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Re: Writers Club/Guild Link | by on 2009-02-25 10:55:51

I've got a story in mind, but not enough time to write it... lol- please keep on the lookout (salutes) ^^ It's based on the song: 1000-words by Jade from FFXVii (i think) Very beautiful song OO, makes me cryy

Re: Writers Club/Guild Link | by on 2009-02-25 13:50:27

@Km.Revolution: You spelled my name wrong... its ShMee... not Shnee..

Re: Writers Club/Guild Link | by on 2009-02-25 17:35:34 (edited 2009-02-25 17:56:25)

Since i notice somewhere *forgets* that someone was confused about characters and what happened in between...ill post the full story sometime soon...if i ever get the chance to type it. But for characters...i didn't have a plan but i'll do it now. Characters: Name: Kari Age: 17 (Not defined in the story) Gender: Female...duhh Personality: N/A Bio: Main Character. Kari...we dont know much about her. All thats known is that she knows how to use magic. First Met: First Met in the forest (not clearly defined...later in the story you'll find out). Or First Met After The Club Plan Meeting Name: Michael? (Heheh names going to change since people put two and two together *stares at chat*) Age: 17 (Meant To Be 17) Gender: Ok...if you cant figure this out you fail...MALE Personality: Happy-Go-Lucky (Majority) Bio: Main Character. Is a transfer exchange student from Canada (if you know me then you probably could guess my bio). Obtains avg. marks. As the years went past for him when he was young, everything that happened to him remains unknown to friends and peers...yet this shaped his values. Always wanted to become a Engineer or Police Officer. (Most of this is fake btw) Senior In the Military Club. First Met: Main Character? *sigh* Michael's in the beginning... Name: Samantha Age: N/A (Haven't really thought of a age yet for her) Gender: Female Bio: Chief Medical Officer of the Military Club. Uses Magic but only for healing. Not Much Is Known Yet. First Met: Is First Met after Michael wakes up after running in the infirmary. Name: Kate Age: 19 Gender: Female Bio: Leader Of the Military Club. Becomes close friends with Michael over time. Strong and stubborn and never knows when to back down. First Met: During The 1st Assault Meeting Name: Co-Pilot AKA Kyle. Age: 18 Status: K.I.A. (Killed In Action) Gender: Male Dies in the beginning when shot down. Name: Kira Age: 16 Status: M.I.A. (Missing In Action) Gender: Male Goes missing after the betrayal in the headmasters office Name: Nao Age: N/A Gender: Female Bio: 2nd in command of the Military Club. Strong and kind. Likes Kittehs :D. Also you dont wanna be on her mad side because she will make it loads of hurt. First Met: In between the 1st and 2nd invasion I think i have more characters...and ill do them when i can Military Lingo: Codenames: When i use them i do them in this format. Basing it off the nato phonetic alphabet. A= Alpha B= Bravo C= Charlie etc... so to sum it all up...(Squadron Call sign) (Squadron) - (Position in Squadron) eg. Super 6-4 Adding more later http://i34.tinypic.com/33pad0k.jpg

Re: Writers Club/Guild Link | by on 2009-02-25 17:55:13 (edited 2009-02-25 17:57:04)

Hwaaa~! I've managed to read everything people posted here. It's all really good! Ugo would very much like to join as well. I'm a little embarrassed about submitting work for other people to see, but for this thread I'll make a huge exception! My apologies if there's confusion here or there. I dont really post up stories on gendou like this... This is really my blaze of typing down the beggining of a story that I've been juggleing in my mind for a while. I apologise if I use some termonoligy that wouldnt make sense to other cultures. (As, English is my main tounge, and I'm from the US.) Well, here goes! IN MEMORIES Prologue: The Color of Cerulean How pathetic, for a boy to continue sobbing over a scrape even after getting the band-aid put on it. Of course, as a kid in first grade, Rey Ellinston had more than just scrapes to cry about. However, to the eyes of the kids as they walked back from recess, he looked like a complete wimp. It didn’t matter that the whistle had been blown, nor did the reminders of “suck it up and get back to class” from his classmates, Rey felt like the most miserable person on the playground. That was, until: "Rey, you should really come back in. You’re gonna get left behind!" From his spot on the sandbox, Rey looked up. To his shock, it was an "Untouchable". Not that she had a contagious rash or the like, but a girl who hung about the "Cool' people's elite circle. Why was she talking to today's biggest loser on the playground? "Hey!" Her call was only answered with a couple more sobs. Taking matters into her own hands, she walked over to Rey, and picked up his left arm, a large elbow band-aid covered the wound Rey got from tripping onto the sidewalk. She then did the unthinkable, at that moment Rey felt a light smooch on his arm, close but not on the band-aided scrape itself. Rey’s mind suddenly got dizzy, he looked up, and saw the girl shyly take a few steps back. By then, everyone, even the teachers where back in the school building. Looking at her face, she seemed as shy and embarrassed as Rey felt. “My Mom says that kisses make boo-boos feel better, so, you don’t have to cry about it anymore.” Rey dumbly nodded. “Alright.” The girl tilted her head a little to the side, and grinned. “If you can be the kind of person who gives help to people instead of needing it, then you won’t need to cry in front of everyone anymore. That’s why, you have to get stronger.” Rey found her words a bit difficult to understand, it sounded like something an adult would say. “Get stronger…?” The girl confirmed with a nod, as she turned and started to walk back to the school building. “Now, let’s get back to class.” Rey stood up. His mind was still jumbled as to what to say, but only one phrase managed to make it out into the open. “T-thank you… uh?” The girl turned her head and looked at Rey for one last time. “My name’s Cerulean!” It’s not to say that the two became instant friends that day. Quite the contrary, Rey never summoned the courage to try talking to her again. The fact that they had different classes through the rest of elementary didn’t help either. Cerulean never seemed to manage, or even want to go out of the way to talk to Rey again. Despite that, he took her words to heart, and from that day onwards, was truly grateful to her. Memory 1: The Mediocre Introduction of Day to Day The start of freshmen year for all but the most confident or careless, a scary ordeal. Luckily for Rey, he already had his small circle of friends. It was the beginning of the last quarter of school, at the usual spot at the tables outside of the cafeteria. The sun was comfortably warm on the hapless youth. “…-and I’ll yell, INDIGNATION!! Then send a smashing thunderbolt down on those losers! They’ll be like BAAAAGHHH!” A skinny boy with neat straight brown hair smashed his fist onto the table, acting out his amazing spell idea. “Darn it! Jay, you almost knocked over my soda!” Said a girl with curly long hair that reached down to her back. Another girl with long black hair, and astoundingly cool disposition spoke. “Kara-hara… if you try to cast a spell that powerful you might lose control of the ‘Trons’ and blow yourself up in a most amusing display.” Jay looked at her with a frown. “I love how you’re able to say that like you want to see that happen, Aura.” A sly smile formed on Aura’s lips. “I’ll be sure to send you flowers at the hospital. Or do you prefer candy?” Another, slightly rounder boy came to the table, and took a seat by Jay. “Hey, how’s it going guys?” -No response. More or less, to Dike Jeebs it was more like self admittance to sit at the table, rather than an actual greeting. Dike was still finishing his taco, when Rey finally arrived. “Hey! Ellington!” Dike said jubilantly, referring to Rey by his last name. Rey said his usual line: “What’re you doing here, Dike?” “Just switching around tables. Hey, did you hear about-?” Jay, interrupted him midsentence. “Enough of that! Check this out!” Jay showed Rey the back of his right hand. A small orb, was mounted on a metal base attached to the back of Jay’s hand. The red orb glinted brightly in the sun. “I just got my E-Drive over break! Isn’t it sweet?” Aura spoke out with a hint of annoyance in her voice. “That’s very nice; now care to shut it for a while?” Rey leaned in closer to the jewel on Jay’s hand. “Hey, that’s pretty cool.” Dike pointed out the color of the E-Drive. “It’s color is red, which means it’s also military grade. Real handy in arena battles.” Dike then took notice at Rey’s clothing, black school uniform, red cape, black boots, white gloves, and metal right arm. “That’s a really interesting costume. Is it for theatre?” Rey lifted up the fake metal arm, which was really more like a full arm gauntlet. It was also considerably scratched and seemed to be missing some metal plates that obviously where once there. “Oh my god… REY!” The curly haired girl stood up, though Rey attempted to turn around to hide it, the girl grabbed his arm with the metal gauntlet, and looked at it in horror. “This… This…” Aura also noticed the considerable amount of scratches and missing parts. “Rey…? What’ve you been doing, smashing that against a wall?” The girl screamed out in fury. “Ohhh, REY!!!!” “Wait, Lia….!” Rey was waving his free hand at her in a bid for innocence. Yet, he couldn’t think of any believable excuse. Lia started her rant. “Rey! Do you know how many hours I put into making this? You’re supposed be Adward Alric for the True Metal Scientist play today! I had to slave over the manga referances for a week before I managed to make the arm look right..!” Lia didn’t seem to be exactly all the way emptied of anger by the time the bell rang. Nonetheless, lunch was over, and the freshmen had to be off their separate ways. Dike and Jay shared Rey’s next period. So, before arriving to class, Dike pulled Rey aside before going into class. “So Rey, I’m guessing the damage to that gauntlet is Cerulean related, right?” Dike was casually looking at him. “Yeah, well, there were these two guys, and-…” Dike made his assumption. “They either where planning to do something to her, or where spreading bad rumors about her…?” Rey feeling ackward, scratched his head. “Rumors...” Dike chuckled. “Ah, if only everyone else knew about this! You really should think about being a superhero. I bet you can do way more than just focus on Cerulean.” Rey wasn’t all that interested in the thought. “You know why I protect her!” “Yes, yes, made your day and changed your life by kissing a boo-boo. Come on, if you like her that much then just ask the girl out like a normal person!” “I… can’t do that. I don’t like her… I’m just, grateful.” The bounds of one’s’ gratefulness was rather great in Rey’s case. Since the 5th grade he did everything to stop anything bad to happen to Cerulean, whether it was tripping, having bad rumors spread, disarming pranks, Rey was by Leon’s definition: a Ninja. But in Dike’s definition: “You’re bound to get caught and be called a ‘Stalker’ sooner or later. I mean, Jay’s E-Drive is a toned down Military surplus, but, I know you have a military grade E-Drive that still has full power, the ones that real soldiers get issued. If you really hurt someone…” Rey didn’t respond, he knew the consequences, but didn’t have any intent on canceling his self assigned bodyguard duties. He raised left hand, which also had a Red orb mounted the back of the hand like Jay's, only, the orb also had what looked like symbols within the stone. It wasn’t something normal civilians walk around with; much less even supposed have, so he understood Dike’s warning. On a lighter note, considering that Jay has his E-Drive…” Dike put on a big smile “We now have a 5 man party. We can totally participate at the Combat Arena now!” Buraa~! Hope you didnt find reading this a waste of your time!

Re: Writers Club/Guild Link | by on 2009-02-25 18:03:08

hey ugo welcome to the writers club/guild Every story can be good and I like yours mate. Also have self-confidence in yourself. If you come in negative then your kinda killing your story giving that negative attitude but thats what i would say ^^ Also...whats this...e-drive? Robots? Gundams? Those Robots from Appleseed? that would be so cool to drive one of those ^^ ~Doomlight http://i34.tinypic.com/33pad0k.jpg

Re: Writers Club/Guild Link | by on 2009-02-25 18:12:10

Ahaha... Thanks I appreciate it. Well for clarificaiton on that E-Drive. Assuming you have good knowledge on Tales of Symphonia, it would be easy to sum it up that I borrowed the E-Drive idea from the Exphere concept from Tales of Symphonia.

Re: Writers Club/Guild Link | by on 2009-02-25 18:33:56

@Ugo: I like your story for the most part, Im not really into fighting and stuff like that. but I do like the whole childhood crush thing. Youre pretty good at writting, keep it up. annnd Doom is making me post a story I've been writing... and yes, making me... other wise he said He'll post it himself... buuut I'll do it tomorrow since hes offline already :D

Re: Writers Club/Guild Link | by fhfyeodb on 2009-02-25 18:53:12

Quick post here. ^^;; O.O Wow, everyone has such nice ideas, I'm looking forward to reading more of everything. XD I'm actually planning to read everything tomorrow during first period since I'll be in the computer lab and then I'll respond individually to everyone's work. But so far I've read everything on page...0? XD T_T I just felt really bad for posting and running so this is why I'm writing this. As for my story, well...I guess a reunion would be nice for Kitty. Oh, and btw, my name is "Jow," not "Jon." ^^;; Hehe, guess my avy is fuzzy. XD Don't want to get confused with Jonathon...

Re: Writers Club/Guild Link | by on 2009-02-25 18:58:26

@Jow: Sorries >.< I couldnt read it, I went with what Doom was calling you(blame all on him >:3). and it would be nice to read some more of your story.

Re: Writers Club/Guild Link | by on 2009-02-26 07:08:23

@Shmee- sorry about the typo... my mind was preoccupied that i forgot to chack it... @All- I am impressed about the works of my fellow guild members.... everyone ahs its own talent.... @all- guys I cant create a story for a while becasue I am making plans for my stalled stories to move... vector crisis for example is on the way.... I will re-post it if it is done i will post my stalled stories if i could find them or encoded them -->

Re: Writers Club/Guild Link | by on 2009-02-26 07:31:04

Hmm count me in then XD I posted my fanfic in another thread though... XD

Re: Writers Club/Guild Link | by on 2009-02-26 07:42:25

Thanks for profiling and clearing up the characters Doom ^^ Ugo: You've got a really nice writing style ! I really liked the story for the most part lol- i shouldn't be the one telling you this, but you should give the curly haried girl a name- or who was it that was Lia ? But i like the plot line heh heh stalker. You're a very good writer, nice ideas, but clear up some things, will ya ? ( though I've already read the post about the E-drive, sorry i'm not familiar with Tales of Symphonia ) Hey Jow, lol ! ==' Your lucky you get to go on on school ! It's gonna be hard work getting through all the stories lol- good luck ! Kenji: Hi ! ^^

Re: Writers Club/Guild Link | by on 2009-02-28 01:18:59 (edited 2009-02-28 01:19:17)

KM: Cool Men. Cool. :D occ: I wrote this story a long time ago, I think I was still in my elementary days. [lol] So ignore the wrong grammar, I didn't have the time to edit it. I'm sorry. And if you guys have watch and became a fan of YU YU HAKUSHO/Ghost Fighter, they we're the characters of this story. And if you haven't watch the anime, well, I'm sorry, but you won't understand the concept of the story. Pairing: KuramaxBotanxHiei Disclaimer: I do not own the characters of Yu Yu Hakusho. I just love them. -- The Sacrifice “I never expect that you would be here, so fast and so young.” The prince of Rekai said. He was sitting in his chair, in front of his desk. And he was in his baby form, with his pacifier that is always in his mouth. He let George to clean up his table, for his visitor. After Koenma gave a mission to the team. They never did expect that the mission would be more complicated. That a certain, friend, could die because of it. “Well, that’s fate Koenma.” A young red-headed said. Standing in front of Koenma. “I’m sorry that I couldn’t do anything for you to come back to life. My father disapprove of that thing, after I made Yusuke came back to life.” Koenma said, once again. The young man giggled for a second after replying. “Nothing to worry Koenma. I don’t expect to come back to life.” He look away and said, “And it was for her. Not for myself.” Silence was occurred to the two companion. “You do care for her, do you? She must be sad, now that you are gone.” “You have deeply mistaken. She is very happy now. Even crying for joy. No one can be more happy, from the happiness that you can see in her face.” He said turning his face away from his companion. Hiding his sadness, that you can clearly see in his face. “I don’t understand, Kurama. She must be deeply sad, because you died.” “You don’t understand!” He suddenly shouted. That made Koenma shocked. “She’s happy because I save the life of the one she love! Can’t you see” He said looking straight at the prince. Tears began to slid in his pale face. He was sobbing, but he let his tears to fell, as if he didn’t care if he cried in front of Koenma. “She’s happy that I save his life, because she love Hiei so much and I don’t want her to be sad if he died. I can’t bare to see her sad. Because I rather die that to see her sad and in pain. He said, sobbing more. Just thinking of it made him cry. “Sacrificing myself is the only way. I’m happy now. Now that she is happy with the man he loved.” -------------------------------------------------------------------------- I am terribly sorry if it was short. I don’t really care if it’s short. So, I guess you guys know who died and who was the “her” and “she” that was talking about here. Well, I hope you knew now. And to people who still didn’t know.

Re: Writers Club/Guild Link | by on 2009-03-01 07:13:49

Ukissa: That's fine. I got the story ( thumbs up ) =] awww another v.good story- love reading your works ! Keep it up !!!!

Re: Writers Club/Guild Link | by on 2009-03-01 16:36:49

@Ukissa: It was kinda of confusing to me, maybe its the fact Im kinda sleepy, but I dont know, it seemed off focus.

Re: Writers Club/Guild Link | by on 2009-03-05 07:30:37 (edited 2009-03-05 07:31:02)

For Vie-san: Here's the set opening: 'The door was in front of them. "You go first," said Liam. "No," said Darren. "Chicken." "That's right," said Darren. "I'm a chicken. You go first." The door was huge, and black. And very shut. "It's only a door," said Liam. "It's not the door," said Darren. "It's what's behind it." "Or who's behind it," said Liam. He grabbed the handle.' Will post rest later, but it's long...... very long.

Re: Writers Club/Guild Link | by on 2009-03-05 16:24:08

The posts are dieing T~T

Re: Writers Club/Guild Link | by on 2009-03-06 11:30:08

Sowwy Shmee! Will post the rest when i have time ==' it's a helluva long ^@$^&% ...... hey.. ! you post a story Shmee ! >.- it'll be good !

Re: Writers Club/Guild Link | by on 2009-03-06 16:21:05

hmm they are dying shmee Comments going down in order: @kanetsuki: "When you give promise to someone, that means you must keep it forever. But if the things change, the situation changes, surely people's mind would change. From those, then the promise would be just only a fragment of memory that can't be kept. Or... the eternal promise is not exist..." You could say that relates love >_< What you say in your story is nature. Its kinda refreshing to read what animals do to stay alive, its kinda like that for humans as well. @Ukissa: your story was pretty good even with the ending. Suicide is something no one wants to do and it changes and impacts peoples lives in a huge away taking the people you love into a whole new direction. @TMrevolution: Your poems are made with your emotions and thats what i like to see in poems...your existence doesn't bring everybody hatred. Did it bring hatred to the person you love? Did it bring hatred to your family? Answer: No You didn't. Your existence would be a good thing, if you weren't here then think of all the changes in peoples lives you made and think of them without that change ^^. *could go on rambling but won't* @Kanetsuki: It reminds me of my dog :( @Adeline: Lol. @Ukissa: I would have to agree, your story is great in the body but the ending kinda lost me. @TMrevolution: Great Story :D @Ukissa: ...i've notice something lol...all your stories end in at least someone suiciding...and no one being able to stop them...but that might be just me. There Still Good ^^ @Mokona: When i read that, im guessing your going off into a horror story ^^ @All: I'll post a part of my story which is the continuation from the other part i posted before. ~Doomlight http://i34.tinypic.com/33pad0k.jpg

Re: Writers Club/Guild Link | by on 2009-03-06 20:13:10

@Mokona: My story would suck. Im a reader not a writer. @Doom: its KM not TM lol

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