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I don't have a poem, but I have something from my book. Can I post that instead?
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And another: -Fan I sat there for an hour staring at the fan hoping for a call. All my fights are merry, all my songs sad. And you never rang at all. Ijust lied there waiting. Doing less than I can making myself feel small. My enemy is my reflection. My heart is in your hand, slowly it starts to fall. But you know I love you and this drives me mad: that you knew it all. |
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by iChiRo nAmiDa
on 2006-04-12 20:17:39
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just never let yourself be alone...It'll just make worst...I guess i would say that, i too was not able to tell her my feelings for her...And it do make more damage to yourself...Oh god, what am i saying?i'm turning insane..
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You don't have to promise it. Eventually all our problems get fixed.     |
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I know all of this. That's what hurts. I'm not trying to be perfect and I don't think I have anything to prove to anyone, but this is just something I have to do. I couldn't live with myself unless I saw this through. I'll be OK. I promise. |
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by iChiRo nAmiDa
on 2006-04-12 20:12:08
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There are always other option,don't be stuck of dreaming your wildest on her doc., it's not worth it... i was able to overcome this kind of situation, trust me...Although i'm still haunted with my desires of being with her...But at least..im not seeing myself with here in a fleshy-flash-fantasy...
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*Hits Doc on the head, (softly ^_^)* Boy, why do you feel so much self pity? I understand that SHE means a lot to you. It's great that you love somebody, but seriously, SHE isn't the only girl out there. I'm not saying to completly forget and move on. I'm trying to say that you have to keep going. (I don't know if I made myself clear. I'm starting to speak spanglish, again) |
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by overlordsero
on 2006-04-12 20:08:56
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oh oh oh!! reminds me of the song Kryptonite and the song Even superman. good songs....good songs....I have them both XD 
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Do you think your God,Doc? No,you don't have to try to be the "best." Nobody can be strong all of the time,like super man and kryptonite. Not to mention a few chemicals in the brain could be a part of it too. |
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No you see most of my problem is I brood over things. And I'm a coward. I am very interested in HER because she is the only person who has ever made me feel like I need another human in my life. SHE is the only one that has shown me that life is better with another. I'll admit, it's probabally myself that is my own enemy. |
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by iChiRo nAmiDa
on 2006-04-12 20:01:21
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Yeah! skyalchemist has his/her point..(dozo yurushiku)...I like that one above this...i think it is much better that mine..you really are heart-struck...Just keep it cool doc.,
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Doc, I might be crossing the line here but I have to ask. Why the ... do you have so much interest in HER when apparently all she causes you is pain? |
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Because I like sharing my angst with others... This is an older one from when SHE really f*cked with my heart. -Mid-October to April This lasted a thousand years, the biting pain and mounting fears, Falling rain and broken hearts, the way I feel now we're apart. All for nothing, nought to gain, What can I learn from all this pain? The sky gets cloudy as my eyes, Truth obscured by all your lies. As I'm drownig and no one sees, just close the lid and please Bury me. Discontentment burning bright,the show is over cut the lights. Kiss me kill me hold my hand, the rain is starting, strike the band A sharp and crashing symphony, A new tune for old melodies. |
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by iChiRo nAmiDa
on 2006-04-12 19:41:52
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YEAH!! you got good ones...How we wish all of the girls would read these..and make them realize how much they hurt us...When they are ignoring our feelings..Haha...
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by iChiRo nAmiDa
on 2006-04-12 19:37:36
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----This one is more like an elegy..rather than a poem...Be sure to ready yourself with a roll of tissue..for that crying moments..(rally-ho!) -Other side of me- This hostile sword is my only treasure… And this dull sword is my only opponent… I’m tired of being revitalized with again solitude purpose… To live is to kill, to die is to be reborn… Blind of everything that meets the eye…. And living with only one decree in this soul… Eternity will be on our side, cursed to live with no end… We will say our goodbyes twenty-five decades from now… And yet another from then… When the moment repeats itself… We will then again be separated to these two realms… Then certainly will be the time for myth and legends meet their end… But then a new sort of fate began to unfold… That love will grow even in the darkest kind of soul… Grounding for some reason to create and find its sanctuary… And will eventually create a new contentment within… To be reborn as human; To be buried as memory of long-ago… I don’t know if I will let myself live in this furnace of hell… Or I shall kill myself all over again just to meet you in heaven… It feels as if I’m lost in the darkness… Sensation of being imbedded to this unholy soil… I will hold still the sun, and I’ll never let it down… Even if I need to sacrifice my time… Twentieth night from this moment… I will die, revived, for an extent of eternity… Before my time runs out… I’ll find your soul and I’ll lay it on an absolute memory… And I’ll let you stay in my body…to live as the other side of me… (i want to great shiyounin dojo! setsuna, rui, jirochin, teddy, dirk) -Be one of Us-
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Yeah I like sad depressed stuff. (Look at wht I write for fun...) It's got some depth to it y'know? |
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by iChiRo nAmiDa
on 2006-04-12 19:21:41
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thanks dude! i can write really sad ones.. when i feel really lonely...hahaha
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@iChiRo That's good mate. I like it. Hell, it's loads better than my bollocks. |
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by iChiRo nAmiDa
on 2006-04-12 19:07:04
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This is one of my favorite poem that i, myself wrote...It shows the real me..Sad and Lonely(T.T) HOW SAD is... After the night of your saddest moment Everything started to turned out to be all right You started to feel better, and once again liven anew You started to laugh and smile almost to everyone But then a heart’s love started to knock once more A fate’s new way to restore your agony and pain Your paths met, and with no words you just stare at her Exactly just like the other time, nothing happened It’s hard to forget the most special in your heart But it’s also hard to accept, that you won’t be together Saying a little prayer you beg for answers “Why is it that the one I love is not meant for me?†How sad is it to be told “I don’t love you� How sad is it to pretend you didn’t hear those words? But with a smile, you just turned and walked away Because you don’t want her to see the tears in your eyes… (so you like it?, you want more? email me at catch_ichiro19@yahoo.com)
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I'm not sure if this is depressing but thiswas my band's break up song. -Expectations You want commitment you wanted someone stable, You wanted comfort. I don't think I'm able You ask for so much, I don't think I can give you Looks like you'll walk out. I guess I still lose. Yuor expectations were set too high, I doubt you'll ever find your perfect guy. So what can I say? What can I do? How am I to hold on to you? So what can I say? I doubt there's any way I can ever be all that you would want from me. |