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Re: †•Creature♦Cure•† ll Book One Finished ll Link | by on 2009-10-19 20:57:57

†Violetta Mansion|| As Hanna started to open her eyes slowly she could see very good, everything was blurry, she turned to the side and saw someone, she though was Ryou as she whispered his name very low, then in a matter of seconds she felted something was wrong as she looked up towards Dante in a panicking way, as he recites the curse riddle in her ear. Literature in dream... awake!... Suddenly Hanna felted an urging pain flowing through her sick and weak body. So may thoughts passing trough her eyes as they turn dull she tens her body in Dante's arms as she can't handle the rushing pain. She screams and cries for him to stop yet he laughs. The crying pain is echoed around the mansion. As demons are attacking outside as well. Dante begins to push Hanna's curse mark to the limit. As she clench to Dante's shirt, She cries for Rictus presence. The Cursed mark in Hanna's Back was different from the other, it had a different propose, what is it? only Rictus the soul watcher of its doing n the past with Hanna's Grandfather... knows. Ahhh... Music to my ears

Re: †•Creature♦Cure•† ll Book One Finished ll Link | by on 2009-10-19 23:12:43 (edited 2009-10-19 23:13:45)

Meeting Place Thump-Thump A single heartbeat. "HANNA!" And Rictus was gone, crashing through the door too fast to see. Splinters floated in the air as Rictus streaked through the forest. He snatched Hina up without a word and slung her onto his back. All pretense was gone. He was in demon form now, tail trailing behind him, claws and fangs at full size. Wind whistled in his ears as he raced home. That's what it was now. He knew he would be staying by her side from now on. His own name haunted him. "Rictus..." The sound of a soul fading from the mortal world, a desperate last cry. He burst from the forest and into the midst if a battle. Several demons saw him, but barely had time to turn before they were ash in the wind. "RAKE!" White light flashed from his hand like ribbons, obliterating them. He left the rest, more focused on his mission. "Ms. Hina, stop Ryou." His voice was harsh, a growl. He left her where she was and disappeared again, into a second-story wall. Rictus was behind Dante, an arm draped over his shoulders, pulling him close. He whispered, his threat deadly. "Put her down, fool. Her Revelation is yet to come. Inevitable though it may be, you will pain her no more today." His other hand held Hanna's, firm and reassuring. I won't let you go, love. You're safe. I swear it as your knight, the killing hand and undying shield of your clan, and as myself. I pledge my body, mind, and soul to your trust and care, vowing to stand in the path of those who wish you ill. I am yours. So he pledged, once more, his oath as a knight. A current like electricity roared to life in the hand that held Hanna's. His power as a knight had been restored, his life tied to Hanna's own. Drops of blood had fallen from his wrist and onto Hanna's clothes. They glowed gold and faded once more as Rictus began his work. Rictus had slashed his own wrist as he entered the room, and now black vines sprang from both his wrist and the blood already spilled, slowly wrapping around the girl.

Re: †•Creature♦Cure•† ll Book One Finished ll Link | by on 2009-10-20 04:39:36 (edited 2009-10-20 19:46:10)

-mansion- Kazuma felt a demonic presence inside the house and took off towards it "This feeling is different" Kazuma made it to the stairs and climbed down to where the presence was the strongest, the foyer. As Kazuma opens the door, he sees Rictus holding Hanna attacking someone as vines came out of his wrists. Kazuma continued looking around the area and saw something the made him feel hollow. Ryou's demon form that was standing on the foyer "W..What is that?" Kazuma took a step back and fell onto the stairs into the house as his mark starts to glow more violently and the room temperature starts to drop and the stairs formed icicles under it while frosting over. Kazuma's eyes start changing to a ice blue color as he watchs what unfolds infront of him

Re: †•Creature♦Cure•† ll Book One Finished ll Link | by on 2009-10-20 04:49:47

Mansion Night felt a strong demonic presence, and knew that this presence was not Garvolex. He saw Drakar dash off towards the source of the demonic presence. Night starts to get up and ran after Drakar towards the source with lucien supporting him. Night finally caught up with Drakar which is in the foyer. He looked around and saw a demon standing in the room. Night: Is that Ryou? Even though Ryou's demon form is in the room his curse mark did not acted up instead pulse with power. Night looked at his curse mark and knew what to do. Night thought: Perhaps I could use the curse mark but not show that i become a half-breed.

Re: †•Creature♦Cure•† ll Book One Finished ll Link | by otaku on 2009-10-20 07:38:59

Mansion, Foyer, Evening Toru watched the battle in the foyer from behind a door. Who would have thunk that there would be a battle between two demons in the Creature Cure headquarters? This interested him. Ryou, versus someone else holding Hanna. There are two things I can't stand in this world - people who are intolerant of other people's cultures, and the Dutch.

Re: †•Creature♦Cure•† ll Book One Finished ll Link | by on 2009-10-20 17:03:01

RYOU MISAKI & HINA KAUGUYA Violetta Mansion Foyer Evening Ryou's demon form started to take all of it. Analyzing the data of the battle. It let out a loud roar and brought it's scythe back. For a moment it flashed to a concious Ryou, holding a miniature version of the scythe. But it was not Ryou controlling it. It was the demonc ontrolling Ryou. The vision then blurred bacl to the demon. It started to swing it'sscythe at Dante, but Hina intercepted the blade with her bare foot. The scythe didn't even cut her. Hina did a backflip off the scythe, then slammed both of her feet into the demon, sending in crashing through the wall into the forest. She landed. She had not even used her pattern. She looked back at Dante, "Once I'm done with him, I'm going to kill you." She ran off into the forest where no damage whould be dealt to the surrounding area. Hina hd that much power in her human form without using a pattern. It is this reason she didn't fight much. When she got to where Ryou was, the demon was slouched up against a tree, obsiously injured. "Demon Skeith... I would not have guessed we'd meet under these terms... a Sentry demon..gone mad; how pitiful." She shot an arrow through Skeith's heart and forced it to go back inside Ryou. Ryou was laying on the ground unconcious. No wounds at all. Skeith took all the damage. Hina decided to wait till Ryou woke up, and recalled how much Skeith had changed since she'd seen it's last. it's metamorphasis was outstanding. [Ref: Skeith .hack//G.U.] "how did it end up looking like that..." She sat up against a tree next to Ryou to rest.

Re: †•Creature♦Cure•† ll Book One Finished ll Link | by on 2009-10-20 18:50:46

Violetta Mansion||Foyer Night As Dante was laughing suddenly an arm draped over his shoulders, pulling him close, Rictus whispered, his threat deadly. "Put her down, fool. Her Revelation is yet to come. Inevitable though it may be, you will pain her no more today." Dante smiled lowering his head as Rictus took Hanna from him, as he backed away with the unconscious body as he pledge to protect her. Dante turned his head looking at Rictus then carefully studied the others as they appeared he then whispered to himself. " Ummm... Knights with curse marks?... this is different...Night,Kazuma over then there is that Toru and... As Demon Ryou was charging but then the Demon Hina stops him in his tracks,Hina did a backflip off the scythe, then slammed both of her feet into the demon, sending in crashing through the wall into the forest. She landed. She had not even used her pattern. She looked back at Dante. "Once I'm done with him, I'm going to kill you." As she disappeared into the forest and he looks as she douse Bold... i like it! He then turns and jumps and lands on top of the pit of one of the golden stairs handles, Facing everyone present in the Foyer. Listen to my advice this is just the beginning of the end. The protected precious pearl will be the same one that will destroyed and abandoned you all and kill you slowly, like her father did before her. This is Inevitable. If you think that you're Curse marks will save you from what is to happened... you are wrong!. As he looked down towards Rictus & Hanna. Rictus... you know better then anyone is impossible to safe her from her destiny, is... Faith! Non of you can make a difference you never could. As he smirk towards everyone and then black & purple flames appeared as he faded away and in Rictus & Everyone's head echoed. You will Die by her hand, i promise you that.... Went the darkness fall the vampire girl went to play.With the blue rose i will curse you to be my friend?

Re: †•Creature♦Cure•† ll Book One Finished ll Link | by on 2009-10-20 19:24:44 (edited 2009-10-20 19:25:41)

Violetta Mansion||Foyer Night As everything happened Hanna was unconscious while she remained floating in the middle of a garden, with the full moon in the sky and purple flowers, a place where one could hear the sound of the wind. Hanna was among the midst of all. Patterns around her unconscious body as she was there she heard from far way someone. I won't let you go, love. You're safe. I swear it as your knight, the killing hand and undying shield of your clan, and as myself. I pledge my body, mind, and soul to your trust and care, vowing to stand in the path of those who wish you ill. I am yours A current like electricity roared to life in the hand that held Hanna's. His power as a knight had been restored, his life tied to Hanna's own. Drops of blood had fallen from his wrist and onto Hanna's clothes. They glowed gold and faded once more as Rictus began his work. Rictus had slashed his own wrist as he entered the room, and now black vines sprang from both his wrist and the blood already spilled, slowly wrapping around Hanna. Suddenly in that world Hanna's eyes widen opens as the pattens,the flowers and the sky were tied with the vines as they were getting crush by them. As Rictus was facing Hanna she wasn't breathing at all, she was pale and fading fast but suddenly as Rictus tied his life with Hanna's own she took a first breath and then exhale very slowly opening her eyes slowly trying to catch the details of the room looking towards Night, then at Kazuma slowly catching everyone, then looked up towards Rictus as tears ran down her now warm and soft cheeks. " You came for me...."

Re: †•Creature♦Cure•† ll Book One Finished ll Link | by otaku on 2009-10-20 19:35:33 (edited 2009-10-20 19:35:46)

Violetta Mansion, Foyer, Night Toru stepped into the room, saying to them all, "I will fight for Hanna; I would die for her!" This was a test, to see who was on whose side. Those that attacked him were his enemies, and everyone else was an ally. Otherwise, Toru wouldn't even have revealed his presence. There are two things I can't stand in this world - people who are intolerant of other people's cultures, and the Dutch.

Re: †•Creature♦Cure•† ll Book One Finished ll Link | by on 2009-10-20 20:25:47

RYOU MISAKI & HINA KAGUYA Forest Outside Violetta Mansion Night After the festivities at the Violetta Mansion cooled down and the energy lowered, Ryou woke up his head sore. "Man...I feel like I just got hit bu a rampaging bull..." he said rubbing the back of his head. "Close." Hina said smiling and giggling. They both stood up, Ryou a little wobbly and weak from the battle Skeith fought. He decided not to ask any questions, and Hina helped him back to the house. When they got there, everyone was saying if theyd protect Hanna, right away, when they got there, Ryou stepped in, walking on his own, stumbling a little. He walked up to Hanna and got on his knee. "Hanna Serenity..." he now looked up at her, his pattern showing. "I pledge my sword, and my life you you." he now stood up, still a little wobbly. "Now.. can you tell me where I sleep?" He said a little embarrassed. He noticed Rictus let out a sigh and relief and Ryou and Rictus both smiled at each other. During this, Hina looked around, "Hm...where'd that coward go?" In her search, she wound up next to Night, and she looked at him and tilted her head. "Youre...Night, correct?"

Re: †•Creature♦Cure•† ll Book One Finished ll Link | by on 2009-10-21 05:35:29

-Mansion, Foyer, night- Kazuma slumped down on the stairs tired from all the events that had occured today, he watched as Toru said he would protect Hanna and Hanna waking up. "I really hope this is all over" Hina and Ryou come out of the forest, Ryou goes over to Hanna and says his pledge. Kazuma vaguely remembers when he to had made a sort of pledge to serve Hanna when he first came here. The light from the mark on his hand fades away leaving a tattooed imprint. Kazuma slowly gets up and walks over to Ryou after his pledge. "You seem to know whats happening.. can you explain it to me?"

Re: †•Creature♦Cure•† ll Book One Finished ll Link | by on 2009-10-21 06:10:30 (edited 2009-10-21 15:41:13)

Mansion, Foyer, night Night walked over to the mistress. He looked at the mistress and knew immediately she was cursed. Night: Mistress Hanna do you know that you were cursed? I can and might be able to help you rid of the curse mistress. For I have travelled the world, learning what I can, and one of them is getting rid of a curse. Everyone looked at Night in amazement. Night: with your permission will you allow me to rid of this curse for you. Night waited patiently for mistress hanna to reply.

Re: †•Creature♦Cure•† ll Book One Finished ll Link | by otaku on 2009-10-21 07:25:42

Toru looks around, then says, "Sorry. Guess I got a little carried away." There are two things I can't stand in this world - people who are intolerant of other people's cultures, and the Dutch.

Re: †•Creature♦Cure•† ll Book One Finished ll Link | by on 2009-10-21 15:05:45 (edited 2009-10-21 15:41:41)

@srry mistress XP didn't mean to. I edit my previous post a bit.

Re: †•Creature♦Cure•† ll Book One Finished ll Link | by on 2009-10-21 19:19:00

Night||Known As the Moon is placed in the painted sky with star wind is slowly appearing. A cape is heard dancing with air.It was Dante, lying on a branch in a tree, the snow had subsided but the atmosphere was cold, he sights. "Such a quiet night ... calm ... I hope that in the meantime you enjoy your peace My child, because your awakening is unstoppable... He placed his hands on the back of his neck laying down looking among the branches as the gentle wind caress them. Hanna Serenity Violetta... Who knew you would be The Child...Interesting... As he closes his eyes and drifted into his thoughts, thinking back then when he was just a teenager and they were just Kids. Specially her, He smirked. You, some child killed and re-awaken by my Lord, The child with Red bloody eyes.. eyes that hide so much... Innocence as Killer Instinct, Strange combination. Its my promise to finally stop you're life full of doubt and hopeless intentions to be... Human.. Why try to be something that you were never spouse to be? He smile as he drifted to sleep You're one Book that is hard to... understands.... Went the darkness fall the vampire girl went to play.With the blue rose i will curse you to be my friend?

Re: †•Creature♦Cure•† ll Book One Finished ll Link | by on 2009-10-21 19:24:05

Hanna's Room As Hina kicked Ryou through the wall, Rictus shared Dante's look. O,O "I think I'm in love..." Suddenly, he found himself supporting Hanna's weight alone. As Dante backed away, Rictus straightened up. "I know better than even you do. I've seen it before. And I'm prepared." He looked down at Hanna, watching her tears. "I'm sorry, honey. This will be over in a second." He closed his eyes and focused. The vines were wrapped all the way her torso, except for the mark on her back. Suddenly, six black thorns shot out of the vines and into her back. They began to glow, white this time, and the marks on Hanna's body receded. Rictus shuddered, weakening. He put her on her bed, and fell hard on one knee. His demon traits vanished as his strength faded. "Know what?" And with that, he curled up next to her bed on the floor. Restraining the mark was difficult work, and he was tired. He folded his arms under his head and went to sleep.

Re: †•Creature♦Cure•† ll Book One Finished ll Link | by on 2009-10-21 19:45:44 (edited 2009-10-22 16:05:41)

All right, I'm going to answer what Karasu asked earlier, "what elements are still open?" The thing is though, the Sentries have different marks that correspond to their Pattern. As for Ryou, he uses Skeith from .hack//G.U.'s pattern and his demon is Skeith; Ryou is the earth element. Now Hina, is the wind Element, and use's Innis from .hack//G.U.'s pattern and transforms into Innis for her Sentry Demon. I'm basing all of the patterns off of the G.U. ones, and luckily there just so happens to be eight elements to go with the eigh phases of Morganna. Now drake, I'm going to have to ask you to chose one. One elemtn for each sentry, as well as one pattern for each sentry. Now Karasu is a gauranteed spot since Ryou and Hina already determined he is a Sentry. It's a first come first serve basis. Please PM me with your element choice. (Hina's pattern, ref Atoli .hack//G.U.) Element Mountain Tarvos:(ref: Pi .hack//G.U.) NOT CLAIMED YET Element Water&Fire Gorre:(ref: Sakubo .hack//G.U.) NOT CLAIMED YET. With Gorre, the pattern has two elements, fire and wattern, only because theyre is two patterns. If the character who clims this is female, will have the red pattern, if the character is male, blue pattern. Once they first awaken the Gorre pattern, they will let out the mind of Gorre, and have now two personalities. Turning 1 character into 2 basically. Hope you dont mind this one Mistress ^^; Element Ice Fidchell:(ref: Yata .hack//G.U.) Eric-G(Drakar) Has claimed this element. Element Sky Magus:(ref: Kuhn .hack//G.U.) Karasu(Rictus) has claimed this element Element Lightning Corbenik:(ref: Ovan .hack//G.U.) Otaku(Toru) has claimed this element. Also, disregard the hook-arm on this pic. These are only the patterns that the characters for CC have. Element Fire Macha: (ref: Endrance .hack//G.U.) (most likely claimed hy Mistress, any other claims on Macha will be suspended till I hear back from her) I know sky and mountain arent elements just play along. Once you pick youre element I will send you your pattern. @Mistress: its still under debate for whether Hanna is a sentry or not you may pick your element if you choose. PEOPLE WHO CLAIM PATTERNS WILL NOT BE ABLE TO USE THEM AT FIRST! THEY WILL NEED TO UNDERGO TRAINING WITH RYOU AND HINA. I WILL POST THE SENTRY DEMOSN WHEN YOU AWAKEN YOUR PATTERN.

Re: †•Creature♦Cure•† ll Book One Finished ll Link | by on 2009-10-22 08:25:15 (edited 2009-10-22 08:25:40)

Mary's Room; Night After the talk with Kazuma and Night, she excused herself so she could go to rest. She lies there on her bed, in her night gown, and waits for something that could possibly attack the whole mansion again. There is none, so she closes and her eyes and drifts to sleep. The crisp smell of winter nights wafts around her and she thinks of snow all over the mansion tomorrow. Maybe she could have a snowball fight. Stop Global Warming, Save the Arctic. Save the Arctic, Save the Earth.

Re: †•Creature♦Cure•† ll Book One Finished ll Link | by on 2009-10-22 15:44:34

Violetta's Mansion, night Night looked at the mistress. Night: Mistress, ur curse may have been powerful, but like i said I have the power to rid of curses even the most powerful one. Though it will take a long while to rid of the curse, but at least its best to have the curse gone. If you are afraid that the curse will go straight to the person who cast on you, then you don't have to worry, for I have a method which I had done this many time, which will not go back to it's user. So please trust me and allow me to help you rid of the curse, mistress. Night looked at the mistress hoping that she will accept his help. He knew that he himself is curse, but his curse has only one cure and that is to take down Garvolex. Mistress' curse can be rid of in many ways. He only learned how to rid curse five years ago, before he became a head knight. He learned it to help people who are curse.

Re: †•Creature♦Cure•† ll Book One Finished ll Link | by on 2009-10-22 16:42:45 (edited 2009-10-22 16:43:02)

NOTE: refer to the patterns i have posted on the last page ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- RYOU MISAKI & HINA KAGUYA Violetta Mansion Rooms Night Ryou was tired from the events of that day. Almost to the brink of death, he knew, he's been there before. But when he reacjed his room, and sat on his bed, Hina jumped up into the window. "Ah ah ah~," she said a little hint of taunt in her voice, "You can't sleep tonight were working on controlling your Sentry." Ryou stood up, in disagreement. "What?! Why tonight?!" Ryou asked. "It's because of what happened today with Skeith that we're doing this. You don't see Innis running off on rampage's do you?" Hina said, trying to corner Ryou. "Yea..I guess you're right..." Ryou said sulkingly. Hina turned around and faced outside the window. "Let the other's know. You will be gone for about 5 days. I pplan on bringing Skeith's power, as well as yours, to a new level." Those were the last words Hina spoke before she jumped out the window. Ryou stepped out of his room and went to Hanna's first knocking on the door; no one answered. he then preceded to open it, and saw hanna and Rictus asleep on. He sighed. "Luckies..." he said envious. he walked to Hanna's desk and wrote a letter explaining everything. He also asked Rictus to monitor Hanna to see if she was a Sentry and that if he had any time to drop by the Merging for training on using his pattern. "If any other patterns show up, send them to Hina and I in the Merging, we will train them," he wrote. He finished up his letter and set it in Hanna's hand. As he started to walk out the door, Hanna briefly said "Ryou..." he turned around to check; she was asleep. He smiled a little. "When I come back Hanna... I'll be a new person, stronger than ever, just so I can protect you...the love of my life..." Ryou walked out and closed the door silently. Little did he know hanna was awake, and listening.

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