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by iChiRo nAmiDa
on 2006-04-12 19:41:52
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YEAH!! you got good ones...How we wish all of the girls would read these..and make them realize how much they hurt us...When they are ignoring our feelings..Haha...
http://www50.tok2.com/home/kasinn/icon.html
ichiro entertainment company 2006 (shiyounin dojo)
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Because I like sharing my angst with others... This is an older one from when SHE really f*cked with my heart. -Mid-October to April This lasted a thousand years, the biting pain and mounting fears, Falling rain and broken hearts, the way I feel now we're apart. All for nothing, nought to gain, What can I learn from all this pain? The sky gets cloudy as my eyes, Truth obscured by all your lies. As I'm drownig and no one sees, just close the lid and please Bury me. Discontentment burning bright,the show is over cut the lights. Kiss me kill me hold my hand, the rain is starting, strike the band A sharp and crashing symphony, A new tune for old melodies. |
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on 2006-04-12 19:57:57 |
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Doc, I might be crossing the line here but I have to ask. Why the ... do you have so much interest in HER when apparently all she causes you is pain?     |
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by iChiRo nAmiDa
on 2006-04-12 20:01:21
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Yeah! skyalchemist has his/her point..(dozo yurushiku)...I like that one above this...i think it is much better that mine..you really are heart-struck...Just keep it cool doc.,
http://www50.tok2.com/home/kasinn/icon.html
ichiro entertainment company 2006 (shiyounin dojo)
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No you see most of my problem is I brood over things. And I'm a coward. I am very interested in HER because she is the only person who has ever made me feel like I need another human in my life. SHE is the only one that has shown me that life is better with another. I'll admit, it's probabally myself that is my own enemy. |
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Do you think your God,Doc? No,you don't have to try to be the "best." Nobody can be strong all of the time,like super man and kryptonite. Not to mention a few chemicals in the brain could be a part of it too. |
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by overlordsero
on 2006-04-12 20:08:56
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oh oh oh!! reminds me of the song Kryptonite and the song Even superman. good songs....good songs....I have them both XD 
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*Hits Doc on the head, (softly ^_^)* Boy, why do you feel so much self pity? I understand that SHE means a lot to you. It's great that you love somebody, but seriously, SHE isn't the only girl out there. I'm not saying to completly forget and move on. I'm trying to say that you have to keep going. (I don't know if I made myself clear. I'm starting to speak spanglish, again) |
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by iChiRo nAmiDa
on 2006-04-12 20:12:08
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There are always other option,don't be stuck of dreaming your wildest on her doc., it's not worth it... i was able to overcome this kind of situation, trust me...Although i'm still haunted with my desires of being with her...But at least..im not seeing myself with here in a fleshy-flash-fantasy...
http://www50.tok2.com/home/kasinn/icon.html
ichiro entertainment company 2006 (shiyounin dojo)
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I know all of this. That's what hurts. I'm not trying to be perfect and I don't think I have anything to prove to anyone, but this is just something I have to do. I couldn't live with myself unless I saw this through. I'll be OK. I promise. |
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SkyAlchemist
on 2006-04-12 20:14:42 |
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You don't have to promise it. Eventually all our problems get fixed. |
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by iChiRo nAmiDa
on 2006-04-12 20:17:39
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just never let yourself be alone...It'll just make worst...I guess i would say that, i too was not able to tell her my feelings for her...And it do make more damage to yourself...Oh god, what am i saying?i'm turning insane..
http://www50.tok2.com/home/kasinn/icon.html
ichiro entertainment company 2006 (shiyounin dojo)
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And another: -Fan I sat there for an hour staring at the fan hoping for a call. All my fights are merry, all my songs sad. And you never rang at all. Ijust lied there waiting. Doing less than I can making myself feel small. My enemy is my reflection. My heart is in your hand, slowly it starts to fall. But you know I love you and this drives me mad: that you knew it all. |
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I don't have a poem, but I have something from my book. Can I post that instead?
woot
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w00t. Okay, be in for a little uhhh..call it a cross between sadness and violence: "Your petty feeling of happiness when I die will last but a moment. But the pain you enflict on the most important people in my life, will last an eternity. "Enjoy watching them suffer, to look into their eyes and see the sadness shadowing them, as you relish the thought of my blood staining your hands..."
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The thoughts which haunt, the nights dead like before. Falling... Falling... Forever descending. Never ending, like a spiral. Just spiraling, down the abyss. Motionless in this cage, drenched in blood, covered in scars. Further away, from humanity. Closer, to eternity. |
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Because I have nothing else to do... -Sunrise The pale blue sky seems dull and bleached, turning a sickly yellow hue. With fading night my dreams are gone and all those dreams were of you. How quickly fades a dream, as sun ignites the sky and all my dreams slip to memories as I watch the night die. Well? What d'ye think? |
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on 2006-04-15 23:28:34 |
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I liked it. You have a very interesting way to express yourself. |
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*bow* Why thank ye. Here's a piece of a lrger series I'm writing.... -Hitchhiking to Babylon (Part 1) Up ahead, the empty sky, down below my empty bags and far away, the one to whom I said goodbye. Dull green road sign in blinding reflections of passing headlights reminds me of my nowhere and no place to sleep tonight. On a road to where I'm a No one. On a road leading to my freedom. This trip will show the person I am to be, Going to a place where no one speaks like me. Headlight burning brightness illuminates my sign of stolen cardboard and black felt pen. The window's smoked but rolls down I lean over to say: "I need a ride to Babylon..." Keep an eye out for part Two... |