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@ Maia: How about this? Dance of the Full Moon I hold you close. I feel your heart beating with mine. Your soft breath on my neck, Your warm touch. These are welcome feelings, As my love for you rages. Our feet glide across the grass, We sway to and fro. The stars are our orchestra, Playing the music of the skies. With the moon as our spotlight, We can dance the night away. The End That isn't depressing, is it?
Wise Man says: "Take a dog off its leash and it will wander."
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A kiss of no more One will never see How meaningful it was for me You arms guarding me Your words soothing me You now left me as nothing more than a fool I decided to do the shortest poem you'd probably see. Most horrid also(on the spot) Or I can do Action are loudest than words You consolded me Understood the horrid mess I was My arms reach out for you In the memories we had, I'm sadden to say goodbye  |
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Remember to forget me when you leave. Drip It's raining outside You are calling But I can't hear your voice You're locked in the vaults of my past Numb I stare out through the window It's still pouring You are wilting A brown rose in the water Tick The clock keeps on ticking An intermittent sound Amplified by the quiet surroundings I see you dancing in my mind's eye Sigh Gentle breathing Your perfume drifts into my room Your thoughts, your memories Are never to be awakened, ever You are dead to me. Tell me why When I dream I dream about you.
Peering into the eyes of Tomorrow,
Haunted by the child of Yesterday,
Living in perpetual winter,
In silence his soul now waits.
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here's a poem i wrote... i was quite sad that time, and i MEAN sad. it takes a lot of emotion for me to write poems, let alone draw. it's in my native language... so bear with me for a minute.
the translations are there already! i'm sorry if it's kinda sad... >_< please tell me how you find it... -michiyo- 
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"You are my Love" Simply Adoring you is what I'll do.Only to find that you'll just leave me to.For you I'll do anything if you want me to.I love you.All I have to say for my love is true.Keeping this feeling for you in my heart.Remembering that we will soon be apart.Insisting myself that is not true.Seeing you always is what I wish to do.Till the day comes that you will leave me.I'll be taking care of you for everyone to see.Never will I give up my love for you.And maybe you are aasking this is all true?More and More loving you for who you are.Evey single second,minute,and every single hour.No day passes by when you are not in my mind.Dreaming that you will be with me all the time.Only we can see this love between you and me.Zipping in front of me everytime you said "I Love you".ANd Just to find out you are gone without me by your side.Being with you is what I have wanted all this time.Indulging in your presence is what I do.No one can keep me away from you.Always thinking what to do without you.Remembering the things that happened between me and you.Always thinking who my one true love is?Only to realize that my one true love is you. Sorry...its kinda long..hehehe..what do you guys think?  |
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@ Maia: Since the poem I posted was my little sis I'd like to speak on her behalf. To answer your question Maia, she's not depressed or problematic. I dunno, but her inspiration totally comes from feelings of stress due caused by something in her life. I guess anything dark or depressing is what keeps her creative juices flowing ^^; Yes I have to say I am sometimes troubled by the things she writes, but its how she is. To everyone, another one from my sis. Title: PIERCING LOVE Seemingly i am an innocent face but secretly i am longing to kill you Patiently i am waiting for the night nightly i wait for your soundly sleeping Quietly i take out a knife my anxious face is reflecting on the mirror blade Suddenly you awaken confused, distraught and disapointed You paint your feelings on your face so beautifully seeing ur expression i take the plunge I thrust the blade deep into you skin, where it pierces your heart so deeply that it touches your soul Your emotions play again the eyes reflect upset toward i But i dont understand my wrongdoings mesmerized in the eyes that wont close anymore Haunted by the silence that was once filled with two beating hearts you are no more... as so will i... Togetherness is all i can offer ur blood intertwines with my blood as i pierce my heart where urs used to be Blackness surrounds us do not worry my love together again we'll be one i love you so much and so much more -End- Kitty's note: Sis was reading a passage from Wuthering Heights that inspired to write this. Another dark poem, but that's not gonna stop her ^^;  |
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Water Light spills on the table through glass surprised to find itself focused by water water cleans, heals, quenches raises life from dust February - already, prim snowflakes meld into murmuring water smelling of spring the season of kisses Dark denial outweighed by hatchling down - swept away on a passionate raindrop.  |
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@engineer: yes...it may be the 'easiest' to write, but poems/stories reflect what you're thinking and what your personality is... even hidden desire =.= that's what I learned from someone/something [not telling]... =.= that's why I'm troubled... are you all depressed/problematic... ? >.< 
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@ Maia: Everyone writes depressing poems because depressing poems are the easiest ones to write. This poem, for example, took about 4 minutes of my time. Pain I lied restless one muggy summer night, Trying to answer troublesome questions. What is Pain? Is pain physical? Is it the feeling of nerve damage? Then why don’t I cry when I bleed? I don’t hate it, I don’t like it, Bleeding feels natural. Is pain mental? Is it the discomfort of a dramatic event? My aunt is dying, Yet and I do not cry. I love my aunt, But her death seems natural. If everything is natural to me, Then I feel no pain. What kind of person feels no pain !?! I shot myself one muggy summer night. -Sir Nicholas
Wise Man says: "Take a dog off its leash and it will wander."
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Died rose~ |
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Chyrin cross was created from my negative side hate anger injustice and all negative aura of the world and in my observations here is my light sided poem hope you loved it Second Chance By: Karuzo Kaze Fujimiya I thought no one can accept me Because of my horrible and nightmare attitudes, My swords are stained with blood My armor is damaged by swords, spears and arrows My eyes witnessed the mercy cries and suffering of people And my heart is dark as chaotic darkness I thought my life will be this way Until you came Your face is full of joy Your eyes is full of mercy And your heart is full of love You came close to me But I evade, knowing that you will kill me But I was wrong You touched my sword and saw the events that I kept for a long time My heart was beating very fast My body is weakening I tried to run but I fell You held my hand and cried I felt the warmth of being loved And I forgot those events and started a new life But I know that I will return to my terrible past And be a part of chaos But you prevented it by loving me And risked your life to redeem my soul Now both of us are now one And we will never be separated FOREVER.  --> |
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OMG~! O.O you're poems are shocking! they are really great! g-r-e-a-t! wai~... but I'm a bit troubled... are you all.. depressed?! or do you have problems?! OMG~! NOOOO~! T_T ~*~*~*~*~ Kiss is a Gamble Sex is a Game Boys do the action Girls get the blame wai~ ...
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~Deadly SIns~ My veins are aching wit desire, they instinctively thrive to grasp, to choke, to …………. Kill. This pounding sensation in my brain Is full of tumult Jus the very sound of your nerve recking voice Is enough to consume my thoughts with sinful things. Even as they say, god hates the sin but loves a sinner. Or whatever they say in the bible Let me bask in my own sin For it gives me enough delight to relish in my thoughts Of choking you, stabbing you, poisoning you. Even as I type these words down. They give me a guilty conscience Yet I feel…at peace. Kitty's note: What d'you think? This is not mine. For those who have not read my previous post I said that I'll post one of my lil sis should I ever get my hands on one. The words she wrote here were based on her feelings she had on our paraents - not that she doesn't love them or anything - it's just that they may get to the point where she gets frustrated with them. Don't take the words too litterally. She's not a killer. Honest! ^^ |
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Fallen Star written by me It was only a while back When I saw the window boy Gazing at the sky. Filled with hopes and dreams, he lied to his past To create a future His parents were against. He headed towards the light He wanted the fame and glory To keep it he had to fight. When he reached the top He left his life behind When he left the girl of his dreams He realized his life had seemed Like nothing but a fallen star A dream |
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Lips soften Eyes blinkin Words sweeten Warmth hug Sugar Lips The way i image you are just simply a princess, Hug me, hold me, kiss me & KILL ME |
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All My Loving Close your eyes And I'll kiss you Tomorrow I miss you Remember I always be true And then while I'm away I'll write home everyday And I'll sing all my loving to you I'll pretend that I'm kissing The least I am missing And hope that my dreams will come true All my loving I'll send to you All my loving Darling I'll be true As a symbol I can be incorruptible. |
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lots of good poems here. Some sad, some not. I'm not good at wrting poems than I am at drawing, but my sister is. Maybe I'll post one of hers however almost all of them, and I mean every single one of them is sad or depressing. Turns out that she's a sad person on the inside despite her acting like the cheerful person she is. When I manage to get one I'll post it here. |
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Love knows no reason, Love knows no lies, Love has no eyes but love is not blind; It can see but it doesn't mind.
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by shotgun shogun
on 2006-09-05 21:27:04 (edited 2006-09-05 21:27:38)
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haiku for anime i watch in awe this escaping thought of mind is this anime? nice poem up above
it takes a min to meet someone, an hour to get to know them,and a day to love them, but it takes forever to forget them
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I did this poem for Jr. High and they forced me to say it in front of the 8th Grade Englsih. LONELINESS I sit in the dark only with my emotion and memories I feel nobody cares I sit there away from all people I think of the past I feel the world crashing on top of me slowly everything goes away then I realize that we all feel loneliness Yeah....Kinda sad...I am not a sad person lol. I dont like it that much. I had beter but this one was on my computer. A+ on it.  DON'T SLAP THE MONKEY!! |