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on 2006-05-15 18:16:41 (edited 2006-05-15 18:16:56)
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I wrote a romance poem once, people were very impressed with it, but it wasn't my thing.  |
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To critc: *Starts to chant* Post! Post! Post! Post! Post! Post!     |
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on 2006-05-15 18:20:28 |
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*walks in and takes a seat... *conjures up icecream for himself...(cookies n creme flavor) (small itachi) ...hello  |
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on 2006-05-15 18:22:05 (edited 2006-05-15 18:25:43)
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Disclaimer: I don't own gundam wing. Author: Criticgundam This is mostly my brain farting, but I thought it was a good idea so what the heck. Herro's first poem. For once in her life, Relena Yuy woke up late. Her husband's eforts to tire her out last night had been sucessful. She brushed a lone strand of hair away from her face. She sat up to find that the man she'd been married too for one year to the day was not in bed with her. She went to the rest room to freashen up to find that all her things were orginized and the room was filled with sweet smelling roses. She followed a trail of rose pedals down the stairs and into the kitchen where breakfast laid prepared on the table and chair pulled out awaiting to seat her beautiful body. As she sat, Herro emerged dressed in a robe holding a piece of paper in his hand. He seated her gracefull and walked to the other side of tha table. There he stood in front of her and unfolded the paper in his hand. He took a nervous deep breath, and stared at her in a loving gaze almost as if the site of her had calmed his nerves. Gently, he said, 'My darling, whom I have had the great blessing of being wed to for a year now, I decided to write a poem to exprese all my love for you: R is for the romance that we have had together, E is for the exciting times we had together, L is for the love we'd shared, E is for the experiences we've been through for better or for worse, N is for the never ending love we'll always have, and A is for haveing the most beautiful ass I have ever seen. Relena smiled at her lover. She got up and came up to Herro who seemed to be holding his breath waiting for an answer. Herro tried to hold his composure and asked, 'Did you like it?' Relena kissed him and said, 'Come to bed and I'll tell you what I think.' 'I can do that,' Herro said through his grin. Herro and Relena went up stairs and shortly after, the house echoed with moans of love and pleasure. Needless to say, Relena was impressed. |
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on 2006-05-15 18:29:39 |
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(small itachi) ...what a poem... |
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on 2006-05-15 18:30:33 |
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I did that a couple years ago... |
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on 2006-05-15 18:33:10 |
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*raises one eybrow* yes quite the poem..."A is for haveing the most beautiful ass I have ever seen," yes quite... Glad she was impressed though, hat to see a guy go through all that and suck at the whole objective. |
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on 2006-05-15 18:34:14 |
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That was so cool! Especially because I've always wanted those two to end up together. Good one, Critic. |
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on 2006-05-15 18:38:11 (edited 2006-05-15 18:40:05)
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Well thank you Sky, and its always good to see you, dirtyninja, are you intersted in still being a bouncer? I'm a big 1xR, and I fight against the corrupt forces of the yaoi fics. I used to write fics to promote 1xR, but I stopped a year back, found more interesting things to do, (namely, Gendou) |
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on 2006-05-15 18:41:39 |
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(small itachi) .....a third bouncer...this should be fun |
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on 2006-05-15 18:47:02 |
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Whoa, that now makes two people on the whole internet that dislike yaoi fics... |
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on 2006-05-15 18:51:24 (edited 2006-05-15 18:52:18)
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... Go to blissfulignorance.com You'll find a few hundred of em, *sticks out fist* Hail to the warlord, blackrose. You won't find me on the site anymore |
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I have no idea what's going on... Critic's poem would make for some gr34t pick up lines though... |
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on 2006-05-15 19:13:10 |
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Well you see critic i just don't have that much free time, I won't till june 15. Then i'll have plenty o' time to come on down. that and my internet cuts out regularl so it takes about 10 minutes just to get to this site. To answer your question, yes still inttrested, I'll find some time during school to post. |
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Now there are three bouncers? Well, this must be the most secure place in all of Gendou... *drinks, sets a passing zombie on fire.* |
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on 2006-05-15 19:17:16 |
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*trips the zombie...and banishes it to the X-zone..... (small itachi) ...yup....you can say that again.... |
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on 2006-05-15 19:18:11 |
| mabey not the safest place for flaming zombies, then again no place is safe for zombies let alone flaming ones. |
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on 2006-05-15 19:19:52 |
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(small itachi) .no one is safe here...doc is addicted to tea, and im a psychotic ninja....thats what makes us good bouncers in the first place... |
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on 2006-05-15 19:22:20 |
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And you guys are so great at helping people when their inside an undead zombie-lover. |