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Basil: Wow! So long! O.o I really don't have time to read your story right now ==' gomene!!- though i'm sure it's very promising.. i will try and read it at least tomorrow and give you some feedback ^^ (I spot some German in there! Good for you, but my friend's dragging ME out to help her with her french essay- which i think i've lost... by purpose?? O.o poor Mokona) *crying* j-just bomb the cake Holkers? W-what sort of monster are you?- have you seen the cake?? Basiiiill, teeelll himmmmm >< Lol Brit cussing? I hope he's not making it out to be that bad? Oh, who am i kidding- growing up in a Brit slum, you learn some pretty dirty stuff, just look at me for example =^.^=   |
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@Basil: Mein Gott!! ^^ nice job^^ just I don't like the font you're using^^ Schwartz?^^ XDDD I'm Schwarz XDDD  |
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Basil: Another thrilling installment of your works Basil ^^ :( Poor Cecile~ *punches Basil on the arm* did you have to make it so sad? But, very nice writing style, as always, good weapon detail and impressive use of foreign language! __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Umm, it's not been confirmed yet, but after a talk with Ugo, we think we should call an IM session this Saturday, the usual time.. all I ask is that everyone involved is on standby, and on Ugo's notice.. everyone can make it to the session for a discussion on the VN- just to refresh on what's happening, what's not. Also, there's been an absence from KMR a.k.a Karuzo, and we need his part for his arc, if anyone catches him online, please tell him to contact me or Ugo a.s.a.p That's all for now ^^ |
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@Schaz Thanks, mate. And you don't like the font? I only use it for the size. >:D @Mokona In fact, I did have to make it so. It wouldn't make sense if *SPOILER BLOCK!*. Understood? And I almost had the idea of sending Insp. Alcott to France, but that won't do, does it? |
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@ All: Ayou minna! This would be the third continuation of "In Memories" Please read the earlier parts so you don't get confused! Apologies if there are some errors, I wrote this all at school and just gave it one editing read through, hope I dint take too long to write the continuation! ^^' I think there might be a story or 2 I have yet to read.... will get to soon as my library time is over! @ Visual Novel Writing Club Members: Yep! VN Meeting on Saturday at... 3 PM GMT (Was that like before Mokona-chan?) It hasn't been announced yet in the VN thread but that'll be announced there too as well. @ Basil: I managed to read yours after I finished the one I just wrote. Well, you managed to get a good span of time described. And it's as clear to read as usual. Tough, it does make some assumptions that people know some of the organizations and such mentioned. (Sadly, I am not one of them ^^') ~Memory 3: Pastel Contemplation~ a Everyone was tired by the tied by the end of it. All of the arena's rules and regulations where flooded in their minds, desperately searching for a place in long term memory. All of them where, aside from Dike. "Lets get fighting already!" Dike sid enthusiastically to his weary troop. The rest of the team was not as exited. In fact, it wouldn't have been surprising if they fell asleep on the field for their first arena match. Nonetheless, their first arena match was coming up, as well as their first and to be foremost rivals. "Be sure to make Cerulean proud!" The teenage boy tried to hide his embarrassment as his 'mother dearest' wished him luck on his first arena battle before driving off in a Limo that in his eyes didn't do more than turn heads and complicate traffic. Like Dike's team, young Pastel Gearad's team had gone through rules and regulations as well, only a single day earlier. Today would be their first match. There was not more recommendable place to await the call to their first match than in the waiting room reserved for the wealthy, lavishly decorated, stocked with some complimentary food in a mini fridge, it was actually one of the few rooms built precisely for high income teams . His team, was albeit different, instead of the hodgepodge of people and friends of friends Dike managed to annoy into joining, Pastel's team where his loyal confidante. A young teen gave her obligated encouragement to him. "Lets do our best Gerad...." Her name was Alissa, Pastel's ever loyal cousin. She was quiet by nature, but was never shy to to take it upon herself in cheering up her favorite cousin. Firmly, Pastel spoke. "Please just call me by my first name Alissa. Though father might require it, I honestly find it a little uncomfortable." Another teenager in business minded attire just as expensive as Pastel's walked up to his friend, slinking his arm around Pastel's shoulder. A long time ally jumping along for an entertaining ride. "Mr Alister was real nice to give us free pass for the area registration. Hell the man gave us free customization weapons, our own high grade E-Drives too!" The boy pretended to cry on Pastel's arm. "Oh thanks so much my brother!" Pastel hastily shrugged him off. "It's fine.. but thanks, I'm pretty confident you'd be a great addition for any team Buster. So... uh, thanks." Buster shook his head. "No Prob man, it's a win win for both of us." Alissa didn't seem to understand. "What do you mean by that Buster?" "It means we both win." "Are you two the only ones playing?" "Basically." Alissa looked at Buster's face in utterly shocked disbelief. "But- that's impossible...! There has to be one winning side and one losing side!" Buster grinned, a little irritated. "Don't over read into it too much, you'll set your pretty head on fire." Intervening, Pastel replied in a language that Alissa would understand. "This kind of win-win just means that both sides acquire something positive from cooperation." A sophisticated reply seemed to pass through to her brain. "Oh, alright. Well, I have to make sure the others are ready for the coming match." As she left, Alissa mumbled to herself. "Such superfluous plays of words are so complex..." Buster shook his head as he saw the fine carved cherrywood door automatically close behind Alissa. "Sometimes I just cant tell if she's either a complete dolt or too sophisticated for her own good." Not waiting for a general reply, Buster went straight towards the topic of interest. "So what about it? I wouldn't see why you'd join something as savage as virtual arena fighting Pastel?" Pastel sat down on one of the well decorated lounge chairs in the room. "Father told me to do so." Buster sat in a chair. "Oh come now, the man doesn't need an area cash prize... the man's already well off as it is." The two boys where quite aware of that, and for a moment, sat in silence. In the end, Pastel went ahead and came clean. "It's really just company relations, to some extent. He kind of just wants to show we support Mr. Allister's company so much as their own kids make use of the products they build." Buster wasn't satisfied. Oh come on now, your old man wouldn't care enough about you to beat you into going here... Leaning closer, He spoke: "I guess it went like this: Miss Allister would find it most delightful if such a strapping old friend such as yourself would manage to win the tournament." The exact same line that Mr. Gearad told his son to start all this. It showed too, Pastel was already looking shameful that Buster had found out. Leaning back into his chair and crossing his arms behind his head, Buster decided to let off his friend. "You and Cerulean used know each other way back in grade school before your Dad and Mister Allister hit it big in the business world. But you know... it's surprising that Mr. Allister never really gave his daughter the 'rich' treatment like our parents did for us. So- she ended up growing up like a normal girl while we lived in million dollar mansions, got educated in prestigious schools and became the slobs of our current age group." Tired of hearing him stating his motives with no effort, he finished the debriefing himself. "Because of that, I never got to see her again." Buster's heel started to subconsciously tap the floor. "So, might I ask why you're still after some girl you knew from a long time ago, who probably already forgot you existed?" Pastel answered him plainly. "Well, all the really wealthy girls aren't really for me, and..." unfortunately even Buster couldn't disagree to the statement. "There are just some memories that don't go away..." ~~~~~~~~~~ Writing Notes: Hmhm! Well Finally got to contribute to the writing club again~! This entry just introduced some other characters, who would come to be the 'Dike' Team's foremost rivals. Every time I write this, I kind of get a small feeling I could make this into manga form....   |
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I'll be there Ugo! I'll do whatever is within my power to ensure we keep our internet connection until Saturday- apologies for not yet being able to read your continuation, I came on mainly so i can refer to Terror's guide whilst writing my piece for our project... and i guess on saturday it would be best if you could give me some help then too, if there's anything i don't understand, which there is sure to be. Basil: ah, i understand perfectly now. :) *pinches Basil by the ear* no.. that won't do at all- but i'm sure you'll be able to think of somewhere else to send your Inspector. Won't you? |
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@Ugo: Good story! win-win eh? I just don't understand what is hodgepodge and albeit. (I know Arbeit^^) oh... for the VN stuff, I'll try to be there... and I think now I have to tell ya that I lost contact with lockey... |
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@Ugo If you are confused about the organizations and events in my story, it means everything is going as planned. No, actually, that's something I have to go through in the next few chapters. By the way, I've read your recent post. I have a very strong hunch that Pastel will be Rey's archrival in the future. @Mokona Please don't pinch my ear. It's unnecessary, and it stings. Inspector Alcott would be going somewhere else, not France. So please let go. |
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Basil- aww, sorry- i'll let go then ^^ Ugo- Good job!! Lol, manga form- i think it'd make a really cool story, if you could draw half as good as you write lol. Good to see old members contributing stories at last ;) it was a pleasure to read :D Anyways, if anyone gives a damn- for my exam results (these are mainly modular exams, spanning the course of my two last years before college, and early entries) i got: all A's and one B :) I got a B in my Core Science Ideas in Context- where you have to express understanding of the unit in questions that test how well you've studied- instead of how well you can measure and calculate chemical formulae. Before any congratulations, i wanna add in that my twin sis got 4 A*'s and the rest A's (no B's) ==' so i can't wait to hear what crap my teachers have to say- yay~ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Oh, anyone please reply to this asap: if my GMT says + 1.00 and the IM meeting is at 3.00 PM, what time is that for me- 2PM? ;P sorry, I know this sounds like a riddle, but it's an honest question ==' I'm really confused by all this and the answer would really help :3 Thanks in advance ~ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Oh, P.S: has anyone noticed how Pokemon Diamond and Pearl/ Battle Dimension has become a lot more violent than the old series? Honestly- it's so brutal! And the fighting gets very graphic sometimes- just thought you guys should know ^^ Aww, Chimchar is soo cute! And of course, Pikachu lol- *sniff* I did not cry this episode!! ;( Paul was being reaallly mean to Chimchar! |
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Ohay. I'm back. Sorry for the delay of my attendant xDD Yui: thanks. Basil: I sort of thinking that was Boy Soldier.. but i read it again it was yours.. xDD Sorry.. xDD Love it! Hope to see more! :D Mokona: yes bomb the cake. chances that you guys don't have to fight over the cake anymore.. xDD I'm not a monster ;3; How could you said that.. D: Brit cursing is sort of.. fun. and rude. In a manner way, it's funny. xDD Ugo: Nice. Thought i did check back the past post. I like the last sentences.. xDD People just keep on taking that sort of advice. VN? I didn't know there's a visual novel writing... should stalk the forum... All: I still haven't start to type/write any story now.. xDD To much stuff to be taken care of.. About the story that contribute to The Kite Runner, i'm still trying to find the best plot. xDD So far.. to tell the truth i get to busy to start typing xDD Hope i get it done before school start xDD If it doesn't, then it'll be weekend work xDD Happy fasting! :DD
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Ha ha- we won't fight over the cake anymore ^^ You are a monster =[ ;) Well, although funny, at times, brit cussing is abhorrently crude, simple words can sometimes do more than cussing if you know another person's weakness- e.g most girls would be defenceless if you called them fat- they just can't stand it. Cussing wouldn't be as useful as just simply using the right words to harm someone internally. Enough of my cussing lectures, i would love to hear more of your writing Holkers! |
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Meh... hishashiburi desune... Gome~n!!! I... I haven't got any chance (until now) to get to Gendou... hwa~ minna gomenasai.... maybe this could atone my sins T_T the bell had rang once again, yeah it is time to get to the classroom right? "yap, let's go to the classroom..." Misha says while starts moving toward the classroom... I found the school rather boring especially knows that as soon as we get to the class there is an announcement about the incoming storm... it is said that the storm might be dangerous so the student was suggested to be home in instant. because "my father" can't take me, I walk myself home. it looks like there is only me that wasn't being picked up... near the river, I suddenly remembered about the kitten I've just saw this morning. if there really is a storm coming up, it will be even more dangerous for the kitten... or well that is what I thought until I saw someone in a yellow raincoat with a yellow plastic umbrella on her hand come closer to the kitten. I tried not to disturb them so I stay close enough to hear her conversation. "There will soon be a storm coming here... if there was nobody come to take you home I guess I'm going to stay with you. No matter what is going to happen!" the girl says when suddenly she turns her body and... Trisha!? hey, isn't that one of the trio mess up!? What is she going to do there? "I-I don't know but... maybe something about messing things up?" anyway... we need to help that... Freiya stops her sentence once Trisha starts to wear some strange cat uniform above her raincoat. she then wags her tail and then shout, "A kitten needed home... please anyone who cares for a kitten..." she shouts as loud as she could while wagging her tail which have a bell on it. this somekind touching, but strange at the same time... who would've think that someone like Trisha would do something as embarrassing as that for a kitten... " Freiya... does sometime human forget their feeling?" no, I guess she wasn't forgot her feeling... maybe she is just hold that feeling in her heart... "But, that shy feeling is so making me nervous... how could she holds it?" Maybe someday... you will found out someone that could make you do anything that is unusual. "huh?" I can't really get what Freiya think... but she only chuckles for my confusion... after a while, Trisha just keep waging her tail and shouting the same dialogue... but no human care... even some of them just laugh at her and played her then run away... I would have been very embarased if I were her, but I didn't saw her giving up. More than that, it looks like I saw some strange aura from her... some strong yet warm feeling that she is giving to the kitten behind her. ctar! the sound of the thunder broke my thoughts and lead Trishya to the ground... her knees which were wrapped by a trouser fell down to the ground as she closes her ears with her blond hair and her hands... then I could see her tears coming out from her eyes... "Please... somebody... please..." she can't hold that tears any longer her chick was soon filled with tears. the sound of the thunder didn't scared her right now... all that she care was somebody should take the kitten home immediately or she and the kitten would get a very worst day... "Somebody!!" I can't hold this much longer, so I came to her and take her right hand... "I can take the kitten to my house." I say, she starts to shed tears... but when she wiped the tears she is shocked as if she is seeing demon or something. "GHWAA! You are... F-freiya!? What are you doing here!? and... Since when did you..." "shh..." I close her mouth with my index finger... "Let's go to my house first I'll keep today's event as a secret if you stop crying and follow me home." she only nods as an answer. So, we and the kitten walk to my house. on the way home, Trisha didn't says anything. She is blushed, so blushed that her face turn red as if it was a tomato. "thanks..." that is the first word I heard from Trisha... but then a bigger thunder occur near us... oh no... a tree had just fell in front of us and we didn't have any second route.... the storm itself started with a rain and a big wind... if we didn't get home by then....... to be continued... okay then... oh about the VN? I guess I couldn't really get to the meeting, but if you guys need help I will do the best that I can. and about inviting peoples... should I do that, or no? well maybe that's all for now... I'm going to "buka" (meaning the end of fasting) Ittadaikmasu! 
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@Faiz: Hey! we all know you are busy with your real life! (right everyone!?) so, not posting is no sin and you need not to say sorry^^ anyway, good story^^ |
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@all: Sorry guys i've been busy :c. I updated the main page. and i'll read the stories when i get home and be like yayyy. then look at my story...i lost that :c. Oh well, i'll make a new story and it will turn out fine xD. ~Doomlight P.S. Will edit the post later or tomorrow XD 
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Faiz: Great job! Another excellent story from you!! Oh right, "keep it up!" to anyone who is fasting! ^^ and have a happy Ede! |
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thanks for the welcoming even though my missing in action for several weeks... -_- and thanks for the compliment^-^ (humans are amazing, right?sorry for not translating it last time...XD) the winds are getting stronger... the trees leaves were waving so quick as if it is saying "go~! Go away!". But, what could we do... my feather didn't left much... even though this is the last mission, I have a feeling that this might not be as easy as the other mission. And if I waste all of my feather before the mission ends, I will be punished... I still didn't know what kind... but hearing the word punishment itself had already been scary. " So, you didn't care if we died here?" oh yeah... you are here too... I guess I have no other option... So, Without wasting any other Trisha is so surprised seeing all of that. Especially the wing part. her eyes are just looks like hypnotized. But, well that is for of course. So, I drag her while starts running. Well I can't stop that storm with only one feather. And if I did that... it will be more surprising than this one... We run as fast as I can |well Trisha is still shocked|, luckily we did managed to got home... inside my mom was crying. Hearing my voice she suddenly make a wide smile and run to the door. "Freiya!! Where were you gone to! There was a storm outside there..." she is crying while hugging me... ignoring Trisha |who is still shocked| she hugs me tightly. neh, why did your mother so... worried about you. She worried as if you were her... " well, that is what we called mom's instinct. Mother always loved their children as if their children were themselves..." "Oh, are you Freiya's friend...?" Mom suddenly realize Trisha's presence. Trisha who was shocked, finally gain conscious after hearing mom's voice. "Hah... oh... yes ma'am. Uh, my name is Trisha." Trisha says while bowing herself a bit. "Have you told your mother about this? She might be as worried as me especially in this kind of situation..." my mother says while screwing up Trisha's head. "well... Actually I live with my grandparent... and yeah I've told them that I'm going to my friend's house..." Trisha says. "oh... I'm sorry..." my mom says while steps backward a bit. Trisha answers with a shake of her head and smiles... this is the most beautiful smile I had ever seen... "Neh, Freiya, let's go to your room shall we?" Trisha says while holding both of my hand. I answers with a nod... and suddenly she take me up-stair |surprisingly she knew where my room is...|. then inside my room... "YOU"RE AN ANGEL!?!?!?" "Uh... could you keep that as a secret?" I say while hold her mouth with my index finger. She nods a bit as a sign of understand. "But why did you have mom?" she says while start to sit on the floor of my room. "Well it is a long story... but shortly this isn't the real me... The Real Freiya is still exist but her body was "borrowed" by me for the mean time..." Trisha nods, so I continues my word, "maybe the next time you see Trisha, it may be the real Trisha... So you'd better forget this accident." I say while seeing her eyes. "Un... but I won't forget your deeds even though this is my deeds to this angel... oh one more... as the return of keeping your secret... could you keep my secret too?" she says while begging to me. "Sure..." I say... I think this means you have one more friend eh? "It's we... cause you'll be with me for a long time... hehe..." EH!? really!!!? "hehe... you'll see" To be continued... @Schaz: THanks T-T you're my bro... @Mokona~san: He... doumo for not being mad at me...T-T oh and let's forgive each other and get to our newself. @Doomlight: sure it's okay... we, human are the cause of mistake... so it is a common sense to forgive each other^_^
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/thinks. It's been like a week... And i haven't came up any story. /crycrycry. I did have the summary, but i haven't start making the story. Truth is i need a few songs lyrics then i can start making it. Can i have some advice of first step of making your story? xD (would be busy, since exam is coming xD ) Good health guys!
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i'll join ^^alright this is part of my fics in fanfic, just want to share it. Genre: Yuri Anime: Mai Hime >>> Love behind the Darkness >>>Chapter 1 Introduction to the Characters MAIHIMEBLEACHMAIHIMEBLEACHMAIHIMEBLEACHMAIHIMEBLEACHMAIHIMEBLEACHMAIHIMEBLEACH Running footsteps of heels tapping in a dark alleyway can be heard. A woman with silver hair and with shining blue eyes was running for her life from a ‘creature’ behind her. “Where are you going, hmm?†came a husky voice of a woman that appeared from the shadows. She had blocked the running woman’s way, leaving her no chance to escape. “Please, stay back! Leave me alone! Stay away…please†the woman stepped backward as the red eyed woman was moving closer to her. She found her back flatly laid against the cold wall of a building. “Why? Isn’t it you’re the one after me? So, I’m here now, what’s the matter?†the face of a woman came into her view. She then saw the sparkling red eyes of the woman. “Please…don’t do this…I’m begging you…please…†the silver-haired woman was begging as she know that her life is in great danger. “Hmm? What if…I don’t like…you can’t do anything about it, do you? And besides, it’s your fault of seducing me and now…you’ll pay†the taller woman was wearing all black shirt and a loose jeans. Her face was nuzzling the blue-eyed woman’s neck, kissing and licking it in sensuous manner. “Please…Please…Ahhh†the girl felt two sharp fangs dug in her smooth neck, drinking her blood instantly. The silver-haired woman becomes weaker and weaker as her assailant continuously drinks her blood. After a while, she can’t feel anything as her body became numb. The assailant held the woman firmly as she enjoys herself drinking the pure blood of her victim. Soon the blue-eyed woman fell into the ground, dead. “My, my, is my look really that charming, making any girls or boys went crazy about me?†the woman asked out loud as another figure emerged from the shadows. A 19 year old woman with a 1 ½ feet taller than the ‘assailant’ commented, “Well, I guess my little sister inherits my charming look but before that, we should clean this mess upâ€. “Hai-hai, nee-san! Whatever you say!†the crimson eyed woman replied back with a sign of annoyance. “Hey, hey! Don’t show me that attitude, will yah?†her older sister ruffled her long silky hair, scolding her like a child. “Put your hands off away from my hair!†“Whatever!†MAIHIMEBLEACHMAIHIMEBLEACHMAIHIMEBLEACHMAIHIMEBLEACHMAIHIMEBLEACHMAIHIMEBLEACH “Get out of here, you BITCH!†a man with a black spiky hair and a scar on his cheek was yelling at a 17 year old woman. “But, Takeda-san, please be more considerate. I promise I’ll pay the rest of the rent including the interest. So, please let me stay a little longer until I get a new job†“Tsh! Are you kidding?! I’ve been kind enough to not put you into jail! Then, here you are?? Promising me to pay all your rent AND the interest?? Oh c’mon, don’t make me laugh…get ‘outta here!†A small woman passed by and witnessed the scene. She felt sympathy on the younger girl that was begging a crazy man. “You! Old Man!! How dare you beat a defenseless woman! You coward!†she helped the girl stand up as she glared to the man in front of her. “Tsh! Who the hell are you? Don’t act like a heroine here miss! I’m just teaching this woman a lesson!†“And you think that’s right you idiot!!!†“Watch your mouth, woman! Leave this place already before I call a police! And will you please get that woman away from here. I’m sick and tired of her†“Not until I do this, CRAZY MAN!†“Uhmmff! You-“the man was now in his knees holding his aching crotch as the two women run away. MAIHIMEBLEACHMAIHIMEBLEACHMAIHIMEBLEACHMAIHIMEBLEACHMAIHIMEBLEACHMAIHIMEBLEACH “Ne, why are you letting that idiot beat you?†“It’s alright, actually I owe him a lot. I was begging him to let me stay a little longer because I have no place to live and I was just got fired on my job†“I see, but why are you got fired?†“Ah, it’s because one of a customer of the club I’m working at, he was harassing me so I slapped him on his face. In his anger and drunken state, he went wild and ruined the club. The manager witnessed all this and decided to fired me†“That was rude! It’s not your fault!†“Never mind that it’s done already†“Anyway, I think I’ve seen you already. I just can’ remember it though...hmm…Oh! YEAH! I remembered! We’re studying at the same university, right?†“Hmm…yeah...I remember you!! We’re on a same English class!†“Mmm hmm!†the smaller woman smiled to her companion as they headed on her apartment. “By the way, thanks for saving me. I forgot your name though, sorry†“It’s okay! I’ll tell you my name later. First, let me clean your bruised on my apartment†“But-“ “No but’s! come with me and let’s heal your bruised, okay? “H-Hai, arigatou†MAIHIMEBLEACHMAIHIMEBLEACHMAIHIMEBLEACHMAIHIMEBLEACHMAIHIMEBLEACHMAIHIMEBLEACH “So, which club you prefer?†the older woman asked her younger sister as she drove a black Porsche 911 into the main road. “You choose, I’m not in the mood today†“O-okay†The two women found themselves in a disco club. It was a well dim lit room with the sound of the music echoing back into the center. Many men and women were on the dance floor, doing some dirty dancing. Several groups of people stare at them as they entered the club. They look like they’ve seen two ‘angels’ descended unto earth, but neither of them know the opposite of their impression to the two ‘angels’. The two decided to sit into the bar stool, signaling the bar tender two glasses of ‘drink’ they’ve always ordered. The bar tender knew what the two want so he went into a door behind the bar to get it for them. While the two were drinking, one brunette girl approach the taller woman at the bar stool where they are, “Uhmm...ermm…hello there…I-uh just wondering if you two can join my friends over there…if you wouldn’t mind thoughâ€. “Why of course! I would love too! I can’t ignore an invitation from a beautiful lady here…†the taller woman then reached her hand as she leaned in to kiss it. “I’ll just talk to my little sis for a short while, can you wait for us?†“O-of course†The woman then ‘accidentally’ drags her hand in the brunette’s breast making her shivered at the sudden contact. She then blushed furiously as she saw the woman winked at her. She then excused herself after being caught off guard by the taller woman. “Ooiiiii…stop daydreaming we’re going for them, hmmm…four of them…we should take 2 each…fair enough?†“Sure…†“Ok! Let’s go†>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> To be continued... |
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Great stories people!!! @Faiz: Amazing story as usual! Thanks for keeping up the good work! Sorry i've been totally busy lately, i've not been checking this thread properly! >< @Zen: Welcome!! Thanks for your submission! It was lovely!! Oooh so, its like some vampire yuri thing? Interesting~ O.o I haven't watched Mai Hime before- but it seems really cool! @Holkers: Lol take your time! And my teacher says you dont always have to start from the beginning! You can write any part of the story when inspiration comes to you! |
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Re: Writers Club/Guild
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on 2009-10-10 22:32:01 |
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Hello! Waii I'm so... busy lately there are just so many test T_T anyway @Zen: Welcome!! Wow... Yuri... I don't really like Yuri type... but well your story is interesting. keep up the good job!^_^ @Holkers: Well when the time I wanted to start a story I usually watch some anime or listening to some music while trying to make the storyline first. the first time to write is usually the hardest part. but as soon as you begin everything will move on smoothly trust me. Oh I also have a fanfict actually(from Vocaloid... before it I will proclaim that none of the character was originally mine, nor any music inside of it. so I only have the story okay? ‘Warning malicious ware detected’ Wait that alarm again? Huh… there’s a tube with green liquid inside… the tube looks like it is from a metal…亞北 ãƒãƒ« that is the words that I see on that tube. A girl with twin ponytail is inside the tube, her orange eyes are almost closed, but due to the malicious ware, she can’t really close it… So, I tried my best to save her. I injected more anti viruses but it seems not really works. The malicious keep reaching Neru’s main part, I can’t let that happen… I need to do something to separate the mal and Neru. So, I decided to cut through the infected part and so… now Neru only have one ponytail with her, but well the mal still exist somewhere inside her body. Gash… a dream? Well, it isn’t the first time I dreamt this dream… I have a bad feeling about this… First Song: Awakening That dream is the time when I tried to reawake Neru from her slumber… She is like Miku’s sister, but well not really is a sister. We, Vocaloids aren’t a human actually…. We are Androids created to sing for the human race. But recently, we are also doing job to help human from the Malicious Life Form or usually called as the Mal. These Mals are creating a delusional state to peoples who listen to their songs. So, we the Vocaloids will and shall try to stop their songs by all means… After whining a bit for the dream… I walk out from my bed and use my blue scarf… I look at the mirror and try to tidy up my blue hair. After that, I walk to the gathering room. The entire Vocaloids member usually spent their times here in the large square white room. The room is containing several circle tables. There is also two bookshelf at the corner right and left, though not many Vocaloids like to read |including me myself|. The floor was covered by a white fur carpet. When the Gathering Room’s Automatic door opens, I could see a girl with two green ponytails at her right and left head with a triangle ribbon tied it up. That girl with a metallic black shirt smiles up to me and waves her hands that were being cover by the Vocameter. OH, maybe, you didn’t know what a Vocameter is. Vocameter is a tool to link up our music database; it is also useful to make a Vocaloid stay in rhythm when singing by accompanying them with music or let her sing with her partner. We use this to heal the malicious life form, which usually were a normal creature. “Kaito~san!†the girl, Hatsune Miku called my name. Miku, the Vocaloid number 01 is captain of the Vocaloid. Her cheerfulness was very useful in battle to cheer up her partner. She has the highest pitch than other, only One Android here can match her voice. “Morning Miku, did you have a nice sleep?†I ask her, she only nod as an answer than continue to practice singing a song titled “Meltâ€. “Kaito~san!†A twin brother and sister who sit on the table greet me with a smile. The girl, Kagamine Rin has a white ribbon tying up her short blond hair, while her brother Kagamine Len has a straight blond hair. Both of them are wearing a sailor. Rin waves her right hand while sleeping, Len waves her left hand while keep playing the “Hatsune Miku Project Diva†game on his PSP. “Hello, did both of you had a great sleep?†I say. “Yeah, I do… well at least I do.â€â€¦ Len say while looking at her sister whom looks like very sleepy, “She really need some more sleep…†“Ugya….†I guess I should let her be for now… Hm…? A mail? ‘From: Neru Today, 12/12/2XOX 07:00 G’morning…. ‘ … I try to find Neru… ah… there she is… a girl with a ponytail on her left who is standing near the bookshelf. She is holding a yellow cell phone, she then blushes when she realize I was smiling at her, she also turn her face to the bookshelf and find a book to read. I hope this day could be peaceful as it is… “Malicious Life Form!†all of the sudden, Neru detected a Mal. Well we can’t resist doing something about it. “OK… guys, are you ready…. Let’s do this with rhythm and melody!†Miku says while preparing the Negi shooter. Negi shooter is Miku’s anti Mal weapon. It shapes like a green bag; inside of it were an anti Mal negi launcher and a jetpack. “We’re Ready!†say Kagamine brothers almost at the same time. They are on the Vocaroller, a yellow steamroller with anti Mal roller in front of it. This is the only transportation that we have, now at least. “Okay, the Mal today shouldn’t be that difficult. As you encounter it make sure you didn’t make a frontal attack. This Mal is slow but a frontal attack is the very not to do.†Neru explain the situation to all Vocaloids as usual. “Okay-okay… copies that Neru…†Miku says as she turns her Negi Thruster and blast of… “Hey… Areyouevenlisteningtome!†Neru says the line fast that her words seem difficult to understand, “Bother… anyway it looks like Miku is heading toward the mal, Kagamine brother, I trusted you with the evacuation… after that see if you can help Miku with the Mal. Do you understand?†“Un… leave it to…†when Len just want to say the word… Rin looks sleep tightly on her seat, “uh… me…†Then, they go toward the location. Len and…. I mean Len cover the civilians far enough from the Mal, while Miku seems can’t find the Mal itself. “UH, where is the Mal again?†“I’ve told you haven’t I… hhh… It is at your three… justgothereandfinishthismissionalready!†says Neru while trying not to sleep. “Okay…†Miku says, as she turns to her right… she found a cute fury ball looking creature floating on the sky… “Is that the… Mal?†“Yap… now you remember my instruction don’t….†“Kawaiiii~…………….!†It looks like Miku ignored it…. “Gaba….†Suddenly a yellow stream comes out of the Mal’s mouth and hit Miku… “Waaaiii~ Ka…kaaa “Miku WhatAreYouDoing!? Kaito~san! Do something!†“Initiate Song, Let’s make symphony… "‘Packaged’!†“...Kono~ Sekai no melody…â€Neru start the song and all of the Vocaloid’s Vocameter is turning blue. “Rin wake up!†Len says while he shakes Rin up. “Huh… this is…†Rin who woke up realize the song and follow Neru which have almost the same sound as her. “Atashino uta koe~†and so, they sing the song to the fullest. “Okay, Len head to the Mal’s location, Miku needed you.†I say. “Roger… Initiating Roller-Steampade!†the Vocaroller then moves fast to the Mal and Miku’s location. Meanwhile, Miku whom was saved by the Vocameter shield was now cornered, even the song-upgraded shield have its own limit, if that happens… “Is this the end…†the Mal is trying to do the last move… when suddenly…. “Heaa~†brak! The Mal was run over by the Vocaroller, but I guess something is wrong… anyway the girls stop the sing… they need more energy to sing a lullaby for the Mal in order to restore its previous state. “Miku~san… where are you?†Len says as he gets off the Vocaroller… “Gasp… guys… uh look bellow the Vocaroller…†Neru says when she finally realizes what she saw on the radar wasn’t a glitch or something… “Ga~ you guys are meanie…†Miku says as she finally fell unconscious. “Miku~!†~First Song complete The insert for the next song (Neru)Ghwaa… somebody is taken by the Mal…. (Miku)Vocaloids GO! (Kaito)Hey, Miku you still needed a rest don’t you…. (Len) wha… the girl is using a drill on her head… (???) ITâ€S NOT A DRILL, CAUSE DRILL JUST GOES “SCREEEEW*!!!†*=just like a drill’s voice… (Vocaloids) GYAAA~ Bzzzt….. See you next time! â™â™®â™¯Vocaloido… if you wanted to know the song, I have directed the song's title to you tube... so just click it (If you wanted to know that is XD). Okay then... I guess that's all from me.
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