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typeMARS - My music Productions
Link | by Ryan Light on 2007-11-16 15:16:51
Err... it's not an anime songs, but... my songs :D

MB (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?3edmztztxhy)
MIZAR (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?7gix9kejyg2)
Homeland (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?f2okufvkmwf)
Destiny (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?9wu01uh7z1j)
Neuphoria (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?8pzz1brzwml)
Frame Lightness (http://www.mediafire.com/?3t53tdjhyk1)
Kaze no Tani no DREAM (East Wind Mix) (http://www.mediafire.com/?6zvloyo1izd)
Dark Crossfire (http://www.mediafire.com/?exfnzntwrtn)
Zenius -I- Vanisher (tM Version) (http://www.mediafire.com/?5zuozymnmyy)

Copy - Paste the link, DL it, & Hear it.

and give a comment ok? ;)

Re: typeMARS - My music Productions
Link | by gendou on 2007-11-16 18:30:41 (edited 2007-11-16 18:50:36)
MB
nice beat. clever intro and outro. sort of a simple melody.

MIZAR
solid melodies. too much going on around 0:45, the percussion is confusing.
changing the velocities on the melody would make it less aggressive.

Homeland
same advice with the velocities. it's pretty, but might be better an octave up.

Destiny
lol sounds like ff4 in that first bit.
great modulation.
the electric guitar has some funny volume stuff going on, was that intentional?
chords would make it sound flippin awesome, the electric guitar.
love the harp. i love harps *snort*

Neuphoria
sweet background loop.
love the negative beats!
melody instrument rocks, is that lunar strings?
this is my favorite one of them all.
plenty of speed and lots of build.
make a long version for me, please! XD

Frame Lightness
holy bitch cake, nice intro.
reminds me of the mortal combat theme.
the the breakdown at 0:40 is really interesting.
seems abrupt, but it's got a cool result. i like it.
maybe change the piano to something consistent with the synth feel of the rest?
i like this one a lot, too.

Kaze no Tani no DREAM (East Wind Mix)
wild intro. could be toned down a bit.
transition at 0:30 is tripping me out!
it's a different style, i'm impressed with the uniqueness.
good exit. even though it's longer than most the others, i feel like you could do more with it.

Dark Crossfire
very rockin'. makes me feel like banning an entire country.
do i hear a hint of FFMQ in that guitar riff?
the melody does great things in the middle. gets boring towards the end.
i like it a lot.

Zenius -I- Vanisher (tM Version)
great dance loops.
god, i ♥ the piano + strings!
give us a warning when you transition, like around 1:00. :P
great recovery at 1:30, very pretty melody after that.
maybe tie it back to the beginning and have a more relaxed ending.
if felt like it was about to pick up again, then just ended :(


All in all, very impressive work!
How long have you been playing around?
You use fruity loops, am I right?
Thanks for sharing your music!


Re: typeMARS - My music Productions
Link | by Ryan Light on 2007-11-18 18:08:01
Mr. Admin, i'm very impressed and very touched with your detailed comment T_T

that's right. i made using FL7. um... it's been 1 1/2 month i make music.

once again, thx for ur comment, Gendou Ikari ^^

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