|
Re: Post-A-Poem
Link |
by
on 2007-07-15 19:01:13 (edited 2007-07-15 19:06:16)
|
|
Well,I'm not really a poet,but here goes. Empty Shell, No Emotion, No Soul By Kakashi232 What is this thing we call a 'Soul'? Does it age,get young or old? I do not understand, what is its purpose. Does it have a physical form? Or a visible surface? I don't know the meaning of it or why it was created. What does it do? It's so complicated. So many questions,I wonder so much. What is a Soul,can it speak or touch? Do I have one?I wonder if I do. If I've always had one,then I never knew. Can I have Soul? One with no Emotion? I'm thinking too hard,a rather interesting notion. Soul,Soul,Soul,please open up to me. So that I may discover what you are and see. The secrets you hold if I knew more about you. What you are? Do you even exist? And I am not trying to dought you. It's just that everyone knows about Souls but me. And they all have souls? I wonder if there's one in me. Are Souls like Emotions? Do they control how you feel? I wonder if Emotions are even real. Thinking about this wonder is something I don't want to do. Because that'd make one wonder,plus one wonder,and that would make two. Souls will wonder my mind until my heart turns cold. Me.....An Empty Shell....No Emotion... No Soul.  |
|
Re: Post-A-Poem
Link |
by
on 2007-07-10 15:56:26 |
|
Torture I was hurting, but you weren't there. I felt the pain of loneliness, poking around me. It was like a blanket that came to cover me. The solitary presence embraced my body, And at that moment, my heart tightened and pulled my chest in like a knot being tied. Tears dripped from my eyes, caressing its way down my cheeks. The salty drops fell and burned like acid. I knew there would be no one to wipe them away. As if my tears were agreeing, they fell like a waterfall To remind me that these were the tears that no one will wipe. The cry of my voice was like the thundering sound of a waterfall. As though it was like a desparate noise being covered in silence. In that time, I longed for your presence, but you could see when I was hurting. -turtle <3 
|
|
Re: Post-A-Poem
Link |
by ryolover618
on 2007-07-08 04:57:28
|
|
*Priceless Occasion* Why do people regret so much, The relationship that ended in sorrow? Why feel remorse for what was lost, And look ahead to a broken tomorrow? How can you feel sadness to such a memory, That once made you smile like no other? How do you hate someone you once loved, When you promised them forever? Who's to say that all happiness is lost, Just because someone hurt you deep? Who says you have to throw away the memories, That you were clearly meant to keep? When you were happy with that person; If you were free and far from chained down, Why would you even think to loathe them, Simply because they're no longer around? So when you think back to the painful recollections, Don't cry or scream because they're merely memories. Smile gratefully for the priceless chance you got, To live out some of life's greatest fantasies.  |
|
Re: Post-A-Poem
|
|
I dreamt of her I dreamt of her that night Eyes shut tight Thinking of her visage Now a memory fading away Trying to grasp on to whats left Thinking of her in moments of despair She left me for another Broken pieces on the floor My heart now is a closed door Resolutions are gone I want to be fixed But I feel too much of this. "Keep going on..." resounds through my head Like echoes and shimmers of sounds All that is left Is my heart I yearn to love Maybe its still open I can take a few more fractures. Another poem to lighten the mood: Sake Antics It was a lunch at the sushi place in May It seemed that the day was going to follow a very funny way Eating sushi is fun But when I drank sake Lunch became a real fun time I took the sake Shouted "Gampai!" and cheered for no apparent reason Then a gentleman from across the floor stared at me like I was committing treason So that day I learnt a valuable lesson Me and Sake Are just not meant to be. 
  
 
 |
|
Re: Post-A-Poem
Link |
by
on 2007-07-07 14:41:26 |
|
Never hesitate I fly toward a goal so far away ,yet I never hesitate to move forward even faster I dream I know could corrupt into darkness , yet never hesitate to smile as you’re light becomes even clearer We shed so many tears its hard to say I’m flying away so easily, yet I never hesitate to think that you’ll be better off without me So much sorrow is held within this sapphire heart , yet I never hesitate to even think I would be happy not knowing you’re free I fly slowly taking in every emotion and painful feeling has to offer, yet I never hesitate to fall into everyone of them over and over again Every flame that reaps the night sky expresses my heart , yet I never hesitate to engulf the blackness of the night sky again …and again I cant help but think when I’m on this journey how many new faces and smiles I will encounter , yet I never hesitate to smile back at every face new face that greets me I embrace everyone’s happiness and place it within the warmth of my heart, yet I never hesitate to pour that happiness back into the heart form whence it came I wonder if you’re doing fine the life I left behind I wonder if it’s the same , yet I never hesitate to dismiss my regret and move forward The love I felt for you disclosed in my heart , yet I never hesitate to show my love freely to those ask for it Its this never ending game that I fear, this confusing yet interesting fusion of pain and joy that seems to throw me in different directions , yet I never hesitate to laugh and cry within this mysterious dream I wish I could take you all on this flight with me this sapphire dream I know you can feel , yet I never hesitate to stop trying I want you to soar in the sky like I do , forgetting your sorrow and burning the sky with you’re joyful flames , and yet I want you to never hesitate to cry I want you to feel the emotion that I feel in the symphony I call the genesis of my life , and yet never to hesitate to feel the reqiuem of your pain I want to feel your heart beating in perfect rhythm with mine yet having no conscious awareness of time I want to feel that bond between your heart and min yet never longing to possess it don’t hesitate to come to me , don’t hesitate to feel my flame I want to forget my past and yet I ill never forget the day you came   |
|
Re: Post-A-Poem
Link |
by
on 2007-07-07 14:31:03 |
|
awesome poems >:3 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ suicide kiss writing this makes the pain slither to my heart those memories of you being so close to me.... your touch, leaving me breathless they all come creeping into my thoughts... while i kill myself trying to get you out of my mind... you left me paranoid being left alone with lonely memories.... the painful sorrows overflowing in my heart paralyzing me while tears flow unceasingly in my eyes helplessly alive yet lifeless.... with no purpose without you to comfort me waiting in the darkness hollowly beautiful.... i need your love i crave for your kiss..... one last time your soft, fragile, cold lips.... a moment meant to last for eternity ended when a fresh metallic taste ran through my lips.... blood, it gives us life.... and without it, we'll forever be alive only for each other death by love our first kiss.... this time it will lead us to eternity our endless pleasure we'll always be together.... always... |
|
Re: Post-A-Poem
Link |
by
 
on 2007-07-07 14:26:34 |
|
I was never a monster. ' Neither was I human. I could never figure out. Why they leave or scare me. I could spread my arms wide. I could shut down and cry. I would always be around?? Did I promise that?? So soon am I leaving... The tears that I've cried. Would I stay now?? Should I leave... I have my fondest memories here with me.. They are not much..But they are plenty... For those who have been like me... It has never been so cold...Neither has it ever been burning hot.. the answer is here... Should it be too clear.... I've been holding people dear.... But they all disappear.. Would it be a sin for me?? To want to be lonely here?? Could someone fix me? The rein has been held too tight.. I'm tired of fighting and I'm tired of failing... Should I pick myself up?? Throw myself down the drain and wipe myself up?? Or should I lie there.. The rain would come down...  |
|
Re: Post-A-Poem
Link |
by
on 2007-07-07 14:02:19 |
|
nice poem everyone~ xDDD well, i'll post one of mah poem ne~ x3 My life~ my life is to be a teen. until eighteen but until then I will have fun and fool around like the little prize that I had found, my life may look simple but it is difficult. like how I felt. my life is like a look. and the way they judge me like a textbook. my life may be good, but sometimes it isn't and that gets me in a bad mood. but, that won't. so that mostly my life. |
|
Re: Post-A-Poem
Link |
by
on 2007-07-07 04:15:57 (edited 2007-07-07 04:16:43)
|
|
I have more than one poems, but I put it. Loveless this wind brings me back to you this cold nite, I need your warm and your love... come to me and hug me before the death come to me, care my hair and kiss my lips... I just want to be with you... my prince... would you accompany me only this night ? please... only you in my eyes, my heart and my soul bellows my breath start to ends, your fragrance, your care, your warm, your touch, your lips and your love I can not feel it again my tears begin to dry I’m so far from your side does my death peace your heart and her heart ? ... this is the end of the three angel love, I'm so happy you are with her although this heart is bunched by a thousand of thorns … by Ryvan ^_-
|
|
Re: Post-A-Poem
Link |
by
on 2007-07-06 23:12:00 |
|
Here's a short one for Malays and Indonesians, or whatever people that speak Malay: Anak punai, anak merbak Hinggap turun di dahan jati Hati-hati di atas pokok Nanti jatuh patah kaki. I'd be amazed if most of you could understand this.  |
|
Re: Post-A-Poem
|
|
Silly poem: ANTS Oh noes! O M G! I was on Gendou too long! School bus is coming There's no fresh panties I don't want to wear a thong! :O No more time; I have to go Eating my breakfast Studying what I don't know Thank GAWD! Caught the bus! Walking like I'm in a trance. Wait, are they laughing? O M F*KING G... I think I for got my p-- XC DEAD. |
|
Re: Post-A-Poem
Link |
by
on 2007-06-22 14:15:15 |
|
I made a sort of trilogy, and am currently working on the last one. I used the first one in one of my English classes, and my teacher recommended me to a poetry competition. Is it any good?! The first one is called, "Cursed". --- The rain falls gently, As the end draws near. Never stopping, Always running. My past is my present, And my future is insignificant. Never waiting, Always watching. As Fate plays the cruel Goddess, My painful memories consume me. Never wanted, Always with me. A soft wind caresses my face, Creating the perfect image of sorrow. My eyes sting as I remember, The last time I saw you. Can you feel my regret of living? Can you tell me why I'm still suffering? Help me now while I'm still fighting. Hold me now as the rain falls gently. And I wonder whose voice is screaming. Is it mine or is it just wishful thinking? Can you tell me why this hurts so much? And why I've been cursed with this life? --- The second is called, "Black Rose". --- The petals of a black rose dance in the wind, As I walk down a trodden, winding path I recall my past with every step I take My love, who got the last laugh? Years ago, I soothed you Years ago, I promised Years ago, I held you Years ago, I loved you Years ago, I watched in anguish as you sighed your last breath I held you in my arms as you lay there, cold and dead A nightmare that became reality, something I hoped would never come to pass Because it filled my very veins with a spreading dread, cold and steadfast Years ago, I fought in a raging, unspeakable war Watching people I had known forever get slaughtered struck me to the core The casualties piled up, and I now pass their graves, seemingly expressionless When all I want to do is break down, and weep in wretchedness I'll never be the same as I once was But you already know that, don't you? As you look down at my unworthy form My silhouette, gaunt and worn It affects me more than you'd ever think But you'll never see that, will you? Because you can't look into my very soul anymore Broken as it may be, my fate still looms I'm kneeling in front of your gravestone A single rose clutched in my hand Its petals black, and wilting A reminder of what I once had I set it down tenderly And I whisper of my love for you Over and over, without end My voice, gentle and smooth Years ago, I held you close Years ago, I prayed Years ago, you were dear to me And I'll still love you, come what may I sit there a while more in silence My eyes bloodshot, and wistful A bittersweet smile on my lips, I stand up and walk away I still love you, come what may --- Are any of you interested in a third? I was a person back then. I could smile and laugh and... feel. All the colors... all the hurt... all the laughing... it all went away. All of them. They used words like brain damage... and cerebral trauma. But even then I understood. I was safe... safe from the bad thing. |
|
Re: Post-A-Poem
Link |
by
on 2007-06-21 22:46:03 |
|
everyone has really nice poems. =] here are some of mine. I Couldnt See You Anymore i2.i8.o6 i saw you the other day. i spent my time with you. you walked infront, while i lingered in the back tryin to catch up. i thought "wait for me... wont you walk at my side?" but you kept on. you didnt even look behind to see if i was near. all the time i just saw your back. i looked to my side. and i saw him instead. why is that one person always at my side? when i want it to be you. why do you keep pushing me to him? it's time for me to go now... i said goodbye. we gave each other a hug. i wanted you to still hold on. but you let go. i turned slowly and left, hoping you'd suggest walking by me. but you didnt. while i walked away i looked back twice... three times. but i couldnt see you any more. Forever, I’m Missing You o6.o8.o7 I lie on the floor all day. The sound of music echoes in the background. Thoughts of you linger in my mind… I feel the pain in my heart… I’m missing you. You could make it go away with your warm, loving smile. All I want is for you to be here, holding me in your arms. My heart flutters every time you gaze at me. I close my eyes and see the dreams of you with me. Though the visions float and drift away as I open them again, I reach out to grasp it, but they just slip away. So I lie on the floor all day. The sound of music echoes in the background. And thoughts of you linger in my mind… Forever, I’m missing you.
|
|
Re: Post-A-Poem
Link |
by
on 2007-05-19 02:49:36 |
|
wOw!! suggoi!! Stranger Who are you? What's your name? What are you like? Do you feel the same? Hair falls down The eyes cannot see Hands tied behind The feet cannot feel Do you see where you're going? Do you know where you are? Set your gaze up in the sky Look closely As they pass you by You are just like the sky Passing life with the blink of an eye... huiy...you guys are doing great with your poems^^... I just made this up right now... not sure where it's heading.... *got lost in the illusion 
Don't walk in front of me, I may not follow Just walk beside me and be my friend :A::C: |
|
Re: Post-A-Poem
|
|
Illusions of Imagination by RzR Lights in the sky A continuous stream of thoughts Hazy illusions seen by a few The man stares at the picture on the nightstand Wondering of lives past and present Still hazy illusions in his dreams Appearing as figures in daydreams Illusions of the past Or figments of his imagination Memories slip and stir in a cycle of emotions Climaxing in realization Defined by the constraints of imagination Importance of memories in gold and silver frames Never leave his consciousness But, still the ghosts of the past And the present remain.
|
|
Re: Post-A-Poem
Link |
by
 |
|
I just get this in a site.... this poem is so good to understand so enjoy it A thousand thoughts keep pestering me all day long Various faces, glimpse of every smile I recall Echoes of someone’s moan whenever darkness falls A black motif…endless sobbing, mourning prolong I miss the shadows, a lifetime satisfaction An art of someone’s animation No one ever seen any outburst emotion That’s nonsense, just any other apparition! Everything’s blurred, the memories were vanishing I’m defenseless, pathetic and now leaving ‘Hope one day you would see me in your dreams waving And when that time comes, I guess I am done weeping. |
|
Re: Post-A-Poem
Link |
by
on 2007-05-09 21:32:43 |
|
A warm embrace Makes me leave This world. It says "hello". It says "good bye". It told me that You missed me. It told me that You wanted me. It told me that You loved me. 
So I drove into a parking lot one time and saw this person pull into a handicap parking spot. When you think handicap, you think wheelchair and whatever, right? So it just ticked me off when I saw the guy come out of the car perfectly fine. So then I ran him over. |
|
Re: Post-A-Poem
Link |
by
 
on 2007-05-07 10:50:00 |
|
once more.. i would like to see your warm smile.. and hold your hand.. slowly taking away your pains.. seeing you full of joy makes me happy as well.. i always think that this will last forever just for once.. may that wish come true.. your eyes sparkling i love that.. your smile thats warm to the heart.. i love that.. your hand .. holding mine.. i love that.. your tears of farewell.. dont be scared..wherever you go.. ill be there for you..always.. |
|
Re: Post-A-Poem
|
|
Last night I held a lovely hand a hand so small and neat I thought my heart would burst with joy So wildly did it beat No other hand upon my heart could greater pleasure bring Than that dear hand I held last night Four Aces and a King  |
|
Re: Post-A-Poem
Link |
by
on 2007-03-16 15:51:33 |
|
i strangle myself with your words full of hate and admiration as light slowly fades away i think of what opportunities await me and smile sarcastically.. it was not the 1st time i did it nor i did it was the 2nd time countless times i tried to do it and failed, . . . tried over the same reasons.. failed over the same circumstances.. it was not a mishap.. it was my own intuition that tells me to keep on living .. my instinct to forget those things.. to atone for my sins and to . . fullfill my dreams.. i lay down my ropes and slowly threw them away i cried silently as i watch the birds fly away.. it was sad but not lonely nor frightening it was . . . . .curiousity . . . for me not to strangle my neck again .. for another day,, |