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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by on 2007-05-04 05:16:57
woW~ it'd be locked soon ^^

soo.. who'll revive this thread??

are we going to wait for Critic-san?? ^^


*looks at critic x Ronin battle*

woW~ nice techniques,, critic-san ^^

*sips tea*


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by on 2007-05-04 07:24:33
Night feel Freya's chest with his face for a while. He can't resist Freya anymore. With his fang still on Freya's neck. Nigth let go of Freya's left hand and his hand started to crawl towards Freya's chest.

"I believe this is what you want, my angel. Let me satisfy your lust with my own hand. I love you, I love you more than ever.....my angel".

Night stop biting for a while and began playing with Freya's body. Looking intensely toward's Freya beautiful face. She close her eyes as her body began shaking with lust.

"Now, we shall finish this I believe. Our fateful play is almost in the climax. I ask you once again, my angel. How about giving up.....submit to me. In return I'll give you the ultimate satisfaction of what and woman can ever reach"

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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by on 2007-05-04 07:45:25
(this is so getting locked soon....)

Tygore: *managed to dodge some of the ice shard but isn't so lucky with others* just a little more.... *notices the water mark underneath renmazuo* I may not make it.... better do this.. now or never... *the enchanted urn wraps around renmazuo, distrupting any magic in progress and preventing further magic use* got you now.... Spirit of great Taurens past lend mr thine power.... *tygores body becomes grey and doubles in size, his eyes now glowing a brigth blue he pulls renmazuo toward him and prepares to strike him with his axe*


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by seraphicangel_jibrille on 2007-05-04 08:31:45
(CRITIC! PLS MAKE ANOTHER THREAD OF YOURS! I LOVE THIS THREAD!!)

Freya felt Night's hand crawl over her chest. She opened her mouth and breathed desperately for air.

Freya tried to take breaths. Night seemed to have noticed this... and liked this.

Freya's lust really did rise.

Freya's mind: this vampire...... is different from all the other vampires.

then Freya felt her self laid on a pillow. there was another pillow next to her.

then she relized where her lust has reached.

Freya's mind: this is an arena.... not a private place for romance. i have to stop this now.

but freya had trouble letting go of Night. he was stronger than any vampire. her hands were useless.


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by on 2007-05-04 09:37:23 (edited 2007-05-04 16:01:54)
Slowly Night get up to keep his bat wing. Still playing with Freya's body, he unbuttoned his shirt. Looking Freya's mouth open for air, Night slowly lie back on Freya's chest. His body collide with Freya's body and he feel Freya's body warmth. Night's lips is on top of Freya's. Suddenly his conscience began to take over.

Night's mind: "What are you doing, stop it. This is too much. Stop it I say"

Night loosening himself. His mind somewhat stop his action.

(Edit: The last post is too much for the viewer. So I decided to modify it)

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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by seraphicangel_jibrille on 2007-05-04 09:45:48
(Night we will have to stop this vampire thing soon... some of the forum moderators complain... plus ur post has seckshual content and this will drive the forum moderators really angry. and they will persuade gendou to ban me and probably you as well. gendou respects his moderators gendou and he will do so without thinking twice.)

Freya soon relised that this wasnt rite.

Freya tried to resist Night's kiss but couldnt.

but her hand were free.

Freya lingered her fingers around Nights back.

then she felt Night let go of Freya's lips.

Freya looked at Night with irresistably deadly beautiful eyes.

Freya: i have already surrendered..... to the man i truly love.

then Freya gave a hard kick at Night's middle. that made Night fly 2 feet away from her and land on the ground hard.

Freya: and i will never give up on the one i love.

Freya got up and flew.

she crashed thru the colourful glass.


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by on 2007-05-04 09:55:44
(Sure, I'm running out of idea myself. I plan to surrender after this)

*flick* the surrounding become normal and the crowd cheering wild

"You seems to fight great even if it is an illussion"

Night is sitting beside rEi sipping tea.

"I haven't move from this place for a long time......which makes me disqualified"

*stand up*

"You win, Freya and sorry for patronizing your thought. It my way of fun really and thank you rEi for the tea" *bows*

"I leave for now, Let meet again someday, but in my different form"

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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by seraphicangel_jibrille on 2007-05-04 10:05:53
freya: i dont get it... how did i win?

freya's mind: oh i know. becuz i proved my strength against lust somehow.

Ken... i have kept my word.


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by Renma on 2007-05-04 21:43:11
Renmazuo Reach deep, Where his Match is and He said "Quadruple Detonate...." and Renmazuo light the match Both of Tygore's hands and Feet are exploded along with the Lighted match, Knocking Tygore back. "Never Underestimate the power of Tetra-Elementalist... I Can Exploded you again... and again.. and again..."

(Note : I'm not using any magic in this Move, Since the Explosion is trigerred by a Lighted match, Not using Mana.)


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by on 2007-05-05 00:35:26
(i undedrstand that... and know that explosions are not what you call magic is it...)

Tygore: *roars in pain but still manages to pull renmazuo toward him* You gave me a good figth young one... *rises axe* but I Shall win... *Swings the axe going for a vertical slash* even if it kills me....


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by Renma on 2007-05-05 03:42:42
(Just like before.... The bomb Has been planted... It can be trigerred anytime.. The differ is... I Use Mana to trigger the previous bomb, While I USe the match now.... But, seems like it won't create any differ now, right? ^^)

"Do you know, one fun fact about Tetra-Elementalists?" Renmazuo Raise his Hand and He cut his own hand using a knife. Blood begin to come out of his finger. The blood Freezes, Making a Quill-shield for renmazuo, Protecting him and At the same time Thousands of Ice shards stabs Tygore from his front. "Tetra-elementalists' Blood is The elements itself...."


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by Jinseta Ava on 2007-05-05 05:30:09
[Thanks rEi ^_\\ As I explained earlier, I'll revive the thread once its locked...]

The Paper

Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by Blind-Kitsuneblind-kitsune on 2007-05-05 18:24:40
*Ronin stares at him* Bring it you sealed my mana *he traces a transmutation circle into the ground. He pulls a Mossberg 500 12 gauge shotgun out of the ground* but you cant stop me from doing alchemy


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by Jinseta Ava on 2007-05-05 19:57:52 (edited 2007-05-05 19:58:31)
Myst: Its over... Body Flicker no Jutsu! *in an instant, the Myst in front of Ookami was less than an inch from Ookami's face, stabbing at Ookami's heart with a transmutted spear*

The Paper

Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by Blind-Kitsuneblind-kitsune on 2007-05-05 20:19:59
*this is no clone Myst hit the real thing this time* I am gonna lose again...no I WONT!!! *His mossberg goes off and he blows off Myst's head*


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by on 2007-05-05 21:40:05
Tygore: That shield won't help you... *the runed axe slashes thru the sheild and cuts renmazuo in half but a ice shard stabed tygore at the heart* Damn.... *tygore falls on his knees, returning to his normal brown coulor and body size* I guess this is it *tygore falls to the ground and Lies there motionless and no longer breathing*

(I hope you don't mind a tie renmazuo but I gota finish this fight before this thread get's locked cause I may not sleep at all if this went on)


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by Renma on 2007-05-06 03:33:15
XD Yeah.... I Guess.... Well... For my first fight around... it wasn't that bad...

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*Falls to the ground as well* That was a good fight..... *Try to stands up* Let's do it again sometimes..... *Bow, Renmazuo touch his Vital organ and Freeze it* *Coughing Blood* That should do it for the mean time.... *Cough* *Go to the Arena-side*


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by Jinseta Ava on 2007-05-06 04:43:51
Myst: *at the same time Ookami fired, six spears went through Ookami's body, one hitting the heart among other things, Myst's head was destroyed, and the clones canceled out*

[A tie. Not bad...]

The Paper

Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by Renma on 2007-05-06 17:09:14
......................

*Now sitting Besides Rei*

Wow.... Go Critic!! ^^


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by Blind-Kitsuneblind-kitsune on 2007-05-06 17:52:10
*Ronin is being carted away* seems I dont have many fans...


(I cant wait to fight in the new critic arena)


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