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@ Wizard san - Haha your right, that did kind of make me sime, and your welcome by the way. I enjoy this club :D @Lilith - I love your new poem, it rhymes pretty well, the two lines in the middle don't but that's perfectly ok! Good job! @ Chaotic - She is the one friend that has been there for me though and though! She is my Tsubu!!! @ Bullet - Welcome to the club! Your poem is very nice, but let me remind you to read the rules. Not So Long Ago Not so long ago she would look at me and smile her blue eyes would crinkle and the lines on her face made her seem so beautiful to me. Not so long ago she would lead my horse in the pasture tell me to sit up straight and to post lightly. Not so long ago she taught me about tack and tractors and different sorts of snakes. Not so long ago she fell and didn't get up but she never gave up and learned to walk again. Not so long ago she told me of her dream of her own little version of heaven where she would go when she died and life on a cloud with her mother and father. Not so long ago we discussed the direction of this nation and what it was like to be in love. Not so long ago I sat in her lap and she read me a book she wrote with her own pen. Now she is vacant a mind lost in old age she doesn't know who I am most days and when she does oh how her blue eyes light up and she stays beautiful to me forever. Because I must not remember her final hour, and only keep in my heart the memories we share.  |
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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@ Chaotic - I'm glad your insomnia has gotten better. Your poem...that's you..? I feel like I've gotten to know you already. It's a wonderful poem, I can picture this girl in my mind. She is beautiful because she's strong... If I'm told to describe myself, I don't think I can do it haha. Love your poem! It means a lot to me that you were inspired by my poem. @ Anke-sempai - See? I knew you'd smile! About your poem...it's beautiful. I can feel the motherly love clearly. I love themes about bonds and family. Love your poem too sempai! @ Orange - Thank you. I'm glad you like it. It feels nice to be complimented. _________________________________________________ Well then... this is one I wrote recently. It's inspired when I thought about kids wanting to be independent and some even runs away from home due to bad relations with their family. But this poem shows that you NEED your family, either you are a child or an adult. Title: Weight of Freedom She was a kite Bound by a string She soar and glide Without so much a wing Freedom she sought She searched unrelenting Yet disaster she brought As she heard the string snapping Wishing to the clouds She took to the free sky Elegantly soaring proud Ahh happily did she cry Yet so forceful was gravity Thus she grazed the ground Only silence follows humility As she rests without a sound For now she knew Freedom was too heavy Never again did she flew It's weight she could not carry 
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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on 2010-08-22 20:24:04 |
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@toyumi Well thank you dear~ ^^ @Lilith You're totally welcome~ @Anke x3 Indeed I am, and I will always be here for you no matter what my dearest friend <3 @Wizard It hasn't gotten better, it's just that I'm accustomed to it... and I rather prefer it over sleeping a lot... I think if I slept a lot that I would feel rather unusual. As for my poem, yes. That is me. It is a lot of little random facts, and some descriptions about my personality and demeanor. Well, I'm glad you feel you know me a bit better but... o///o beautiful due to strength? I suppose if you see it that way maybe xD And describing yourself... as for me, it isn't too hard because I think about it a lot. I am very sure in who I am and try my best to be able to know myself. As for your poem... that really inspires me to post my most adored poem I have ever written called Wings of Stone... Anke knows which one I'm talking about x3  |
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on 2010-08-22 22:15:06 (edited 2010-08-22 22:19:39)
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@ Chaotic - Wow, I've inspired you twice in a row...? I feel awesome now... Haha thanks chaotic! You see, when I say strength, I do not say it lightly. To me, if you have endured so many hardships in life, struggled through it, saw it through to the end.... And afterward you could smile and laugh while looking back at those times, and dismiss them by saying "I'm accustomed to it", that is what I mean by strength. And I believe that strength is beautiful. It teaches you to be kind to others. It allows you protect others. Those who possess this strength are beautiful, that's my point of view. "Pain allows you to be kind to others." I always recite this in my heart. It allows me to take on any challenges to come.
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on 2010-08-22 22:55:45 |
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@Wizard .... ._. I.... I don't even know what to say to that other than, you're amazing at understanding people, I really truly hope that you know that. That really is the sort of person I am, I am more likely to laugh off pain or hardships over anything and tell others not to worry because I really am used to it... I usually do smile and laugh, no matter what is thrown at me because I feel you shouldn't waste your time dwelling over the things which are simply meant to be hurdles in our run... Jump over them, don't linger. As for inspiring me though... you should feel awesome~ For some reason, when I read your posts I get ideas, so thank you so much... |
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on 2010-08-22 23:00:22 |
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@ Wizard - I really like your poem, it's beautiful. I would analyze it but I don't think I would do it any justice... @ Chaotic - Insomnia buddies up at 2 AM, and 5 AM on the rare occasion xD Yes I know of the poem you're talking about xD. You should post it later when you get the chance :D |
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Woah! This thread is spreading fast! Well it seems that my lyrics doesn't contains any poem-atics xD I hope it's okay to post this poem here o.o It's... too dark. Is that season again People go on with life While he is lock inside, empty Street life is hard Go against it You'll get double trouble His eyes are free Seeing the things he likes But does his body? Trouble comes to him He tried hard to solve But the puzzle isn't done Angry, misery, whimped He is stressed And not a soul can aid him All he knows is either them or he is left this world And before he does that he wishes you to say goodbye to him Sorry if it's too dark xD I had a bad day yesterday. Enjoy :D And welcome to the new members :D!
I claimed someone that I can't remember because photobucket is ended.
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on 2010-08-23 20:07:12 |
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@ Anke- Your poem is so cute! It reminds me of some things going on in my life right now so I understand it perfectly! It's very good! @ Wizard- That's a great poem! I like how you used the kite as a metaphor. @ Holkers- That's a very nice poem! You're right about it being a bit dark, but it's still good.  |
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on 2010-08-23 20:17:54 |
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@ Haseo - I like it! It's not too dark, no it's a nice level of dark, if that makes any sense... @ Toyumi - I'm glad you like my poem, but I'm a little sad to hear you can relate. I hope everything is alright! |
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on 2010-08-24 09:55:05 |
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@ Holker - its a great poem, even if it's dark, that's just life. @ Toyumi - Thank you. I'm glad you like it. @ Chaotic - That's so sweet of you. Thanks. I've learned quite a bit about you (and sempai) through chat. You're amazing. I really think so. @ Anke-sempai - Sempai~ Thanks for the compliment on my poem! I learned about your friendship with chaotic, when she told me through chat. Please continue to support her sempai! You're very lucky to have her! _______________________________________ Am I posting poems a bit too often? Ahaha anyway...this is a poem that is inspired by someone here. I think sempai can guess? Title: The Strongest Smile She is not a warrior Nor does she fight terror However she shows no fear With every tear shed she grows stronger For her friends she'd go the extra mile Yes she is that agile Faces all her battles with style Withstanding pain all the while She would not falter ever As she protects all she holds dear Unfazed by any weather and error As steadfast as a harrier, loyal as a terrier Why is this girl so strong? Because strength of bonds is never wrong Deep inside she may be fragile But she has the strongest smile
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on 2010-08-24 10:13:45 (edited 2010-08-24 10:16:39)
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@ Wizard-San - Ohhh I love it! It's about Chaotic, no? Haha, and no you don't post too many poems! Here is another one from me, hehe, I don't really like it though. Learning to Be Your Friend Again Its was that first awkward glance, that sent me back into a mushy mess. I smile at you and you smile back at me, and time freezes as we brush past each other. I am being strong, but I forgot how easy I fallout, and the very sight of you makes me hurt inside, still I want to learn how to be your friend again. I didn't know what I was saying, but I can't take back those words, so please at least let me learn to be your friend again. |
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on 2010-08-24 13:34:23 |
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@ Anke- Thanks, I'm sure things will work out somehow... And that's a good poem! @ Wizard- Yes, it's too often, I can't keep up with reading them all. But that's a good thing that your inspired so often, so don't mind me and my complaining. XD And that's a very nice poem too! Alright, I might as well post another poem since I'm bored. I made it up right now, so there might be errors, and I don't think it's too good, but still here it is. She is like a wave, Strong and powerful. Yet she is also friendly and kind, Weak and giving. She is like a wave, With only the moon to guide her. The moon has determined her fate, And has set her on her course. She is like a wave, With many treading on her. They let her lead them to and fro, To wherever their destination may be. She is like a wave, But this means she is helpless Against those who hurt her. Polluting and killing her waters. She is like a wave, Giving life to those in her waters. Providing them with all they need, Whether it be food, protection, or shelter. She is like a wave, And thus she is is strong and ever flowing. No matter where life may take her, She will be able to get through it all. |
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on 2010-08-25 22:24:30 |
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@Wizard >////< I don't even know what to say @Anke D: Since I know the story behind that it makes me sad.. and mad. @Toyumi very nice~ I feel as though there is a theme going on right now xD Here is my latest though, and it is dedicated to my dearest friend who I would give the world for <3 My lovely Anke~ Dearest Anke Anke... where do I begin about her and all? Well, I guess I should start with we met in Fall, We met at school and I thought, 'She's so cute!' She was sweet and kind, even if she acted practically mute. That was day one though, with the passage of time, It became easier to get her to speak and chime. So friendly and nice, I took to her with ease. Though I always found her a little fun to tease. She is flustered easy and a hopeless romantic dear, Yet she seems to stay bubbly no matter the situation and how severe. She is innocent and a little naive but it is all fine, It just gives her a unique, lovable shine. Though she is older she is my 'little sister' I swear, To protect her I will shoulder any burden she may have to bare. I want to keep her safe, my sweet Anke dear... Don't fret, cry, worry, or fear. My cute yet gorgeous sister who I hold so close to me, You are amazing, strong, and great don't you see? I love you like the sister I never had but did want, Therefore my affection for you I so obviously flaunt. Don't ever change, please my shy, quiet dear, You are cute, beautiful, amazing and should have no fear. You may be easy to embarrass and blush so, You may be a hopeless romantic but people love you even though. I wouldn't trade the world for you my dear girl, So do a celebratory twirl. Cute brunette with curious blue eyes, Anyone who says bad things about you lies. So once again I shall say, I'm so happy we met that day. I love you so, And I wouldn't change a single thing about you, no no no. |
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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on 2010-08-26 08:58:50 |
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hey . i founD some lyrics .. can it be a poem ??
I love the lyrics XD~ 
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on 2010-09-03 09:34:26 (edited 2010-09-03 09:34:44)
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@ Chaotic - Awwwwwww *crying* that is sooooo sweet! I love you too! Wow... I can't find the words I should say... *hugs* Remind me to glomp you in school tomorrow! *runs around skipping* I have a big sister and you know what her name is? Chaotic! Thats right! My awesome, loving, amazing, strong, sister!!! By the way, thanks for being there for me all the time! (Now I want to write one, but I know it won't be nearly as good... >.>'') Edit: I put it into the front post, and I still have tears in my eyes. I feel so loved now! Edit again: Poem added!!! Unfortunately I haven't been able to think of one for Chao yet.... I don’t know anymore, what this human heart is for. I used to think it was capable of love, but that idea flew out the window like a wounded dove. I once thought you were the center of my world, and that every pain I had would be cured. I once thought that you would always be there, for me to run my fingers though you hair. I learned one a broken hearted day, that your gone and yet in front of me the rest of the world does lay. The state of my heart is bad, I am stuck within the memories of the love we had. I know now, that I can keep moving on once I just learn how. I have to forget you long enough for me to forget the reasons why it was so though, to fix the state of my heart. |
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O My God!! So many new members and poems flooding in. Will need time to look through it and read through the poems :D Sorry everyone for not posting in for awhile now. Unable to online lately. Will be posting in a poem anytime soon. Anyway,introducing myself again. I'm JO. From the topic of discussion... I can conclude that i normally write about motivational poems instead of life and love poems. Maybe its because I don't really know how to express the feelings needed in a poem, *I'm such a cold-hearted person* T.T that's why i ended up writing motivational poems to motivate myself. (x.x) 
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@ Chaotic- That's very cute, you two must be really good friends! @ Anke- Great poem! There's a lot of feeling in it, and I can relate to it also. @ Jo- Agreed, there's been a lot of new poems in the past few weeks. XD |
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@ Toyumi - Thank you and yes, Chaotic and I are pretty close. We've been like sisters since high school and good friends since 7th grade! @ Jo - Welcome back, we missed you!! @ Riiko - I love that poem, I'm in US History right now and for some reason that poem makes me think about that class, in a good way though ^.^ Nice work! |
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@Toyumi I really have to spend some time reading through the poems. xp @Anke sama Thanks a lot!! Miss you all too~ :D Here goes my next poem. Actually, i did found out that my poems are mostly related to life.(X.x) Hope you all like this one too.*Do tell me if there is something wrong here and there* :3 Life Is ArtLife Such a simple word Yet it can be so complicated. Can I say life? Somehow like a canvas So plain and empty Other times It looks so dim As dark as the moonless night Cold and lonesome Sad and sorrowful it is. How nice if I could ever Make a change to it Shall I put some colors on it? A little bit of blue so peaceful, A sprinkle of green so serene, And a splat of red so tempting, An artwork, Somehow reminds me of love and joy. How interesting art is Changes as I wanted it to be How I wonder and hope Life is an art Not an empty canvas anymore. Yes! No doubt, I will say Life is my art I will change it as how I wanted it to be.
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@ Jo- Another awesome poem! I love how you compare life to a canvas, and all of the references to art! @ Riiko- Very nice poem! It reminds me of a part of a book I recently read too. XD Well, here's a poem I made during Earth Science yesterday, relating to Earth Science too. I don't think it's good, and it's short too, but here it is. And I hope Earth and breath rhyme. XD Rising, rising off the Earth, Up and up off the ground. No more gases, losing all my breath Up so high, ready to explode. But stopped, and then went down. Back to Earth, But then past the ground. Pressure rising in the deep ocean blue. Now I rise, To where I am safe. In this middle ground I got wise, Now on the horizon where I belong. |