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Hey! Here's a poem from me: All the seasons shall be the same because you do not smile on me with your forgiveness; Everyday shall be the same because you do not come to sit beside me on my bench. All the tales that I shall hear shall be the same because your lips are silent. And until I see your smile, feel your nearness, and hear your voice -- storms will rage against my world; the days shall stretch unendingly like my pain; no music will reach my ears sweeter than your voice, which I have lost. --------------- If you're asking if it doesn't rhyme, chances are you're reading a poem in a "free verse" -- that is, a poem whose endings does not rhyme, but its still a poem.
What if I jump out
of this speeding jeepney? Fly without wings Reach for the grey-painted heaven And out into the sea of infinity?  |
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by YoYotheCananbalisticOreo
on 2006-03-21 08:24:45 (edited 2006-03-21 08:25:11)
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this is a poem i wrote about my troublesome relationship with academics which was inspired from having created and pondered upon the thread, Whats the WORST you have done in school? Terry One Did Very sure is when time has run out that one will pout. Terry one did and now what will amount is consequence being the route. Carry it does, to other aspects no doubt, but this hardly stirs the lout. Merry one is, content in ignorance of what is about, but then one gives a shout. Wary one may then become, after hard learning bout, yet never ceasing the gout. I always strive for some obvious creative technique in my poems, it just so happened that I knew exactly the words to describe my predicament.
I could give no less because I could give no more. ~myself
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yes! finally i feel the powere . my poem ^_^ A POEM FOR FALLEN SOULS I walk on this earth full of death, i see wars for no reason, i see fallen angels walking in the dark, and i see demons in the light, i see people killing people with there hands, i see people that walk alone with no home to go to with no one to love, i see people leaving there friends alone in time of need, i see the streets full of blood that gets wash in the rain, i see the world falling apart with no heroes to save the world, i feel the cold winters and the hot days of hell.  |
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FINALE Man soon shall digress, To the torso and bosom, Of an holy, black soul. And he will pray, Through shadow, And through friend, That it is more, Than an eternal silence. -Sir Nicholas James Sanderson III (that's me) How's that? (please criticize me)
Wise Man says: "Take a dog off its leash and it will wander."
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on 2006-03-21 22:08:51 |
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@engineer Wow, your poem is too deep. But I gotta admit that it's good!
What if I jump out
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by YoYotheCananbalisticOreo
on 2006-03-22 15:30:34
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@engineer. I like your poem, really has the "upmh" you know what I mean? reminds me quite a bit of Frost's material. how about commenting on mine?
I could give no less because I could give no more. ~myself
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@YoYotheCananbalisticOreo I think your poem is awesome, I'm no good at rhyming.
Wise Man says: "Take a dog off its leash and it will wander."
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by YoYotheCananbalisticOreo
on 2006-03-23 18:15:48 (edited 2006-03-23 18:16:23)
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thanks! I always try to ryhme in my poem, its easier to make people see my poetry as well, poetry. free verse often goes unappreciated. Heres another poem I wrote, please do comment, all ye who dare. notice the ryhming and acrostic charactistic...shameless! Happiness You Simplify Wonderful is the feeling you vivify. Acting with a different kind of serenity. Nothing could dim the radiance you shine wry. Through your alluring smile of clarity, Tells one of happiness transferred through this tie. Oh what pleasure is wrought from your exuberance merry. Gracious and benevolent, you never seise your demeanor shy. Outstanding is the way you carry yourself like a generous fairy. Only stopping to sprinkle sweet delights on those you try. Unending may it be that you carry out this destiny To fill the hearts of many with the happiness you simplify.
I could give no less because I could give no more. ~myself
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I found this from .Hack I think i should share it with all of you. Epitaph of the Twilight This poem was written by Emma Wielant, who tragicly died in a car crash before finishing it. Although the poem wasn't finished, Harald Hoerwick used it as the standards of his new computer game 'Fragment' (later renamed The World by the CC Corporation) to show how much he loved Emma. Unknown where the Cursed Wave was born... After the stars doth cross the heavens... The sky in the East doth darken. And air doth fills with mourning. From the chosen land beyond the forest, A sign of the Wave comes. Riding the Wave is: Skeith, the Shadow of Death, to drown all that stands. Mirage of Deceit, Innis, Betray all with the flawed image, and did aid the Wave. And by the Power of Magus, a drop from the Wave doth reach the heavens, and creates a new Wave. With the Wave, Fidchell, the power to tell the dark future, hope darkens, sadness and despair rule. Gorre schemes when swallowed by the Cursed Wave. Macha seduces with the sweet trap. Wave reaches the Pinnacle, and escape none can. Tarvos still remains with more cruelty to punish and destroy. And with the turbulent destruction after the Wave. Only a void remains. From deep within the void arrives Corbenik. Yet to return, the shadowed one. Who quests for the Twilight Dragon Rumbles the Dark Hearth, And Helba, Queen of the Dark, has raised finally her army. Apeiron, King of Light, beckons... At the base of the rainbow they meet. Against the abominable "Wave," together they fight. Alba's lake boils. Light's great tree doth fall. Power - all now to droplets turned in the temple of Arche Koeln. Returns to nothing, this world of shadowless ones. Never to return, the shadowless one. Who quests for the Twilight Dragon. The wife buffeted by "waves" turns her back on the field. The daughter that waited for the shadows repeated, "For sure... For sure I can go home." But the girl did not know... The truth that waited at the end of the journey The eternal mourning of her land. In the place of the calamitous, only life was known. After the circling stars When the eastern dark void, the air full of despair In the depths of the divided forest, in the land of Karma, Riding fast on the path is Skeith Bearing death's shadow, it eliminates all that seek to thwart it. The Confusing Mirage, Innis Decieves those that see it with illusions, rescues the waves The wave soaring high, when its head is smashed, A new wave will emerge To become Magus's power. When questioning the wave, Hope's light will be lost when he speaks of the dark future of where sorrow and resignation reign. Using Fiddlehiem's Technique When englufed by the Waves of Calamity, Gole will plan The sweet snare of conciliation is Maha The Waves, an exceeding maelstrom Nothing can escape When you think you have escaped, Talvos exists To destroy those with his exceeding cruelty Upon violent requital, only to remain is the void, the vacant darkness is the harbringer that Copernic is to appear. Epitaph of the Twilight Emma Wielant   |
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wayierd, warry soul always willing to hear of those who have and are in trouble, but please tell dose thy have any of thy own,thou are so misunderstood, always putting on a faketisous front of joy in thy heart, knowing that sorrow is truly thy part. BUT I hope that one day thy shall depart, from ye sorrowfull heart.AND know that thy shall always be in mine heart, sero my friend of the sorrowfull heart. PEACE TO YOU MY BROTHER.
a. bai
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I'm not sure if it counts as a poem but here are lyrics to a song I haven't writen music for yet. (WARNING: Angsty Punk Ahead.) Feel free to mock, I mean criticize me... Three alarms till can't wake me My life fells void of meaning Not the way I want to live but still, This world made me lazy. There's no point in working hard It's never going to pay Just go and try to find a new Way to waste my life away. Self destructive masacistic highlights The tattered remenants of my wasted life. Can't get a girlfriend cause I'm too high maintaiance meaning that I am still emotionally ignorant, social inept and still totally beligerent. Someone tell me where I'm meant to go I'm wandering around and I just don't know What the hell I'm supposed to be What the f*ck is going to happen to me Self destructive masacistic highlights The tattered remenants of my wasted life. |
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by overlordsero
on 2006-04-07 19:59:37
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Heres a poem thingie I did:MASKNo one knows Forever hidden There is always A mask on Whether on purpose Or just instinct The mask stays For the fear For the caring For the reasons The mask stays Never taken off Because of past Forever be on However nothing lasts No matter what Slowly taken off The mask fades Only part remains For in case Of past repeating The mask is Never truly off No matter what The mask remains One day maybe Forever it will Be taken off Cast away forever Until that time Of the life The mask stays 
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Once Again, more angsty work for me. Tell us what ye think please... -You? What is it I see in your eyes? Why have you this control over me? How did I give in so easily, to your deceptions and lies? Why don't I fight more to be free? Letting you have all the say And could it be, in some way, at least you're thinking of me? |
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by YoYotheCananbalisticOreo
on 2006-04-11 19:57:55 (edited 2006-04-11 19:59:45)
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@doctor. I wrote much along the lines of your poems' theme... apparently when people read mine, it looked like i "missed" them as if i already have them rather than yearned for them because i didnt have them. great stuff nonetheless! odd how such poems tend to seem somewhat depressing, mine tended to seem more uplifting despite the contrary! Cheer up though. Whether you get what you yearn or not, its sometimes best to live in excemption of that particular dream coming to fruition...but if you still cling to the hope, try writing some poetry where you are already successful? cheers me up!
I could give no less because I could give no more. ~myself
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I'm not sure if this is depressing but thiswas my band's break up song. -Expectations You want commitment you wanted someone stable, You wanted comfort. I don't think I'm able You ask for so much, I don't think I can give you Looks like you'll walk out. I guess I still lose. Yuor expectations were set too high, I doubt you'll ever find your perfect guy. So what can I say? What can I do? How am I to hold on to you? So what can I say? I doubt there's any way I can ever be all that you would want from me. |
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by iChiRo nAmiDa
on 2006-04-12 19:07:04
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This is one of my favorite poem that i, myself wrote...It shows the real me..Sad and Lonely(T.T) HOW SAD is... After the night of your saddest moment Everything started to turned out to be all right You started to feel better, and once again liven anew You started to laugh and smile almost to everyone But then a heart’s love started to knock once more A fate’s new way to restore your agony and pain Your paths met, and with no words you just stare at her Exactly just like the other time, nothing happened It’s hard to forget the most special in your heart But it’s also hard to accept, that you won’t be together Saying a little prayer you beg for answers “Why is it that the one I love is not meant for me?†How sad is it to be told “I don’t love you� How sad is it to pretend you didn’t hear those words? But with a smile, you just turned and walked away Because you don’t want her to see the tears in your eyes… (so you like it?, you want more? email me at catch_ichiro19@yahoo.com)
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@iChiRo That's good mate. I like it. Hell, it's loads better than my bollocks. |
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by iChiRo nAmiDa
on 2006-04-12 19:21:41
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thanks dude! i can write really sad ones.. when i feel really lonely...hahaha
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ichiro entertainment company 2006 (shiyounin dojo)
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Yeah I like sad depressed stuff. (Look at wht I write for fun...) It's got some depth to it y'know? |
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by iChiRo nAmiDa
on 2006-04-12 19:37:36
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----This one is more like an elegy..rather than a poem...Be sure to ready yourself with a roll of tissue..for that crying moments..(rally-ho!) -Other side of me- This hostile sword is my only treasure… And this dull sword is my only opponent… I’m tired of being revitalized with again solitude purpose… To live is to kill, to die is to be reborn… Blind of everything that meets the eye…. And living with only one decree in this soul… Eternity will be on our side, cursed to live with no end… We will say our goodbyes twenty-five decades from now… And yet another from then… When the moment repeats itself… We will then again be separated to these two realms… Then certainly will be the time for myth and legends meet their end… But then a new sort of fate began to unfold… That love will grow even in the darkest kind of soul… Grounding for some reason to create and find its sanctuary… And will eventually create a new contentment within… To be reborn as human; To be buried as memory of long-ago… I don’t know if I will let myself live in this furnace of hell… Or I shall kill myself all over again just to meet you in heaven… It feels as if I’m lost in the darkness… Sensation of being imbedded to this unholy soil… I will hold still the sun, and I’ll never let it down… Even if I need to sacrifice my time… Twentieth night from this moment… I will die, revived, for an extent of eternity… Before my time runs out… I’ll find your soul and I’ll lay it on an absolute memory… And I’ll let you stay in my body…to live as the other side of me… (i want to great shiyounin dojo! setsuna, rui, jirochin, teddy, dirk) -Be one of Us-
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ichiro entertainment company 2006 (shiyounin dojo)
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