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Announcement:Due to my cramped schedule for the next 28 days, I am considering forfeiture from the competition. |
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Faiz: Awww >< you're so sweet! With all the NOOOO! H-rated stuff, I'm only 16 ! xDD you should sooo be my relative. Basil: it's 'kay, thanks for dropping a word... unlike other no good - [(*^%*$£)(&*^] Wha-? Cannabis isn't legalised?? *looks at my stache of cannabis* uh-oh.. The V-N stuff in the other thread is making my head dizzy @_@ but i think it's going well... i'll let you guys handle it, but i just wanted to add- yes, we want it in time for Gendou christmas, but really i want everything to be kept as simple as it can, i don't wanna be a kill-joy, yet i don't wanna see everything go out of hand and in flames... -_- and whoever brought up the H-rated stuff, honestly, the characters are not only minimal but still in school! :P Again, keep everything simple, even if linear.   |
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Gendou Christmas?  |
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@Mokona: "Mokona Nii~san!" Faiz say while hugging his new brother..... XD okay I could be your far relative. ^-^ oh and all I know marijuana is still legal in a medical uses... of course under certain dose... also in war to prevent of further bleeding from someone who got hit... (for painkiller) should I just post it 1st June? even if I have finished it? (just asking... only finished three page ... I'm writting while learning for the test...T~T) @Basil: Aw.... but you can help me with the VN right? I can't work this out alone... especially I'm no good at Phyton language... so I can only use several Phyton for small effect...T~T 
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Faiz: >.> I'm a girl XD *hugs Faiz back*- it's okay, btw, i'm younger than you! If you have finished it, just keep it for now and PM it to me on the 1st June ^^ it's to keep everything fair and so I don't mark some people's earlier! Oh. nice new siggy and avvy btw ^^ Give Basil a break Faiz ^^ it's okay, we've got the competition under way, just play about with the program for a while, I'm sure Basil will get back to you soon, I just don't wanna put to much pressure on him about this stuff. Weezze: Well, the winner's entry will be used to make a visual novel, we've got a separate thread for people working on that, and well, we were hoping to have it in time for christmas! ^^ |
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@ Mokona: You can use the siggy if you want. Or even better I can make you one like it with another character! I simply had scans from the Little Busters! artbook, used the editing tools on photobucket, and viola, Siggy. @ Basil: Awww. Well, most importantly, good luck on those related school activities! @ Faiz: Ges... Cannabis!? '_'# @ All: I'll just say right now I'm in the basic editing for my entery. I really need to work on the continuations for my other stories though. '~'   |
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oh... then@ Mokona: "Imoutou!" while then screw up with his new little sister's hair....XD.... about Basil okay... but I don't think I could do all the codes.... maybe how if we make a thread in Program section? maybe people out there knows Ren'py and I bet they have some skills with Phyton or at least more than I do... or well maybe they could learn faster than I do T~T. anyway... okay then... I'll keep this text within my computer... "AVG~san... sore kara anata ni tanomu yo! (after this is rest on you AVG~san!)" Faiz says while hugging AVG~san tightly... @UGO: did I say smething wrongabout Marry~san?(Marijuana I meant?) @Basil: okay good luck then... wish you the best luck~! ^-^V
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Faiz: aww! ">< don't screw up my hair!" lol! :D *pinches Faiz's cheeks* Yeah, why not, make a post/thread wherever and see if anyone is more experienced that can help you learn- or maybe has anyone showed any interest or experience in Ugo's V-N thread? (Who's AVG?) Ugo: yay! I don't mind a siggy- um, i'm gonna be a bit mean, but could you make a siggy for me that say's Writer's club? (I know there's a club siggy already.. but i want one more like Ugo-san's!) Cuz, i'm not even in the V-N making thread... Plus, have you any idea how to put words on your avvy/siggy when you hover over it? K.M.R: ahh~ thanks for removing your entry ^^- waa~ Mokona can't take the name: -sama! But thank you. |
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on 2009-05-22 08:32:06 (edited 2009-05-22 08:37:03)
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@ Mokona: ouch... hehe... you did look cuter~! XD anyway Yeah... I guess I'll try to make one there... but will construct it for a while... AVG is an antivirus software I installed on my computer.... you know last time I made a novel (in junior high school) the data was corrupted by a virus so I hope AVG~san could help me protect my computer now~! oh and about the arc... should I also create the arc for both Lax and Tyson? or just one of them and discuss about the other arc with the other contestant?
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Faiz: xDD *hugs Faiz-nii-san* Ohh. You just get weirder and weirder XD, hugging an antivirus software?? Lol! Oh, cool- i hope all your work is safe from now on! Hmm.. I dunno, I think the arc's are supposed to be multiple endings for Aya? i mean you could fan-fic stuff about Tyson and Lax, but i think the point is to write more stories about how the ending could change for Aya.. but let's worry about that later, or when Basil comes back, or Ugo/Lockey/K.M.R (sorry for missing out others!) if you guys wanna have any input? Heh, you shouldn't worry about the arcs just yet, we also need to see the winning entry! Yup, discuss with other contestants first. |
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@Mokona hehe... that's the strange side of me...XD anyway... okay you got the point there... and I thought I'll just keep my ending and start to write the continuation of the Ningen wa... story should I, or shouldn't I? one more... is it okay to post several times in forum!?X~X forgot about that... was it spam or not? (hopes not...) @UGO: sorry... just remembered to say this: good luck with your story too~! ^_^
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Faiz: well, we're keeping to the topic and we're not saying random stuff necessarily *cough*. So, yeah, it's just we're not allowed to exceed about 50-100 posts? In any one thread or topic i think... Yes, yes! Please continue with Ningen wa in the mean time, noone has to stop posting stories xDD |
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Hey, everyone. A very wilted Basil here. After a week of hell, I've managed to find the time to relax (thank god for weekends). But I'm exhausted as... as... I can't think up of something appropriate to say, and I won't say the word that formulated on my mind. @Faiz I'm not even experienced in Python. I've been busy crafting my 3d-modeling skills for school. Don't worry, though. I'll try to study it when I'm free, brother-in-law. Hahaha!!! @Ugo Thanks. Though in my case, I need more... whatchacallit? I dunno. The most sleep I had for this week is 4 hours. @Mokona Ah, you've been mistaken for a dude again. Since Team Fortress 2 is free to play for the weekend, I'll be playing it 'til my hands vaporize. |
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@ Mokona: *Pouts and crosses arms* Of course you're in the project too? Mokona is the person who made the base story. *sighs* So Let me get it straight, you want a siggy, exactly(?) like the one I just made, for the writers club? YOu can post a reply with a PM if you think this is straying off topic. Plus, I agree, my assumption was that the VN's branching storyline basically was about making multiple endings for Aya. (Like, the opposite of a regular visual novel that'd have a guy as the main character) @ Faiz: The most sublime of good fortunes to your endeavors as well! ^o^ @ Basil: Ow... that's pretty rough. Well, be sure take as much napping as time allows and as needed. |
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Basil: Hey! *runs over to massage Basil* Glad you've finally got some time to rest- lol, yes, Faiz will be my new brother... i'm guessing he's your brother-in-law because of.. because of, you know, but anyways, ==' Mokona was mistaken for a dude >< !! Yay- i've stayed up 2 days straight once in my life.. good times.. *pats own head* Ugo: Yup, pretty much, you can change the character too, but i'm not (don't mean to be) fussy :3 weee~ Mokona-Ugo telepathy in action again, though it was really the main idea to branch from Aya- but oh wells. I dunno about everyone, but it's half-term here, which means I get a week off! *victory stance* So, yup, i will try and post a story in the mean-time.. but i'm feeling lazy.. (no mean to rub it in Basil ;P) uhhh, yeah, that concludes my post. Everyone good luck with their stories, remember: 1st June ^^ ! |
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 @ Mokona: Here ya go. I decided to leave it mostly clean, aside from numbing down the sharpness of the color. I modeled it off of the other official siggy. While the Shakespearean siggy uses "Guild" this one uses "Club". I'll happily edit it if you REALLY wanted the grainy~ness of the Rin version. I chose Mio Nishizono because... well she really likes books! So the choice was obvious! I dont mind if other people use this as a choice between the siggy by ichi and this one when they want to show Writer's Club love. But I guess it's you're call on that Mokona. @ All: *Shakes head* OHHH~! There is such a shortage of other stories! That's it, I'm going to dig into my notebook and find one to type down!!!! >.< ON the second side, my school year's about over too. Two weeks left, WOOT! On the third side, it seems like everyone's... really enjoying being part of a family. Haha... *sits in a corner alone* Ouhhh~.... P.S. For the code for making text appear is either alt= or title=. Best to use title= since it's the one that'll appear on both firefox and iexplorer browsers. So it would be like: *img src="image location goes here" title="text goes here"* *'s = < + > |
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@All- guys i am having difficulty on my stories, OH NOES!!!!!! currently the Vector Crisis will be halted due to some technical and important assessments @All- Fatale Nights: Merciless Origin, the Fallen was on the difficult part the introduction and the most important battle i am having hard time to think about thesequences of it... however if you are willing to look at it will post it.... in due time @All- guys help me... i am thinking another story due to Kotoko's song Restoration and Bald Sky's video sequence... how can i stop my mind thinking new stories even i haven't finished one.... T_T @All- i have 4 or 5 stories to do at time time and i need all attention that i need.... Why does i love create many things.... T_T  --> |
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Ugo: NOoooOo! That's it Ugo! >< Hmmm, do you wanna be my sister... or what? (sidenote: I don't swing that way lol) ^^ Yay- we're all a family anyways, i feel that we've all grown close because of this thread, anyone who posts regularly and has actually been happy to post a story and take part in the competition. Thank you! *Hugs minna* Love the siggy! I'll add it now... 2 weeks- what the? I've still got another term to go! >< No fair! ;) K.M.R: Wow! Hey, take your time, post it whenever you're ready, I'm happy to read anything ^^, just a note: please shorten it! It kinda makes it daunting when it's pages long, i will get through it, but personally i would be happier to read it all, as long as it's about half a page at a time ==' Mokona is sorry for the moaniness! Umm, well you nor I can help but think of new things when inspiration hits us, I think you should write things down when they come to you, because I can't remember how my super awesome story goes anymore, aww well, that's my inspiration lost, but i'll think of something new, jog it down staright away and hopefully post it! (Maybe that's why i fail english, i rely on inspiration and coffee, plus good teacher :P) |
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@Mokona- sorry... i prefer long ones becasue of details ... my only short story is my first story that i post here i know Vector Crisis takes your toll TOO MUCH right?? thnaks... actually i started to write what is in my mind... everything of it but I am sure of important things that story are | V Baldr Core: Frontier of the Crimson sky <--- yes this is the new story that i made weird title right? hehehe ^ | my character is using a by-pedal mobile suit on an era that the mobile suit controls are similar to Gundam Controls or more advanced the enemy... is a massive orbital cannon that fires a destructive beam of doom that can destroy one big area into ashes... think about the whole Tokyo will be destroyed with one shot This is now my finished project, expect for some grammatical errors, i tried my best though Fatale Nights: Merciless Origin The Fallen On a dark and cold night, a cult was walking on a lifeless forest; they were on their cloaks, some of them wielding swords and spears, some of them holding torches, behind them a chained and resisting girl, she was weak and tired, but she was being pushed and pulled by the cult members, they continuously walk until they reached an open spaced temple, the cult members positioned themselves, some of them forcedly put the girl at the center, a cult member torn her clothes, they pushed her to the ground and chained the girl to the ground firmly, the girl was resisting, but one of them pointed a stepped on her stomach “Don not resist any more… You will be sacrificed for our master†“Why? Why are you doing this?†“Because our master prefers young and virgin ones, because they give our master enough contentment†The cult priests starting to touch her body, she tried to plead and resist but her bindings halting her, she felt helpless in her condition, suddenly she felt their hands stopped touching her, but her eyes widened as she saw a large dagger were being held by four cult priests that were walking closer to her, she frantically tried to move and plead to stop “No… No… NO!!!†With a blink of an eye her wrists were stabbed by a dagger that pierces into the other side, she cried in pain and screamed on top of her lungs, then without any second wasted, her knees were stabbed badly that the knee cap was broken and pierced thru, the blood flows from the wound, then her feet, her capella was stabbed, the blood flowed from her body and moved towards the funnel type fluid passage ways, within two minutes with her blood, the sacrificial ceremony circle was visible and priests of the cult started to chant, The girl can fill the pain on her wounds, she is gasping for air badly, her body was shaking, her strength was fading away and she felt the coldness of the place “I don’t want to die…†Then it was fast paced act, one of the priests stabbed her heart, she gasped as he fell the place pierces her flesh both in the inside and outside, then the priest took out the dagger swiftly, The girl felt the pain slightly her blood spilled at her back and her chest “I… don’t want… to die…†Her sadness filled her heart; she could not believe that she will die at her young age, the blood from her chest joined on the sacrificial circle, the circle glowed the cult became more earnest on their task “I… wished… that… I am… the last…†As her tears fall dark violet and black colored light surrounded area, then strange crimson red colored dagger like projectiles appeared and stabbed the faces of the priests, their heads were blown off, some of them their brains left their skulls, the cult was surprised they thought they summoned their “divine one†but they stood as they noticed that a strange entity appeared, the entity looked at them with cold and fearless eyes; the figure was holding the unclothed and helpless younger girl with his both arms, embracing her with sympathy, the cult stood in fear being such being appeared that destroyed the ceremony “Are you… No… No!!†“You are not the one, you are not the one!!†The entity stood firm, the wings extended, and three pairs of wings was visible however they are not exact the same on the right side three seraphim angel wings and on the left three devil wings, he looked at the girl and his enemies, he flew towards to a rock and placed the girl there, he moved floated to them, as the entity were a meter away from them, the knights of the cult rushed at the entity and stabbed him at his body “Heh, that was easy†“Is that all? I thought that you are tough, I was disappointed†The entity held on the spear and took it out from his body, it was so fast was it could have killed an ordinary human, the knights were shocked on the view without any adieu, he used the spear to kill two knights by stabbing their chests that made their hearts cut into halves, he took the spear and amputated their bodies mercilessly, blood spilled on the ground, more knights attacked, he smiled as its enemies were getting closer to him, from his devil wings spiked chains whipped and sliced them, the entity flashed moved and torn their limbs and heads away from their bodies, the entity continued his game, a gory and shamelessness game, as the knights attacked more he just received them like a toothpick poking on him and attacked calmly but bloody, he amputated their body parts their blood spilled more their muscles were visible, bones were broken badly, grey matter flew away from their heads, intestines hanging or blowing from their lower abdomen, the entity walked closer the chains did its bidding, the gunners and archers of the cult fired their weaponry, the entity blocked all of it with its angelic wings, the wings was pierced but no blood flowed from it “What are you?†“You shall die demon!†“Release more! Kill it before it kills us!†More projectiles were released, but the entity just blocked it, the entity just smiled seeing this event “Me? A demon? But to tell you are more than any demon existed†The angel wings uncovered and released a powerful gust of wind that made the entity’s enemy to flew away or loses their guard, suddenly feathers darted them and pierced their bodies, they screamed in pain until their souls were no more, the entity felt a strange power, he focus his sight and saw the oracles chant and made a portal from the ground and they could hear such fearsome roars behind it “Now let us see if you can handle these!!†The portal door was opened and demonic beasts were released and attacked the entity, they covered his body and trying to feast on its body “Haha you are weak, you can’t stand a chance against these creatures, and you will experience such painful and morbid death†The oracles laughed but, they noticed that their enemy’s position was s “So these are the reason why you sacrificed the people once a week, to be the food for them†Suddenly the demonic beasts fell on the ground, they were sliced, some of them started to move away from the entity, their eyes were widened as they saw that the entity’s body is complete no signs of flesh being neither chewed nor torn “IMPOSSIBLE!†“THIS IS RIDICULUS!!†“HOW? HOW COME THAT YOU ARE STILL ALIVE!?!?!†“I am a being neither light or darkness, I have the affiliation of both Heaven and Hell, I felt the sadness and I heard the cries of the people that you killed at the same time I felt the their anger and fear†He raised his right arm side wards, he opened his hand and a giant sword appeared, it bears a strange and unconventional shape, then he rushed towards the oracles but they summoned more demonic beasts that will intercept him, and yes they outnumbered him “KILL HIM!! KILL HIM NOW!!!!†“SHOW NO MERCY!!†The beasts attacked simultaneously that made the entity loose his focus, they beat him up, with all of their might, true enough, these beasts were much powerful, and the oracle and the remaining members of the cult laughed and mocked the entity “WEAKLING!!†“ANNOYANCE!! NOW YOU WILL DIE!!!†Suddenly a ray of white and black light was seen and obliterated ¼ of their summoned beasts, the entity was standing wielding his sword, his bloody was covered with blood, but the stood firm “I withstood enormous pain in my life, I was sealed fearing that I may destroy this world, but it is different now, I have the right to eliminate all of you under my hands†The entity just smiled then, with a blink of an eye he attacked all of the summoned demonic beasts, blood spilled on the floor again, slicing and ripping their heads and limbs, stabbing their chests and piercing their internal organs, it was a hellish night, the ground was flooded with blood, the beasts suddenly felt fear but the entity was cold at this moment he killed every single demon, until such time the portal cannot give anymore, the cult members were now stunned, it was a bloody scene, corpses scattered everywhere, the entity was standing meters away from their place, he was covered with blood even his wings were drenched with blood, he stared them with cold and merciless eyes “I am impressed that you could call such powerful demons, but I believe that you summoned too much, far from the ones that you could attain, you must sacrifice many lives to have their command, now how to compensate it when you exceeded†The entity walked closer to them, the remaining cult members made a barricade but they were shaking in fear, some of them charged at him but ending up as a corpse the barricade tried to hold their ground, but before the entity reached them, the oracles gathered and concentrated on their chant, the entity tried to charge but without any warning a massive and more powerful portal appeared and flame arises from the ground, the entity fall back about a meter, within the gate a roar was heard, something was inside of the portal that wanted to get out, then a dark silhouette was seen on the portal that was red glowing eyes, and it was wielding a double bladed scythe, it was slowly moving towards the portal, a gigantic hand touched the side of the portal, then afterwards it was finally out of the portal, the entity stood still he knows this creature, the creature that was sealed thousands of millennia ago “You summoned the forbidden beast that causes chaos and destruction, the forbidden beast that was sealed for a long time, the demonic beast baphomet†“Seeing this beast I can ensure that this world will be my heaven†“Not classy for someone’s dominating words†The beast roared and attacked the entity but the entity evaded it and the two powerful beings collide, it was a unruly battle, a battle of power and might, every time their weapons collide such destruction was made, the battlefield was scarred and shattered, everything was not spared. The beast summoned a powerful fireball and thrown it to the entity but, he evaded it but he was surprised that another fireball appeared and hit him and received the entire damage, but he managed to get out but, the damage was visible, a portion of angelic wings were burned and the other wings were scratched “Rgh… Heh, so that is the flame that can burn and hurt things eh? Too bad I am not that kind of being that gives up easily†The entity spread his wings and aimed his sword at the beast “You are the most powerful beast ever existed, but right now I shall end it to end this insanity and madness†The entity rushed towards to baphomet and prepared his move however the beast blocked it and swing it with full force, the entity fall to the ground, the counter attack managed to severely wounded his demonic wing, blood was spilling from it, but he regained his composure and rushed again towards his enemy, this time the entity summoned his daggers and fired it at the simultaneously beast, baphomet summoned minions to attack and defend, the entity was forced to divert its attack to the minions while the beast charged to attack him using its weapon, the entity just noticed it and dodged the attack but its minions beat him up, he retaliated and killed few of them with his daggers and his sword, tearing their flesh to ensure their death, the beast released a powerful ball of energy that the entity blocked it, the entity felt the intense power of that attack “Grrr… It is not enough to kill me!!!!†The entity throw it back to the beast in which that he just received it but the entity fired a violet beam that made the energy ball to explode that hurt the beast, it moved backwards, the entity summoned another sword that is similar to the ones he hold but in white, the entity attacked again and pierced the eye of his enemy, but he beast countered it by releasing demonic flames around him, the entity fall back a bit, then the beast suddenly throw his scythe like a boomerang, the entity evaded it but the weapon instantly returned and hit him, it was a critical one, the entity fell to the ground hard, blood spilled from his back, his blood dropped to the ground, he is taking large gasps, then he grinned a bit “I understand now… however, I will end your life here†The beast prepared himself also with the entity but the beast noticed something around at its enemy, a pentagram, then with a swift the entity attacked the beast, the beast prepared for an counter attack but, it was surprised that his enemy released two forms of himself, one a seraphim and the arc demon both of them has his basic both features except for his appearance, the three attacked the beast using their ability and without mercy, it wanted to counter it but the three did not gave it a chance to attack, their swords glowed with their respected elements and attacked it continuously, it did not take long the entity wanted to ended this fight, the seraphic and arc demon released a powerful beam, the entity swiftly went to his enemy, he combined his swords, his two selves followed him and they fused in his body “END GAME!!†With the final blow, baphomet roared loudly, its body began to incinerate and disappeared from the sight, the entity stood and looked at the remaining cult members, he positioned himself but sudden twist of events happen, the demonic beasts suddenly attacked the cult members tearing them up and dragging them to the portal where they came from, their cult leader however managed to escape but in his eyes were in shock, baphomet was killed and the demonic beasts starting to attack them, he started to scream then, suddenly bumped on something and fell on the floor, he looked upwards, it was the entity to attacked them “Please save me!! Save me!!! The cult leader grabbed the clothing of the entity; he saw that the demonic beasts are coming closer to him “I can revive the people whom we sacrificed, just save me, save me!!†The cult leader begged to the entity, but the entity grabbed his hair and lifted him up harshly “If you will revive them, they are not now anymore the same people whom you killed†The entity thrown the cult leader way from him, as the landed on the ground, the demonic beasts started to glare and charged at him, the cult leader was beaten up until his body was internally and externally wounded, his body were dislocated, worst of all his body were being dragged by strange beasts into the portal as the portal closing, his body were being feasted and by the time the portal was closed, the cult leader’s screaming on top of his lungs, but it was faded when the portal vanished from the place, but some of the demonic beasts remain and started to walk towards to the entity, he noticed it but he stood still, it took a minute for the remaining demonic beasts gathered around him, their features can bring fear, but the entity knows what they really want “Your souls were trapped in those bodies, and you wanted to be free from your eternal bondage†The beasts nodded they were sure about their answers, the entity sees tears from their hearts “Alright… Even I don’t have the authority to do it; I shall set all of you free from your pain†With a mighty swing, he slashed their bodies and their bodies fell on the ground but their souls stood firm, at last they were now free and they were glad that their suffering ended “You are free to go; I believe that His mercy will save you from the fires of hell†As the souls leave, the girl is gaining consciousness and looked at the entity, she reached her hand not thinking of her safety, the girl opened her mouth, the entity walked closer and knelled in front of her, the girl touched the face of the entity “Thank you… for saving me… but it is too late… †She coughed out blood, but she remained on her position, her eyes were full of tears “But I don’t want to end this way… I want to live… †The girl began to lose her focus, she was panting heavily, her body starting weak, with her final breath and she fell on the entity’s body, embracing him weakly “I… don’t want… to die†Her vision became slowly become dark, for the last time she looked at the entity’s face it was until her vision became total darkened; her head leaned on the entity’s chest “Death is an illusion to the living, however it is a reality can be postponed for a while†The entity’s wings spread and the whole place was covered with blinding white light *-*-* On the city of Catholous, the entity flew inside towards at the central garden of the city the people started to feel fear at his presence but the entity did not care, he just proceed to his doing one he was on the central garden, the entity stood his wings covered his body, a messenger of the Church was there, she immediately leave the place and went to the Church, inside of the Church the Cardinal was preparing his daily church ritual, messenger came inside of the Cardinal’s room; his face was full of fear “What is it? Why your face was full of fear, young one? “Cardinal, a strange winged creature just came from the east and he placed himself alone, but I am afraid that it was sent to kill us†“Strange winged creature? Where is it?†“At the central garden†“Tell the Paladins and Crusaders to prepare themselves, we will meet him†“But sire-“ “I know what is in your mind young one, but believe in Him, I know that He has plans for this moment†“Yes, Your Highness†The messenger left immediately and did his task, the Cardinal prepared himself, after a long while outside Crusaders and Paladins gave the Cardinal a sword salute, then at the same the priests and priestess of the Church came also they wanted to join the convoy, instead of halting them the Cardinal permitted without any further adieu they convoy leave the Church, with the guidance of the messenger they get to the place where the entity was standing, immediately the Crusaders and Paladins made a barricade, their shields facing the entity, some priests and priestesses started to pray, some of them were talking about the being in front of them “Such strange creature†“Angel and demon wings? What is it? “Cardinal, for your safety I shall talk to it†“Thank you for your concern but no, I will do it†“But sire, if we don’t know wha-“ “I have this feeling that it means something important†The Cardinal walked closer to the winged entity, he made a peace sign “I am Reinhart Crossbringer, Cardinal of the Sacred House of God; tell me what your agenda in this place?†“I am carrying an important soul, a soul that saw the darkness of the human desires, a soul that cried for the people she loved, a soul that was abused and turned to be a sacrifice†The demon wing opened and they saw the silently sleeping in its arms, the entity placed her at the arms of the Cardinal, the people were surprised about it, the Paladins and Crusaders prepared themselves, but the Cardinal told them to remain “I believe that in your guidance, she will recover and will have a joyful life†“Thank you for believing in us, I assure we shall give her the care that she needed†“Again, please take care of her, she has a life to live on her own and she will be the child that will save other people†The Fallen spread his wings and looked at the Cardinal, priests, priestesses and the holy knights around him “I am a Fallen; I am either an angel or demon, a being either sacred or sin, my existence is only a myth that no one ever dared to be known, a myth that would mean either protection or destruction. But I can choose what my destiny is for I was a testament and a punishment of my own sins†The area was covered with feathers and flaming shards, with a blink of an eyes the Fallen was gone, the priests and priestesses walked clustered together and looked at the sleeping girl, they noticed she was holding a cross pendant on her hands without any adieu they prayed thanking God for this day and for the Fallen who trusted them a soul that will live for her life and for the people around her Credits: Fatale Nights: Merciless Origin The Fallen All names and characters are highly fictional. Names, places, events and people living or dead that may have similarity to reality is highly coincidental ©2009 Karuzo Zweihander/Kotohime Media --> |
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@KMR: Waii.... that is so... long I guess I'll pend the reading... sorry X~X BUt I'll definitely read it someday... I like a futuristic stories!^-^ @Mokona: Gomen~!... should have paid attention.... didn't really meant to hurt your feeling T~T oh, and Mokona~san... it is better if you made the siggy become like this... *a href="http://gendou.com/forum/thread.php?thr=24120"* *img src="image location goes here" title="text goes here"* */a* now try to click on this one...voila....^_^ so that it will lead anyone who clicked your signature to here ^_^ @Ugo: anyway nice Nishizono Mio siggy! ^-^ @Basil: BROTHER IN LAW! uh... why are we brother in law again? ^_^" @ All: Owh dear... I haven't finished the "Ningen Wa" and... it is almost the time for me for a day without computer!!! luckily my mom let me play computer until 1st June... so I still can post the VN story but "Ningen wa"... well I still can tries to finishes it though...-_- okay then... au revoir!
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