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Why don't you write something? C'mon Sky... POST! THE COOL KIDS ARE DOING IT! |
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on 2006-06-13 20:11:13 |
*Puts down hammer*     |
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What you don't agree with my gross over-generalization of Goth kids? (joke don't hurt me...) Questions is a little songish I suppose.I'm getting back into song-writting more and more so ... We'll have to see what comes next... |
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on 2006-06-13 18:58:33 |
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I ain't goth because me hair ain't black? What is that supposed to mean? Questions does seem like a song, while I read it, I couldn't aviod singing it. It's actually pretty good. Not as dark as some other ones but still acceptable. |
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Just another random psuedo-song post from me. -Back You drown me in all your greed. I don't cut myself but I still bleed. On this fact we both agree we won't see each other as there's no need. I'm too pissed off to be an emo kid. I ain't goth cause my hair ain't black. When it comes to you I have no clue And I don't want you back. It's come to this and I don't care It went from a dreamtoa nightmare. This all caught me unaware and all this sh*t's more than I can bare. I'm too pissed off to be an emo kid. I ain't goth cause my hair ain't black. When it comes to you I have no clue And I don't want you back. No I don't want you back. Get the hell off my back. And a not-a-song poem from me for no extra charge... -Questions What way falls the shadow? How strong blows the wind? What has come must follow the overall trend. How fast does your heart beat? How hard falls the rain? Is this all deciet, to hide the pain? So are you really sorry? Are all your words sincere? Or are you lying to me just to bring me here? |
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on 2006-06-11 08:20:45 |
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-All that is gold does not glitter- "All that is gold does not glitter, Not all those who wander are lost; The old that is strong does not Glitter, Deep roots are not reached by the frost. From the ashes a fire shall be awoken, A light from shadow spring; Renewed shall be blade that was broken, Crownless again shall be king."  |
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on 2006-06-11 08:14:53 |
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Finally a new part of Babylon! It was so cool!!! |
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AND NOW... AT LAST! -Hitchhiking to Babylon (part iv) "Are you there for me?" the angel asked. Snow of feathers falling down The lion statues's silent roar gave respite from the ground. "To fall from thesky to speak to me" I said staring blindingly up "Makes it hard to decide if still alive or in need of waking up." The angel teared and turned it's head "Waht do you know of goodbye?" "If it's said sincere the pain is severe but it amplifies when told in a lie." I looked and watched the angel land "Have you ever said goodbye? Or do you depart with no regard for the heart you broke by the lonely roadside?" I stoped and I thought and and paused and sighed and the angel spoke once again: "The one that deal pain in the greatest of measures are allways the ones we call friends I learned all in Babylon of the pain caused by lies how the heart's compromised by dispair and the longing for love. This sorrow I see Babylon tought to me. And you to shal learn in your time. All of this I learned so well, 'Tis human hearts turn Earth to Hell." There. I finally got it online... |
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on 2006-06-09 21:27:09 |
| o.O That's pretty damn good, and I don't even like poetry. |
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| You know I really am not liking this. Are you serious or is it shite? |
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on 2006-06-09 20:08:35 |
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What sarcasm? |
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| Now there's no need for sarcasm... |
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on 2006-06-09 20:06:25 |
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*Outright loves it* |
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It was a joke Sky. Don't read into it any further than that. -Wait What sort of lie is love when beauty fades away? Is my life a fantasy dreamt by someone who never loved me? Darkened eyes and prolonged sleep tearing up my memory Grey skies are all I see anymore. Don't bother at all till someone loves me or lest till I die. |
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on 2006-06-09 15:33:48 |
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LOL! Doc, I didn't get your comment about me not outright loving your work... Am I supposed to be offended or something? |
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| That's real deep bro. It blew my damn mind... |
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Happy Birthday to you You belong to the zoo You look like a monkey and you smell like one too  |
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What? A poem she didn't outright love? Oh Gods I've lost my touch. I must now go and kill myself... Anyway. I'll havesome more up later this weekso don't worry if this wasn't you're fancy... |
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on 2006-06-07 21:02:34 |
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It had been such a long time since I read a new poem of the Doctor... (A week but whatever) Okay time to criticize, it's okay. Not the best thing I've read, but still worth reading. Maybe if it were shorter or more direct, it would be better. |
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-Disconected Don't lose my number DOn't forget to call You're the only one I care about And you don't care at all. No one ever called me tonight. Isit by the phone and yankthe cord I've lost my mind Can't take no more If you don't give a sh*t like I know you don't call me tell me to piss off But I know you won't Don't lose my number Though you'll never use it. but it'll keep me waiting having violent silent fits My phone is never ringing at last I've had enough throughthe static I call you You tell me life is tough. Don't lose my number Iwant you to lose sleep Call it a momento thetwo of us keep I don't give a sh*t All this'll end. I called the company and had the damn thing Disconected. |