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Uhhh, jsut that one. I never saw the first *pouts*
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Yeah I liked that one too. Now did you save part one or two? It's my version of an epic poem, I'm writing part three now... |
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WOW O_O :P I liked it a lot. *saves to word* I wish I could write poems like that. Here's one that is from Chrono Cross. I love this poem ^_^: What was the start of all this? When did the cogs of fate begin to turn? Perhaps it is impossible to grasp the answers now. From deep within the flow of time… But for a certainty back then We loved so many yet we hated so much. We hurt others and were hurt ourselves… Yet even then we ran like the wind. Whilst our laughter echoed. Under cerulean skies…
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@Sky That's based on real life. Last night actually. Me and HER. You should know who. It'slikealove poem for anarchists... and yes, Babylon is all my own work... |
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It's good but I liked Prom Night more.     |
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Did you make that up? O_O Well, I liked it actually ^_^ it was neat ^_^
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You need to post more for one. But from what I see you ain't half bad... I just write for the hell of it and see what happens. I want to know what people think of Hitchhiking to Babylon |
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OMG I love Magus ^_~ Nice Gendou. Effin' swish! Now why didn't I think of that? You guys kick ass at poetry. As i've said I am a terrible poet...And don't know if I am a writer either? What did you think anyway? If I may ask...?
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-Prom Night After last night, my ears are still ringing You were with the artsy kids I was out there slam dancing You were f*cking beautiful I was bathed in sweat and blood You came out to see me I figured out what it was I love about you. The reason I hold on, you stood outside waiting for me to limp along You were willing to say you knew me, this scuffy bleeding f*ck And when you caught me lying you told me to shut up. NOw my ears are ringing in tune with the bass line And I'll the I'm thinking how I still care for you. (Now where are my keys?) |
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as i probe my inner depths for your presence dark clouds shadow my path as holograms of your image haunt me nothing, but emptiness triumphs i dwell in the abyss of phantasmagoria where illusions of your deceptive image lurk for even in my virtual daydreams your apparition cause my being to go berserk i dream of basking in the comfort of your presence to be engulfed in the warmth of your embrace to be secure not only with your words of affection but to rescue my heart from its decay i abhor this limbolike situation but i dare not loathe myself for dwelling in it though this feeling of helplessness has consumed me i opted to remain and wither in silence |
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Hitchhiking to Babylon (Part ii) In the car the driver sat twirling his wee moustache. "To Babylon" he asked aloud, I replied with a nod of my head. The road streches on to the radio song of nostalgia of the singers last days. With emotion to spare for those yet unaware how the heart feelswhen love fades away. The Driver said: "To see this world is nought but seeing a lie the truth we're told has never been more then the fairy tale we're most like to buy." Says I to him: "if that be so then what's the point in beeing alive? If our whole life's station is a grand fabrication then surely it's better to simply die?" "Aha", said he "It's you not me That wishes to find Babylon. and it's all your descission to the degree of percission with which you will decode the lie." The Driver once more twirled his wee moustache and continued along down the road And the green highway sign which we sped by read: 53 MILES UNTIL BABYLON |
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another one..... Your suffering Your pain…. I can not hold you I can not caress you I can not comfort you I have failed you The tears come down Endlessly streaming Until I fade from one Aspect to another And then wake up Asking if it was all Just a nightmare 
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Neuga Zeina Zieber Zom now the chosen time has come exchange this world for... 
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I'm no poet. only a writer. (kinda..) When I get more things typed up i'll post.....maybe...unless anyone cares ^_^
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*bow* Why thank ye. Here's a piece of a lrger series I'm writing.... -Hitchhiking to Babylon (Part 1) Up ahead, the empty sky, down below my empty bags and far away, the one to whom I said goodbye. Dull green road sign in blinding reflections of passing headlights reminds me of my nowhere and no place to sleep tonight. On a road to where I'm a No one. On a road leading to my freedom. This trip will show the person I am to be, Going to a place where no one speaks like me. Headlight burning brightness illuminates my sign of stolen cardboard and black felt pen. The window's smoked but rolls down I lean over to say: "I need a ride to Babylon..." Keep an eye out for part Two... |
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I liked it. You have a very interesting way to express yourself. |
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Because I have nothing else to do... -Sunrise The pale blue sky seems dull and bleached, turning a sickly yellow hue. With fading night my dreams are gone and all those dreams were of you. How quickly fades a dream, as sun ignites the sky and all my dreams slip to memories as I watch the night die. Well? What d'ye think? |
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The thoughts which haunt, the nights dead like before. Falling... Falling... Forever descending. Never ending, like a spiral. Just spiraling, down the abyss. Motionless in this cage, drenched in blood, covered in scars. Further away, from humanity. Closer, to eternity. |
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w00t. Okay, be in for a little uhhh..call it a cross between sadness and violence: "Your petty feeling of happiness when I die will last but a moment. But the pain you enflict on the most important people in my life, will last an eternity. "Enjoy watching them suffer, to look into their eyes and see the sadness shadowing them, as you relish the thought of my blood staining your hands..."
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