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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 3)
Link | by on 2008-06-06 18:40:53
Blocks the relesed energy that Z absorbed frommy preiveous attack with my broad sword and re absorbs it

"guess lightning won't work on you..."

deativtes his ARM and de merilizes his sword

"I guess I hve no choice but to try that in myleft hand magic power....."


xero's left hand glwos with powerful magic enrgy

"in my right hand chi"

xero's right hand releses enurmous amounts of chi

"put them together and KANKA HO"

xero put's hi lef nd ight ha together, very powerful cloak of fused ci and mgic energy is srounding xero, he mterializes a sword with an axe like blade

"the sword tt cut'sanyting in it's path.... Zantetsuken"

Xero dashes towad Z but after step he disapears and reapears instantly infront of Z giving hmno time o react, xero slashes his armor, destroyig itthn backs away from Z and prepares for his attack


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 3)
Link | by Renma on 2008-06-06 23:13:20
Renma teleported away just in the nick of time, before Kazuma Shot him. He appeared midair, Grabbing one of his Knife.

"Heh, It's more than enough...."

Renma Toss his knife towards Kazuma's Chest.


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 3)
Link | by zparticus27 on 2008-06-07 05:21:51
the figure was sliced in half and exploded...

the real zparticus rolled around and vaguely evaded the attack

"too close..." he said as he swiped the sweat off his face

the moment xero appeared behind him, the nanites sensed the incomming attack and automatically activates the doppelganger, a hollow clone created from nanomachines resembling the host's body, it takes and absorbs the damage instead of the host, the downside is that it uses half of the nanites in the nanotech armor...

"that's more like it!" he said as he stood up and shaped his right arm into a blade...then in one swipe the blade ignites

the armor boosters acitvated,he then dashed around circling xero in a ring of fire

the heat from the flames created an several illusions, confusing the target,

this continued for 2 minutes with zparticus moving up to the speed of sound(his body can handle it as he is already part cyborg)

"ERUPT FROM THE GROUND,HAOMARU!"

he summoned his mythical beast and a flame dragon erupted beneath xero,burning him as it grabbed the warrior as it continued to ascend...after reaching a high enough altitude, the dragon then decended heading straight for zparticus,with xero incapacitated in its fangs


"its not over yet...IMPUSLE NOVA!"

the circular flame then gets absorbed into his left handcreating a spherical ball of fire, it's temperature rivals that of the sun(he can withstand this since he can control and withstand temperature,powers of his heavenly arm...if it was his right hand, a cybernetic implant, heavy concentration is need to control the temp of the hand(to prevent burning) and the temp of the sphere)

he leaped into the air as his fist and the dragon's fangs clashed
crushing xerovlade with EXTREME FLAMES...burning him in kingdom come

he landed on the ground with his right arm burned...as the nanomachines slowly regenerates it

Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 3)
Link | by on 2008-06-08 01:11:26
as Z preforemed the impulse nova, xero cut Haomaru's fangs he was incapaciteted with...

"I told you this sword can cut anything"

xero got free from haomaru and get away from it's fangs but was still going down due to the air current fo haomaru's flight

"dimensins and space included"

xero cuts the space below him creatinf a cut in the barrier seperating dimensions and enters it, saving him from the falmes that was suposed to burn him.

as Zaparticus was on the ground, another cutin the barrier apeared in fron of him, out came a xero bleeding from haomaru's fang and some scorch and burs on his clothes and several parts of his body....

"that was too close..."

Xero dashes towards zaparticus, three shadow clones apear around zaparticus each weilding a zantetsuken, then charge one at a time, anticipating the doppelganger move,


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 3)
Link | by on 2008-06-08 10:25:44
Kazuma holds out his hand and a black hole swallows the knife*

...

he then leaps up and renma and punches him in the face then on the chest sending him down to the ground*

heh...

before renma can even do anything kazuma holds out his hand and the same knife renma threw at him was what came out of the black hole that was in front of renma and it pierces right through his heart*

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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 3)
Link | by zparticus27 on 2008-06-09 21:32:56 (edited 2008-06-09 21:33:13)
Xero dashes towards zaparticus, three shadow clones apear around zaparticus each weilding a zantetsuken, then charge one at a time, anticipating the doppelganger move,

"OMEGA FLARE!" he shouted as the ground within a 10 meter radius burned in flames.burning the clones and xero,giving him time to counter attack

the clones dissapeared leaving xero in a burning state..

"lets try this again!" he shouted as he flashed step toward's xero

flashing stepping is one of his weaknesses as he never truly mastered this shinigami technique

in a single step he dashed towards xero and performed the DRAGON FANG THRUST! a 9 consecutive thrust attack aimed at the 9 vital points of the human body

but he missed by the 9th thrust, the thrust to the forehead and he stumbled on the ground

"tch, out of luck" he sighed

but the move was strong enough to incapacitate the opponent for a few seconds(instead of the usual 18 sec)

"and the finishing move!ATLANTIS STRIKE!" he leaped into the air as the nanomachines coated his right leg with beam laser, he then Kicked xero, straight in the body (similar to the rider kick) sending him to the burning debris

Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 3)
Link | by Renma on 2008-06-10 05:24:56
Kazuma holds out his hand and a black hole swallows the knife*

...

he then leaps up and renma and punches him in the face then on the chest sending him down to the ground*

heh...

before renma can even do anything kazuma holds out his hand and the same knife renma threw at him was what came out of the black hole that was in front of renma and it pierces right through his heart*

"That wasn't a smart move I must say..."

The Black Hole is suddenly Flashing a Bright light, as Renma Altering the Time and Space surrounding the Knife. The Black hole Implodes and it Shrinks Really fast, Then it becomes a Mere Dot in thin air and disappear.

"By Altering Time Surrounding my Knife.. I Forced the Black Hole to Rewind itself just like Watching a Video.."

Noticing Kazuma has leaped, Renma just Smiled.

"Don't you realize that You've been surrounded"

Before Renma can even finished his words, Jets of Lights are Flashing everywhere, Stabbing Kazuma Mid-air. Kazuma's Life force has been taken along with the Flying Knifes.

"Those Knifes are actually Damaging your Life Force instead of your physical Form."


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 3)
Link | by on 2008-06-10 23:14:21
"OMEGA FLARE!" he shouted as the ground within a 10 meter radius burned in flames.burning the clones and xero,giving him time to counter attack

Xero quickly materializes a sword

"this is a cursed sword but it's the only one that can save me at this point" was his though as he activated the sword's true power

Z attacks hit and from the burning debris a figure stood up, a dark purple aura covers him and he releaes a roar the flames disapear. xero was now in a blue armor, with his right hand transformed into a demon like hand(think nightmare from SC2) he lloks at Z with his red glowing eyes and swung the sword he materialized moments ago and a purple energy wave was released towards Z, before the wave hit Z it split into 100 smaller waves that came to hims from all direction.


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 3)
Link | by zparticus27 on 2008-06-11 07:49:06
as zparticus as about to be spamed by the purple beams

"damn, this is the worst possible timing" he complained as the nanites were still regenerating

"HAOMARU!" he shouted and haomaru emerged from his right arm and covered zparticus from the beams

as the smoke clears a magma crusted dome was seen protecting zparticus

"TIME TO END THIS! FLARE DRAGOON!!"

the dome ignited and a flame-beast entity emerged from the ruble

"By the burning blade..i SUMMON THE ETERNAL FLAME!"

the very flames that ignites HELL..covered haomaru..the undying flame that means melts anything in its path


"DESTROY HIM!"

hthe dragon flew and went straight at xero,burning everything in its path

but before xero could rip to another dimension

"ITS TIME! ACTIVATE NEGATIVE ZERO!"

the 20 meter radius around xero was covered in black energy, the nanomachines planted on the ground activated their magnetic pulse and created a black hole around xero, trapping him in the radius

"THERE's NO ESCAPE! HAOMARU! eight dragon FLASH!"

the eternal flame divided to 8 dragons and engulfs xero in all eight directions...

"its over!"

Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 3)
Link | by on 2008-06-11 10:19:20
Kazuma takes the damage and falls to the ground*

...agreed not my smartest move

Kazuma then raises his hand and a black aura shot up from the ground and consumed renma before renma could make a last minute move*

there you've been stripped of your little "magic" attacks...and to be fair...

the same aura then consumes kazuma and he gets up with his fists clenched*

lets settle this like real men shall we?

Part of the new age Gendou RP veterans: Kira, Rukia, KM Revolution, Smoker, Avian, L, and Ryu.

Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 3)
Link | by Renma on 2008-06-11 17:30:00
"Too bad.. A True warrior always Think 5 Steps ahead of his Foe..."

5 Gigantic Knife, Imbued with Time Freezing Property, Stopped the Black aura right in the spot. Started to undo the Black aura, Returning it to nothingness.

"I've already set up my Knifes around me so that they will React to any Hostile force... Let's just say.. They are frozen in time.. Speaking of which... Your Legs and arms Are frozen as well, Don't you think?"

It appears that Kazuma's Legs and Arms that took the Damage earlier are Frozen. But not because of Ice, but Time has stopped moving on Their arms and Legs. Renma Started tossing knifes again, But instead of going directly to Kazuma, The knifes stopped mid air. Then Renma Moves Circling Kazuma while throwing Knifes. All of the Knifes are now surrounding Kazuma.

"Any Last words?"

Without even listening to Kazuma's last Words, Renma Release the time binding, and Thousands of Knifes are Piercing Kazuma's Body.


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 3)
Link | by on 2008-06-11 18:09:04
As 8 dragon flash near xero, he releases a vey powerful barrier of energy that protects him from the flames, it will hold but not very long on his current state of power.

He roars in rage and anger and uses both to incerase his power, the purple aura covers him and he lets out one very powerful roar, along with an outburst of power and energy, pushing the flmaes back along with destroying anything anything his energy reached. creating a clearing in the negative zero.

when the outburts was finished there was a dome barrier around the arena and the eternal flame was outside it, Z and xero inside on a barren and leveled colesium. xero's rage took charge and he rushed at Z, his sword emiting a purple energy, he slashes Z, his sword ignoring any defences his nano armor gave him as it cut straight thur it


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 3)
Link | by on 2008-06-12 10:32:04
once again you are never wrong...

The kazuma that got attacked just became a whiff of smoke*

its true i disabled my own energy as well but while i made that statement i used the last bit of what i had too make that kazuma u attacked, nothin but a dummy...

i know i might lose but hey what the hell...i had a blast

kazuma appears from under the arena and tackles renma head on and a portal opens up behind renma and kazuma is able to release his grip on renma there fore renma is the only one going in the portal and it closes up, disabling renma from his abilities*

my friend dont even try to wiggle your way out of this one...that portal his once and for all stripped you from any powers and by the way

kazuma then snapped his fingers and the portal explodes with renma trapped in it*

ill take the victory...

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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 3)
Link | by Renma on 2008-06-12 16:52:52
"Che.. Somehow I Know the ending will be like this.. Too bad, I Guess my playtime is over, no? Besides,, Those Abilities I Used earlier wasn't even mine in the first place, so You can't strip me for something I Don't have Can you?"

The Portal Closed up, But a New dimensional hole is being Cut up, Appeared besides Kazuma, Thousands of Knifes are spraying from the Portal, piercing Kazuma's Body.

"Miss me?"

Holding a Glowing blue Knife, Renma step out of the Newly cut up portal.

"For your information.. I Haven't even use any of my ability yet... So, please make this fight more enjoyable so I Can use my ability to the max..."

Renma Started tossing Knifes again towards Kazuma


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 3)
Link | by on 2008-06-16 08:19:42
Kazuma dodges the knives then leaps up and strikes renma right through his chest with his katana*

more interesting eh?

Kazuma's blade glows and theres an explosion, blowing renma to the ground with a huge hold in his chest*

kazuma then lands on the ground and gets in a stance*

eh...man ive lost my touch -.-. This is gonna be my final and last fight here...better make it worth while

Kazuma then murmurs a phrase and charges renma onca again, finishing the phrase*

here goes...

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Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 3)
Link | by zparticus27 on 2008-06-19 04:47:35
"dont you get it...THIS IS THE ETERNAL FLAME! NOTHING CAN WITHSTAND ITS POWER!" he shouted as the flame dragon covered his body, melting the monster's weapon

but it only managed to damage xero and destroy the purple aura of the sword

"it's not over yet!"

"MY RIGHT HAND IS BURNING WITH THE DESIRE TO DEFEAT YOU, IT SEEKS YOUR DESTRUCTION!" his right hand glowed an errie red color as the eternal flame condensed into his fingers

"THIS IS THE END! HISSASTU! INFERNAL FIIIINGAAAAAAAH!" he shouted as he dashed towards xero..but instead of his right hand, he grabbed the monsters head with his left hand..incapacitating him

" and dont think i dont know the source of your power!" he used this diversion to attack the cursed sword..aiming at the giant eye in the sword!

"HEAT ON!" he grabbed the sword's orbital eye and crushed it with his right hand in flames as the sword slowly melted to oblivion

Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 3)
Link | by on 2008-06-20 01:09:23
the armor and demonic right hand started to melt. the barrier holding the flame was slowly giving way

"if the barrier gives way im doomed.... unlesss"

"thanks for that... all that rage was clouding up my thoughts"

xero grabs Z arm and tosses him in the air, breakes free from Z's hold, he holds both hands up and a light apears above them, taking the shape of a sword

"been a while since i made somthing out of an idea... let's see how this fares"

Imagining a sword that can not only whitsstand the eternal flames, but utilize it and absorb it.

the procces was almost complete when the barrier gave way, the eternal flame that it was holding got in and went straigh for xero

"lrt it be created on time"

the flames engulf xero, the sword was made just in time to absorb it, the eternal flames wen't straight into the sword, increasing it's power

"talk about your big upsets.. here why don't you try your own flame"

Xero sends out a blast of the eternal flame at Z, he knew that that atack won't work but he was just trying out it's capabilities


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 3)
Link | by zparticus27 on 2008-06-20 01:31:11 (edited 2008-06-20 01:31:38)
"big mistake!" he said as he back off and starts to concentrate

he easily evades the flames as he raises his right hand, it continues to glow an ominous red color as xero's sword starts to ignite in flames


"you may have aborbed the flame..but you cannot control it!"

"BURST DRAGOON ORTA!" he shouted as the sword burns in fury..the flames took a shape of a 3 head dragon ignited from the sword engulfing xerovlade

"the sword might be immune but you are not" he said as he stood there watching xero burn

Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 3)
Link | by Renma on 2008-06-20 07:32:03
Hold on XD A little Backtracking here..



Kazuma dodges the knives then leaps up and strikes renma right through his chest with his katana*

"Che.. Useless..."

As Kazuma attempted Renma's Chest, Kazuma Passes through a Barrier of time that Renma made, Triggering a Special Magic.

"Time... Stand Still...."

Suddenly, the Whole world Stopped Moving, Kazuma's Blade is Very close to Renma's Chest. Escaping Easily, Renma takes out more Knifes, Surrounding Kazuma. It's seemingly the same with the Previous attack, again the knifes are Standing still in the air, as the time has been stopped.

"Resume.."

The time Continue itself. And the Knifes are Started Dashing Towards Kazuma


Re: Critic's Bar Freestyle Arena (continued 3)
Link | by on 2008-06-21 19:54:54 (edited 2008-06-23 08:08:07)
I give, renma

ive completely lost my touch rp'ing
(i spent wayyy to much time away)

walks out of the arena*

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