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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
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by Blind-Kitsune
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*Ronin swings his katana* Rage of the fang! *a tornado of something like lava surrounds Ronin protecting him from most of Kazuya's attacks* you my be tough but you still cant use flashstep and thats what matters right now. *the puppy lunges at kazuya ripping and pulling at him clothes its pathetic really* Ronin: you are good but so am I. I am gonna proove to you I will become a legend! *he raises his katana* Wolf's strike form 2! *he does a stabbing motions and a tornado of water slams him into the ground where the puppy begins biting and scratching at him but to kazuya its more cute then painful*  |
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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
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by Sabaku No Gaara
on 2007-09-04 19:10:58
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*The figure that would have been gaara simply was knocked back with the blank face. He seemed lifeless for a reason and was oozing sand for a reason. He was a suna bunshin. The clone's arm was taken off as sand cracked down to the ground. Sand left traces on the clothes and weapon of the uchiha that stuck to him. A sudden surge of chakra formed from the clones pile of sand he hand been leaving beneath him. A lash of sand erupted from the pile under the clones feet and launched at the ground striking into a pile 30 yards away from the clone that was standing in the way of the uchiha. Gaara formed quickly standing up a handsign already formed. "Clone great explosion jutsu" Immediately gaara formed a sand dome around him as the clone launched at the incoming uchiha and got only 10 yards before the uchiha charged at the clone. Immediately the clone exploded erupting a large scale blast, gaara's sand reinforced over 50 layers of increased sand making it as hard as adament as the clone's devastating blast radius stretched over 30 yards all around and 30 yards into the air making a dome of flame and sand shrapnel that would catch the uchiha in the blast and had a chance of fatally wounding the uchiha at or at least leave a scratch. Gaara formed his third eye above the sand dome so he could watch the movements of the uchiha without the sharingan being able to help the uchiha. Even the mangekyou would be useless since gaara could use his third eye to look the uchiha in the eyes with no genjutsu taking effect. Gaara readied his chakra level to perfom a jutsu should the uchiha of survived the blast.*  |
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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
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Critic's voice resonates inside the dome. "You rely on the sand too much... not that it matters..." Countless pairs of sharingan line the interior wall of the dome and on the ground. Critic appears before Gaara on the inside of the dome, a white crane standing next to him with the sharingan its eyes as well. "The refined art of the sharingan. With it, you don't have to look into my eyes... it could be anything... a handsign, a finger, a foot, even my clothing... it is futile... you will always end up being caught in my jutsu..." The clones outside are canceled, becoming piles of sand themselves. Critic reaches deep with Gaara's mind, and cuts him off from the power of the Chiyo. "Your move..." [Yuurei dageki no jutsu. The Ghost Strike no Jutsu. A more effecient version of the Ghost Dance no Jutsu. It is an art only an Uchiha can master, even then, it cannot be copied. It allows for all the fuctions any ordinary ninja has at speeds that surpass the Fourth Hokage's Body Flicker no Jutsu.]  |
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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
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by Sabaku No Gaara
on 2007-09-04 21:06:32
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{Hmm..you should learn how to do this right..please post a dodge to the technique and not just mysteruiously dodge and appear next to me it's a rather noob style of fighting. Please try to refrain from doing that and use attacks or techniques to dodge. And another thing. Chiyo really has nothing to do with me or my power. Please learn about my character before you judge the techniques.Thankyou.-ooc) *Gaara had his eyes closed as he stood in front of the uchiha. He was a fool.* "I rely on sand to much eh?You rely on the sharingan to much. How about we turn this up a notch.." *Gaara focused his chakra as he made the sand implode in on itself absorbing gaara as gaara then formed out from the sand and jumped away from the crushing dome landing on his feet a few yards away from the sand. The sand that imploded if left undodged would crush the uchiha and kill him. Gaara figured this attack would be rather useless so he decided to use his unique defense. Gaara slapped his hands together making a pitch black aura around him..the aura was more sinister than even the sharingans..it was of the devil itself..the aura formed into black chakra that made a hissing burning sound around the area. The chakra melted over gaara's form but he was unharmed as the chakra formed a dome around gaara. Steam rose from the dome as the ground began to burn away, the grass and the current ground withered and died. This ninja wanted speed..he got it. The chakra was acidic to anyone that touched it with the one exception of gaara. It could only be used or taken into a form by gaara. Anyone that touched it even a finger. The chakra would stick to them like glue and spread throughout the ligament that connected to the body part that touched it and cause cell death throughout their nervous system..their body part would completely be disentagrated due to the molecular acidity of the chakra. The chakra if absorbed by anyone would be unusable to them and only hinder them. The chakra would circulate through their chakra system mixing with their own chakra destroying it and replacing their's with his black chakra and once absorbed into them they would have a total time of 10 seconds to live. The chakra cannot be used or dispelled if it was it would be like one taking oxygen away from a breathing creature or person. The chakra dome sparked 10 lashes formed out of the dome branching out with the speed of 7 open gates. The lashes formed 10 puddles of black chakra melting the ground like acid around the battefield in various places. Inside the dome gaara made a handsign and disappeared into black chakra to reform elsewhere. However this would be impossible for the uchiha to know gaara had vanished to the darkness of the dome that was impossible to see through by even the byakugan. Plus the uchiha would be busy dodging the imploding sand dome to realise gaara had vanished. From the dome, immediately shuriken that were made of black chakra launched everywhere from the dome a full 360 degrees around the area and the shuriken would go on for a 1 mile radius before losing momentum. This was done so when the uchiha dodged he would dodge right into a medley of 1000's of shuriken made of black chakra that would destroy his body melting it completely.* |
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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
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on 2007-09-04 21:34:36 (edited 2007-09-04 21:35:06)
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[So I'm using a n00b fighting style, am I? The reason why I don't post a dodge technique is because I don't want you to know what I'm using, not that I would assume you were metagaming, its to simply maintain the suspense. Secondly, I was under the impression you tapped into the black chakra by using Chiyo's connection to hell, apparently, I mis-read that information. Either way, I wanted make sure I wouldn't end up fighting a fully released Chiyo. If you must know, I performed two jutsu when using the ghost strike no jutsu. The first was to launch a clone, the second was to use the sand to inflict genjutsu on you. And for you to avoid a n00b fighting style, let me tell you of this. Creating such dead give-aways like that first clone open yourself up for counterattacks such as the one I just performed... Thank you... Oh, but one other question... do you think its odd for me to appear out of nowhere with a crane standing next to me? Even without genjutsu, there's still nothing there to hit...] "So he wants to avoid genjutsu, does he?" Critic thinks to himself. All of Gaara's initial attacks hit an illusion that wasn't even a solid clone. There are no other targets, and Gaara's potshots hit everything but Critic. Earsing the day, attack prevention technique. Two clones are heard running around Gaara, before they are hit by the black chakra, they throw their own hail of shurikan by Gaara but not hitting him. Then the shuriken bounce off of each other, suddenly, their direction changes for Gaara. These attacks occur consecutively. |
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Renma appears Next to Isis, Smoking a Cigarette. "Yo, Isis! What's up? Watching your husbands eh? This should be interesting.... Fight, Renma Points to Critic and Gaara Fights. Go Critic, Good luck!!" Renma sits next to isis and watches the fight.  |
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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
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by zparticus27
on 2007-09-05 01:37:34
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| @reis looks like critic is fighting gaara lets fight then ^^ |
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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
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on 2007-09-05 01:44:37 |
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@Z: okay then, let's begin! i'll be using Kasha~ *Kasha draws Akamanah, her dualswords, and casts a couple of spells that cause an offensive and defensive aura to enhance her... just after that she begins charging sonic energy* Kasha: i'll let you make the first strike... i'm ready... *She takes a parry stance waiting for her opponent*   |
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Kazuya pulls the puppy off him, jumped back and performs a hand seal to heal himself partially. He looks at Ronin. Kazuya: "I can still use flash step in the air and i haven't used my bankai yet..Prove yourself against me Ronin. Pain Shot.." Kazuya left pupil turned dark purple as he formed a dark symbol on Ronin. He is blasted by intense energy as Kazuya closed his left eye. Ronin suddenly feels a powerful shot of pain. Kazuya: "Pain Shot causes a powerful shot of pain regardless if you avoid the initial blast." Kazuya jumped into the air and flash steps above Ronin. Kazuya struck Ronin with his shikai, releasing a blast of red energy. 
Sagara Kazuya, One of the Legendary Rp Trio. |
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by
 
on 2007-09-05 02:42:27 |
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*walks in* woW~ nice to be here again ^^ *prepares tea* 
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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
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by Sabaku No Gaara
on 2007-09-05 14:54:39
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{Heh..I give away stuff because I do T1 not freestyle. I give the opponent a chance to see and help themselve not simply auto a hit. And chiyo really has nothing to do with me that I know of. My black chakra is from the devil himself not chiyo. And the not posting a dodge is considered godmoding in any fighting style. All I'm asking is that you do this right and post dodges and for your attacks put some more detail in them so I know what I'm fighting or at least so I can legally lose to you. If you keep dodging my attacks without posting a dodge and post auto's I am going to forfeit this match due to it being a waste of my time. Please at least post dodges. At least.-ooc} Gaara kept his eyes closed as the dome of black chakra prevented any entry into melee range to gaara, Or any attacks that would be aimed at gaara. There was only one way to penetrate the dome and he would have to figure it out or die. Gaara focused making his chakra spike up and down preventing any genjutsu on him. If there were to be a genjutsu on gaara it was easily be dispelled by the rapid lowering and highering of the chakra levels. Gaara even went so far as to mix his own chakra with the black chakra that he used as a defense but keep some of it apart so he would have more than one chakra level to the uchiha. Making genjutsu useless on gaara. Inside the dome gaara moved his third eye that was above the dome locked onto the uchiha and the surroundings. Gaara pressed his hands together firmly as he then began to make three handsigns in rapid succession. Continueing the handsigns a large wave of sand formed in front of the black chakra dome and grew to be at least 5 stories tall.* "Ryusa Bakuryu" *Gaara muttered under his breath, immediately the sand wave crashed down onto the ground flooding towards the uchiha with great speed, it covered the entire ground making the uchiha have really no way of dodging. The wave continued to crash onto the ground leaving sand in it's wake. If it struck the uchiha which was a 90% possibility he would be buried alive in a miniature desert of sand and would most likely be crushed. Only one ever survived the attack and that was kimimaro. The wave of sand crashed would fill the entire area with sand making everyone either standing on it or covered in it. Gaara focused his chakra into the sand making it more like quicksand as in it stuck to the clothing and body parts of the person it struck which would make the uchiha covered in sand due to this being an unavoidable attack.* |
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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
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Halting his chakra, spiking his charka... it made no difference... the shuriken sealed the hypnosis with the consecutive ringing of metal as they hit one another. It was the black chakra that broke the genjutsu. As Gaara's attacks closed in on Critic, Critic seemed to disappear, yet still remain. All that remains is an image of Critic's chakra, that disperses, then scatters, moving like a ghost through the ground, and avoids the stare of the third eye. The remaining attacks do nothing to affect the chakra. Suddenly, sounds of sand being dug into by feet are heard in front of Gaara about 70 feet away. A human blur moving too fast to be seen closes in on Gaara, a light flares at the blur's right side. Gaara has not but a moment to react. Critic words resonate with fury, saying, "Chidori..." Critic seemed as if he was about to say a second word... [Very well then, I don't mind. And btw, some people don't mind. Some like to be given the challenge of figuring out who did what and when. You do have to be ready explain yourself if you're asked, though. I can also explain the mechanics of the ghost techiniques, and the jutsu I'm using to evade your attacks.] |
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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
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by Blind-Kitsune
on 2007-09-05 16:38:46 |
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*the puppy leaps and takes the pain shot and the hit from the Shikai. The pup rolls away whimpering. Ronin appears behind Kazuya and slices his back open before vanishing and moving away. Its getting colder and colder and harder for kazuya to move as the cold starts to take its toll on him* |
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Kazuya jumps back and looks at Ronin, sensing his spiritual energy. Kuroya: "Use your mask to give him a good beating and heal your wounds then finish him off with bankai if you have to.." Kuroya said in Kazuya's mind. Kazuya put his left hand over his face and forms his hollow. He fire a Getsuga Tenshou at Ronin, it was much stronger then normal. Kazuya: "Since Hueco Mondo's air is filled with concentrated reiatsu it enchances my hollow mask's health regeneration and power. It's my turf now Ronin.." Fighting in the world of Hollows enchances all Kazuya's hollow power. He released a burst of reiatsu as his wounds begin to heal, the air around him is crackling faintly. Kazuya: "You're in a hard situation here Ronin, the cold is not bad now.." Kazuya reappeared almost in a instant behind Ronin, he strikes him at point-blank range with a more explosive version of Getsuga Tenshou.
Sagara Kazuya, One of the Legendary Rp Trio. |
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by Blind-Kitsune
on 2007-09-05 18:24:22 |
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*Ronin dodges but barely* All I have to do is split your head or taht mask at least in half! *he tosses more shuriken at kazuay he then cast a spell healing himself completely* Iam gonna win this *he runs at Kazuya cutting with his sword doing his best to aim for Kazuya's Hollow mask* |
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Kazuya simply blocks Ronin's attacks with his sword and left hand. Kazuya grabbed Ronin's blade and released a powerful blast directly to Ronin's body. Kazuya: "Even if you split my mask in half it would just reform.." Kazuya punched Ronin in the face, releasing a burst of reiatsu on contact which sends him sliding on the ice. Kazuya: "Your self-confidence is admirable indeed. You don't stand a chance against Critic like this!" Kazuya's reiatsu could be felt in the air. Kazuya: "RAGE OF DRAGOON!" Kazuya strikes Ronin's body with a spear of intense energy from a distance, it ignores all defenses like they're nothing.
Sagara Kazuya, One of the Legendary Rp Trio. |
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by Sabaku No Gaara
on 2007-09-05 19:21:32
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*Gaara grew tired of this crap..he dispelled the black chakra barrier around him in that instant he turned quickly seeing the jab thrusting to his face with the third eye. Gaara spun to the left shifting sidestepping to where he was using his third eye to monitor the position as his eyes remained shut he saw the elbow of the thrusting arm of the uchiha. Since the chidori can only go in a straight line gaara was safe. He decided to use taijutsu. Gaara thrust his arms up grabbing the uchiha's arm that held the chidori in an X-block locking down gaara in one swift motion used the momentum of the uchiha's speed that could not be reversed since an object cannot go from a speed such as the uchiha's and come to a dead stop without interference which he didn't have. Physics and gravity prevented the uchiha from dodging this time. Gaara quickly shifted his feet and turned his block inwards bending the uchiha's elbow back, left down then inwards making the chidori penetrate into the uchiha's gut piercing through him. This would all happen in one fluid motion and the momentum kept up hitting the uchiha with force as the chidori stabbed through the gut of the uchiha he was slung back onto the ground and would die shortly. "Checkmate." |
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by zparticus27
on 2007-09-05 19:42:58
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@ok all set lets boogie! kotaro appeared from the shadow... "so you are my opponent...let us have a fair battle worthy of our honor" he said as he vanished in a smoke bomb and 2 clones appeared kasha restraining her then kotaro emerged from the ground delivering a solid uppercut to kasha's chin sending her flying a few feet into the air. then the two clones continued the assault by repeatedly punching kasha in mid air. as she was about to fall on the ground kotaro catches her in mid air and placed several explosive tags into her body. and in one swift move he ended the attack with a mid air suplex sending kasha crashing into the ground...at the point of impact the tags exploded |
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on 2007-09-05 20:01:57 (edited 2007-09-05 20:05:46)
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The figure, still a dark haze, smiles, finishes his sentence... "Kusanagi..." The image of light that was Chidori now took the shape of a sword. As Gaara grabbed Critic's arm, a new blade shot off of the first blade, the piercing power of the sword of kusanagi seems to cut through the black chakra, holming in on Gaara's heart. Since it was a counterattack, and Gaara's own body, arms, and hands were in motion, Gaara has no time to dodge. Afterwards, the sword continues sprouting new blades, forming a square-like cage of blades, the power of chidori, and the piercing ability of kusanagi, break through, smashing the ground, and expanding in every direction. As the sword is turned in on Critic, the sword splits, with the blunt end barely piercing the skin. At the same time, the sand beneath Gaara's feet sinks slightly, hardening to hold his feet. "Very impressive. I'm glad I didn't hold back with you, but I was surprised you dropped your barrier..." The sand wraps around Gaara's body like a snake. A form of Critic appears, appearing to be made of the sand. He meets face to face with Gaara. "I hope you like that chakra... because where you're going, there's plenty of it..." The sand implodes on Gaara's body with bone crushing force, the resulting shockwave sends a gust of spanning for miles, Earth style chakra seeming to be mixed in with it. The figure before Gaara turned out to be made of sand as well. [Info: For the record, I didn't leave a single used jutsu out of the post. Using the attack prevention technique, which the jutsu's ability has probably become apparent to you, I orchestrated everything, including the clone. The kusanagi part of the jutsu wasn't activated until this post. With attack prevention (an official Naruto jutsu I might add), I have turned the elements against you. If there is any discrepancy, please let me know... Edit: Concerning the sword of kusanagi, it does have the power to pierce through any chakra, unless it becomes dense enough. When it was used against Naruto by Orochimaru, Naruto had to use five times (or four, take your pic) the energy the Chiyo is capable of producing. Even then, the blade was enough to force Naruto into a distant ledge...] |
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*At the exact moment the clones appeared, Kasha used her main unsummoning skill, Erase. Erase makes any clones, summons or anything that's not real or doesn't belong to the actual world vanish and get locked into another dimension... at the same time, it prevents them to come back and the summoner from using any other creatures or clones for a short period of time* Kasha: Let's make this one vs one okay? *Just when she felt the ground below her moving, she stabbed the ground with one of her swords, hopefully striking Kotaro... then she jumped back and focused more sonic force, which she instantly used with Akamanah when she saw him emerge from the floor* Kasha: Sonic Blaster! *Kasha discharges a solid beam of sonic force towards Kotaro from her dualswords and then begins focusing more sonic energy for another attack* |