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help with my fanfic
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by taku_RazorLemon
on 2006-04-14 11:37:12
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Hello. I'm currently working on a fanfic. However, I kind of lack imagination in the clothes department - I can't imagine the clothes best suited to reflect the personality of my characters. I read it myself from the beginning until the end, and I noticed that I was lacking these important details... So to those with vast imagination (no malice intended), could you help me picture out clothes fitted for a 15-yr old girl who is intelligent, somehow anti-social, and gets angry when others don't get the what's obvious to her? No, she's not a tomboy. She's also supposed to be a short-haired yellow head, if that helps... Thanks :)   |
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Re: help with my fanfic
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on 2006-04-14 11:52:21 |
humm..its always nice to put her in a Japanese Uniform, those can match any girl. idk if when she gets mad, she changes form or if the area around her would like blow up or something, then the uniform might get dirty. but idk, do u have a pic of this, girl? it sounds very cool! good luck with it if I can't help you out 
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on 2006-04-14 12:46:25 |
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or something a little gothic,not too gothic though |
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on 2006-04-14 12:48:25 |
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maybe a Rei type personnality? but I can't say she is Gothic tho' but i've never seen a yellow haired gothic girl before, lol
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on 2006-04-14 12:58:19 |
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i had...um...sakura from da capo XD she could probably wear something normal. |
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on 2006-04-14 13:00:10 |
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umm...creator with green boxes, do u have a pic or a site that has an ex. of your fanfic? lol green boxes, doesnt have a name?
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by Ñ‡ÐµÑ€Ð½Ð°Ñ Ñмерть
on 2006-04-14 13:03:15
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like this? http://www.blackcerenity.com/photos/pics/robin001.jpg
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on 2006-04-14 13:10:21 |
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well Green Boxes said that its a 15 year old girl with short yellow hair that looks like she never talks to noone. its hard because blondes/yellow haired girls talk alot you know? lol
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by eternaltorture
on 2006-04-14 16:36:54
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| cotton dress...lolz. |
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a dark colored sweater/ jacket... nothing fancy... and shorts, or a short skirt. Knee-length baggy socks and tennis shoes... And make her wear glasses, or bangs down to covered the eyes, in the middle of her face... It kinda gives the sense of "intelligent- and a bit nerdy" effect.. Hey, axessstream, or green boxes, what fanfiction is this? And can u write down the links? (I love fanfictions) XD  |
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on 2006-04-14 22:19:50 |
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oh, so that's this person's name, Axessstream. sorry about the green boxes but it sounds catchy right? and yeah u could give us some links to this person. havent herd from you since you created this link a couple hours ago!
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I dont think intelligent girl should be a goth girl. I think the pic from the link that yephar-cmptb (is that ur name? its kinda hard to read) is waaaaay to gothy... lol.... |
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by taku_RazorLemon
on 2006-04-14 23:00:17
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@Devils: is that so... I made her a yellow-head because she has fire-type abilities. Should I change that? And it's not like she's completely anti-social - she just doesn't talk much. She's supposed to be an astrologer. I hope these extra details help @x-Voltz:here Marie's the character I'm currently working clothes on. Due to circumstances of the first three chapters, all main human characters are supposed to be wearing school uniforms. Oh, and it gets a little bit ecchi at chap 4. So read if you will... :) |
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Fire ability? That's cool! But yellow/ blonde haired doens't really match.... I think red or black haired would match more to fire. Dark brown or dark purple are okay too. Yellow hair matches more to light, and maybe water... |
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on 2006-04-14 23:09:20 |
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yeah I agree with that too. Maybe her uniform can be a sky blue color(maybe) and then you cna have her ability to be light, or a yellow or blue-ish lightning effect. and how much does she talk, does she have friends or hang out with her family or does she spend all her time alone thinking about other ppl she hates maybe or something else?
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by taku_RazorLemon
on 2006-04-14 23:22:47
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I've already work out the school uniforms (patterned them out after mine), but thanks anyway - I was thinking of making the incoming characters come from other schools Well, she only talks a lot to one person only - the other girl whom she ended growing up with (though not necessarily her sister by blood), since she was abandoned as a child. She only speaks to the rest of the world either when she's needed or when others can't get what's obvious (for her). It's because of her star-reading ability (astrology) that she tends not to talk very much, since she knows what'll happen next. |
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on 2006-04-14 23:28:43 |
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so she can read the 'Next Page' in history, sounds pretty cool. what is her name? lol should be the 1st question I asked. and give me more details on her powers, if your changing them or not, your pick ^_^
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I just read ur fanfic... its pretty good. ^^ If u r planning to change the powers, it might sorta change your whole fanfic... How about just changing her features?? Well, up to u though... ur choice... |
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by taku_RazorLemon
on 2006-04-14 23:47:46
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Her name's Marie Bogacoup. Nuns in a French orphanage named her, since she was abandoned (as I mentioned). Years later she ran away from there, after discovering her powers. She's an astrologer, and her powers are very much connected to this. She has the ability to use fire and control earth/ground. She can also create meteor showers, though she doesn't exactly use real meteors. |
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on 2006-04-14 23:52:18 |
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so with the meteor thing, its like a mirage? or does she use other objects? She can like mess up anybody at school if they mess with her. when your done, can u show us a picture of this Marie Bogacoup? I'd Love to see her!
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