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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
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*the Critic in Kazuma's hand explodes as well, blowing Kazuma's arm off, the smoke clears, Critic appears standing right where he had landed* Seemes managed to get you this time...  |
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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
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Kazuma looked at his right arm which wouldnt move and was bloody all over* damn...damn...i under estimated him. Is my title reign really gonna end? Kazumas left eye became the eye of a demon and his right eye pupil was a ying yang sign. ah thats more like it... dashes at critic with great speed*  Part of the new age Gendou RP veterans: Kira, Rukia, KM Revolution, Smoker, Avian, L, and Ryu. |
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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
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So that's how it is... *a barrier of chakra forms inbetween Critic and Kazuma and becomes a solid, unbreakable wall, the wall is so foggy that Kazuma can't see through it* Then I will use the full power of the Yashima art... [Perfect, I've been itching for a chance to test out my new bloodlimit I envented. Do not worry, you won't be fighting the sharingan or any other kind of eye technique. I've left all of the Uchiha jutsu behind in favor of this new technique...] |
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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
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on 2007-10-15 06:08:29
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you think you can win?" the figure said as it disappears into the shadows then several needles were shot in multiple direction aimed at the enemy |
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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
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Kazuma grinned and let out a powerful roar then charged towards the wall and threw a powerful energy packed punch at it breaking through* that was sad... he then raised up his arm and a big powerful black ball of energy appearned and threw it at Critic* oblivion! Part of the new age Gendou RP veterans: Kira, Rukia, KM Revolution, Smoker, Avian, L, and Ryu. |
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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
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*Critic aimed one finger at the ball, a small ball of chakra forming at the tip, the shot into the center of the dark ball, Kazuma's attack was dispersed from the inside out* After this day... you will come to know fear... *Critic crossed his arms and aimed his palms to the side* Yashima art, darkened path of needles... *Critic's chakra dispersed throughout the entire arena like rain going in every direction, he then prepared to swing his arms out, readying himself for the next attack* [Oh, this will be golden. The basic ability of the Yashima bloodlimit is the ability to compress chakra inside or outside of the body. Using this bloodlimit, Critic can compress his own chakra, and over a long period of time, store thousands of times the chakra any normal ninja could hold. This compressed chakra prevents hypnosis, and all attempts to pierce the body will backfire.] |
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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
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Kazuma then snarled at Critic then nodded his head* i can still get him before he attacks! Kazuma then raised up his arm rapidly and 5 streams of fire struck from the ground and went straight towards critic. He then leaped at critic at the same quick speed the fire was going* Part of the new age Gendou RP veterans: Kira, Rukia, KM Revolution, Smoker, Avian, L, and Ryu. |
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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
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on 2007-10-17 07:27:53 (edited 2007-10-17 19:42:27)
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*Critic allows the fire to hit him, despite the severe burns, he swings his arms out, spears of crystal chakra dart out from his fingers, Kazuma gets trapped in hail of spears, Critic's body seems to be cracking* [Edit: Appologies, I had tried to make this post a quickie...] |
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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
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on 2007-10-18 07:51:08 (edited 2007-10-18 07:51:31)
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Kazuma focused his enery outside of the hall of spears and suddenly a clone Kazuma is trapped in the hall of spears and the real Kazuma is Charging at Critic* its over! Kazuma jumped up and his fist is engulved in orange flames along with electricity* Dragon Fury! Throws a powerful punch at Critics Chest* (no prob) Part of the new age Gendou RP veterans: Kira, Rukia, KM Revolution, Smoker, Avian, L, and Ryu. |
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"90% Speed, 10% Power..." Renma Dashes using 90% Of His total Power. He barely evades the arrow, as the arrow hits his cloak, shredding them to pieces. "Awww man... That would have been ugly If I Haven't use my 90% Speed..." Renma Point his finger to the ground. "Glacier Path..." Giant sharp Pillars made from ice appear from below Rasetya, shredding him to pieces  |
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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
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*Kazuma's fist goes through Critic's chest, like breaking crystal, Critic's body spears through Kazuma's remaining arm, pinning him there* It seems you have again you fallen for a second double... *tiny chakra needles shoot up from the ground and runs through Kazuma's body, the entire arena glimmers, another form of Critic appears behind Kazuma* |
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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
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*rase feels something moving under his feet, he imediately dash away from his spot and a giant sharp pillar appears drom that spot* rase: wew.. that's dangerous *rase fires another energy arrows at ren. while King B, which were stealth, pounce on ren and tries to grip him down the floor*  |
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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
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Kazuma is now bleeding profusively allover his body but just smirks and suddenly black enery surrounded him* im afraid its over for both of us... Kazuma lets out a powerful cry and the powerful enery expands greatly through out the arena hitting critic and taking a great amount of strength from Kazuma* Part of the new age Gendou RP veterans: Kira, Rukia, KM Revolution, Smoker, Avian, L, and Ryu. |
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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
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[Perfect, and now for the second and only other ability...] *Kazuma blows away the illusion and double, Critic appears at the edge of the arena and holds his hand out, when the energy touches his hand, the energe changes into its opposite, and implodes on Kazuma, the implosion causes the energy to become even stronger than before* [That means you're surrounded by a stronger form of energy opposite of what you just released, and that energy will collapse on you from all directions. Inversion technique: Its never been used in Naruto, or even hinted that it exists, but its not impossible. With it, dark energy becomes holy (still an attack energy), and can be sent back where it came from. It is a bloodlimit I have deemed superior to Sharingan. Now all I need is an Uchiha to test it on...] |
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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
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Kazuma managed to switch back to his clone self making the clone now a bloody beat up corpse* that was close... Kazuma then teleported to where critic was and clapped both hands together sending a powerful burst of enery coming from both sides of critic* Part of the new age Gendou RP veterans: Kira, Rukia, KM Revolution, Smoker, Avian, L, and Ryu. |
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*as soon as Kazuma's feet touch the ground, needles strech out from the floor like before, as the shockwaves hit Critic's shoulders, they are inverted and sent back at Kazuma* Now I will attack... *Critic makes somewhat unusual handsigns, then aims one hand at Kazuma, a typhon strength whirlwind of slicing wind and piercing ice needles catches Kazuma, the power of the whirlwind causes the arena to collapse* |
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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
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on 2007-10-20 21:08:53 (edited 2007-10-20 21:10:10)
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Kazuma dissapears out of the whirlwind and reappers behind critic with a ladder in hand and rams the front of it against the back of critics head* Part of the new age Gendou RP veterans: Kira, Rukia, KM Revolution, Smoker, Avian, L, and Ryu. |
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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
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New Challenger Appear: Umei kenzo(nick: Ken) *walks in the bar* woah...looking at those 2 having a fight, dont wanna bother it *sits down and call the bar tender for a drink* i'll wait for those 2,i ain't a kser.
Never be good when given up,
Fight forever and carry revenge,
In the very deep heart of yours,
Life is always dead or alive.
Never Fight In Life,
NFLI. Peace every 1!
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As soon as Rasetya land on the floor, He steps on Two Bear trap made from Ice, Binding Rasetya to the floor "Now... Now.... Just stands still, okay?" Sensing Heat, Renma Dodge King B Without looking. King B Falls to the ground and Chains made from ice Binding it to the ground the instant it touch the ground. Renma Dashes in front of Rasetya. "90% Power.... Let's see if you can survive this..." Renma Form Ice spring on both of his arms, amplifying his Arm's strength. "First up... Is.... Rock..." Renma Gather almost all of his strength to his Arm. Renma Punch Rasetya's stomach with tremendous strength. |
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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 2)
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*rase shoots an energy arrow to release king b from the chains. kin b immediately turns stealth and activates aspect of beast to itself.aspect of the beast causes kin b cannot be detected by any means of detection. not even heat, sound, of air movement* "First up... Is.... Rock..." ras: cobra *rase easily evades renma's puch by leaning his body. in the same time he fires two arrows at the bear trap on his feet, then the arrows destroys the bears traps as they touched them. after that rase fires energy arrows rapidly at ren chest.* |