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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
Link | by zparticus27 on 2007-09-05 21:10:57
"kawaremi no jutsu" the sonic blaster hit a log

"a part mage huh..."kotaro smirk

"wellno summons is fine but dissapears and reappears behind reis he attacked her with a swift round house distrupting her channeling spell then he rushed in and attacked her with a short uppercut right hitting the chin...thus temporarily jolting her sense making un vunerable for a few seconds. he then stepped back and threw a giant 4 point shuriken at kasha

"tornado flame" he exclaimed s the shuriken was thrown it was set ablazed and the projectile looked like a flaming tornado

Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
Link | by Blind-Kitsuneblind-kitsune on 2007-09-05 21:25:32 (edited 2007-09-05 22:27:53)
*Ronin Dodges his energy spear* I am gonna win!!! *he runs at kazuya gathering green mana* Kodama's might! *Ronin glows green for a second and vanishes. Kazuya is kicked high into the air by an unseen force. ronin appears above and does and round house kick thats so powerful that when kazuya slams intothe ground he makes crater 15 feet deep. Ronin lands outside the crater as the kodama's might spell fades. Ronin tosses White phospherous grenade into the crater. It goes off coating Kazuya in the stuff which burns at over 4000 degress Fahrenheit* I will win. Now get up so I can gut you


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
Link | by on 2007-09-05 21:37:29
(again, i'm not reis at this rp i'm kasha xD)

*Kotaro's hits were only half successful, as Kasha was protected by her defense aura*

Kasha: Sonic force has nothing to do with magic... Sonic Boom!

*Kasha blows a powerful shockwave of sonic force, dispelling the tornado away and pushing Kotaro a few meters back... chance Kasha took to do more sonic focus*

Kasha: You have to figure out yourself what it is, hehehe... now, Lionheart!

*Kasha gained a resistance against shocks from hits, as well as a strong determination from her Lionheart skill... The focus she made caused her to weakly shine a little*

Kasha: It seems you don't know much about dualsword gladiators... Sonic Rage!

*At the same time of focusing a huge amount of energy, Kasha emited a beam from her dualswords to strike Kotaro, just after she created a spirit barrier to protect herself from magic based attacks*


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
Link | by Sabaku No Gaara on 2007-09-06 12:46:22
*This battle wasn't over yet. Gaara smirked as the sand wrapped around him and the kusanagi in him. The uchiha was close but not close enough. He was a fool to think gaara would let down his barrier and charge straight ahead into battle. The clone fell became crushed as sand flew elsewhere. The uchiha should have paid attention to his surroundings. "Thunder god of sand technique". Immediately rods of sand shot up from the ground's desert form and surrounded the uchiha. The lightning from the chidori and kusanagi absorbed from the weapon and moved into the rods. Once the chakra was fully drained it reversed reflecting the chakra back towards the uchiha with the speed of the 7 gates open as it would strike the uchiha and charge through his body with over 1000 volts of electricity. The uchiha's heart would not be able to take it and it would explode. Gaara formed from one of the black chakra piles formed from earlier posts and held his hand open closing it. "Sabaku taiso." The sand that had been left on the clothing of the uchiha grew together and the sand from the desert launched up the uchiha's feet since he was standing deeper in it it would wrap around him. Since the uchiha had let his guard down behind him thinking gaara lost he was vulnerable. The sand was left on the uchiha's clothing from the first ghost strike jutsu. The sand combined together and imploded inwards repeating the motions that the uchiha made. The sand crushed tightly around the uchiha's body as the desert's sand rose up catacombing in on the uchiha burying him with sand as it constricted more and would crush the uchiha. He would be underneath the sand and a shockwave would be felt over the desert floor. Gaara laughed to himself but made a handsign for a suna bunshin as gaara faded into the desert's sand ready to counter any counter from the uchiha though he would be dead from the two hit combination by a high chance.*

{Yes I know about the leech all life attack prevention jutsu. It's orochimaru's and only allows the user to move into an element not control an element. The user absorbs into it's structure and can dodge attacks and that's all not control elements. And If you think my post is illegal go back and read one of the posts on page 26 of this forum and you will see.-ooc}


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
Link | by Jinseta Ava on 2007-09-06 18:32:34
[Indeed, but I figured out how to use the sharingan to modify the jutsu. By forcing Earth style chakra into an Earth-type element, I can make it move as though it were a part of the body. This is getting good...]

Looks like I'm going to have to do this the hard way... The reflected lightening obliterates the sand figures. Critic appears before the newly-formed Gaara, his chakra moderately weaker. The Earth element chakra begins to disappear. Critic had given himself considerable reaction distance, his mangekyou sharingan had also been activated. Third gate openned... Critic's chakra skyrockets, becoming visable, yet the chakra slowly falls into perfect control as it seems to revolve around the eyes. "This is going to hurt... a lot... Ghost Dance no Jutsu!" Critic's image appeared to blur, the subtle shifting and vibrations of his body had begun creating afterimages.

[The Ghost Dance Jutsu relies on superior perceptive abilities of the sharingan and mangekyou sharingan. By turning over motor control to the areas of the brain that control reflexes, and through a secret method of chakra use, I can move slightly faster than the nerve conduction velocity (at full strength). An enemy's brain can't even operate fast enough to react to the jutsu. Its my ace in the hole for fighting against other Uchiha, and even an enemy's mangekyou sharingan couldn't keep up with this jutsu... that's why it can't be copied...

In all my rp battles, I have only had to use this jutsu twice with my Uchiha variant. This will be the first time I have used it like this here at Gendou. To have created a character, and used him to the point of being on par with this jutsu, is rather impressive in my book...]

The Paper

Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
Link | by Sagara on 2007-09-06 19:20:06
Kazuya's hollow mask allowed him to seemingly ignore the pain of Ronin's attacks. He is burned by his grenades but all his injuries begun healing. He appeared almost instantly at Ronin's left and stabbed with his sword.

Kazuya: "You're going to win eh?RAGE OF DRAGOON!"

Kazuya stabbed Ronin at point-blank range with the spear. This causes a loud scream to be heard.

Kazuya: "Looks like i need a ace in the hole against you.."

Kazuya pinned Ronin with restraining energy vines.

Kazuya: "Cross of Chaos, Cut!"

Ronin is slashed with devastating cross of energy.

Legendary RP Trio: Jonathon (Jon), Bloodymoon (Kay), Sagara Kazuya (Sagara) Sagara Kazuya, One of the Legendary Rp Trio.

Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
Link | by Sabaku No Gaara on 2007-09-06 19:33:58
*This battle was over and gaara new it. Since gaara changed the sand to a quicksand substance it stuck to the uchiha's feet slowing his speed down considerably but also since he was covered in sand particlaes gaara focused his chakra into the sand making it become weighted. The weight added to the desert slowed the uchiha's speed down enough to where gaara kept up with him.Gaara also added to this by sensing the vibrations in the sand keeping up with the uchiha. Gaara calculated the movements of the uchiha and could tell where the muscules in the uchiha's tendon's moved gaara used the vibrations of the sand to tell where he was aiming to move. He easily predicted the uchiha's movements. The uchiha would be unknown to these ways of telling where he was and since gaara was somewhere in the sand he was perfectly safe. The clone of gaara saw the movements of the uchiha and could look at him since he had not a mind of his own and it could only see by using gaara's third eye. So the sharingan was rendered useless. Black chakra surrounded the clone of gaara as it formed a semi-closed dome around the clone. THe chakra had the speed of 7 open gates the uchiha's only 3 gates were nothing compared to the chakra's speed. The chakra spiked out moving in front of the uchiha's movements. It lashed forming a wall in front of the uchiha and every time the uchiha ran a different way the chakra met in front of him causing him to stop and move a different way. Gaara decided to end this fight now. Gaara focused completely as the sand begin to vibrate. "Black Maelstrom." Black chakra erupted from under the ground and spiked into the air. This chakra covered the whole desert which the uchiha was running on top of. The chakra spiked up like a massive wave moving upwards. This attack was unavoidable no matter the speed one had. Gaara was safe to him being able to meld with the chakra and touch it easily. Gaara was in the chakra flowing outwards as the uchiha would be overcome and drenched in the maelstrom of chakra. The uchiha would only last a period of 10 seconds and had no escape as the chakra continued moving up into the air and by the time the uchiha allowed the chakra to pass it would be to late. If not he would still have the acid like chakra on his flesh burning into him killing him. This battle was over even if he survived for he wouldn't live through the next attack of the combination.*


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
Link | by Blind-Kitsuneblind-kitsune on 2007-09-06 19:35:36
And I will all of mine to beat you! *black mana swirls around Ronin and scarab bugs begin to eat the flesh off of Kazuya's arms and they transfer the energy to Ronin and soon he is fully healed. Ronin managaes to break free and jumps away from kazuya. he sheaths his sword and more black mana swirls around him* I haven't done this in a long time... DEMOW WOLF FORM!!! *Ronin begins shaking as his muscles bulge out considerably the claws on his fingers and his fangs grow longer and sharper. He grows the nine feet tall and his eyes turn from gold to blood red* YES THE BLOOD LUST IT FEELS SO GOOD!!! *He runs at Kazuya and bites down and RIPS OFF kazuya's right arm* what a wonderful taste.... *he then sinks his fangs into Kazuya's neck and bites down hard snapping kazuya's neck*


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
Link | by Renma on 2007-09-06 22:29:40
*Conjure a Popcorn from thin air*

I Wouldn't Be sure If I Were you, Gaara...

*Eat Popcorn*

Go Critic!!! Don't Lose!!! Or I'll lose my bet With Hichan...

Ooops...

*Eating Popcorn again*


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
Link | by Jinseta Ava on 2007-09-07 04:04:33 (edited 2007-09-07 13:10:59)
[... Like I've told Ookami-san, don't count your chickens before they hatch...]

Critic's speed was... unaffected... Gaara's connection to the sand of Critic's body was broken as the mangekyou sharingan percieved Gaara's connection to the sand on Critic's body, and then cut that connection. Slowly, Gaara was losing control over anything not connected to, or touching his body. The sand beneath Critic's feet was blown away intense chakra, and before anymore could return, the final phase of the jutsu was complete. Critic's body goes limp, the muscles shut down, and a chakra envelope formed ahead of Critic, and he vanished.

Dozens of dust trails form within a small area, misleading the spiked walls, since Critic was long gone. The third eye, Gaara's clone, and the surround ground is blown away from sheer force by a high-speed impact, and the clone being destroyed by the piercing gaze the mangekyou sharingan.

As Gaara emerges in his wave of black chakra, Critic's eyes give color to Gaara's own unique chakra, that chakra causes the original Gaara to stand out like a Roman candle. If Gaara were to open his eyes, he would see the shattered ball of blades of kusanagi, but by then, thousands of blades were allready hurled into the dark chakra wall. This both breaks up the wall, and cuts anything inside into little pieces. The swords emerge behind, some of them shattering from under the force.

Critic eyes stay locked on Gaara's unique chakra, his gaze beginning to pierce it.

[One second equals two thousand actions...]

The Paper

Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
Link | by Sagara on 2007-09-07 04:35:21
Kazuya knocked Ronin of him with a burst of energy from his left hand, he managed to survive Ronin's fatal bite thanks to Kuroya taking over his body. His body begins to cover itself with the same material as his mask.

Kuroya: "You managed to incapitate Kazuya..but i can't lose to you wolf!"

Kuroya was Kazuya's hollow side. Since he is temporarily in full control, his body has become that of a high-level hollow granting him almost instantaneous regeneration, enhancement of limbs, and the ability to fire cero blasts from his fingers.

Kuroya: "So you wanna play doggie?!"

Kuroya laughed like a maniac and flash stepped to Ronin. He knocked Ronin to the ground and pinned him. He grabbed Ronin's jaws.

Kuroya: "Say goodnight doggie!"

Kuroya snapped Ronin's jaws and smashed his head. He released a cero at point-blank range to seal the deal.

[..Continue if you wish Ronin...]

Legendary RP Trio: Jonathon (Jon), Bloodymoon (Kay), Sagara Kazuya (Sagara) Sagara Kazuya, One of the Legendary Rp Trio.

Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
Link | by Blind-Kitsuneblind-kitsune on 2007-09-07 10:40:53
*Ronin began to twitch and turned into black mana which faded away. The real demon wolf Ronin appeared infront of Kuroya a massive amount of black mana clutched in his fist* DAMNATION!!! *he punched Koruyain the face and Koruya was swallowed up by an ENORMOUS mana burst of black mana. His body was blown apart*


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
Link | by Sabaku No Gaara on 2007-09-07 15:53:10
{Sigh..look I lose. I don't feel like explaining you can't cut my control from sand and the mangekyou sharingan can't cut a jinchuurki's control from the host. Noone can.The sharingan isn't an all powerful device that can do anything and everything. All it does it slow the opponent down in the eyes of the user so the user can see the opponents moves before he/she makes them. That's the basic version. The sharingan can see through the genjutsu. It can use genjutsu easily when it has the mangekyou. I've already got enough judges that agree I won but I forfeit have fun fighting in this style. Why don't you join us all on yahoo sometime and we can all educate you in fighting non godmoding style.My sn is gaara_the_demon_of_the_sand. Maybe then you will learn about fighting legally. Good day to you and your arena.-ooc}


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
Link | by Jinseta Ava on 2007-09-07 16:50:19 (edited 2007-09-07 16:53:05)
[... I don't need judges, but thank you for the offer. It was allready obvious I had developed new jutsu, didn't it occure to you that I might've worked on the sharingan as well? As for your black chakra, I mentioned that the blades of kusanagi broke under the pressure. That was to indicate that more power was being used than the blades could handle. Also, that power came from the speed, not from the fact that I openned the three gates. One of the drawbacks of the Ghost Dance is that it uses eighty percent of my chakra when its at maximum, the openning of the 3rd gate was simply to supliment that lost chakra.

As for godding, you're hardly one to talk. You cook up some end-all 'black chakra' solution that doesn't even conform to Naruto machinics. The closest that comes to it is Amaterasu, a flame type jutsu that puts a great deal of stress on advanced ninja just to activate. I've developed all of my jutsu with great care for Naruto mechanics and worked within the knowledge given so far. Quite frankly, I take offense to that.

If you want to fight here, that's fine with me, the arena's open to everyone, but I'm not interested in another battle with you. Rping techniques shouldn't be taken near seriously as that, its just something to do for fun. I'm not gonna stress myself over splitting hairs...]

The Paper

Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
Link | by Blind-Kitsuneblind-kitsune on 2007-09-07 17:33:06
(OOC: well Kazuya are you done or am I gonna have to keep fighting you)


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
Link | by Sagara on 2007-09-07 19:01:34
(OOC: Not yet, i wanna try to win or atleast get a tie.)

Kuroya seemed to have been destroyed by Ronin's attack but revealed to have a section of his body blown off. He laughed as his wounds slowly healed.

Kuroya: "Not bad at all but you need alot more than that!Cero Cluster!"

Kuroya threw a cluster of ceros at Ronin which explode around him.

Kuroya: "I'll keep you busy with these!"

Kuroya formed hollows to attack Ronin. He charges a large cero sphere.

Kuroya: "Grab him now!Cero Rasengan!"

The hollows grabbed Ronin, holding him in place. Kuroya combined Rasengan with a cero and slammed it into Ronin. It drills into Ronin and explodes.

Legendary RP Trio: Jonathon (Jon), Bloodymoon (Kay), Sagara Kazuya (Sagara) Sagara Kazuya, One of the Legendary Rp Trio.

Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
Link | by Blind-Kitsuneblind-kitsune on 2007-09-07 21:08:42
(OOC: sorry but I cant let you have either of those outcomes... you are gonna lose)
*Ronin casts etherial Haze and stops the final crushing blow. He transforms back into his origanal form and with 3 swings of his katana he slays all the hollows* I am going to finish this right now *his katana glows a blinding white with mana* Kuroya.... you fought well but this is where I start to make critic keep an eye out for me *he swings his katana into a wide arc and releases a MASSIVE white wall of conctrated mana* WRATH OF GOD!!!! *Kuroya is caought in the attack and burnt into nothing*


Critic fight records:
[victories: 8 defeats: 3 tie: 4]


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
Link | by zparticus27 on 2007-09-07 21:57:01
@ooc what does ooc mean?hahahaha)

as kasha stikes kotaro with sonic rage, kotaro sreps back and performs some hand seals

"you think your the only one capable of buffs? release the chakra Rasetsu" by focusing the steady release of chakra for physical combat,kotaro gains ofensive and defensive upgrades by Rasetsu chakra...

"lets go!" he dashed towards kasha and ran in a circular motion around her.he dashed so fast that in begets an illusion of having numerous clones surround kasha...then he bombards kasha with numerous kunais and shuriken in that circular movement at the same time evading his own projectiles

at the peak of the dash kotaro vanish and reappeared above kasha

"infernal breath!" a strong fire technique that throws multiple fireballs with shurikens attacked to them

Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
Link | by Sagara on 2007-09-08 01:16:43
(OOC: Whatever Ronin, a tie would be a better outcome. Its not easy to burn the skin of high-level hollows and you just basically beat Kuroya but whatever..
@Z: OOC means out of character, basically not talking as your character.)

[Victories: 2 Defeats: 2 Ties: 0]

(OOC: Who wants to fight me next? I'll wait for Ronin's reply in the meantime.)

Legendary RP Trio: Jonathon (Jon), Bloodymoon (Kay), Sagara Kazuya (Sagara) Sagara Kazuya, One of the Legendary Rp Trio.

Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
Link | by on 2007-09-08 02:33:00
*Kasha used Sonic Boom again, making the kunai/shuriken attack useless, as they were blown away to the other side*

Kasha: Throwing stuff at me will be useless...

*Kasha blows another shockwave when Kotaro appeared avobe her, dispelling the fireballs, moving the shurikens away and sending Kotaro flying up in a vertical direction*

Kasha: Nowhere to run... Sonic Storm!

*Kasha unleashes a violent mass of sonic energy that emits beams and strikes Kotaro directly, as there was no ground, wall or ceiling to jump aside from... only way was blocking it, because there's no way to absorb or rechannel Kasha's sonic energy*

Kasha: This is getting fun~ i'm waiting for you!

*She focuses more sonic energy and takes a parry stance, careful to calculate where the next move would come from*


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