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I wrote this poem, cause I like the number 42, duh. 42 is the most random number You couldn’t find any one even a plumber Who couldn’t agree That this number is better than three Everyone on that is Except for Dan Hovis Who is thinks that the number three Is better than thee Number 42 What would I do with out you |
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I think of myself as..... A monster. A Demon. These rigid frezzing hands that kill the inoncents... my eyes that rush with anger and passion of the color red. do you think that A monster that lives and breathes death can love? My heart that feels pain and Darkness rages like the tiger protecting it's young. Knowing that my body wasn't made to create,but to destory I'm not alone. my sister made that one last week I have another one I wrote myself the one below is what I wrote. I wish that you knew me... I wish that I'll kiss you thinking that one day you lay beside me. your smile that lights up a room... warms my body and gives me strength of a powerful rainstorm. Your soft,smooth,slender hands rub my chest slowly moving up to my face. looking into your eyes that stay so Focused on me started to settle down and close. Her body slowly leans near mine... As I wrap my arms around her one around her waist and the other under her chin. All of a sudden she grabs my hand and leads me to her house on a rainy night. she wants me to come in? I think.... Is this it?this dream?Is it coming ture? I hope those two poems are good |
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Ang Binuang Akoy tutula Mahabang mahaba Ako'y uupo Tapos na po
I am what I am. I am what I used to be. I am Sang!!! Parang engot.
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by Tasuki17502
on 2005-12-23 23:14:43
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Wow. Poems huh? These are much better than my own, but what the hell. I might as well post my two poems that I kinda like. Written by me, as if that weren't already obvious. On This Solitary Road By Tasuki17502 I will always be here, and you there. But, I will always love you. Now as I walk a path alone, you are on my mind. I will never choose this path again, you are not at my side. I look back behind me now and think. We went through a lot. We went from hate, to friends, to almost love. Until I lost the only chance, as I continue to move forward. Unaware of my own mistake, I walk the path of solitude. No soul can ever reach me here, But yours. It can pull me off this road. But I am fine here, alone. I have been for years, so I can be fine now. There is still time, Will we take it? I don’t know. But if we do, love must be shown. Not one way, not the other, but BOTH. Only then can your soul reach mine, on my solitary road. and the other one: Don’t let me feel unwanted in this world ever again. Now that I have felt love, I never again want to let go. I often find myself in a wandering world. With you. I have realized my reason for living. To make your living better. To be with you as much as I possibly can. Even if that means leaving everyone else I know behind. Just to see you. People think that I can just not see you. I have tried, but I can’t get my mind off you. When someone else is with me, I feel uncomfortable and unable to let out the same feelings that I normally can with you. They are not you. I love you always. now I KNOW I am insane..... see what love does??? I don't think even my best friends that know me personally have seen those. I know they probably aren't very good. My poem writing isn't that great, and at the time I was just writing down feelings. In case any of you are wondering, I no longer have love for this particular person. The person faked love in order to solve personal probablems and eventually betrayed me. Trust rivers ran thin after that, and they still do. |
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Awakening... As the blackness comes to a halt, there is life again from a corpse, one rises again to make a difference, waking up in a dark room, nothing to see, nothing to feel, you look at your hands...those hands...can be a form of a greeting,handshake,a form of anger, a fist, a form of appreceation,applause, a form of frendship,holding hands, you look at your feet, nothing to feel but the bitter cold wind, you step aside from the darkness into light, the trembeling soul of hell's minions fear you, cold hands slip through the torso, a sign of red liquid oozes out of your torso, you feel an inflicted pain which is cold,sharp, and deadly, being born again, the life's objective has been reset, it is time...for your awakening By þos§8À (Krosis8a) hehe by me! kekekekeke ^_^ ![]() ![]() |
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when i was trying to find a job and i can't get one because i'm what most people call impractical. here, you can't choose the job you want or you will end up unemployed. i graduated last 2004 april, and i've had tried 2 jobs so far but none made me feel good. i'm to be jobless again sooner. i just resigned. i don't want to do what i usually do this past months. it's killing me. The sky is crying, it cries with me. For I am a failure today like I was yesterday And I will be tomorrow What could be harder than this? What could be more painful than losing? I see nothing… While all else are having fun, Here I am suffering. What good will a new day bring? I see myself still hurting. If things are not meant to last forever, Is failure one of those things? ![]() |
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by kageno_tsuki
on 2005-12-21 05:05:29 (edited 2005-12-21 05:06:33)
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hey.. i finally... decided to post one of the poems i made.. i make lots of poems... but im kinda shy of people reading it... so i FINALLY.. with crucial decision making decided to post one.. here you go.. hope you like it.. ~~dont know how~~ dont know how.. a sudden fleeting image floats infront of my eyes and i see you.. the faded picture of yesterday the rejected love of passing years. a sudden fleeting melody floats in my ears.. and i hear your voice. the faded song of what was left.. the unknown melody of the broken sounds that haunts me.... a sudden fleeting feeling comes back to me... and i feel your pain again.. the pain weve always unconsciously shared... the pain of the scars that will never seem to heal.. then tears fall down.. because i just dont know how.. that your face,your voice... can bring back the painful memories we have left behind.. i just dont know how.. i can keep on waiting.. waiting and waiting.. for that face and voice to pick up the forbidden pieces of what we have painfully left behind.. All of them... they seem so perfect...yet so fake... |
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by yuakara_99
on 2005-12-21 01:30:07
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In every mirror i see myself From my within i race through death... Inside of me lies from a soul.. But i cant fall...fall in love..... With You.... |
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sorry it took so long but i have finally found it. heres the poem i wrote a back in september. hope its good. Sometimes I feel sad, Sometimes I feel blue Sometimes I wish I wouldnt love you You were my sister, I don’t know what happened I was you brother, Fuck, I was wrong We were a happy family, Was it my fault? You said it would never change, But I couldn’t control myself I told you I loved you as more than just friends You said it didn’t matter, That things would stay the same I acted as I nothing was ever said, But you completely changed You said I was still your brother, I said hi Yet you ignored me, You just walked by I’m tired of this Your brother is still here Patiently waiting, but also fading All I’m saying is good bye Goodbye with this kiss Our first and last kiss. |
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by yuyue hirakiseira
on 2005-12-18 21:27:20
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this is from me i've change it a bit hope you all don't mind It's just this way to love you , kill you ... If that could be , It would be a perfect happiness!! After you kill me , You eat my dead body... Cook me for a day and night... Make me into stew . Afterwards , Suck my bones clean . When my entire body has been eaten by you , I can finally become your blood and flesh . Then... I'll belong entirely to you... If we join together like this , You will be able to reach my heart. hope you all enjoy it^^
never regret for what you have done!!!!
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Awesome response to my inquring mind. I had hoped there would be alot of writers out there. Very cool. And just so im not a thread moocher ill give up another spur o the moment haiku or two. a haiku a day keeps the doctor away unless you eat hay please refuse my incessant chatter im full of blather why dont you just tell me to scatter ![]() |
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Very well done red rackham, in perfect english too. Sad though... |
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by :(*):Mangetsu:(*):
on 2005-11-29 18:30:41 (edited 2005-11-29 18:38:56)
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WOW it is deep and strong
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Dedicated to terrorism in INDONESIA I'm Sorry if my english is bad. Smoke still hang heavyly on the air.... High tension of fear still there.... Smells of death spread..... No one seems standing there..... Half conscious i see...... A women sat next me.... Now laying far away in corner of the room.... Lifeless.... Almost unbelieveable i see.... The waitress that seved me.... Head is only the remain of her.... The body might spread all over the place.... Then....the pain hit me..... HURTS..... Then i realize..... Half of my body has gone...... By: RED RACKHAM 2005 ![]() ![]() |
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on 2005-11-29 18:23:14
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Thanks!! ^^
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@Mangetsu, great poem, dude! Kinda sad, deep, meaningful, with a clever ending! Nice! |
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I wrote this but I don't know if it is good. Tears upon my face, burning my skin Unknown emotions, my heart is achening. Cannot find the light in this darkness Using masks to hide what I feel, I’m lost now, can’t find my self, Can’t recognize me Alone... I am a prisoner of my own feelings I can’t scape. I’m living in the darkness I wish I could show my feelings If I had the courage I’ll tell you what I feel But my heart is weak And no words walk out of my mouth Just a silent tear, can you feel me now? The only thing I want to do is hold you tight But when you are near Is hard to breath My heart beats fast There is nothing I can say Nothing I can do If I could only let it flow If I could just say I love you
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roses are red violets are blue if you dont read the rules its ban time for you! :D ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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All of you are very good! Here's one I did for school! Running, stumbling through the darkness, It persued me as I ran. There was no reasoning with it, My pleas fell on deaf ears. Gnashing it's teeth, it came closer. Out of the corner of my eye, I saw a cave, A final sanctuary. Without hesistation, I entered, panting. Suddenly it was quiet. Farbeit from me to question how the sounds of pursuit had died. I hid there, For an eternity, Not happy, but empty, A gleam of light, Cut through the comforting darkness. I stood slowly, nearly without strength, And peered outside. The warm summer breeze, Caught me unawares, As if the pursuit had never happened... Where had the beast gone? It had been so long... Did it ever exist? I was lost in thought, Dead to the world. The rendering claw came as a shock to me... As my boddy was torn asunder. I wondered how it had happened. How had he snuck up on me? Crimson bathed the cave walls, And as the light faded from my eyes, And my screams died out, I saw neither I nor the creature had a shadow. With a grimace I saw, We were connected at the foot. My shadow... I could never run from him... That's it! Hope you guys like it! It's really dark! I don't know why, I'm a pretty optimistic guy... |
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Thank you Ketsuki Heres another one: Madness I feel the pressure inside emotion made physical words will not describe full to the brim overflowing cant stop the swirling in my own head cant stop the thoughts from coming feels like madness discontent with the way things are want to be gone want to be away from this place depression and anger like a stagnant well it makes me sick too many thoughts to sleep trapped in my own mind am I mad has reality deserted me have i gone over the brink too quiet outside roaring inside And for the hell of it Ill make one up off the top o my head... A Haiku For Gendou he sits near his computer filling us with animated joy with wit and wealths of knowlege and since Im feeling creative heres another one Crying tears of crystal crimson staring at the muddied floor trying to forget my secrets ![]() |