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on 2006-05-20 18:16:41 |
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So many poems, so little time to read. Well since I don't have the time to critize them all, I'll just say one thing: Keep posting your poems. Anyway, Doc, you know I always compliment your work but You're Poison by far has to be one of the best.     |
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It's an expression of love and hate for one person mixed together. A true anarchistic love. I am really peased with You're Poison. Oh and I promise I'l get Babylon 4 up sometime this week. I know there's been a huge wait on that... |
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on 2006-05-20 18:21:16 |
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*Checks watch* Hurry up! |
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4 Simple words Were it that it was, Would all be that it is? In perfection, It would be what it was, And all is that which it were. But if it is that which it were, All could not be what it was. Therefore, Were all not what it was, It could not be that it is.
Wise Man says: "Take a dog off its leash and it will wander."
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-Pointless Pleas Why don't you look at my eyes when you talk to me? You say we'll make things better but I disagree. We've run in circle for a full three years now it's to late to jump ship cause it's already run aground. We're not moving forward only running behind. All the lies and hiding will make me lose my mind. I want to rewrite the bad poetry of our life. Erase stupidity and cover up tension and strife. I want a second chance where we're free of lies. I wanta new revision where dreams are realized. We ripped each other's notes and didn't mourn the passing. Cheap attempts at saarcastic jokes to which no one's laughing. Walk together silently refusing both to speak and yet we both show false concern when the other's heart is weak. All thelies and secrets held make both ourlives a misery. If our angst has abody count then we're the first two casualties. I want to rewrite the burned notes we took out of our life. To fix the tattered photographs we shreded with a kitchen knife. I want to rewrite all this world, forge a new reality; where with or without theother, each of uscould just be happy. |
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Questions... How does one make the font bold and italic? I could be so much more exciting, If my font was italic and bold. It would be much more warm, And not so cold. (No seriously, how do I do it? I had to do the poem to stay on topic.)
Wise Man says: "Take a dog off its leash and it will wander."
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To learn how touse Bold and Italics real well, In the Introductions tread Read the topic on how to use HTML... (made up on the spot.) |
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on 2006-06-01 16:46:17 |
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Pointless Pleas has to by on of the best poems Doc has posted. I absolutly loved it. Engineer: Good poem you got there. (refering to 4 simple words) |
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-I Don't Wanna Be With You I don't wanna be with you. I wanna find something new to do. I want this sh*t to come to an end. I wanna hang out with my friends. I don't wanna be with you. I wanna find somebody new. Someone who's more up to it. Someone who don't treat me like sh*t. The person you can never be one who likes me cause I'm me. I don't wanna be with you. Belive it cause it's all true. I've had it with the stupid games late night stand ups and calling names. That's the way it's gonna be Cause I hate you like you hate me! |
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on 2006-06-01 20:01:35 |
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That was harsh. I'm assuming it's for nobody. |
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WARNING!: I don't condone or recommend any of what this poem talks about even though Iamy or may not have done most of it. Really. Stay safe and clean kids... -Suburban Anarchist Life is dead on my Cul-du-Sac My girlfriend stabbed me in the back Now I've gotten really pissed Now I am an Anarchist Grab the bat and swing with all your might, We're gonna smash somw sh*t tonight! I'm a suburban anarchist. I'll get drunk and slit my wrists. Cause hell for you all night and day 'Cause it's your fault I am this way. don't f*** with me you'll taste my fist Cause I am a suburban anarcist. I skip class when I'm at school. I smoke and drink cause I'm a fool. Write my name on bathroom walls. Have security kick me out of malls. I'll take a hammer to what's left of my broken home or make a bong from a garden gnome. I'm a suburban anarchist. I'll get drunk and slit my wrists. Find happiness in anarchy. 'Cause no one ever loved me. To talk to me. don't get me pissed. 'Cause I'm a Suburban anarchist. One day they'll come arrest me. Rotten in jail, that's the end for me. But you know I'd rather get the chair then have someone tell me what to think and wear. I'll still have "F*** You* tattoed onthe knuckles of my hands. And I'll still smash your promised land. I'm a suburban anarchist I'll get drunk and slit my wrists. They'l look back and they'll all say "It could have been some other way." When I die I won't be missed Cause I'm a Suburban Anarchist! |
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on 2006-06-01 21:17:08 (edited 2006-06-01 21:18:09)
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There are few things I havn't done that are described in that poem, getting a tattoo and smoking. Good one, Doc! |
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YOu've done some of that? And you liked it? Damn. You've gained respect. This is gonna be a song for my band if I ever pick up a mic. again or learn to play guitar... |
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hello there.. .im a new one here... just wana know more bout this place... could you help me... ichiro namida... if im not mistaken... could we talk.... and by the way... dont be too bothered bout those girls out there... you can find your girl one day... but do say that... dahil hindi lahat ng babae ay nananakit ng lalaki... maybe... hindi lang talaaga kayo para sa isat isa...
tenshi
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-Disconected Don't lose my number DOn't forget to call You're the only one I care about And you don't care at all. No one ever called me tonight. Isit by the phone and yankthe cord I've lost my mind Can't take no more If you don't give a sh*t like I know you don't call me tell me to piss off But I know you won't Don't lose my number Though you'll never use it. but it'll keep me waiting having violent silent fits My phone is never ringing at last I've had enough throughthe static I call you You tell me life is tough. Don't lose my number Iwant you to lose sleep Call it a momento thetwo of us keep I don't give a sh*t All this'll end. I called the company and had the damn thing Disconected. |
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on 2006-06-07 21:02:34 |
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It had been such a long time since I read a new poem of the Doctor... (A week but whatever) Okay time to criticize, it's okay. Not the best thing I've read, but still worth reading. Maybe if it were shorter or more direct, it would be better. |
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What? A poem she didn't outright love? Oh Gods I've lost my touch. I must now go and kill myself... Anyway. I'll havesome more up later this weekso don't worry if this wasn't you're fancy... |
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Happy Birthday to you You belong to the zoo You look like a monkey and you smell like one too  |
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SkyAlchemist
on 2006-06-09 15:33:48 |
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LOL! Doc, I didn't get your comment about me not outright loving your work... Am I supposed to be offended or something? |