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that's...so...BEAUTIFUL!! TT__TT  |
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there was blood on the floor on the knife stuck in the door there she stood standing tall no expression not at all XD- that was guru akitra for you (IDIOSYCRATIC PARTY !!!!)
Please read my fanfics at www.fanart-central.net! Just look up teh user o0Kiki0o (that's me) and you can read from furuba 3- way calling fics to my own poems, and the hit of them all, the original story HUMANE.
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by Mattneedsnoav
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I wrote this one recently... Mainly because I think too much. If you were gone tommorrow, Would yesterday mean more? If you were to return today, Would all yesterdays restore? Would tears of broken future Touch the distant past, If only the promising present Included you at last? --- Thoughts?
They say that rules are made to be broken... Except Gendou's... Don't do it.
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by blueanime27
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Love as its fruit Yesterday my time was free In the afternoon at three I saw kites flying by Suddenly I heard a cry I search for it everywhere Down, under but he’s not there When I turned my back I saw an ego it was black A lonely teen I saw I recognized him, it was Joe A friend I rarely see This time it’s only him and me I came to him and said Hi! But I didn’t get a reply I said “Hey Joe, are you OK?†But then again he didn’t say I sat right beside him Asked him how his life has been But silence answered me Thinking his life is not like thee Then again I said “I’m here†“I’ll listen, I’ll be a dear†Again he didn’t say anything I thought he’s deaf or something I was ready to give up When suddenly he stood up He got my hand and said “I thank you, my dearest Jed!†I saw a face full of tears Mixed and emotions and there was fear This look I could not bear Straight from his eyes, his stare Then suddenly out of the blue He blurted out, “I really like you!†Obviously I was surprised Hey guys give some advice! But his eyes told the truth His heart has love as its fruit I just let my hand stay over his While we enjoy the afternoon bliss    
-what is found here might be found elsewhere but something not found in here may also not be found anywhere- |
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My collection of poems by me Chyrin Cross by: Karuzo In this world stained with selfishness and greed No one cares for someone whose been suffering This world knows nothing but agony Where everything is nothing only holocaust When the strong shall live and the Weak shall die There is a wind towards to the skies Where everybody are only puppets of fate Where the strongest will delighted and The weakest shall die instantly From these injustices I was born from Those who are being hated From their mercies, cries, suffering, and apathy Remember this symbol, symbol that you will suffer And die from your own greed Remember this symbol, symbol that will Cause your own destruction Remember the Chyrin Cross, The symbol of VENGEANCE -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Second Chance By: Karuzo I thought no one can accept me Because of my horrible and nightmare attitudes, My swords are stained with blood My armor is damaged by swords, spears and arrows My eyes witnessed the mercy cries and suffering of people And my heart is dark as chaotic darkness I thought my life will be this way Until you came Your face is full of joy Your eyes is full of mercy And your heart is full of love You came close to me But I evade, knowing that you will kill me But I was wrong You touched my sword and saw the events that I kept for a long time My heart was beating very fast My body is weakening I tried to run but I fell You held my hand and cried I felt the warmth of being loved And I forgot those events and started a new life But I know that I will return to my terrible past And be a part of chaos But you prevented it by loving me And risked your life to redeem my soul Now both of us are now one And we will never be separated FOREVER. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Tell me By: Karuzo Tell me... Does my existence cause hatred? Does my existence can cause harm? does my existence cause destruction? Does my existence can lead to despair? Does my existence can destroy your being? Does my existence poison your soul? Does my existence is nothing? Tell me.... -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Hotaru Tomoe -Death and Salvation- By: Karuzo Do you ever walk on a cold, dark raven night and fall with suffering in your heart with tears of lost innocence Do you feel yourself drowned in the waters of ignorance of This world This is for the shadows that haunted you in the night For the pain that pierced in your heart And for the hatred that poisoned your soul This is for the acceptance that you longed to feel For the darkness that seeded in you And For the road that you forced to take With fear and hope, death and salvation Do you wake up with a sigh instead of a smile with painful memories of the past And do you feel the yourself gasping in the darkness, in this chaotic night This very night.... This is for the shadows that haunted you in the night For the pain that pierced in your heart And for the hatred that poisoned your soul This is for the acceptance that you longed to feel For the darkness that seeded in you And For the road that you forced to take With fear and hope, death and salvation -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- maybe some are weird but this is the only way that i express my emotions thank you  --> |
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I don't know if it's ok to revive this thread or not...but I don't want to repeat a thread..so here I go.. "Just be mine.." Without you,baby I'm lost Tear fall to the floor and becomes frost, On this cold february night that not even the sweetest chocolate can make me smile... You're gone,and I still believe in your love...even if it's not worthwhile I miss you.I wish I could be with you.I wish that other girl would jump off a building. Right now....I'll sing. Our song that's jammin on the radio...although that just makes me wanna cry. I know that,but I try to act tough...it's just flashy pride.Would...you be my..? So,I'll scream it at the top of my lungs! "Won't you be my Valentine!?" I don't care...Just be mine! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Why would you do this to me?" I am alone. Yes I'm silent,as you talk on the other side of the phone. You don't get it. And I won't throw a fit. I saw you with other girls As your double life unfurls I know what you've done. Even if it was just for fun. I was in constant denials As I slowly drifted off millions of miles. Now,as I press the knife against my wrist, And look at your list. With the names of women I don't even know. I cry...feeling so low. I cut deeper, watching my red life as I soon drift off to the reaper. The last thing I see....is your photograph.. When we used to laugh... and you told me what you felt. As I stared into your eyes I started to melt. As we pressed our lips together after those three simple words... And the soound of birds... Filled the air,I love you... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "That little girl" Did anyone around her cared? When that little girl felt scared. Noone seemed to even give her a sparing glance. Her eyes lost in a trance. She was getting used to drowning. Her parents are always frowning. her situation was a stressed hell. She would never tell.. Her hazel eyes that were warm... Has greyed and dulled.. She's fulled.. Of everything. Emptiniess. She asks her self constantly "Why should I care?" But she does and it wasn't fair. Noone cared. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Looking into an empty bottle. Like a magical crystal ball. Memories come back full throthle. Like a cock of a gun. I don't wanna live like my mother. Always in a trapped home. I don't wanna live like my father. I don't wanna give up on my thoughts and give into a lonely dome. She works so hard her feelings break down. Looking into an empty window sill. Until her eyes fill. So that a tear will make it's way down her eyes. She tries... To cope. Her only hope. Is to leave from her hell. She fell... Silently into her own silent abyss. She lists.. her fears... Of having her tears... silently shed down her skin. To her father it's weakness. To her mother,she doesen't care. Her life isn't fair? Who cares about her anyways? About the lost little girl. Her secrets layed in her hazel eyes waiting to unfurl. She looks up... yet she's drowning in the rain... full of her own pain. She's a teenager now. She claims she's an adult. Yet that little girl's pain lives. Her life is just a bunch of lies and fibs. She wishes...she could be like those rockstars on TV. Made..perfect...everything she wanted to be. But would anyone spare her a passing glance? Her mind is lost. What was the cost? To have everything even better.. She ponders. Everyone thinks she's a spoiled brat. Is she? Her mother hits her.. Her father verbally abuses her.. Her brother...always taking what she wants... He flaunts... everything he has.. His friend... Everytime she tries to mend. Her hole in her heart. It used to be a part.. Of that little girl. Something was always missing for her. Family wasn't it.. her heart...was shattered. She cried her black black matted. Did it matter? She was getting bad grades.. The music in her head phones fade... She was a good student 81.1 average and she was always kind.. She never did mind.. when teachers yelled at her.. She knew she was stupid. She always hoped and got hurt. That little girl had hoped. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The fire in your eyes glisten as you glare at me with your eyes. The sickness in your heart dies.. My anxiety and knives pierce my heart. Like a wicked dart. Take your knife and slit your neck. Then tell me you love me and give me a peck. Your decks of cards are running low. You have the upper hand....taking a toll. On my body, mind and soul Your eyes are dull. I remember a time when you were full of life. And now you resort to a knife.. To put an end to painful emotions. I try to stop you but you make the same motions, Knife in hand. I cried, Instead of trying to confide... In your friend....you lied and chose a dagger. I recall.... When you were always happy and not taking the fall.. Now just seeing you is hard. Your heart is broken into shards. I can't stare straight in your eye. So I tell a lie. Of the joy I have just seeing you.. But to be true... I can't even feel as if you’re alive. 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posted this one in Pame/suzaku fan club and shall put it here. XD pame pame She's our lass if she can't do it Then I'll kick your A**!!! XD |
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I am so happy when I see you When I hear your voice clinging to my ear When I see your smile piercing through me When you’re only an inch close to me Yet, my heart aches knowing that you will never be mine Never be that someone you care the most Never be that someone who will wipe your tears Never be that someone who will always make you safe when the world turn around from you I will never be your someone Yet, I still hope and pray that my forbidden love be released from the chains of fate Someone other than you. I'd be happy if you guys care to give a title for this. ^_^ thanks in advance  ^_^v PEACE OUT! |
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Here's the snippet of one of my poems (it's rather...long, so I won't post it all...just a few stanzas) Poetry is my hobby..I'm surprised It took me this long to find this thread!! By Moi, the only me! You step outside to face me, Advancing toward me with whatever you have left. But what am I to help any? I am only the moon, but somehow, your eyes, I have kept. Your eyes shine, and I can see, Within you, you've lost belief. Courage and fear, though back to back, both confuse you to walk down the wrong paths. That emptiness you feel but cannot explain, I see I fill it up, when I engulf you with my warming glow, Like the slow snowfall piling in winter, And I blow away your sadness like the cool breeze. You ask me so many questions, through your eyes, But I see you are riding on the wind of giving up. Even I am waning, but I shall be soon reborn, 'Will I die alone?' I fleetingly fear, But somehow I Know well that next night, You will be here. @Aria: It's not great, but if you're looking for a title, how about "Never Yours" but it's bland....it just came to my head. Or you can keep it just a plain "Never". And my "It's not great" I don't mean the poem! I meant the title I came up with! Please don't misunderstand ( I re-read the sentence and I thought you might take it wrongly...) As to everyone else: GREAT POEMS!! Keep goin'! At least, I'm not the only one who writes stuff like this... And to anyone looking for constructive criticism: Tense is very important, because if you don't capture it right, you might give the wrong message! Try not to waver your tense between lines, space the difference out into different stanzas, or it's confusing. As to others who cared and bothered to read my pathetic poetry: criticism please! I feed on it! The cynic is also my best friend, so hit me hard...I need to improve. ^^ Ja ne!  |
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That is a fact of life All my hope is gone :( That's just a little Haiku. No biggie. You guys are deep! >_< I hava long one that I'll post later some time. Keep writing guys! There sure is a cool vibe in here *nods*.   
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wondered how many butterflies flying inside your chest does it make you quiver by the way i look at you . . or does my presence make you feel sick . . anyway . . . forget those nights when we were together . . and i shall forget your existence . . and bury your memories unto the deep sea . . |
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on 2007-03-14 23:03:30 (edited 2007-03-14 23:04:53)
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*is shocked she has just found this thread* Poetry is my hobby too, although I haven't written in a while. The story goes that I sometimes do these mini challenges for practice, where I get my friends to each give me an object and I write a poem for each one, including or about the given object. Speaking of which, I still owe two of them their poems; I nearly forgot, lolz. But without further ado... Twilight Remembrance Sometimes I feel them slipping away, all our memories of yesterday, while I'm sitting in this room, spinning tomorrow's threads upon a loom Amethyst stars that shine so bright Are they closer here tonight? When the moon in visit tarries and the breeze your soft voice carries I'd like to close my eyes, perchance indulge in twilight remembrance until the corners of your smile themselves imprint upon my mind and I'll awake from gentle dreams with some of your love left behind to pass another night in kind. (object: moon and/or twilight) I figure I'll post them one at a time every now and then, so as not to take up page space with just one huge post. ^__^" And I'll try to make a point to comment on the last three posts before mine, since one of the objectives of this thread is constructive criticism. @The Devil Made Me Do It: Just two things to point out... wondered how many butterflies flying inside your chest Did you deliberately skip the 'are' (butterflies are flying)? anyway... IMHO, the poem works better without this line, but once again, that's just my opinion, so if you like it better as is, that's your choice. @kali-chan: I won't comment on this one because I'm in no position to say anything about haiku, a style I do not know very well and therefore do not favour or write. Anything I say will most probably be biased, so I shall refrain from saying anything. Just so you don't think I skipped yours, lol, sorry. @skYe: I like the idea, but in one or two lines, I think there are too many syllables, which disrupts the rhythm of the poem. I see I fill it up, when I engulf you with my warming glow, The first comma is unnecessary, though it is still up to you if you like it there.  |
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@yumi i aint no poet .. i just post any poems thats inside my head.. mostly their just my feelings or affections on other people.. gomen. and my english is very very bad! |
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@The Devil Made Me Do It: You don't have to apologize... It's not like you've done anything wrong. I was just voicing my opinion. I'm sorry if it sounded harsh. That's not how I meant it. Feelings or affections are where all poetry begin; one wouldn't voluntarily write about something they didn't feel strongly about. As for English, like any other language, just use it more often, and you'll eventually improve. Once again, I'm sorry if I hurt your feelings. That was not my intention. |
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i strangle myself with your words full of hate and admiration as light slowly fades away i think of what opportunities await me and smile sarcastically.. it was not the 1st time i did it nor i did it was the 2nd time countless times i tried to do it and failed, . . . tried over the same reasons.. failed over the same circumstances.. it was not a mishap.. it was my own intuition that tells me to keep on living .. my instinct to forget those things.. to atone for my sins and to . . fullfill my dreams.. i lay down my ropes and slowly threw them away i cried silently as i watch the birds fly away.. it was sad but not lonely nor frightening it was . . . . .curiousity . . . for me not to strangle my neck again .. for another day,, |
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Last night I held a lovely hand a hand so small and neat I thought my heart would burst with joy So wildly did it beat No other hand upon my heart could greater pleasure bring Than that dear hand I held last night Four Aces and a King  |
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once more.. i would like to see your warm smile.. and hold your hand.. slowly taking away your pains.. seeing you full of joy makes me happy as well.. i always think that this will last forever just for once.. may that wish come true.. your eyes sparkling i love that.. your smile thats warm to the heart.. i love that.. your hand .. holding mine.. i love that.. your tears of farewell.. dont be scared..wherever you go.. ill be there for you..always.. |
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A warm embrace Makes me leave This world. It says "hello". It says "good bye". It told me that You missed me. It told me that You wanted me. It told me that You loved me. 
So I drove into a parking lot one time and saw this person pull into a handicap parking spot. When you think handicap, you think wheelchair and whatever, right? So it just ticked me off when I saw the guy come out of the car perfectly fine. So then I ran him over. |
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I just get this in a site.... this poem is so good to understand so enjoy it A thousand thoughts keep pestering me all day long Various faces, glimpse of every smile I recall Echoes of someone’s moan whenever darkness falls A black motif…endless sobbing, mourning prolong I miss the shadows, a lifetime satisfaction An art of someone’s animation No one ever seen any outburst emotion That’s nonsense, just any other apparition! Everything’s blurred, the memories were vanishing I’m defenseless, pathetic and now leaving ‘Hope one day you would see me in your dreams waving And when that time comes, I guess I am done weeping. |
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Illusions of Imagination by RzR Lights in the sky A continuous stream of thoughts Hazy illusions seen by a few The man stares at the picture on the nightstand Wondering of lives past and present Still hazy illusions in his dreams Appearing as figures in daydreams Illusions of the past Or figments of his imagination Memories slip and stir in a cycle of emotions Climaxing in realization Defined by the constraints of imagination Importance of memories in gold and silver frames Never leave his consciousness But, still the ghosts of the past And the present remain. 
  
 
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