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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by seraphicangel_jibrille on 2007-03-16 09:57:06
freya was shocked.

freya whispered: he cheated. taking the body of a poor human is just inhumane.

I WILL KILL YOU ONE DAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

then a sudden energy beam has been emitted from freya's soul.

freya: DARK!!!! LIKE YOU!!!! I TOO!!! AM A SPIRIT!!!! I AM A SOUL!!!! MY BODY IS RITE THERE AT SOME REMOTE CORNER OF THE ARENA!!!!! IT IS HELPLESS!!!!!!!!!

I AM ALL THAT IS LEFT!!

freya gave another blue energy.

then activated her inner living being. there lived in her viens a powerful celestial being.

she is the angel of the water and the winds.

she possessed a paragon of beauty that so many of the angels loved her.

she was god's seraph. his cherubim. his messenger. she is the conciousness that whispers so gently in the wind.

she has been ruled by the great oceans after the Great War between God and Lucifer.

she was the Ocean Angel Jibrael.

she emerged b4 kokuyoku.

she was (and perhaps still is) one and only Love of Kokuyoku's Life.

they did love each other profusely until something happened between them while the Great War happend.


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by on 2007-03-16 10:40:23 (edited 2007-03-16 10:42:47)
*Dark's spirit form disappears into the spirit realm. Kokuyoku stops in his tracks at the sight of Jibrael*

Kokuyoku:You...the Goddess that foresaw this event. But too late, you are nothing to me. My heart is as empty and dark as the voids of Space. My loyalties lie with myself and only myself. God and Lucifer can have their fun without me. GWA HAHAHAHAA!!

*Kokuyoku starts to bend the space time continuem and begins warp to the future dimension. meanwhile in the spirit realm*

Dark: hmmm...how boring...I thought this was gonna be fun...but apparently not...

???:So...you finally died, eh, Kokuyoku?

Dark: I know that voice ANYWHERE...

*Dark pulls out a feather for another battle*


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by seraphicangel_jibrille on 2007-03-16 10:44:34
jibael: u r lying to me. why? i still believe that u love me.

and did i forsee this event.

god is very disappointed with u. and lucifer is just using you.

jibrael blocked everyone of kokuyoku's way with the cryptic shield.

jibrael: u cant lie to me anymore, darling. just stop this madness rite now. u cant do both lucifer's and god's service anymore. u can only choose one of them my love.


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by on 2007-03-16 10:57:00 (edited 2007-03-16 10:57:23)
*Kokuyoku yells out his frustration shattering the dimensional void and cracking the more powerful Cryptic shield of Jibrael*

Kokuyoku: I chose my path of existance. I am what I am. I shall do my bidding with life. Even those Highly Ranked Gods cannot do much to me. My skills far surpass those of any god. He hath not created me, but the Matter of Valhalla and The Flames of Nusphilheim hath bourn me to this realm. I am a Celestial, and I am the Divine. I am what I am. I am no more human than you where back then in 1384 B.C. How Nostalgic this seems...but no matter...begone. I will not see your face nor shall I take it henceforth.

*Meanwhile*

KABOOOM!!! Crack Shhhhh---BOOOM!!!

Dark:DAMN YOU KRAD!!

*Dark sends volley after volley of Feathers in which Krad deflected while Krad holds Dark's Toki no Kusabi*

Krad: I've waited a long time for this revenge, Dark! After you sent me through the Black Mirror, I lost my Physical form and had to resort to this crappy spirit body!! I'll have yOU!!!

*Krad strikes Dark with the Toki No Kusabi*

Dark: AAAAAGGGHH!!!! nnngh...NNNNAAAAAGGHH!!!

*Krad smirks vilely*

Krad: Yess...does it hurt, Dark? remember, this body is now all yours, you have no one to transfer with. hah hahahhahahahAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA!!!


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by seraphicangel_jibrille on 2007-03-16 11:05:37
jibrael: u r lying to me again darling. i am just like u kokuyoku. a celestial being.

as she said this teh cryptic shield reformed.

jibrael: for years and years u have been hiding from me cuz u feel guilty. u duelt in guilt. u lived in fear of me. why? what did i ever do to you? wat went wrong between you and me? nothing.

but u slayed me. tortured me. hurt me. killed me many times. irked me.

but i remember that u never took pleasure from my pains. nor did i yours.

the world is only made of two principle realms. heaven and hell.

so u can do your bidding under either lucifer or Our holy lord.

why did u call me a goddess just a minute ago.

jibrael came closer to kokuyoku.


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by on 2007-03-16 11:19:56
*Kokuyoku floated farther away from Jibrael*

Kokuyoku: Stay away from me. I have but one recluse where my bidding is forever. A place where I know peace from both realms of the spirit world. I cannot deny nothing went wrong. But I will continue to hide until you find the truth.

*kokuyoku disappears without any trace of where he went. A Decoy as it would be called*


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by seraphicangel_jibrille on 2007-03-16 11:24:36
jibrael disappeared as well.

b4 kokuyoku was able to do anything, she tied an invisible string around him which he didnt notice.

infact this string was attached to her and kokuyoku ever since they had their first kiss. kokuyoku did it himself.

jibrael easily found it.

jibrael: wat truth? there was nothing to hide. IT WAS A MISUNDERSTANDING!!! WHY DONT U UNDERSTAND!!!!!


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by on 2007-03-17 18:20:06
*Kokuyoku thinks in his mind:If you do not remember...then you are truly lost to me...*

[meanwhile]

*After Hours of fighting Dark and Krad have stalemated to the last bleeding excessively*

Dark:huff....hfff...hfff....heh...Didn't know you would have trained...thought you would have watched tv and left me alone...

Krad:huff...hufff...hfff....true...but you would have come here anyways...why wait when I can have my revenge...?

Dark: ?!? So...you placed those lies into my other being...heh...just like you Krad...vile...boring...and just plain stupid...IT WON'T LAST!!!

*Dark again attacks Krad*


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by Jinseta Ava on 2007-03-17 19:38:48
Ayame: *leans over Critic's shoulder* So... do you wanna fight me next?

Critic: And give you even more tatical info on me, I don't think so.

Ayame: Oh well... guess I'll just leave and go find so more kids to use... *vanishes*

Critic: Damn her! *vanishes*

----

*a woman appears on the battlefield where Freya and Dark are fighting, wearing black clothing and a katana sheathed in blood-soaked bandages, her hair was very long and a searing-red, her eyes were also red, she gazed around the battlefield, taking in the surroundings*

The Paper

Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by seraphicangel_jibrille on 2007-03-17 22:05:30
jibrael: kokuyoku. i read your mind. and i know that even there deep in your conciousness that u dont mean it. i know that u really want me back. i do remember everything.

lets just just recapatulate on wat happend back then.

we both witnessd about the rebel angels planning against god. we also overheard wat he said about god that it was better for him to be the king of hell than to be the servant of heaven.

the only way he could do that was try to corrupt me.

so then u locked me up with the other angels in the garden of eden. did u know how painful it was to go thru. not able to see u again and all i could do was to pray that u will come back.

and then u once again released me just so that u could torture me, slay me, say words of condemnation and imprisond me in the oceans.

tell me wy u did that kokuyoku? why?


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by on 2007-03-17 22:10:42
Kokuyoku: ...I have no explaination. Lucifer had no deed within my being. I am my own. As is Thy lord and Thy Demon. I am a God...An Angel no longer. My reasons...my...reasons...

*Kokuyoku continues his flight*

[meanwhile]

Dark: hff...hfff...damn you are persistant...as always throught eternity, eh?

Krad: hffff...hfffff...indeed...but I WILL finish you off if it's the last thing I do...

Dark: hfff...heh...hfff..heh...bring it on...Panzie...

*krad urked as ever attackes like a tired warrior as does Dark*


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by seraphicangel_jibrille on 2007-03-17 22:28:35
jibrael finds him once again and say: your reason... if u really r a god... then why do you show so much pride. why r u tainted with a sin called pride. pride and wrath follows everywhere around you. therefore u cannot be a god.

and there is no such thing as an evil god.

becuz and evil god cannot be a god but a treacherous rebel angel.

i have never done anything bad to you besides love you with all my heart.

jibrael wept as she said this.

jibrael: why dont u believe me koku dear?


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by on 2007-03-18 09:43:56
Kokuyoku:With Pride comes conceited thoughts...with that comes hatred to others...and with that comes the death and sorrow of many...with that, there comes the realization of ones mistakes...and with that..comes the revenge. Find your truth with your God...as Gods can make Wills, they have the ability to block certain things if the Will hath seen too much. Odin of Valhalla hath done so...Buddha and Allah hath done so, Zeus of Olympia hath done so, and so hath our God. Find your truth there. God IS all knowing...


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by seraphicangel_jibrille on 2007-03-18 13:02:37
Jibrael: i know the truth. and u have been mistaken. u already had your revenge by hurting my earthly form of the human girl freya. u have hated me for a while.

while jibrael said this kokuyoku's heart and soul began to fill with deep love for her. but he still hold's his stubborness.

jibrael sensed this.

i have done the same sin as you did. pride. i now know my mistake.

but you have to admit that u made a mistake as well.

then a deep voice came thru.

???: that's rite kokuyoku. u have made a terrible mistake in hurting your poor little fairly girlfrend.

Lucifer emerged in between them.

Lucifer: betraying me and god so u can make your own paradise. tsk tsk. now that was quite extraordinary. but no matter wat u do u will never b as powerful as god or as me. u wont even b a lesser god but the inner body of a flirtatious human phantom.

Lucifer turned his attentions to Jibrael.

Lucifer: and hello there beautiful one. it has been a long time. u finally emerged.


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by Blind-Kitsuneblind-kitsune on 2007-03-18 13:11:50
*ronin watches all from a hiding spot an arrow on his bow string the arrow head a 30mm HE round (HE=High Explosive)* (*man this is interesting*) (**)=thought


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by seraphicangel_jibrille on 2007-03-18 13:23:39
Jibrael: Lucifer

Lucifer: i missed u.

Jibrael: well i didnt.

Lucifer: and i was looking forward towards the day of our wedding.

Jibrael: i will never ever ever marry you.

Lucifer: u didnt know kokuyoku. that i was the one behind all of this. i was the one who put you r relationship on the rocks.

would u like to know how my dear comerade.

after that. i am going to kill you and take your girl with me. she will live with me forever.

wont you jibrael.

Jibrael just stared at him with her beautiful eyes flashing angrily.


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by Blind-Kitsuneblind-kitsune on 2007-03-18 13:59:33
(*Kill Freye oh no! not on my watch*) *risesand begins firing arrow after arrow at Lucifer each on hitting him and exploding* Leave her ALONE!


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by seraphicangel_jibrille on 2007-03-18 14:04:22
Lucifer stayed indifferent and unharmd.

Lucifer: hmph. pathetic wolf.

then he flayed the wolf away. the wolf landed bleeding and screaming.

Lucifer: he exaggerates. the wolf has healing powers so he can take care of himself. now shall we hear my story on how i spurnd your pathetic little relationship.

Jibrael: it was u all along.

Lucifer chuckled evilly.


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by Blind-Kitsuneblind-kitsune on 2007-03-18 14:07:12
*Ronin rises healingup* you freak *he rushes towards him katana raised* Leave my friend alone *begins slashing at Lucifer with katana*


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued)
Link | by seraphicangel_jibrille on 2007-03-18 14:12:07
lucifer again stayed indifferent.

lucifer: back off u stupid wolf. this is our biziness.

freya's soul: ronin. nothing is going to happen to me now. not yet.

let us just leave it to kokuyoku, lucifer and Jibrael. if Jibrael dies then so will i. and you see she is not dead yet so i am perfectly safe.

.............

kokuyoku's mind has been swimming with memories of him and jibrael together making romance and loving each other, and making promises to each other.

kokuyoku: and i was such a fool. to hurt the one i truly ever loved.


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