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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 3)
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on 2008-07-29 20:28:33 (edited 2008-07-30 07:55:02)
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*Critic lowered his head and smiled* Haven't you been wondering why I haven't been using any kidou? *five giant sealing pillars pinned Kazuma to the ground, the sealing power of the pillars held Kazuma's power under control* Kidou and kidou negation are my specialty. Although, cooking up a kidou strong enough to stop you in your tracks was pretty hard. Doing it in my head and nailing you while moving probably wasn't going to work, plus there was my analysis, and so... bankai... *the ground surrounding Critic was blown away, after a short time, Gigias appeared, and then Critic* Supress... Grand Gigias... I won't give you the time to escape! *Gigias spins with same incredible speed, then flies through the pillars, and tears Kazuma's body to pieces* Out of practice or not, you were still dancing in the palm of my hand... [Description: Grand Gigias is a giant four-ended shuriken with several segmented blades. The center is hollow, and Grand Gigias has changed color to a dark steel color all the way through.]  |
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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 3)
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by zparticus27
on 2008-08-01 04:17:36
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 A Girl appear, out of some kind of Hole from Below the arena and folding her Umbrella. "Ah, sorry for the delay, Let's dance shall we?"  |
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by zparticus27
on 2008-08-01 04:33:57
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*loud wistle noise* "what's a pretty lady like you doing here?" the man asked "Ah, sorry for the delay, Let's dance shall we?" the girl replied "sure!" he slowly approached the girl and grabbed her hands and he started dancing the tango in the arena "your pretty cute, hot body to boot...but i think you wear TOO MUCH CLOTHES!" suddenly 4 whip like tentacles emerged from the man's back,2 grabbed the girl by the shoulders ripping cloth in the process and the other two grabbed her legs... he lifted the girl and looked at her straight in the eye " its a beautiful night to feast dont you think?" he said as his mouth transformed into a monster like state as he took a bite on the girl's neck |
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 Tentacles, Z,, Wtf...In the process of grabbing her, the tentacles make a contact with her hairs, in an instant the tentacles's Heat are plundered, reducing them to nothing but ashes. "I GUess you havent learn that you should treat a lady with respect, no?" With the line being said, A Portal appeared above Z and with a loud bang, A huge Three storey High Stone is dropped, it has a Talisman on it. |
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by zparticus27
on 2008-08-01 05:06:32
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tentacles like Doc Ock from spider man..not like those anime dvds under your bed pal!hahahaha ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- the girl breaks free before his fangs fully crushed her neck as a giant building suddenly appeared before him "your TOO serious you know" he said with a sarcastic grin as the building came crashing down above him the arena trembled as the building crumbles but at the other end a drill like being emerged from it.. twisting the 4 tentacles into his arms he turned his body into a giant drill and drilled his way out of the building before any damage was done "portals huh, your a feisty one, but thats ok, pretty soon you'll learn your place!" he shouted as he twisted his body back into drill for and came rushing towards the girl |
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HEY! How do you kn-- >.> Anyways, You should at least specify before my fantasy goes elsewhere But, then again, the Huge stone Z Is in is made entirely from Renma's Energy, and it has the same plundering attribute. The Three storey high Stone Plundered Z's Heat energy, reducing him to nothing but ashes. "Hey, dont tell me it's over already..." A huge portal appear below the huge stone, and in that instant The Stone is gulped down by it. |
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by zparticus27
on 2008-08-01 05:44:11
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but the tentacles are made from a material highly resistant to heat, plus the spiral motion of the drill cools off the tentacles as it pierces through the stones "dont think it would be that easy!" he shouted as he emerged from the ground behind the girl escaping the building and the portal eating it... then the tentacles doubled its volume, and twisted into four separate drills and came rushing at the girl.. "allow me to drill you a new hole!" he shouted as the drills came crashing at the girl in four directions |
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so controlled means i can use my power to a certain extent...perfect Using his "controlled" power Kazuma let the gigais rip through him but his body became black flames in the form of a human so it did not have much effect on him* ... since kazuma was now flames, it was easy for him to break free of the bondage the pillars had on him and he dashed at Critic and thrusted his katana right through critics head and twisted the blade and used a good portion of his strength bringing it down, cutting critics body in two* *murmers a phrase then looks at Critic* i highly doubt, shinigami or not that u can function with a split body...stay down or i will use my other method which will end you for good...  Part of the new age Gendou RP veterans: Kira, Rukia, KM Revolution, Smoker, Avian, L, and Ryu. |
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by nightsreach
on 2008-08-01 11:12:52
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Toshi enters quietly in the arena. Looks at the ground and mutters "Throne.", suddenly a throne made of solid rock comes out of the ground behind him and he sits. "This should be interesting."  |
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but the tentacles are made from a material highly resistant to heat, plus the spiral motion of the drill cools off the tentacles as it pierces through the stones "dont think it would be that easy!" he shouted as he emerged from the ground behind the girl escaping the building and the portal eating it... then the tentacles doubled its volume, and twisted into four separate drills and came rushing at the girl.. "allow me to drill you a new hole!" he shouted as the drills came crashing at the girl in four directions "Apparently... That was pretty easy to escape if you ask me.. Good Excuse" Portals appeared in front of the drills, as the drills came in to the scene, resulting the drills to enter the portals. At that instant, the portals are closed. At the same time, another portals appeared surrounding Z, countless of them. "Try this on your size.. Sore loser..." Thousands of energy balls emerged from the portals, vaporizing anything they touch. With no space to escape, Z is struck by thousands of them. |
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by zparticus27
on 2008-08-01 21:18:17
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(dont call my maniac character Z, im no maniac!hahaha) the tentacles then turned into a ball and surrounds grendel and protects him from the blast.. since the tentacles are made from an alien symbiote substance capable of molecular fusion and regeneration part of it merged with the energy balls and defuses it within, unharming the host and the symbiote "that's not nice little girl!" as his shadow widens and overshadows the girl "im tired from this portal crap..now die!" the shadows comes to life and engulfs the girl in one gulp then spikes appeared and rammed the shadow casket. |
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Basically, Both of our chars are nameless -.-;; Maaaaan "Speaking of shadows... If I Were you I Wont play with darkness... Open, Lamented Box of Urashima" Before the shadow reaches The girl, a giant tombstone suddenly dropped from a hole on the sky with a talisman on it, binding the shadow from spreading even wider. With the shadows being held by the tombstone The maniac guy and the tentacle that are intact with him cant move a single muscle by making contact with their very foundations of Energy. "Any last words?" As countless portals suddenly Appeared surrounding the girl and the maniac guy, revealing countless amounts of Sharp objects, ranging from Knifes, Lances, noble phantasms, even Pen knifes. (Picture this as a comical version of Gate of babylon XD) "Boundary sign.. Gate of gensokyo" Then, just ike lightnings, all of the Weapons are launched over the maniac guy, leaving no space to move. Note: my char is a Boundary mistress with the power to control boundaries, be it from different time plane or different place XDD |
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by zparticus27
on 2008-08-02 05:31:42 (edited 2008-08-02 05:34:00)
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(hmm just call my character grendel) i may not be able to move but..." he looked at the ground the shadow beneath him suddenly swallows him up,helping him escape the disastrous attack "now my turn..remember that bite" he said in the shadows slowly but surely, black vines creep out of the girl's neck consuming have her shoulder and smashes the talisman in her neck,thus destroying the energy field around her "soon it will feed upon its host,eating you from within!" he emerged from above as a hideous monster like face appeared in his abdomen (think jinpachi in tekken 5) and shoots an acidic black beam towards the girl |
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Grendel it is, Call my char Yukarin But, Yukarin is holding a small knife, apparently it's a noble phantasm. "Rule breaker, revised.. I Already negated the contract the poison has to my body, neutralizing it.. Now, The chain that binds heaven.. Enkidu" A Portal appeared besides her, Yukarin pulled out a chain out of it. As if it's a living snake, the chain fly out really fast, binding Grendel's body. Renma pull Grendel closer to her with one hand and Another portal appeared in front of Grendel, and Ten Noble phantasms shoot out from it. 4 other portals appeared, and Chains shoot out, binding Z's Arms and legs, While countless portals appeared once again. "Again.. You know that I Can keep doing this for eternity, you know? Gate of Gensokyo.." |
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Come now, don't insult me... I was curtious enough to bring out my bankai afterall... *Critic splits into sutras, a massive water frame forms around Kazuma, Kazuma's body is pounded with water element kidou, Gigias returns to Critic's hand* Appologies. I've had to improvise with some of my kidou. *Critic's reiatsu doubles, and takes a stance weilding Gigias in front of him* Kazuma. I'll grant you one more curtesy... |
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by kelreifblue
on 2008-08-04 17:44:04
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A Portal appeared besides her, Yukarin pulled out a chain out of it. As if it's a living snake, the chain fly out really fast, binding Grendel's body. Renma pull Grendel closer to her with one hand and Another portal appeared in front of Grendel, and Ten Noble phantasms shoot out from it. 4 other portals appeared, and Chains shoot out, binding Z's Arms and legs, While countless portals appeared once again. _____________________________________  A boy in blue school uniform instantly appeared in front of Yukarin and Grendel holding a knife. Suddenly, Yukarin's chains broke into pieces w/o any reason.. |
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@Kelrei Good lawd -.-;; Dude, dont barge into someone's battle!! Demnit, Go find your own opponent, Or Im gonna be your opponent after this so everyone will be happy, Whaddya say? @Z please proceed And go on with our battle =/ |
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by kelreifblue
on 2008-08-04 21:33:41
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Meannie Renma TT-TT _____________________________ A boy in blue school uniform instantly appeared in front of Yukarin and Grendel holding a knife. Suddenly, Yukarin's chains broke into pieces w/o any reason.. ............ then suddenly, Yukarin and Grendel realized it was just a sudden illusion and things get back to the normal heat of the battle while a girl with green hair, hiding behind the arena instantly disapeared XDDDD |
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by nightsreach
on 2008-08-05 08:52:10
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"Come now. I'm looking for an opponent." Toshi said out loud to noone in particular. [My first arena battle, so be gentle with me whoever decides to face me. xD] |