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by xxchocoloverxx
on 2010-12-30 18:42:14 (edited 2010-12-30 18:44:11)
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Name: Miku Writer You're Everthing Your smile Is like a beautiful picture Or fireworks on a starry night Your laugh Brings colour into my world A beautiful melody Your eyes Deep and understanding More mysterious than the seas With the passion of a burning star You and me Holding onto eternity A perfect photograph A fairytale... |
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OMG! HAPPY NEW YEAR!! Sorry~ its been quite a while now. Will post in a poem soon and be around as well. Been really busy the past year. Keep writing~ 
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@ xxchocoloverxx- Welcome to the club! And that's a nice poem! It seems kind of short to me, but it's still nice. @ Jo- It has been awhile since we've seen you around here. Well, I hope things aren't as busy for you this year. And I can't wait for your poem!  |
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by xxchocoloverxx
on 2011-01-02 02:02:41
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Thanks! The reason which i live I live… I live to see your face I live to see you smile- To feel warmth in my heart I live to look up into your soft eyes So full of passion and love I live to hear your voice Low and enchanting Draws me in I live to hear you laugh To know the joy life can bring I live with a hope A hope that lies within A hope that… Someday I'll be Your reason which to live |
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by
 
on 2011-01-02 05:51:57 (edited 2011-01-02 06:11:11)
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Oh! umm... Hi!! Wow I haven't been here for quite a while... Unfortunately...I haven't got a new piece to show you guys... But...a contest huh.... sounds great! Maybe I'll give it a shot... but I haven't really considered new years to be something special for me... unlike school, where new things are expected each year... Now, not anymore (T.T) @ Giselle - Nice to meet you! Welcome! Guess what? I'm your new stalker! (note: joke) By the way, nice poem! Although I feel like its not my place to comment on the second one.... since I'm not a female... @ chocolover - Your short poems are just to my liking! (Mine tend to be short too) Welcome to the club! ( I'm starting to feel like I've taken over Toyumi's job...) @ Toyumi - The poem...brilliant! I don't know about others...but... I don't think people have the key to their own soul... it must be opened with the power of bonds.... which few has ever achieved. -words by Wizard of Words (pardon the "cornyness") @ Anke - Seemmmmpaiii! Oh my god! I wasn't in time to wish you happy birthday! But, I was really surprised though, that your birthday was on Christmas... I have a present for you sempai (its not much). I will give it to you in PM later! ( you can share it with other people too of course). __________________________________________________________________________ Topic of Discussion: Winter holidays eh..? Well, we don't even have the four seasons here in Malaysia, so... anyway, Christmas is not as great a deal here either. But, school is out at December every year, imagine it like summer break, because we don't have those. But now I have another one I celebrate : Poetry Club's Founder's Birthday! ( just kidding) ____________________________________________________________________________ Hmm..is it me...or I'm the only guy in here these days...?? 
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@ Wizard- Thanks! It doesn't sound too corny, don't worry. And no, you haven't taken over my job just yet... XD And yeah, I do think you're the only guy here nowadays too XD @ xxchocoloverxx- That's another nice poem! |
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by Rie Hirayuki
on 2011-01-10 22:55:27
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hi minna. sorry, in this time, i just for say hi. i don't have enough time for write a poem. so, maybe i will write a poem again. thanks. hope you can remember me. 
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what lacks in you is full of me and when it hits its earth shattering.. your liberty to choose is hard for me. those very decisions still haunts me. those years we spent were like rain in ashes it comes and go but leaves no shadow. compared it in our lives and we might laugh but all irony we smile and regrets those times. times that is gold yet we werent able to follow. tried to swallow it a few times but failed to do so. chests burning stomach churning head banging blood raising! makes you mad and dont know whats right it makes you curse the times that you and i were..closer. those years were rough and im still stuck. please come back so i can stab your back. |
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Wow, the poems are amazing everyone... and I have one that I really want to post, but it is so god awfully long and there are some thing in there that I'm not sure how well it would go over with them being put up here for all to know... buuut... I might post it. Just depends.  |
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on 2011-01-20 09:20:54 (edited 2011-01-20 11:24:20)
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Oh! umm...hello! I wonder where Sempai is.... I'd like to know what she thought of that present....oh well... @ Riiko-sensei - Your poems are always impressive! This one is as epic as...an Epic! Keep at it sensei! @ siopao - Welcome to the Poetry Club! (uhh.. I think you should read the first post and sign yourself up properly) As for your poem....its great! I really like the style of your writing! Wish to see more like it! @ Toyumi - Hah! Do I get the job now?? (It was a joke don't hurt me please....) @ Chaotic - Seeing your post has brought much light, much joy to the remainder of my days, and all of my burden seems to have lifted away, thus I am jumping for joy, feeling as though I could fare the seas, the skies of envy and hate, blowing away every adversity, and nothing would stop me forevermore...this feel--... I should stop now (＾∇＾). (If it sounded like a creepy stalker-ish sicko, that's the intended effect) ...okay I'm sorry please don't hurt meee.... By the way, you have to post that poem now...since you got our hopes up....not posting would be really, really mean...so you have no other choice but post it. Hope to hear from you soon! And tell Anke to get in here 'cause her stalker is starting to miss her. Wouldn't wanna keep him anxious who knows what he might do hmm? Okay, I'm sorry I sounded like I'm high or something, its just something cool happened to me today so.... okay here's my new piece. It is a serious and dark piece so lets get in the mood before you read it hmm? I actually used a different style than my usual for this one. I guess I was kinda loose on the rules? Hero He must be a criminal So everyone says, whispering Don't go near him To her child a mother warned He is a thief, I heard No, a murderer, they blurted The words, slipped through my fingers With which my ears are covered As I struggled wading through The crowd surrounding him Crawling and ignoring Being kicked and stepped upon As I go further from my wheelchair My feet starts to hurt But the pain in my chest Throbs harder still Finally I arrived and saw him Slumped like unstrung marionette Blood covered his shirt The shirt I washed yesterday I heaved myself forward And reached for his hand Still firmly gripped into a fist Remaining warmth is slipping away In his hand there was A picture locket I made Gave it to him last Christmas Memories I relive to this day In his other hand was A duralumin case half open Dollars flowed out from within Stolen money for my surgery Unable to stop the tears I put my arms around him tightly I wailed with all my strength To drown the insulting whispers Screeching siren draws closer Uniformed men pulling me away As I violently refuse to let go He is my Hero.
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The poem is interesting Wizard... and I suppose here goes nothing, because here is the poem: To Jonny You know, I can’t remember the last time I laughed and smiled like this sadly. I can’t remember the last time someone could make me blush that badly. I can’t remember, I can’t remember anything it feels like you see, But it is sadly just because I’ve never been this happy and never thought I could be. I hate for this to turn out like every other mushy poem written out of ‘love’, so... Let me address what this poem is really about, even though - even though... Even though I am so happy, I have never been so afraid at the same time you see. I’ve never been this scared before and let me just tell you I never thought I would be. He means so much to me, and it’s scary and frightening really, I must say... The last endeavor ended poorly, flames and pains, and I’m waiting for that day... Waiting for the day that this one turns out the same, flames and pains... It’s sad to say, but I expect to be hurt... I never get this lucky or such gains. ‘I love you,’ I hear you say that all the time, all the time... and it scares me so, I love him too, I really do - you have to trust me, but even though - even though... I am still scared to death of him, of my feelings, of figuring out what waits at the end... When it all falls to pieces and goes bad, just exactly how will I fair and fend? My heart is already a mess of staples and stitches, tattered and scarred beyond repair. I’m afraid that with how broken it already is this next blow will send me back to despair, Send me back to those dark days, thoughts, and urges I swore never to feel once more. It reminds me of the pills, the chills, the pain, the sickness, and hours spent on the floor. Panic, panic - would I really fall to that dark routine or path once more, if so... I promised myself I would never return to that, even though - even though... The small X on my right thigh above the knee says differently - says it is true... If it is true, then what am I supposed to do - what am I supposed to do? He’s so good for me, but so bad in the same breath, like a hit of a strong drug or such, It gets me high and puts me on cloud nine, but when I’m off it or not getting much... Well, I think the new self inflicted scars speak for themselves, but maybe it’s so, Maybe it isn’t him at all but just me, out of their cage do my problems grow... Maybe that’s it, maybe I just can’t cope anymore and have lost it, if so... I am a little disappointed, I thought I had more control, even though - even though... I’ve kept it all inside for years, and I’ve cried so many nights in the past few weeks, Reliving memories, pains, reopening wounds as I recall it all with tear stained cheeks. He knows, that I’ve never told someone so much this easily, and I’m ashamed of it all... Yet somehow, for me he has still managed to fall... And maybe that’s what scares me the most, is that he really is there for me, He understand and he doesn’t run when all these scars are exposed for him to see. He listens, he helps, he tries to fix when I let the walls down and let him in to do so, He is still there, still loving me, even though - even though... Even though he knows I’m falling back to those dark days slowly I think sad to say, But he doesn’t know about these self-inflicted scars but maybe he will some day... Jonny, when you do find out, promise me, please just promise me... Promise me you won’t run, just like when all the other scars are exposed to see, Just as you don’t when I cry, silently shaking and sobbing, to where you can’t hear... Please just promise me... that no matter what, in the end you’ll still be here... Because I love you so much I don’t think you even understand how much I do, But I keep silently wishing every night, that maybe you’re in love that way too... That just maybe, you love me the same way that I love you, I really hope you do... I hope that - despite being an imperfect, broken mess - you love me the way I love you. |
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Nickname Yukera Writer Boredom Kills --- Boredom Kills A mind full of ideas Yet the body is unable to comprehend, Or that the three worlds Economy, social and environment refuse Or else nature can’t do Lying around Continuously doing something Not enjoyable yet not intolerable Always thinking About the bright future Or maybe hideous past But definitely not the boring present But people say There is boredom because there is laziness But laziness is infinite For we are humans Complicated things with feelings |
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by xxchocoloverxx
on 2011-01-24 02:19:26
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New poem! :D “Lost in her past Lost in her dreams Lost in her heart Lost as it seems Burnt by her hopes Torn in her heart Scarred by her memories She’s fallen apart…†|
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So many new poems since I last posted here. I wish I could write up a new poem as well, but I have to study for midterms >.> @ Riiko- I really love the Prophecy Circle. I hope you do get around to making a story out of it! @ Siopao- Welcome to the club, but like what Wizard said, please join with the proper format. And nice poem. @ Wizard- That's a great poem! And what I can tell from other sites, Anke is busy with Korean and Japanese dramas. (Who's the stalker now? XD) @ Chaotic- That poem is really amazing. It really is. I know that I've felt like that before at times. And like what Riiko says, it makes me want to write. (Although I have to study for midterms now >.>) @ Yuki- Welcome to the club! And nice poem! @ xxchocoloverxx- Nice poem, although it's too short in my opinion. But it's still nice. |
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on 2011-01-25 21:43:12 |
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Hello all again, been a while huh? Sing-Song For Heavy Hearts (Post your intake from this) In peaceful screams of broken love I find myself engorged To pray for something the sweetest sin For this is why I was born A fountain poured from love-drenched lips A heartfelt raging wave To grace the pool with finger’s edge Then gently pull away The enchantment to whom would be accursed Would die most peaceful so And whom would carry heavy heartbeats Through drought and through the snow. Careful love must last thy lips If ye shall live it well These words that need be written To label the haunting spell Leave me now, these words so told And go back to your dreams Of which one could only want to wander Who or what they deem 
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Hey guys I'm finally back. Sorry life got a little hectic there for a while but I promise I won't be gone that long agian! Welcome to all our new members!!! Sorry I wasn't here to welcome you a little sooner... I have added everyone to the members list and updated the poetry list. Let me know if I missed anything, I had to listen to my English teacher at the same time soooooo my coding might be a litle off. OH! Please if anyone (perhaps Toyumi-san) would like to create an avatar for the Writers and Readers my photobucket had a fail and deleted everything, (including all my sigs and avvies...) So please bare with me. @ Wizard - I'm back you're free to stalk now :P Hahahahah, just kidding ya!  |
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@ Anke- I wouldn't mind making a new icon, although it might be awhile until I can get around to it (I have somewhere around 3 set requests that I have to finish before I'd be able to get around to making those icons). If you don't mind waiting a bit, then I wouldn't mind making them. Also, the title of my latest poem is wrong on the first post. It should say "The Song of my Life" and not "Story of my Life." Although that reminded me of the song with the same name by Bon Jovi. XD |
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by chaosvegeta666
on 2011-02-14 21:09:41
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Nickname: Drake Writer, or Reader: Writer I just wrote this poem for my girlfriend, and wish to share it. "All My Love, My Love" In the last hour of the day, I bid thee good night. 'Till marrow comes, My love flys onto thee, Upon wings of gold and silver. _________________________________ It's just one more day, 'till we will be together. 
darkness is the vail that holds the truth. open your eyes and let the true world be seen, if you dare think you can handle it. i am the darkness within your heart. i know what you fear, and what you really are.
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I guess I'll play the poem game as well. xD First off... Nickname: Komaro Writer I guess I'll throw this in. Thinking "Positively" There is one thing you and I share It is not friendship, love, or care It’s that gloomy ending that we all know To our graves is where we will go But I guess death isn’t that bad. For when we die we’ll leave behind Everlasting photographs in their minds Our family and friends will miss us so Some will ask why we had to go See, it isn’t that bad. Once we leave the world alone We’ll travel on to a world of our own Up to the skies or down below Or haunt the people that we know See, it isn’t that bad. We could do what we want and it wouldn’t matter We could eat all we like and never get fatter When we’re at our ends and ready to go Be prepared because we will soon know That death isn’t that bad. Now that I look at things this way I really want to die today. This sounded really weird when I was writing it, but it might just be me. =3  |
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Welcome Drake and Komaro!!!! @ Drake - that is such a sweet poem! Especially for valentine's day! :) @ Komaro - It wasn't weird but it was gloomy. I like the rhyming in it, but when I read something like this my first inclination is to tell the writer "Noooo!!!! Please don't die!!!" |