :D So glad to meet you~ @Toyumi >I miss youuuu~ :D 
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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on 2010-07-19 07:25:44 |
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Thanks Orange! I'm glad you like my poem! The current topic of conversation is alwasy in the first post :D Right now it's "Do you need to be in love to write a love poem?" |
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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on 2010-07-19 06:54:09 |
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hehe .. ^___^ nice to see you all here. You're very friendly XD so what is the topic now ?? I agree with Toyumi, HTML is fun . it will show your own post & character . ^^ "Our Fairytail" ? it's nice poem anyway .. ^__^ i like it Anke.
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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on 2010-07-18 20:26:34 |
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@ Hey Orange!!! It's great to have another reading member!!! I'll be sure to add you to the list when I get the chance :D Like Toyumi said, you can talk about the current topic of conversation or really anything that has to do with Poetry. Welcome to the club!!! @ Carrot - It's nice to see you're still able to check in once in a while ;D Good luck with school! @ Toyumi - Thanks for the compliment on my poem! Haha and yes I like HTML, I just have 7 pages of HTML written for that first post :P Haha |
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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Well, what we do here is write poems/read poems, and then talk about poems, and there's also a discussion topic too (Basically anything poetry related can go on here XD).  |
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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on 2010-07-18 08:08:28 |
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thanks Toyumi. ^___^ i'll be glad to join here. So, what should i do first here ?? =3
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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on 2010-07-18 07:15:09 |
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@ Orange- Welcome!!! And of course you can join (anyone can join if they like poetry). Oh and I see there's a new discussion topic (or at least I don't remember it XD). And no, you don't have to be in love to write love poems. It might make it more meaningful for you, but you don't have to be in love. As an example, I wrote my latest poem, Constant, when I was single. |
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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on 2010-07-17 23:50:54 |
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hi all~ i'm new at this thread ^^ nickname : Orange I'm the new reader here . ^^ can I join ?? =3
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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on 2010-07-17 22:59:48 (edited 2010-07-17 23:00:03)
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OMG! I haven't been here for a while now. T_T I'll read all those new poems later.. :D I just wanted for you guys to know that I'm still alive and kickin! :3 Well then.. :D Until next time. :3 [School's been so busy lately, I'm so sorry... :((]
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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on 2010-07-15 14:31:48 |
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@ Anke- HTML is so much fun after awhile! At least I find it to be fun... XD Because it's a way to show your own style, and once you get the codes down then it's pretty easy. Anyways, back to the poems... Thank you! I actually thought that poem wasn't really too good (It was just a thing I thought of, at a sleepover at 1 AM no less. But I had the inspiration so I decided to make a poem out of it). And your poem is really cute! I like it a lot! Very descriptive, and is has a good vocabulary as well (I've hardly ever heard the word betrothed outside of my English class). |
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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on 2010-07-15 14:10:06 |
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@ Toyumi - *Sniff* I love it! It makes me sad cause I kinda feel that way right now, but it is very well written! I really like it! @ All - The front post is updated so please let me know if I need to fix anything! HTML gets soo wordy after a while :D This is the story, of a classic pair of lovers, bound by passion, blinded by love, betrothed by fate. This is the messed up fairytale of us; where the boy’s father screams no and the girl’s father says yes. This the upside down story of us; where I keep myself up each night worrying that I’ll never be good enough for you. This is the backwards tale of us, but in the end we’re just another fairytale; caught up in a love that cannot be. I stare up at the stars And I pray to the god above; that maybe I’ll be able to see you again, but deep in the bottom of my bleeding heart, I know the chances are slim. Oh how I miss you, my shining prince. Oh how I wish, I could be more than the pheasant girl for you. Oh how I pray, that one day this wall between us will come crashing down, and I will be safe in your arms, forever more. |
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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on 2010-07-06 13:56:17 |
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@ Jo- Nice poem! It really reminds me of how you have to spend your time wisely. Wow, it's been awhile since I posted a new poem here (I think I was still in school when I wrote my last one). Here's a new one I made up just last night. I don't think it's very good and I don't like the ending (I didn't know how to end it lol), but it's still a poem so I'll post it. You say it constantly, But how can I be your angel? I didn't fall down from the sky, And I'm nowhere near faithful. You say it constantly, But how can I be your darling? I hardly do any good for you, In fact, it's quite the opposite! You say it constantly, But how can you love me? When I've caused so much misery, And yet you don't let me go. You do it constantly, But how can you hold me? And whisper to me in that sweet voice, Saying everything will be alright? You do it constantly, But how can you hug me? Even though you are my idol, How do you find the good in me? You do it constantly, But how can you kiss me? Do you see something in me, that even I don't see? Is that it? You do it constantly, But how can you pull me closer? And how can you say constantly, How can you say you live for me? Is it that you see a spark of good in me? That must be it, As we sleep soundly in the night, A peaceful sleep amidst the chaos. |
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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on 2010-07-04 22:41:24 |
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@ Holkers - Wonderfully written poem there! Good luck with your finals! @ Jo - I like that, but it brings tears to my eyes at the same time. It reminds me of a poem I read at my great-great-aunt's funeral last week *sinff* but I like it! @ All - Sorry for my absence I'm glad to see things kept going I'll get around to updating our welcoming post in the next few days! Thanks again for everything! |
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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@Jo Why thank you. ^////^ i'm flattered that you think my writing is good enough to feel the emotions that are behind them. ^///^  |
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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on 2010-07-03 06:24:46 |
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It’s July already!! It’s been awhile again. @Toyumi Hmm, I see your right. Well, I guess it goes for almost everyone. A person must be in a right mood or in a certain feeling when it comes to writing a poem. : 3 And thanks. @Tifa Gosh, don’t need to say sorry…Not sad at all. It’s just that, portraying a certain feeling in a poem is good. Your poem is awesome that even a reader can feel the emotion out of your poem. @Anke-sama Thanks! Glad it helps. @Analise Hi there, and Welcome as well :D @Carrot I think you can compose a song out of your poem. Nice job! Love it. And thanks a lot! I will try to do better. :) @Jon You’re welcome… :) @Holkers Is it Halloween… ahaha. Well, love it lots. Good luck in your exams!! …………………. will post in another poem of the week. The time in my lifeThis is the time in my life, that I don’t want to waste. Young age is a privilege, wanted by all adults. Remembering their childhood memories, and to avoid becoming an old sack. Yet denied by the young ones, in a hard educational life time. I will say, age is only important, if you happen to be wine or cheese. When I get older, coming out of the shower. I am relieved that the mirror, is all fogged up. Preferring not to see, the wrinkles on my skin. Life will still go on. From childhood, to teenage, and adults. Till I look forward to old shrinkage, I realize I’m much too wise, to regret the time in my life, I had left behind. ............hope you all will like it. X.x have a nice day and Take care everyone 
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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on 2010-06-25 11:30:15 (edited 2010-06-25 11:30:44)
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@ Holkers- Nice poem! I really like it. Although it seems like a poem for Halloween, rofl. And you're right, there's no contest at the moment, but maybe... Nah, I made/was in charge the last contest, so I don't want to start up another one. And good luck with your exams! |
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Finally finally finally~ Over the holidays and the down days, I'm back. At least for now. I shall be gone soon since there would be a whole lot of studying to be done. And so I shall leave one last piece of my work before I disappear. Of course after a farewell, and kindly promise to come back as soon as possible? When I walk down the street The street was full of souls They move around like a madman I did my best to avoid them But they block my way 'til the dawn came and took away my precious time When the sun came down, Everybody leave for The Festival of Night Where it will be alive on midnight Might come if you like, if you like, if you like There's vampire on the right Ghouls on your left side The headless horseman riding his horse is waiting for his bride Hunchback in the 70's Dying children giggled under the moonlight Food was served The living people are partying! Music, lights, showcases It's the party where the living and the dead held together's arms and dance 'til it was 3 am The living clean and bid farewell The dead rest back to their grave The Festival of Night is forgotten once more It's a short one, but I did my best to contribute something to this club! I hope it satisfied your dining. I'm very sorry I can't have a moment to read all your poems my dear friend, But I shall have my time back once my school years are over. With that, I shall return with more fun reading, rhythmical poems Deary old friends, bid me good luck and pray for my battle with my exams! xD Welcome to all new members too! Not to forget about that. Rii-sama: Glad to have you here. I heard you write some, so post 'em up! Don't be shy! I guess there's no contest at the moment, or is there? Hope ya'll took part! May the best be the winner..? Haha, it's the best advice I gave out to the youngsters. /cough.
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