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I want to share you something... the friend of my sister is really great in poems... even though almost all of his poems are sad... but he has a tough life ^^ Island of Poison Tears by: Jesus Daniel Paras When will I be saved? When will I be free? inside this chained heart of mine is pain beyond you see When will I be extracted The anger cushioned pin? When will I be released from treachery truly clean? I can’t see the risk of gambling Because all is see is thee. Thou, the reason of entrapment surrounded by molten sea. Tell me... What's the point of living in this island of poison tears? As midnight shines its darkness, And moonlight hid in fear. I can’t escape this prison Where magma are the walls Where darkness is my ceiling Where no one hears my call comments? ^^ EDIT: I really wanna share his poems I like it wai~! heheh anywhoo.. do you know pastoral poetry? sometimes they answer each others poem... something like this ^^ This was a project for our subject in English.. I dunno how to write poems so I asked for help.... anywhooo... this is our project... The guy will court the girl (me, as if lol) and the girl will either accept or deny... I denied hehehehe Bold: what my classmate wrote Normal: What his reply is ^^
I’m so happy to know you,
A girl who I all charm and grace,
You’ve got the cheeks of a cherub,
And the cutest little face.
I’m so happy you saw not my tears
From a girl of charm and grace,
For years these cheeks of cherubs
Are masks in sweet disgrace.
With hair like silk,
And lips so tender
Each moment with you
Makes my heart surrender.
From my hair of silk, I comb it
With solemn great pretend
Dear, for every moment with you
Are lies I fully lend.
I need to ask you something,
And I’ll give it one good try,
Just don’t say you’re leaving me,
Please, just don’t say goodbye.
There is something you failed to see
The truth in my very move,
I run away from everything
There is nothing for me to prove
I love you now and forever
I want you for the end of my days
I love you more than it’s possible
I love you in so many different ways
I love you now and forever…
But look beyond my eyes
For behind the girl you say you love
Are pain beneath my lies.Cute ne? I like it! wai~! lol 
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-Another Rainy Day It's raining here again today. Or is this just a memory that won't go away? I want to be with you but you ignore me. And the rain falls harder I just don't know is this an illusion or did my feelings grow? AndI know you'll never come back that part of life's at an end so I lose myself in the rain again. |
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on 2006-06-20 17:18:13 |
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Wai....lot of good poem.....hum.... Under the moonlight.... I saw you.... Standing there... Covered by darkness.... Moon's light showering your face So full of sadness and sorrow Tears flowing down from your cheek Why you are crying ? She tell me Her wings are broken She can't fly to the sky Back to where she belong..... So painfulll... So sad.... Unable to go back.. To whoever she loved.... I cut my own wings.... And gave it to her.... Now she is happy She get new pair of wings She fly to the sky Sky that she used to fly before But strange.... Now i envy her.....   |
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-Zombie A battering ram of subtlety endangerment and harm a lie of anonimity has helped raise the alarm My common sense is failing survival instincts gone on the phone and hearing you voice drags me along So now I'm out and saying it in full out homegrown honesty I'm a stupid sh*t and you completely control me... |
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(working on lyrics for a new song for my band XD) Brokeness is inside me Forsaken in the world by friends Now they have shed their masks What should I do No one really cares for me They’re all lies, all fakes They say they can help me But no one really can Friends turn to foe Uncertainties arise all around Who can be my ally here? I know you can No one can be trusted In this web of deceit and lies What should I do without You? Verse 2 I’m tearing out my hair Trying to see the Truth When it’s standing in front of me So open my eyes Life has been too hard too harsh I need something to hang on to Give me the truth, no more lies So open my eyes Chorus When things are falling down Only you alone can save me Rescue me from this place You are my only hope, my love When things come crashing down Only you alone can save me Whisk me away back on path You are my life, my all.    Warring States: NOW HIRING - evil geniuses, corrupt state leaders etc. |
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on 2006-06-19 17:53:55 |
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-Crazy ranting of a drunk person It's the end of all hope run away, run very fast! The great beast has arrived with his minions and servents and will not hesitate to kill without mercy. Pray to the all mighty, and beg for forgivness. Hurry since it's not too late there's always time for one last prayer. I hope your sorry since it's already begun, the battle between good and bad. Which side are you on, the lambs of God or the goats of Satan? I told you to run you chose to stay and what a bad election you made. Satan stood before you in your very last moment And of course you died.     |
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Wait My bitterest enemy is my one love. A lonely sort of irony to know you'll never come. I will still be waiting slowly killing time, I think you're forgetting your concern is mine. I will wait for you though you don't wait for me Cause everything I do I do with sincerity. |
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Wow, no angsty and it's not dark... There's nothing to criticize about it. And because there is nothing else for me to do, here's another one that I wrote when I was drunk (and I was listening to Nightwish): (no title) In my sleep you sing to me and in my dreams you hold me tight you say my name and I say yours and we hold each other with all our might. You have my body and my soul the problem is I don't have yours. My only wish is that one morning it won't be a dream but a true love story |
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Untitled. (Yes... again. I"m lazy now let's move on...) It's with clearer eyes I can now look at the stars and see the pale reflection in the shimmering deception of what we really are and now at last I realise the world falls into view when at last you understand the clarity within the mind unravels till it's undefined and no one's left to reprimand my revision of you Now I see with clarity and new light redefined my concept of reality just can't grasp my mind. |
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on 2006-06-18 08:05:26 (edited 2006-06-18 08:06:44)
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@Moonstone ^-^ thank you!! well...here's another one lolz...this one doesn't rhyme...not like my other poems...just wanted to try something new XD...so might not be good (i don't think it's good at all)...took me a VERY long time to write XP "Neither Stranger nor Friend" Late at night; she sees a shadow in the corner of her eye Somewhere in the room, a spider's head Sprout. He emerges from the dark, licking his lips. His bloody Stare sends shivers down her spine. She beckons from the cobwebs surrounding The room. Now he's moving his hip; coming down his dark Lair. One leg forward, filled with gluttony. His voracious Pleasure comes forth. Leg two steps foward, followed by leg three. His eyes full of lust. With wrath; it's his leg number four, so long he's Waited, he'll wait No more. His crawl is slow, he's taking His time. With leg eight, he steps forward with Pride, and sees her bathed In silver tears. One last time she tries to escape but Was caught in his web. The gargantuan shape made with diagonal edges; from Side to side; Left to right. He smiles; showing his dagger Teeth. There is no more use of escaping, for he no longer Hides behind the cage. He's coming down along his thread, don in black Gown. And with a final strident shriek, Towards her the spider leaps. 
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Lost in thought, Within the darkness. Lost in thought, as a way to Light. Lost in thought, to figure out livliness. Lost in thought, To reminence the dead. Lost in thought, forevermore. Lost in thought, evermore.  |
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I CAN NOT BELIEVE I HAVENT SEEN THIS!!!! THANK YOU FALLEN ANGEL!!! ^__________^ i`m not good with poems.......so dont expect any from me LOLZ 
I prefer being alone so do me a favor and leave me be.... |
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on 2006-06-16 00:02:27 (edited 2006-06-16 00:09:57)
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@red_rackham don't worry ^.^ i'm not a native speaker of english as well XD so my poetry is not as good too...but ur poem is good, i like it! here's another one of my poems, it's kinda dark *evil chuckle* Hell's last fight Life is a cage from cradle to grave, Happiness, a pain we all crave. Blackness; plagues, rules, and fights, Blackness darkens all true light. A crimson coil on a string, Watches as the devils sing. Black as night, yet bright as day, The ocean is blue, the sky is gray. Clouds they cry the tears of pain, Blood streaked joy and acid rain. Cradles fall; a pitiless hell, Graves share secrets, but they won't tell. Hallow nights of suffrage and ache, A body found in hell's black lake. Damnation a sin can express delight, A faceless crowd unwilling to fight. Sorrow in all its glory from cradle to grave, Destruction is a dream, and to the world it waves. First born children heed your cries, For tonight is the night the devil dies. Space may be a final frontier, But the world itself offers many tears. Broken nails; silenced scream, Beckon mourning; soulful dream. From cradle to grave this life will remain, Killing and prying, creating pain. Silenced cries in a moonlit night, The end of the world; hell's last fight.
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Aww...my poem isn't as good as you guys....I'm not a native speaker of English...it's difficult enough to create a poem in another language... Well Here i go ! Dance Dance Dance Dance The eternal dance The dance of live The dance of joy The dance of love Round Round Round Round Spinning around the ring of roses We dance We spin Under the moonlight Dancing...spinning....smile.... Both of us become one Holding each other Till the end of time... |
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I will paint pictures of thy sweet memories with my pains and tears work in harmony together with the tint of my bootless cries the obscure face of woe so then descries paint me a sun that shines so bright beneath the darkness to fill the night and all the sketches that i sought would be the sweetest coloring wrought a precious thing painted most curiously from the heart of the far-off murmuring sea but then came the wind that blows so cold and murmurs to the night with a sleeping note o girl whose countenance so bright where are you oh please don't hide.
http://czetsuya-travel.blogspot.com
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| Ah.. vandalism, one of the many crimes in which I could never understand. "break into" sound much more fun, and that would probably be if you were sober. |
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Just think about my poem of drunkeness,get smashed and go break some private poroerty. That's what I do. That's also why I'm not allowed in Canada anymore... |
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Aww... *hugs Sky* Nasty Joshua *looks at him, snarling in biting like a rabid dog.* |
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on 2006-06-14 19:19:24 (edited 2006-06-14 19:19:56)
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Josh, I nearly cried with your statement. Yep, that was enough to make me fall back in depression. |
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| Hellz yes. |