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Re: Poetry Club v2
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on 2010-08-22 06:02:10 |
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OMG! Lots of new members! Lots of poems too!!! Welcome to all! I'm Carrot~ :D Hope someone at least remembers me here.. D: 
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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on 2010-08-22 03:41:03 |
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I actually have quite a bit of peotry I've wrote... but I'll just put one up for now. -PEACE ON EARTH, THOSE FINAL WORDS- Now I know I haven't known her for as long as you, But instead of mourning for her passing and feelin' blue, Joy should be amassing for the memories she left in wake. What we take from this event is powerful in Semblance and relevance, but what we need to do to move along Is, on this dusk before the dawn, Allow her spirit to carry on into the night, And we should celebrate her life and memory. I bet that is what she would say for thee To cherish her in her Final Moments. |
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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@Chaotic Awwwww ^//////^ why thank you. ^^  |
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on 2010-08-21 20:14:42 |
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@Lilith x3 Get married? That would be... interesting indeed xDD;; And despite being short, your poem was very pretty~ @Anke I know dear, and thank you so much for that. @Wizard It's alright, no worries~ You don't have to cry ._. That's hardly my intention... but actually, I'm alright with my insomnia after four years, it's just kinda... there xD And sometimes, when I'm overwhelmed, yes I will write simply for a release and to just get some of it off my mind. And that poem was very nice~ It inspired me to write a poem... so, here it is~ She is... She is a student in the stage of the school of the high, She is a girl with too much pride to be seen cry. She is a constantly improving being in her mind, She is one who keeps hope despite all the trials and pain and when it is hard to find. She doesn’t like to brag about herself or such, She doesn’t like liars, cheaters, or users much. She would like to be able to say she’s simple but is not, She has difficulties to face and battles to be fought. She doesn’t like her name but she keeps it anyway, Because she loves her mother and what can she say? It is who she is so she holds on to that fact. Oh, and she is someone who tries to keep all in check and tact. She is a voice of reason in the chaos and trouble, She is the one who makes beauty and creation from rubble. She is the one who puts herself last no matter it all. To pains unimaginable she’ll submit herself over others’ fall… She is a younger sister but she acts the role of an older, Compared to most younger siblings she is more protective and colder. She is kind and loving to those who matter though, And to those people it is very much so. However, she also has a short fuse, And it isn’t one that is easy to diffuse. She has many flaws and imperfections, In both her mental and physical reflections. Loyal and independent are two things she is truly, But she can also be unruly. That’s alright though. You understand if you know… If you know her and who she is really, Not who she is ideally. You’d understand she is a good being, Underneath the cold, distant, tough act you’re seeing. She is… who is she? Who might she be? She is Chaotic, she is me, That is who I am… I’m her, all those things you see?  |
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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on 2010-08-21 19:20:39 |
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@Toyumi : can we post some lyrics too ?? @Wizard : poem about your life ?? i like it ^__^ 
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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on 2010-08-21 19:11:06 (edited 2010-08-21 19:19:02)
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@Chaotic -huggles and snuggles back- :3 maybe when i get back to chat i can marry yous! :3 and then more huggles. :3 __________________________________________________________________________________ Love is blind and ignorance is bliss But what lies behind a simple kiss? Is it love or is it lust? Is it wanting or is it needing? But let the simple kiss decide that fate. Then tell me what you think after that date. __________________________________________________________________________________ Kinda sucks i know and too short but it was what i had in my head and i just wanted to get it out. >.< |
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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on 2010-08-21 13:53:12 |
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@ Anke-sempai - Hmm..? I always look at other people...but I didn't look at me. Did I enjoy little things in life? I think so... Well I think most people do, sempai. I mean, wounldn't you feel like smiling when someone said something like "thank you" to you? Even if you don't smile at them, you must be smiling inside, right? I'm gonna try it on you sempai. "Thank you. For making a fantastic club. For reading my poem. For chatting with me like this." Well..? Don't get emotional! Haha. Your guess about me enjoying little things in life was right. You learned well sempai. 
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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on 2010-08-21 13:02:39 |
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@ Wizard-San - Haha I don't think your a stalker xD, I understand being passive around people though. I'm a little like that myself. Anyway... I like your poem. I think from this I can tell that you enjoy the little things in life. Am I right? @ Chaotic - Well I can back you up, because you know I'm here for you always :D  |
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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on 2010-08-21 07:26:04 |
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@ Holkers- If it has poetic elements in it, then I guess you can post lyrics here too XD @ Wizard- That's a good poem too, and it's nice how you related it to your life as well! (I think I did that with a few of my poems too, but I'm not sure if I posted them here or not. I think I did... Oh well, I can't remember XD)  |
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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on 2010-08-21 07:00:27 (edited 2010-08-21 13:29:37)
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@anke-sempai - You regard me too highly, sempai. Well unfortunately for me, to be more observant of people, I had to step back to watch the show. So I'm kinda passive around people, while they do not notice my existence, I notice their every move. By the way, I'm not a stalker ahaha. (Is this joke recurring?) @chaotic - wha...I'm..so shocked..I could cry for you! I feel so powerless to help... Well chaotic, I'm in no position to give suggestions or anything..but.. I believe the best thing for you is to go to sleep. Face those nightmares... and tell them in the face that "I've written so much about stuff like this that this is child's play to me!! Bring it!!". Hang in there, we are here for you. So...you are writing these things to let it all out right? If we can share even the least of your burden this way, then bring it on! Here's a poem that might lift your burden a bit...okay? __________________________________________________ My second entry... Title:Welcome Back! Munching lunch as I stride "I'm off" I casually said "Have a nice day" she replied Out the door harsh world await Morning class is a battle Suppressed eyelid from shutting down From falling asleep do I struggle Man did I look like a clown Part-time was heaps of trouble Endless was customer's orders My cooking station full of rubble Arms falling off my shoulders So tired I might sway "Welcome back" she did say Made all the pain go away Feels like I can go one more day ___________________________________ This is kind of about me. I work part time as a cook haha (check my sig's pop up text). Well? hope you guys like it!
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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on 2010-08-21 06:17:14 |
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Ah Writer, I'm sorry! D: -Didn't intend to quite have that effect- Uhm... as for what caused me to write such things... ._. I'm sure Anke can back me up on this, my past isn't the prettiest. Well, that and probably that was more inspired by my dreams. If you haven't noticed yet I'm online a /lot/ and it's due to the fact that I have rather severe insomnia. That being said, the reason is since I was a child I've had very... graphic, violent, and disturbing dreams in which I am put through rather terrible physical torment or lose everyone around me that matters as I care about them. The thing is though, I'm one of those people who always remembers their dreams so by the time I was like... twelve, eleven I was absolutely set against sleeping and so my subconscious and my conscious self will both push myself to the point of sacrificing my physical health and state to stay awake and not be subjected to such nightmares ._. Actually, they probably are more equivalent to night terrors or something, but I don't have any of the symptoms of flailing violently about in my sleep or screaming. @Lilith x3 -huggles- You're just sooo huggable it seems~ |
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Just to say that I'm still alive o.o Can i post some lyrics here that i've made as a poem? xDD!
I claimed someone that I can't remember because photobucket is ended.
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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on 2010-08-21 03:03:21 |
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Ahh chaotic. The image portrayed in the poem flows clearly in my mind....so much that....well....I couldn't eat my dinner. Ahaha. No, I'm not saying that's bad. I tend to look for something so shockingly violent that it makes me shiver. Pain allows you to be kind to others right? So umm...chaotic, what made you write stuff like that anyway? I'm very intrigued to analyze your character...*takes scalpel* hmm where do we open first...? Ahaha just joking... *readies scalpel*
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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on 2010-08-20 23:09:08 |
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@Chaotic Of Course! *tackle glomps* ^^ |
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on 2010-08-20 18:52:22 |
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@Lilith Awww, thank you so much ;-; I'm glad to know that you like my work I am actually surprised at how well it was taken by you all... thanks so much. ;-; |
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on 2010-08-20 16:04:05 |
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@Chaotic O.O wow i am totally jealous of you. you are a fantastic writer! |
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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on 2010-08-20 12:25:09 |
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You know... I really don't write about things that are like... 'meaningful' to me, or people or anything... Actually, I don't know what I really write about at all, as silly as it seems to say such a thing. I just kind of write, and when I do it all comes flowing out without much thought. I mean... Trust me, if I could dictate what I wrote about I would not have written a lot of the poems that I did when I was going through my downward slings ._. @Toyumi Heheh ^^;; Yeah, that actually is probably one of my worst ones though... I figured I would let you start at the farthest point and then see the less graphic and terrifying side of my works so you can compare and contrast the variation of my style. @Anke mmhmm x3 I figured it would be fun to see the reactions that I got~ @Rie Not... really. Short stories generally are much longer, especially if you are one to base things around Edgar Allen Poe's writing as references... which I do since he's practically my idol. It's more /cinematic/ yes, I will give you that though. By the way, I just noticed something... I feel very odd, for I feel like if I post poems as frequently as I make them, or even post old poems I wrote up recently then I would be flooding this thread in no time... I already know of like, twenty poems I have written and intend on really keeping that I think would be interesting to post. When I realized this however I was like: .... ._.;; I write poetry too much... there is no way I could put that all on the thread. |
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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on 2010-08-20 09:46:12 |
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@ Toyumi - I usually write about things that are meaningful to me as well. I think that most of the time we get our inspiration from the things around us, so it would make sense for our poems to have some sort of deeper meaning within our own lives. @ Wizard - You seem to have a very good understanding for people. I would say you have a gift in that area, since you were able to figure me out just by reading my poems. (Not that I'm really all that hard to figure out.) I can't wait to read more of your poems, because I think I might learn something from them, as well as be inspired. @ Chaotic - Haha so I guess you went with posting the one we talked about. ^.^ It's very well written! |
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on 2010-08-20 08:21:46 |
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@ Wizard- Thanks! And I hope you get inspired from it (It would mean a lot to me for someone to be inspired by my poem... That was inspired by a song. XD) @ Chaotic- Your poem is very, very long. XD And yeah, I see what you mean by your poems making you seem insane. That poem scared me a bit. XD But it's still a nice poem! @ Rie- Thanks, I'm glad you like it! |
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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on 2010-08-20 07:47:04 |
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hi all ~ i'm back ~ woow... there are a lot of poems here ^^" nice work all~ ^____^ keep at it !!!
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