"out of pitch" is a little weird, why not just make it off-pitch
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kkbkbl
at 2009-05-17 05:09:09
自分を愛ã•ãªãゃ 他人も愛ã›ãªã„: If you don't love yourself, you can't love others; If you don't love yourself, how can you love others?
imo
-- by
kkbkbl
at 2009-05-15 22:47:06
Yeah I noticed it was a metaphor but "absolute death" sounds oh so much more dramatic :3 I think that "If you can’t love yourself, others can't, either." is a bit awkward because of the commas; you can make it "If you can't love yourself, others can't either." I'll leave them as they are though since it doesn't matter much.
Explanation for verse 4, line 5: "zettai zetsumei" literally means "absolute death," but as a phrase, it simply refers to a desperate situation.